Chapter 18
Hey there my lovely readers!!! Sorry I’m few hours late than my usual updating time. Please forgive me ???
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Previously on “what kind of love is this?” Sanchi was telling the truth about the video to Dev. Kabir listened to them and realized his mistake. He ask for forgiveness but Sanchi tells his to forget her. The gang plans to get them closer and send them to the morgue. Both Sanchi and Kabir get stuck in there……………………………………………
All went to the morgue’s door. “Hey we kept a table here to prevent them from opening the door. Who locked it?” Isha asked curiously.
Veer checked the time. “Shit yaar it’s 9.00 p.m. They lock it at 8.00 p.m. Now it can’t be opened till morning”
“Hey what’s this dial pad over here? It’s showing minus digits” -Pragya
“Oh god! It’s a temperature controlling device. It keeps the mougue’s temperature low” Dev panicked. Temperature went few more degrees down.
“We can’t get them out. They’ll have to stay there. Let’s hope they’ll help each other and get closer” Dev said shaking his head.
Today we start from there.
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……….inside the morgue……….
“Door’s locked. We can’t open it from inside anyway” said Kabir giving the door one last push.
“Oh god!!! Who on earth make doors that can’t be opened from inside?” Sanchi questioned himself.
“Seriously Sanchi? Why would anyone think it’s necessary to put a way to open the door of a morgue from inside?” He asked her.
“Why? What’s wrong with that?” She shot back getting annoyed.
“What’s wrong with that huh? Who do you think will open this door from inside? Dead people? ???” he burst out laughing.
Sanchi got scared again. “Hey!! Stop trying to scare me!”
“Not my fault you get scared by something simple as that” ??? Kabir huffed.
“Hey is it me or the temperature is getting low?” She asked him.
“No it’s not just you. Temperature is getting low coz it’s the way this morgue works” replied Kabir.
With time Sanchi was getting cold. Kabir saw her walking around trying get herself warm. He removed his blazer and draped it over her shoulders. She looked at him surprised. Their eyes locked but Sanchi averted her eyes hurriedly.
“I don’t want it. Keep it with you” she gave his blazer to him.
“Don’t be so stubborn! You’re cold so keep it. No arguments Sanchi! You should stop roaming around dead bodied and sit somewhere” Kabir added the last part to scare her.
“You’re so mean! Trying to scare me” -Sanchi
Both sat near a wall side by side in silence. Normally silent loving Kabir can’t take it anymore. He can’t bear this girl ignoring him. They need to clear all their problems. But he doesn’t know how to start a conversation. He thought for a while. And an idea came to him ???.
Kabir cautiously touched Sanchi’s feet. “Aaaaaaahhhhhhh…….!!!!!!!” Sanchi screamed loudly and held Kabir’s arm tightly.
“Hey stop screaming!! What happend now?” He asked like he doesn’t have any idea.
“Something touched my feet!” She exclaimed.
“Something? Maybe a rat” he said normally.
“A rat? You said this place has low temperature. So how come rats live here?” She asked eyeing him suspiciously.
Kabir noticed the way she was looking at him and said, “how the hell am I supposed to know how rats live here? Maybe it’s not a rat and some other creature” Sanchi looked totally scared at that. “Let’s do one thing. I’ll find the rat or whatever it is and you can ask how it lives here” he added sarcastically while getting up.
Sanchi pulled him tightly and said “no need just stay here”. She was shivering now.
“Hey come closer to me, you’ll feel warm” Kabir said in a kind voice. But Sanchi said “no”.
“You know if you stay like that, that creature might come to you again” he said thoughtfully.
“And if I’m near you it won’t come back?” she fired back filled with sarcasm.
“Ofcourse! Everyone’s afraid of me. So I guess it would be too” he said with a shrug.
She came a little closer to him. He put one arm around her shoulders to pull her closer. “God Sanchi! You’re freezing!” He made her sit on his lap.
“Kabiiirrr!! What are you doing?” Sanchi protested but Kabir didn’t budge. He hugged her so tight.
“You’re so warm” Sanchi mumbled to his chest. “Mhhmm” like a little kitten, she hugged him and enjoyed his warmth.
“You’re enjoying being this close to me aren’t you?” Kabir whisperd oh her ears teasingly.
“Like you’re not” Sanchi replied in an equally teasing way.
“Oh no! I’m just helping you to stay warm” he said innocently.
“Ok then I’m warm enough, I’ll get up” she tried to get up but he was holding her so strongly.
“Don’t! I mean what if that creature come again?” He asked slanting his head a little.
“Ha ha ha ???” she laughed wholeheartedly. Kabir was mesmerized by her even in the darkness.
She placed one hand on his cheek and stared at him lovingly. “You’re just taking advantage of the situation, aren’t you?” her voice was so soft and kind.
He placed his head on her shoulder while hugging and whispered “Who wouldn’t want the girl he loves to stay in his arms, so…close, alone, in a cold place, in total darkness, at midnight?” in a deep husky voice.
His breath is fanning over her neck and tickling her. “Kabiirr!” She looked in to his eyes.
He silenced her and said “Shhh!! Don’t talk sweetheart, just listen. I know you’re upset with me about that incident. And your anger is totally fair. When I saw that video, I just- I couldn’t control myself. I was so angry, sad and hurt. I thought I lost you. I know I should’ve let you explain, but I don’t know what came over me” with so many emotions.
“But you should’ve at least trusted our feelings. How did you think I would do that to you? I admit I had some feelings for Veer but Kabir, what I feel for you…is a lot different from them. A lot stronger than them. I don’t think I ever loved Veer. It was like a phase in my life” she said quietly.
“I know I shouldn’t have doubted you. I’m so sorry! No matter how many times I said sorry it’s not enough. I should’ve trusted you. I’m sorry sweetheart I love you!”
“Apology accepted” she said with a smile. “Hey you know what? It’s the third time you called me that.”
“Called you what?” -Kabir
“Sweetheart” -Sanchi
“You kept counting?” Kabir asked with a smile.
“Hmm I like the way it sounds” -Sanchi
“So…….. You still didn’t say those three magical words to me” -Kabir
“Ha ha ha ???” she laughed and leaned closer to him. She placed her lips on his in a small peck, startling him. Kabir’s eyes went wide. Before he do anything she moved and said, “it’s not necessary to use words always. Ever heard a saying ‘ actions speak louder than words'” she said with a smile.
Kabir came to his senses and leaned in for another kiss. Their lips met. At first the kiss was innocent. He nibbled her lips asking for entrance. She granted him and he pulled her more closer. Her fingers entwined with his hair, pulling it. After awhile they parted for air.
He looked at her with hooded eyes, still panting from lack of air. She blushed and hid her face in the gap between his neck.
Suddenly she looked serious and said, “we must be the first couple to confess their love in a morgue” both laughed heartily and fell asleep with a smile.
……….next morning……….
The gang spent the whole night at hospital coz they were worried of Kabir & Sanchi. After all they got stuck in the morgue. In the morning the first thing they did was asking ms. Frenendez to open the morgue.
“Why do you want to go to the morgue this early in the morning?” Ms. Fernandez questioned suspiciously.
“Ms. Fernandez I’m a senior doctor. You should listen to me” Dev said with an authoritative voice.
“I’m not disobeying your orders Dr. Dev I’m just asking.
“Arre kyaa ms Fernandez, uss hitler aur uss ki maharaani are stuck there since last night” Veer explained to her. She hurriedly got the keys and all went to the morgue when she heard Kabir’s name.
They opened the door and called there names but no one responded. Still there are no lights. They fixed it and went inside searching them.
What they saw brought a smile to their faces. But on the other hand ms. Fernandez’s eyes went wide, mouth hung open and dropped the keys she had. She was about to scream but all the others stopped her.
“Close your mouth ms Fernandez. Flies will go there and make houses” Pragya said smugly.
“Aww they look soooooo cute” Isha cooed.
“So Dr. Kabir and Dr. Sanchi?” Ms. Fernandez tried to put the pieces together.
“Haa! They’re together, as a couple” Dev said and looked back at the couple “now no one can stop Sanchi becoming my bhabi” he jumped up and down.
A small smile crept to Ms. Fernandez’s face. “I agree Dr. Isha they’re so cute but we have to wake them”.
“Not without a picture. As much as they look cute together we can use this pic to blackmail them” Veer came with a evil idea ??? and all clicked pics.
They looked at the scenery before them for one last time. Kabir sitting on the floor, back against the wall with Sanchi on his lap. Both hugging each other with a happy smile.
“Ahhmmm…… Kabir? Kabir wake up!! Seriously? Normally this guy wake with a small noise but today?” said Dev.
“Dev mera bhai, this is what happen to people when they fell in love” Veer said with a philosophic expression.
Kabir slowly woke and saw everyone. He whisperd to Sanchi, “hey Sanchi, wake up”
“Five more minutes Kabir”
“We don’t have five minutes, we have company” said Kabir. She slowly opened her eyes and greeted him “tell your company to go away, good morning!”.
“Ahhmmm…… We’re here too you know! Yaar Kabir couldn’t you find some other place other that the morgue to do romance?” All burst in to laughter.
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Ok that’s all for today. This is the confession part. I don’t know how to write romantic stuff. So I gathered all I read and watched on movies together and wrote it. I know it’s not much but really hope you guys like it. And I decided to write the annual trip on the next part. Originally I wanted to write it here but this got to long. So wait for the next one ??? if you have any suggestions that should happen during the trip, don’t forget to tell me ??? until then ???
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Omg Ruwani dear…this was like watching a romantic movie..and after reading this who will say that u don’t have any idea abt romance ??this was such an amazing update..my words will surely fall short to describe this…u r a fab writer..too good yaar…eagerly waiting for ur next update asap ☺☺☺
Thank you sooooo much Riya ??? this lovely comment of yours just made my day ??? I know you’re waiting for the next one and I’ll try to post it by tomorrow evening ??? or it’ll be a little late coz my mom’s not well and I have to take care of her
Ruwani … I mean it was mindblowing ,fantastic and awesome. Words will fall short . It is just a blockbuster episode with everything perfect on its place . I loved the whole episode . Loved the chemistry between Kaanchi and Ishpragveer and Dev .I am crazy after reading this ….. And yes !I would suggest some jealousy scenes and Ria plotting against which would obviously fail to separate them …..Would you suggest me some ideas for the 10th episode of Pregnancy Cravings in the PM ?
Wooow sooo much praise!!! ??? thank you so much Neha!!! I’m so happy you liked the epi ??? and about your story dear, I couldn’t think of much for now but you can make Riya do something to make Sanchi feel insecure (like Kabir doesn’t loves her anymore kind of thing) and Kabir trying to prove her wrong. I don’t know if you like it or not not if I get more ideas I’ll defineatly tell you ??? if I go back to my ff I want to add some jealous scenes too but don’t know how to. So if you have an idea don’t forget to tell me ???
Well ! Thank you so much dear , I am really going to use some of the above in the ff and you can jealousy scenes like they are on annual trip and although Riya has knowledge of everything still she deliberately asks Kabir her doubts and sticks to him.. Oh you know how to write those scenes … then you can also make a drunk Kabir or a drunk saanchi by Riya in the annual trip … Well , I really want to talk to you in the PM …. Shall we ? ..when you are free ?
Sure dear ??? and thank for the idea ???
OMG it’s superb amazing outstanding very nice very good very unique and addicted to ur ff waiting for next part
Thank you soo much and glad you liked it ??? I’ll try to post ASAP Ashnita ???
Wow so nice epi.It was too good.Loved their confession.I would have loved watching Veer and company’s reaction if it could happen.
Oh how I wish it would happen in the show.
Thank you so much Anonymousaa ??? happy to know you liked it and thanks for commenting. If my memory is correct it’s the first time I see your comment. I always get happy seeing a silent reader’s comment ???
Yeah I suppose you are right.You know I always try to comment whenever I can.
Life in college, it’s actually very busy life so I seldom get opportunity to comment.
But I wanna assure you I have been reading all of your chapters.
Plz never ever get disheartened seeing less comments.We silent readers are always there for you.
Thanks for such encouraging words dear ???
Amaz dear as usual nd confession part is outstanding love it post nxt asap
Hey ruwani dear i know m thodi greedy ho rhi hun can u plzzz update tomorrow i cant wait anymore ab tak 5-7 baar se jyada baar episode ko pdh chuki hun love the naughty kabir n teasing gang eagerly wait for trip epi sooooo plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update fast asap
I know sweetie how it feels when you want to read the next part but the author haven’t posted it yet ???. I’ll try to post soon but my mom’s not well and I’m taking care of her. So just wait a little please? ???
Thank you so much Niyaa ??? glad you liked it
super ya I like it …
Tarasm, thank you so much ??? glad you liked it
Kya batayu yaar this episode is supur se upur…….. outstanding…… thanks a lot yaar…….????
Anu, thank you so much ??? glad you liked it
Ruwani this was awesome amazing and it seems watching movie and when I was reading all there scenes were coming front of me wow dear it was amazing update soon can’t wait love you so much take care
Thank you so much for your lovely comment Divya ???!!! I’m happy to know that you liked it ???!!! I’ll try to update soon you too take care and luv u too ???
Awwwew that was so cute nd awesome ruwani u made my day …. Nd for the trios as usual games r compensation along with I would prefer pls get someone for dev too ????nd as far as Kanchi you are an amazing writer I am
Dammn sure you might have plnned something big sweetie
Eager for ur next part
Awww Trisha!!! I’m so happy to know know that I made your day dear ??? you’ll need to bring a tape to measure how wide my smile is right now ???
Ruwani it is just amazing ,mind blowing what i say … i can’t express my feeling specially confession part and dear after reading this who will say that you don’t have any idea about romance ?and specially romance in morgue who can imagine this!!!!please update next one soon…bye…
Dhruti, thank you so much for this wonderful comment ??? I’ll try to update ASAP ???
I love you and ur ff very much thanks for making us fall I love with Karachi again and again??????u r a princess✋ hi ……..I❤and lots of love ❤❤and gifts ?????for u (u can imagine atleast)
Wow thank you so much Shivangi ??? I’m so happy you liked it
Thank you so much for the gifts dear!!! Lots of love ❤️❤️❤️ And return gifts???? to you too ???
Thank you so much Anee ???glad you liked it dear ???
Ruwani amazing In ath morgue love confession great yaar.
Sorry Anee I posted on wrong place ??? again thank you soo much???
Suprb Ruch u know u r getting me mad at ur ff it’s so so so so so amazing dear.,…,
Thank you so much QVZRQE3M glad you liked it ??? and be a little mad dear, not totally! Otherwise how will you give me your lovely comments? ???
Wow really really nice!!
🙂
Miya dear thank you so much ???
Suna toh tha pyaar ka ikraar restaurant, party etc… mein hota hai but in your story u have chosen a good place to confess.. Well done year… Isiliye toh maine sdch dekhna chodh kar tumhara ff padhti hu..
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Ha ha ha ??? I know dear it’s a crazy idea ??? and thank you so much Tiya for this wonderful comment ???
Can I just touch ur feet and gain some knowledge. U are a queen, no u are an empress no u are a goddess.. Sorry but I can’t find any words worth enough to praise ur expertise. And u are not good in roamnce.. Honey, u have the wrong idea about urself. That episode was on fire. And veer’s evil idea ?? was one of the most amazing thing.. And naughty kabir enjoying their closeness ?? was even better. I just want to kepp reading and reading and never want ur writing to stop. I always feel as if I am somewhere else reading a great master piece. It was just super fantastic and ur ff is one of my most most fav writing. And pls don’t apologise for being a few hours late. I am always a few days late ??. Coming back to the episode u and a tremendous mixture of love, sarcasm and suspense at the same time. I just can’t help but praise.. Last but nit the least.. U totally slayed amd rocked this confession. Love u loads..?
Oh my god Annie ??? I just can’t stop smiling after reading this wonderful comment dear ??? thank you soooo much ??? I’m so happy that you like my ff this much ???. And yeah, if I’m a princess where’s my Prince Charming? If I’m a Queen where’s my kingdom? But if you’re saying I’m a goddess, you have to worship me ??? ha ha ha ??? just kidding. I’m non of that sweetie just a newbie writer. Anyway I’m glad to receive such a comment from an awesome author!! Luv u too dear ???
Awww this is so cute…Did you say your not good with romantic writing?? TOTALLY WRONG I was literally smiling the entire time I was reading it!!! And don’t worry I even update late we all do!! Keep it up!!
Thank you so much Palak ??? I’m so happy to know that I could bring a smile to your face with my writing ???.
This one is vrrrry cute wala…come back soon..
Thank you so much Sanjukta ??? and yeah I will
Ruwani dear, I am so sorry for commenting late, really very sorry, very busy these days , but coming to the epi it was superb,, excellent too good…loved all the scenes…please post soon dear??
Thank you so much Tania ??? and don’t worry it’s ok
Sorry for late comment thus episode was awesome just awesome wowwwww pls update. Next soon
Where the doctors love episode who is writing that pls update next
Pragnency cravings
Thank you so much Prema ??? sorry for replying late
SORRY FOR LATE COMMENT……….I WAS OUT OF STATION WITH MY FRIENDS…………LOVED UR FF………….ITS MIND BLOWING , FANTASTIC………..HV NO WORDS TO DESCRIBE IT……………LOVED THE CONFESSION…………..AND THE WAY KABEER WAS TEASING SANCHI………….AND CALLING HER SWEETHEART………………
I KNOW I M BEING GREEDY……………. BUT I WANT U TO UPLOAD THE NEXT EPISODE SOON
UR SILENT READER
SIYA
Thank you so much Siya ??? sorry for replying late