Hello Friends thanks u all for your overwelming response. Its just surprising for me that i had made so many new friends in just one day. Thank u all for accepting me in ur SaBir Family
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After a while when Sanchi is little bit calm down by the distrust thoughts of Veer towards her. She just kept herself quite for long but her eyes not able to stop the tears.
During that time Kabir was passing by the outside passage of the Classroom when he saw someone alone in classroom(at no lecture time).
He entered Classroom and saw the face of the person that is our Sanchi who was crying quitely and much upset. He worriedly goes to her and ask for the reason of her tears.
When she saw him, she was not able to hold her emotions much longer and burst he heart out with crying badly.
He hugged her and put her head on his shoulder to calm her down.
After some time when she realised , she came to senses and broke that hug. Kabir makes her sit and gave some water to her. And then asked what happened ?.. Did anyone done something to u? Did anything happened to u? Did anyone said something to u? By the last question she started crying again but this time with wiping those tears..so kabir instantly got an idea that..someone has spoken bad to her. He ask her the matter but she didn’t utter a single word. By that Kabir ask DO YOU TRUST ME SANCHI? DO U TAKE ME AS YOUR FRIEND? by this question she hugged him with a right and spoked her heart out with some Phylosophical way that.. I did so much for my friend who is more than anybody in my life but my friend don’t trust me..today i lost my friend and i don’t know i ever will get that friend or not.My Friend left me forever without listening my side of truth. My Friend don’t trust my friendship and love.
By listening this.. Meher’s deeds came to Kabir’s mind and he too gets upset.
but this time he also turns little bit Phylosophical and Consoles Sanchi that.. when 2 broken hearts ? met they turn 1 ? ..everything can be fixed up again. I mean .. i also faced the same situation 2 years ago but then u came in my life.. i don’t have many friends but i have the best of the friends that is u. So in same way u will also get a Best Of All World Friend like me who trust u more than u (In kabir’s mind- i want to be your love but more than that i want to be your Best Friend to whom u can share your heart and emotions carefree). By listening this Sanchi gets some strength and Thanks Kabir for motivating her and for the emotional Support. She goes out of classroom and washed her face in restroom. While Kabir was thinking of his sayings- IN MIND – (What you are thinking Kabir? Sanchi needs a support and you need Sanchi..just speak out your feelings to her) He goes to his Cabin and says enthustistically that IT’S NOW OR NEVER. I have to share my feelings to sanchi as soon as possible.
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So thats it for today. Hope u guys like it. Do share your opinions..it means alot to me and plz feel free to suggest something new to me. Treat me as your Friend or Sister anything u prefer.
Will be soon back with Episode 3.
30 Comments
Nice sister but some thing is missing
Thanks for mentioning Sister word for me.. i am happy with ur response . Yeah i too feel there is something missing..but surely will try to complete in next episode. You will be happy with that for sure. Keep suggesting ?
Wowwww khamoshi in second chapter u made me khamosh Iam speechless now it’s is amazing awesome superb mindblowing and waiting for next part
wowwww it’s amazing mindblowing ravishing lovely awesome
Happy Birthday Dear. God Bless You
Wow khamoshi again l’m tell I m you great work dear?????
Thank u so much dear
just perfect dear superb
please update next one soon
Thanks dear. I already submitted the next episode. U will get to read it soon. Do share your opinions on it. Good day
Perfect dear but mujhe nhi lagta ki kabir ko itni jaldi krni chahiye abhi thoda unhe or pass aane dena chahiye ist best friend nd then kabir confess his lovvvv it just my opinion bcoz sanchi still lovvv veer so i didnt want to hurt kabir by sanchi thats why soory if u dont mind nd rest on u lovvv u dear post nxt fast
Yeah i know. U will get in next episode what really happens. Bcoz that was the end and u will get in starting of next episode. The suspense will be of ur opinion related only.
But i am very glad u really interested in this story and tried correcting me..which really makes me happy. Plz suggests more so i get new ideas how to improve this story.
Good Day
I changed the upcoming plot according to ur view. And hope so u like it. I already submitted my article. Give me your opinion how u felt after that one. Eagerly waiting for your response
Thank you so much Ashnita,Dhruti and Anee for ur appreciation. Yeah surely the next episode will be uploaded. Today itself or may be tomorrow. Bcoz i m little bit busy till thursday
Well first of all so sorry KHAMOSHI for not replying on ur first ep it was also amazing just like this one loved it to the core keep it up nd post the nxt one asap.
Thank u so much. And it’s perfectly alright if u can’t reply. I only wants that.. my work is viewed my fans like me of SaBir. Thanks again. But keep commenting, it feels good ?
Superb sis todays epi was jzt mindblowing
Hope to see another part soon
Thank you. I already submitted next article. U will get to read it soon.
Nice my dear sister episode was awesome love u take care update soon
Thank you so much dear. I already submitted next article. U will get to read it soon.
Good day
ITS AMAZING………….JUST LOVING IT…………YOUR WRITING IS SIMPLY INCREDIBLE…………LOVED YOUR UPDATE……….SORRY I DID NOT COMMENT ON THE INTRO AND THE FIRST PART AS I WAS BUSY…….BUT I READ THOSE TOO…………. IT WAS REALLY FANTASTIC…………I AM REALLY CURIOUS TO SEE KABIR JUGGLING WITH HIS FEELINGS………….
UR SILENT READER
SIYA
Thank you so much Siya. I already submitted next article. U will get to read it soon.I am very lucky to have Silent readers like u. Thanks for amazing comment it really made my day.
Good day
Nice story
Thanks dear
Hii sis!! I hope u don’t mind calling u as sis… Really u r doing fantastic job… Can I keep your name? Bcoz I m not liking the name khamoshi… If I said anything wrong then I m sorry… Superb plot ?????
Haha.. your wish..you definately xall me anything.Thanks Sis for ur words.
Khamoshi, your episode was so good…loved the way Kabir consoled Sanchi was the best part….it was superb…post soon
Thank you so much dear. I already submitted next article. U will get to read it soon.
Good day
amazing yaar……….tum toh chha gai boss(in pragya style)…just amazing………the way kabir consoled sanchi……awwww……….so cute…….eagerly waiting for ur nxt one……….
Superb awesome mind blowing
You nailed it and te way you express their emotions and chemistry…. Huge round of plause for you sis!!