Hello Friends. Good to see u all again and feeling very blessed to have u all in my life. Today is a very special day for me as my 3 months beautiful journey coming to it’s end. Yes but with a happy note and a happy ending. Thanks friends for always supporting me and encouraging throughout my journey as a Writer.
Now i proudly says that i am a TU Writer and the reson behind my starting of journey is NIYATI my friend..miss u dear. You were the first to suggest me of writing articles. And last but not the least.. THANKS TO MY TU BAK BAK QUEENS.. yaar tumse achha koi nahi.. main jitna tum sabke saath bak bak karti hu utna main apni best friend se bhi nahi karti. Lots of love to all my friends and readers including silent readers. Stay blessed always.
So no more senti baat abhi.. lets jump to the story.. but firstly if u missed the previous CHHOTU SA Article than here is the link..from where u can read it.
Episode 27
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RECAP: Sanchi agrees to marry Jaya’s selected Man while Kabir saw Sanchi agreeing for marriage..which breaks his heart. Both are the victims of the circumstances. So lets see what we will get to read today …
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So lets take a leap of 1 week..
LOCATION: Pragya and Satish Marriage Reception.
AUTHOR’S NOTE: So during 1 week Sanchi and Kabir did not talk with eachother. Sanchi didn’t bcoz of her promise towards her mother , wanted to keep Kabir away so He don’t get much hurt and Kabir didn’t bcoz of Misunderstandings of Betrayal.
Satish Nd Pragya’s marriage over. Now it’s time of reception party. All the staff members of SDCH is invited in their marriage so Kabir and Sanchi has to come under one roof at a same time and face eachother.
Every1 was enjoying the Party While Kabir was standing near a Bar Counter. Sanchi has equally participated In Pragya’s marriage as Isha. Both were enjoying it but from inside her heart was crying seeing Kabir ignorance and emotionless body. His looks were like a soulless body. But she hardly able to compose herself. She gets lost in her and Kabir’s memory.A call on her cellphone brings her back in reality. It was of JAYA.
SANCHI: Hello Maa !!
JAYA : Ha Beta.
SANCHI : You’re fine naa.. Have u taken your medicines? Anything serious? Should i come there?
JAYA: Stop Stop Stop beta..so many questions at a time..i am feeling better now. I just called u to inform that KARAN has finally landed to Mumbai from USA..and he wanted to meet u asap..so i sent him the reception location..he will soon reach there. Just talk nicely with him and don’t worry about me.. take your time and enjoy the party.
SANCHI: But Maa.. i don’t even know his face and looks ..i know nothing about him except his name..so now how will i find him?
JAYA: Don’t worry beta..i already sent him your photo so now no tension should be there. Enjoy eachothers company and try to understand eachother..as u both have y spend your entire life with eachother only.
SANCHI: (gets upset) Ok Maa. I will talk to you later.
She cuts the call and gets upset .. she Looks towards Kabir but he changed his face towards other direction to avoid her. Sanchi gets upset.
AFTER A WHILE… A Person comes towards Sanchi. Sanchi was lost in Kabir’s thought.. He calls her name but NO REPLY from her makes him feel weird. So he taps on her shoulder and she comes to her senses..
MAN: Hey.. where are you lost?
SANCHI: Sorry !! But who are you?
MAN: I must say.. u were dreaming about me only.. (he laughs) Arey !! I’m Karan.. Karan Khurana From USA.. your Father’s Friend-Son.
SANCHI: Ohh ! I’m So Sorry..i was lost somewhere..but not in your dreams for sure.
MAN: I like your sense of humour. (He forwards his hand for a handshake..Sanchi also anticipates with a fake smile) Great.. So we are friends now.
SANCHI: Yeah. Sure
Everything was seen by Kabir from a distance.. he feels more hurt and jealous. He gets angry and goes to Bar Counter.. he orders some shots of Whisky. He angrily takes many shots after another.. Sanchi sees him and rush to him while Karan got busy with a call.
Sanchi takes the glass from Kabir’s hand angrily.
KABIR: What the hell you think of yourself?
SANCHI: it doesn’t matter what i think…but i can’t let u drink more.. you are not in your senses.
KABIR: Who are you to decide .. What should i do or not? It’s my choice and my life. You enjoy your life with your Future Life Partner.
SANCHI: (gets hurt) Yeah i will. Because i can’t spoil my life like you. I will have a successful career and life.. not will be a loser like you..who spoils His life and career behind Drinks.. (she puts back the Glass with a strong sound in frustration..)
SANCHI leaves from there wiping her tears and with POV: I’m Sorry Kabir.. i didn’t wished to say this things..but u have to move on..otherwise u will ruin Your life.. i had to do that ..for you my love… I can’t see u like this.
KABIR: What she thinks of herself.. she is nothing for me now.. i don’t care For you.. go to your lover..(He cries) and leaves from there for his house.
SANCHI and KARAN also leaves from the party after it’s complition and goes to Mishra House.
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Leap of 1 Week- Direct to Marriage Day:
NOW SANCHI AND KARAN BECOMES GOOD FRIENDS but still NO LOVE BETWEEN THEM..STILL UNDERSTANDING IS THE CONNECTOR of their relationship after much ups and downs.
Here every member of the SDCH is invited for their marriage…so do Kabir also. With heavy heart he comes to attend his beloved’s marriage. Every1 enjoying all the rituals of Marriage…but not the bride. Sanchi still was upset and only loves Kabir. SANCHI AND KABIR shares an eye lock a painful one..with lots of sadness. Kabir goes from there to avoid getting emotional while Sanchi’s tear drops..and seen by PraSha. She looks at eachother and takes Sanchi to her room.
PRAGYA: Dekh yaar.. humko ghuma fira ke bolne ki aadat nahi hai..sidhhe sidhhe keh rahe hai..ab bhi waqt hai..Jaya aunty ko sab kuch sach sach baata de.. varna 3 zindagiya barbaad ho jayegi.
Sanchi Sits silently.
ISHA: HAA SANCHI.. Pragya is right yaar. Z Aunty ko sab bata de..woh maan jayegi. Tu Kabir Sir or Karan ke saath to galat kar hi rahi hai par..tu sabse zyada galat khud ke saath kar rahi hai.. You are fooling yourself that u can live happily after Doing this baseless marriage for the sake of Jaya Aunty’s Dream And Promise..
PraSha: atleast give a chance yaar.. ek baar aunty se baat to kar.
SANCHI: Stop it guys.. what u think? I am very happy doing all this with myself and kabir? Even i do care for Karan..he is not aware of all this..he has the right to Know all this.. but i can’t as this is the only thing which my mother asked from me in this entire life of mine..she has done so much for us That for her i can give my life also..but giving away my life KABIR is very much painful for me. But i am doing this..for Maa and for Kabir’s betterment..he deserve much better Life partner than me..who will walk by his side and always give him support and accompany him in each ups and downs of life. Not like me…who will backstep… SHE CRIES VERY BADLY AND BREAKSDOWN.. PRASHA HOLDS HER AND GIVE HER A SUPPORT.
SANCHI: i am sorry guys i know u vmboth cares for me ..more than yourself..but i am helpless.. i lost … I lost my love..i lost my kabir forever…
Trio shares an emotional hug and all cries.
Suddey Jaya comes there and sees them like this.
JAYA: Hey my girls.. why so much of tears before bidaai.. (she tries to crack joke but fails as she also gets emotional for Sanchi’s marriage) Now smile otherwise i will also cry. They all hug Jaya also. And tries to laugh to make her happy.
PraSha leaves from the room to give some private time to Jaya and Sanchi.
JAYA: Thank you Beta.. you have given me such a big gift by fulfilling my Dream of your marriage.
SANCHI: Thank you Maa..for everything. I know u will do right for us always.. u are best mom in this whole world. Thanks for everything. I will miss u maa.. If i ever hurted u knowingly or unknowingly..please forgive me. Hope i get u as my Mom in my every births.
JAYA: Hey what Isha says…yeah. DON’T BE SENTI YAAR.. Beta u r oy marrying..not going so much far that u are saying all this to me..but haa i too want you as my daughter in my all births.. (Both share tight hug) Are you happy with this marriage naa , beta? Karan is a nice boy.. you like him naa?
SANCHI: (Just shakes her head in Yes) I am happy that u r happy. Your happiness is everything for me. Maa i need some alone time..i want to recall every moments of my life..
JAYA: Yeah sure beta. No problem. Take your time. I will see the arrangements. Will send some girls for taking u for the mandap. Till then u sit here and calm yourself. I can understand ..so many emotions at a time…a bride has to go through..
She leaves from there and Sanchi cries and gets sad.
AFTER 2 HOURS…
Mahurat Of Marriage Comes.
Groom is ready with Floral Sehra and sitting in mandap ..all prepared for the marriage. Guests are waiting for the Bride’s entry.
And here comes…SANCHI enters with Isha and Pragya. Everyone Sees her and gets mesmarized with her looks. Jaya gets emotional and hugs her And says Sorry Beta for everything.. Your House door is always open for you forever. Please forgive me is i ever hurted you.
SANCHI: No Maa… you have never done wrong with me..never say this again. and i know my family and my house is always there for me. (She hugs her tightly)
Panditji calls her and PraSha makes her sit next to Groom. And the wedding rituals begins.
They take 7 rounds and Groom fills Bride’s hairline and makes her wear nuptial chain.
Panditji declare them Husband and Wife.
Finally Groom takes out Sehra from his face and everyone gets shocked to see him. Yes guys he was none other than our Dr.Kabir. Sanchi too gets sgocked to see him..her tears falls down from her eyes. She shares emotional eye lock but Kabir ignored her with angry look. Sanchi gets Jaya’s thought and she looks towards her.. she sees her holding hands in apology. Jaya’s Family tells guest to have dinner As its ready. Guest leaves.
JAYA: I’m Sorry Beta.. i Only told Kabir to marry you.
FLASHBACK:
A kid comes running to Jaya and gives her a letter And tells her to give it to Sanchi didi as my my friends are calling me for eating ice-cream. A Letter by Karan. (jaya smiles)
I’M SORRY SANCHI. I KNOW I SHOULD HAVE INFORMED YOU ALL THIS BEFORE ONLY. IT’S TOO LATE NOW. BUT I CAN’T DESTROY YOUR LIFE FOR MY FOOLISHNESS. (Jaya gets shocked) I CAN’T MARRY YOU. BECAUSE I LOVE SOME1 ELSE. I CAME HERE TO TELL THIS TO YOU..AND MAKE MY PARENTS AGREE TO ACCEPT MY LOVER BUT THEY DIDN’T AGREE FOR OUR MARRIAGE. AND ONLY OPTION LEFT IS TO MAKE YOU DENY FOR THIS MARRIAGE. I HAVE BEHAVED VERY BADLY WITH YOU MANY TIMES TO MAKE YOU SCARED OF MYSELF BUT EVERYTIME U IGNORED MY RUDE BEHAVIOUR AND MADE ME YOUR FRIEND.. AND I WILL BE YOUR FRIEND ALWAYS AS I GOT THE BEST PERSON AS A FRIEND BUT SORRY I CAN’T BE YOUR HUSBAND AS I LOVE SOMEONE ELSE. HOPE YOU FORGIVE ME..YOUR FRIEND-KARAN.
JAYA BREAKSDOWN AND CRIES .. KABIR WAS PASSING BY and sees her like this.. he rush to her and gives his support.
KABIR: What Happened to you aunty? Why are you crying like this?
JAYA: Kabir beta..because of me..my daughter’Life got destroy. Karan runned from this marriage and leaved Sanchi alone to face humilitation of society.. because of my promise she agreed to marry Karan.. she passed as a daughter but i failed as a mother.
KABIR: Don’t Worry aunty..all will be fine. Sanchi is strong enough to face society and make them quite.
JAYA: That’s not easy.. Now who will marry her? Her life got destroy Just because of me.. i can’t forgive myself.
KABIR: Don’t cry aunty. I will Marry Sanchi. But plz stop bling yourself. U are like my mother.
Jaya gets teary eyed. She looks at kabir emotionally and hugs her.
JAYA: Sorry Beta..but i can’t ruin your life..this will be like a unwilling marriage or a forced marriage for u both.
KABIR: I know aunty..what i am saying. Trust me. I am doing this marriage with my own wish..not because of any pity and all thing. (In mind- Sanchi i hate you for the betrayal but still i love you and can’t let u face the evil society alone.. i know u don’t love me but i do..and i will fulfill my duty of love..that is to give you accompany in every good and bad times of life)
Jaya makes Kabir wear Sehra With the help of Veer and Satish.
Flashback ends.
EVERYONE CLAPS FOR KABIR and thanks him while Sanchi was lost in thoughts and shocked wIth the sudden changes in her life.
Kabir holds her hand rudely (As he is still feels the betrayal) and takes her along to Jaya for taking blessings of her. While they were taking blessings..Sanchi falls down suddenly and all gets shocked..
Kabir and Jaya gets concerned and calls her to wake up.. Kabir taps her Cheeks to bring her to senses..but suddenly a white bubbles starts coming out of her mouth.. PraSha sees this and tells Veer to Call Ambulance. Veer and Satish tries to call ambulance …finally Veer connect first with the Call Center and calls the ambulance while Kabir gets shocked seeing Sanchi like this.
Ambulance Arrives to the location and takes Sanchi on stretcher wgile Kabir holds her hand with tears. He gets a letter From her hand. He keeps it in his pocket and goes with her in ambulance. While others follows them to hospital.
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Location: OPERATION THEATRE:
Sanchi’s treatment is going on. It’s critical.
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OUTSIDE OT:
JAYA and All others prays for Sanchi’s life while..Kabir was sitted at a side and cries silently..reminces all The memories with Sanchi he has shared. He remembers the letter and opens it to read.
FLASHBACK SCENE OF SANCHI WRITING THE LETTER WHILE CRYING.
I’M SORRY MAA. AS I KNOW IT’S TOO LATE TO SAY THIS. I HAVE FULFILLED MY PROMISE TO YOU OF MARRYING TO YOUR CHOICED OF GROOM. HOPE I DIDN’T HURT U. BUT NOW I’M FULFILLING MY ANOTHER PROMISE…WHICH I MADE TO MY LOVE..(Kabir is sad) TO MY 1 & ONLY LOVE KABIR (he gets shocked) YES MAA U READ IT RIGHT. I NEVER LOVED KARAN. YES I LIKE HIM BUT AS A FRIEND ONLY. I ONLY LOVED KABIR AND HAVE DONE MARRIAGE WITH HIM IN GOA.. THAT DAY WHEN I CAME TO TELL YOU ABOUT ALL THE TURTH OF OUR RELATION AND MARRIAGE..YOUR HEALTH GOT DISTURBED AND I DIDN’T HAVE COURAGE TO HURT U MORE AS ONLY OPTION LEFT IS TO FULFILL YOUR DREAM BY KEEPING SIDE MY DREAM. I AM MARRYING KARAN FOR YOUR SAKE BUT NOT WITH ANY REGRET. BUT I’M ENDING MY LIFE BECAUSE I CAN’T SHARE IT WITH ANOTHER PERSON. THIS RIGHT IS ONLY OF KABIR AND MY LIFE & LOVE ONLY BELONGS TO KABIR. SORRY MAA.. HOPE YOU FORGIVE ME..YOUR UNFORTUNATE DAUGHTER- SANCHI KABIR KAPOOR. i can’t think of my life without kabir. Bye !!
FLASHBACK ENDS WITH SANCHI DRINKING POISON.
Kabir is shocked with this revealation…his earth under his foot got shakened up. He feels bad for behaving rudely.. he feels guilty.
Finally doctors came out of OT and informs them that now they can meet sanchi…as she is out of danger now. All gets happy but Doctors oy allowed 1 person only at a time.
Without taking much time in thinking.. Kabir rushed to go and meet sanchi. Every1 stops and thinks that now Kabir is Sanchi’s husband..so it’s his only right to meet her first. They waut outside and thanked God for saving Sanchi.
Sanchi is still unconcious.
Kabir enters and hugs her tightly..
KABIR: I’m So sorry Sanchi for All my harsh behaviour. I failed in my love test..when u needed me the most..i was not there to support u. I am really very sorry.
Sanchi comes is conciousness and hugs him and says.. i am …sorry kabir……..i kept u away from the truth. It was my fault. I never betrayed u but i can’t …. Kabir makes her shhh!!!
Now no more past things..now our future will be filled with our love and happiness. No more sadness allowed to enter our life .. no more tears from now onwards in your eyes..thats my order Dr.Sanchi Kabir Kapoor..that too officially and legally wife of Dr.Kabir Kapoor. (They both smiled and hug eachother)
Finally Family enters as doctors allowed them because of Sanchis health graph comes normal and stable.
JAYA: Oh my Daughter and Son In law both are romancing… (PraSha told everything to Jaya)
KANCHI breaks hug and gets shy.
JAYA: I’m So happy that i got saved from commiting a big crime of separating true lovers.. u both care of eachother so much..if anything wrong happened with any1 of u so naa..i woyld never able to forgive myself..
KANCHI hugs her and tells her to be happy as finally everything is back on track and now they both are together.
JAYA: Kaise nahi tum milte?..aakhir kar tumhara rishta Kismat se juda hai.. What Name your writer Given To your Love Story? Haa yaad aaya… KISMAT KONNECTION… kaise bhi ho ..kahi bhi ho.. aakhir kar tum ek dusre ke liye bane ho..to tumhe ek dusre ke saath hi rehna hai ab..
IshVeer and PraTish: hey guys..hume to mat bhulo..aakhir hum bhi kabhi CUPID hua karte the…ALL LAUGH AND SHARES A GROUP HUG.
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So after 1 month of happily married status..and After enjoying 1 month long leaves from the duty..finally it’s day to Join back duties.
MORNING:
LOCATION: KAPOOR MANSION:
Kanchi were sleeping peacefully hugging eachother. Shallow sun rays falls on Sanchi’s face and she happily wakes up stretching her hands.. and sees kabir sleeping so innocently like a kid with a slight smile of his face. She kisses his forhead and leaves for the washroom. After 15 minutes she comes out of washroom ..Kabir calls her with weak voice.
KABIR: S..A..N..Chi…
SANCHI rushes to him.. what happened Kabir? I am here only..see.. open your eyes..
KABIR slowly openes his eyes as says..
KABIR: I’m not feeling well.. i think i have a fever. Everything is seems going round and round in front of my eyes..
SANCHI: How can it happens..i just touched your body few minutes back and that time all was perfectly all right..so what suddenly happened to u? Wait i will check your temperature.. she quickly goes to kusum and brings thermometer and kusum also comes with her to see kabir.
Sanchi checks the temperature and it showed 102°C .. Both gets shocked and gets concerned for Kabir..
While Sanchi was busy with bringing out some medicines for Kabir.. KABIR was smilingly victoriously..Kusum sees it and gets suspicuous..
She comes near Kabir and hugs him while checking him..and she gets the minute smell of Onion…and her doubt gets cleared. She blackmails Kabir of telling truth to Sanchi.. Which he denies and handovers his Credit Card to her for Shopping… KUSUM GETS HAPPY by the Subah Subah Ki Vasooli.. (As Kabir always used to do this during childhood..to get saved from school)
KUSUM: Sanchi.. I think you should take 1 more day leave along with Kabir..as he badly needs you and your care.
Sanchi agrees and informs hospital Manager that today both are on leave as Dr.Kabir is sick.
She cuts the call .
Kusum starts to leave.. But stops at midway. She turns and says.. SANCHI PLEASE REMOVE THE ONION … OTHERWISE ROOM WILL STINCK WITH BAD SMELL.. While Sanchi thinks…and having no idea.. Kabir gives a glare and angry look to Kusum for telling his truth to Sanchi after taking bribe also.. Kusum leaves the room with the speed of Bullet.
While Sanchi finally got the meaning of Kusum’s saying (Tubelight) and she angrily looks at Kabir..
SANCHI: Achha Mr.Kabir Kapoor.. Yeh sab chalta hai aapke dimag main !! Aapko to Oscar dena chahiye.. Kya acting karte hai..Dr. Ko bhi ullu bana diya..
KABIR: (happily sit straight) Yes my dear wife.. It was my plan to make u stop with me …i wanted to spend 1 more day with u..alone..and do some romance.. Because..from 2morrow onwards our life will be more for patients and less for eachother.. Pata nahi kab waqt milta..
SANCHI : Awww.. My Romantic Kabir Kapoor has done this mischief for me…ohh my poor baby.. SHUT UP.. no more excuse.. I am xalling hospital again and saying..book a bed for Dr.Kk as he lost his mind …
KABIR: Yes i lost my mind..but from heart… I LOVE YOU SANCHI.
SANCHI: I LOVE YOU TOO MY DEAR HUBBY..
They both hug eachother and do some romance..
(Sorry guys…Private time..no more taka jhanki..)
And They live Happily Ever After.
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The Story ends here as so do my Fan Fiction Also.. This was my First and Last Fan Fiction. Because i don’t know when i will be able to write another one..it has very less chance. But this FF will always be close to my heart as it was my 1st ff as well as a medium to connect me with so many wonderful people.. I made so many friends amd fans because of this only.
i will try my hands on OS also..as my frnds have suggested me and ordered me also..so woh sirf or sirf tum sab ke wajah se hi hoga…
Last but not the least:
Names of every Commentor, who commented on my whole journey of KISMAT KONNECTION FF till now: (a token of thanking you all for all the love u showered on me)
Trisha Yogita, Moonlight Tania, RiyaRocks Priyanka, Rajnandini, Niyaa, Neha, RandomFanFictions Jo, Jessicca, Anee, AnahitaAnnie, Priyanshi, PremaMohan, Anuradha, Ashnita, Kanchi, Dhruti, Tiya, Anonymoussa Bbechana, Alia, Abhilasha, Amnaa, RuCh23 Ruwani , Miss Golgappa Sana, QVZRQE3M , Sajnana900, Sweetie, Palak.Sharma , Aafiya, Radhika, Divya, Tarasm, Siya, Michelle, Maisarah, Pikoo, Swetha, Niyati, Anu, Mayoori, Divya, Yaashi, Praveena, Neha7873, Tumpamoni, Rivanya, Prachi , Prakruti, ArpitaKrish,Dhruvi, Kajal, XYZ , Anu88, Cherry and Sadik.
Sorry Guys if i missed some1 name then plz let me know..i will comment that name..as i don’t want y miss any1s name..this will be my one and only last chance to thank u all..so plz forgive me for my mistakes.
# My Partners of some episodes or some scenes.. thank u Anuradha and Priyanka for your love and support.
#Pic Courtesy: My Own. (ORIGINAL FROM IG A/c of VS & ST)
#THANK U FRIENDS.. I don’t know what to say..u were there when i needed some1 to talk, u were there when i needed any thoughts and ideas.. You only were there when i myself never trusted myself and my writings.. Thanks friends for showing me the oath and accomapnying me in this beautiful journey of mine. Lots of love ❤❤❤❤ to u all and Lots of Respect ??
Guys i am requesting u for the last tym.. if u like this article/ ff then plz hit the ? or u can hit the ? also..its your choice..and every kind of reaction is welcome ☺? and agar thoda sa zyada pasand Aaye yaa complain ho to plz give your reviews in ? section below. I will miss those notifications which states that.. your readers has commented on it.
THANKS AGAIN TO ALL THE READERS…SPECIALLY TO ALL MY SILENT READERS. Bcoz i know they love my ff ..as some of them communicated with me on my insta ac.
Lastly… i want to thanks TU platform..for connecting us all… thanks guys.u all r incredible . 3 cheers for u all.. HIP HIP HURREY!!! (3)
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42 Comments
????…khamoshi tune toh apni baato se mje rula diya…..par koi ni tu apne next ff k saath aana…i will miss u on TU….and epi was veryy superb…u blasted it ??….bye
Thank u so much Dhruvi… i really got emotional while writing my experienced part . ..lots of love and thanks for reading ☺
aww soo sweet of you dear
plz come with os
definetly going to miss you
kismat will defintly meet us again with another os or fs
love you dear byee tc
Thank u so much Swetha for commenting and reading my ff. Lots of love to u dear ☺
Awesome and fantastic and amazing and superb and outstanding and wonderful and mind blowing episode yaar……………last part to pur jhakas tha yaar……….mere pass dike kita kohi comment nahi ha dost……..but I am feeling very sad thinking about that this is the last and episode yaar………we are all miss u and your story so so much yaar……… please yaar write some another story………love u dear …………
Aww thank u so much Anu ☺ for the lovely comment dear.. u made me emotional and happy at the same time with your kind words..i will miss u all for sure. Yeah i wilp be back with OS ☺ but don’t know when…
Too good khamoshi…u just nailed it Lots of love for you and go bless you…i’ll miss u a lot…from now onwards our khamoshi will be khamosh…you story was one of my fav and different…. ❤❤❤❤
Thank u so much Prachi for the lovely comment.. yeah i will be khamosh for some time..?? THANK U SO MUCH for becoming a regular commentor after being a silent reader..it really means a lot to me … lots of love to my troll partner…
Such an amazing story ……. Loved it
Thank u so much Amnaa dear…u were consistant commentor on my ff..it really means a lot to me..thanks for all the love and appreciation…lots of love to u. May god bless u. Thanks for commenting ☺
Thank u for a lovely moment.
Thank u so much Maya dear for the comment and appreciation. Lots of love to u
???? mil gyi tassali. … khatam kar ke apna ff. Or last me ye senti wala note kyu …. jaanti hoon mai bhi senti or tu bhi senti h …. but ab mujhe tujhe every weekend 1 os cahiye. Dekh ye naagin ka kitna bada dil h …. jaa jee le apni zindagi vishu. …. bas every weekend ek os hi to maang rhi hoon. … jaa iske liye tujhe apni sbse kimti cheez deti hoon ye le mera ???? naagmani or ab mujhe os ka intezaar rahega.
Chal ab baat krti hoon is epilogue ki. ….
Chik chik boom fire ? ?
Chumbari ziri ziri zhakaas ff.
PERFECT
Superrrrrrr se bhi uperrrrrrrr
This is it
Kya baat kya baat kya baat
Or ab jo bolungi wo sbse kimti h aaj tak kisi ff ya article me nhi diya.
GRAND SALUTE to u
Mujhe jitne bhi yaad aaye maine likh diya kyuki or bhi h but likhungi to tu mujhe maaregi. Yaar aaj tere is shot ne mera record tod diya. .. maine bola tha na tera ff mai humesa 2 se 3 baar padhti hoon …. tera presentation bohot acha lgta h. …. aaj maine ise 6 baar padha khasskar end kya unique h yaar. Generally sab kaanchi ki unity ko dikhake end krte h but tune ek unique end kiya. … I just loved it. ….?????. Luv u tooooooooooo( ….. till infinity )much meri jaan. Ab na mera order h jldi se wapas aa or phir se dhamaka kar. Phir se aag laga TU pe.
Wrna naagin ko apni baat manwane aati h. Or haan maine specially tere liye ek os prepare kiya h …. jaise hi typing finish hogi post kar doongi. … mann kare to padh lena. … or acha na lge to comment box me 3 4 chappal jaddu dena.
Chal bohot hua mera bakbak. Kya karu aadat se mazboor.
Luv u meri jaan but pakaungi ig pe ?????
???? i thought i was watching DID … hehe jokes apart..yaar u made me senti with ur cmnt.. my eyes got moist..sachii kasam se. Thanks for showering so much of love to me and on my ff. And coming to the end.. i wanted to make it a little different..like a comedy also at the same time romantic also.. so result was that what u read..and OS for me !!!! thank u so much in advance. ???? i am so happy … lots of love to u . Baki baatein INSTA pe..yaha dusra Article likh rahi hu..vaisi feeling aa rahi hai ??? and… weekend pe OS.. Hmm try zarur karungi. Tere liye. ???
It was awesome.. From first it was fabulous..
Will miss you a lot yaar…. Please come with another ff..Take care….Whatever situation you are in, just remember always have a smile in your face….. Bye.. Meet you soon in tu..
Thank u so much Aafia dear for so much of love..i will really miss u all.. thanks for commenting . Lots of love to u ☺? and i will follow ur advice for sure.. smile will be always there and i want u too to follow this always..keep smiling ☺
Soooooo much emotional epsd with lots of twist jst lvd it soooooooooooo much.. Nd,,soon u hv 2 come with anthr amazing ff like kismat konnection got it nd it’s an order okk.. Will miss u a loooooooot…#
Thank u so much tumpamoni.. lots of love to u and i will try to come back with ff..but i am surely coming with OS in near time.. hope u like that also.. and your orders is my duty dear ?? keep smiling ☺
Hoye hoye meri Vishkanya zehr ke jagah itni achchi ending chhod gayi.Aww……soooo cute kuchi muchi ending tha.Jab Kabir ka sehra utha toh mein sochrhi thi arey waah ye hui na Mitu wali baat.Ek ff se thodi na bhagne denge TU se.Time to time fs updates chaiye nhi toh vampire hoon raat ko darane aajaungi.IG ko bhulna mat.Meri taraf se bhi tirthyatra pe ek dua maangdena ki Mitu jald se jald TU pe wapas aaye aur nayi journey shuru karde.
Ab aur bakbak bacha ke rakhungi baad mein kaam aayega till then love uh take care!!❤❤❤
Thank u so much my bbechana.. haha Mitu wali ending to milni hi thi isse..likha bhi to Mitu ne hi hai ??? paagalpan to kahi dikhna chahiye naa.. and i will be back soon with OS with or without Dua.. ?? bcoz i too can’t leave without u all..so tab tak wait kar meri vampire..lots of love to u and a tight hug ..sabse chhoti shaitaan..
Khamoshi u r such an amazing writer I can’t express in words.its such an emotional episode with dher Sara twists/fb. I luved this whole journey with u. Hoping for ur next os. ??
Thank u so much Kajal.. for all the love and appreciation..it really means alot to me. I am happy that u enjoyed this ff and accompanied me on my journey of KK ff. Lots of love to u.. stay blessed and keep smiling
Superb one awesome faboulous amazing the title matches the story story perfectly their kismat got them together outstanding witting skills u have I have read ur story from half but still all the EPISODEs I have read are awesome and lots of appreciation to u for writing such perfect story from ur silent reader
Aww Sanu. Its ur first and last cmnt on my ff.. it really a special one for me.. lits of love and thank u so much for all the love and appreciation.. i am glad that u liked my ff and my writings. Lots of love to u and thanks to all my silent readers ☺?. Ur cmnt brought a smile on my face ??
Vishuuuuuuuuu………..meri jawaani janeman……..pehli baat…….tussi toh chha gaye boss……nehi, ek se kaam nehi banegi I know……..superrrrrrrrrrrrrr se bohut bohut bohut zyaada uparrrrrrrrrrrr……stupendo fantabulous fantastic………khidkitod darwaazatod………..arey yaar, ab kuch yaad nhi aa raha hai……..chal abhi ke liye, itne se kaam chalade…..aage ki tareefein tere os pe(tune kya socha bachchhu…..ek ff likhke nikal legi & hum tujhe pakdenge nehi…..aise khushfaimi mat pal……jald se loutkar tujhe os likhna hai)& haan…..sirf os hi kyun……..os,fs,ff………..sab chahiye hame, & agar tu nhi likhegi, toh insta hi nehi, tere sapne mein bhi aake ye bm teri watt laga degi….samjhi naa……& yaar, end mein tune mujhe senti bana dia…koi kisiko itna rulata hai bhala?…..not done….mera tissue box khatam ho gaya, ab tu apna waala bhej……oye, daant dikhaana band kar…..ab baaki baatein insta pe…..luv u meri pyaari vishu, wo bhi bohut bohut bohut saaraaaaaaaaa………..
Heyyy Priyanka…tu mere ko senti banati hai yaar.. koi bhala itna achha kaise bol sakhta hai.. jaa nHi bhejna mere ko tissue box tere ghar.. hehehe thanks for the love yaar.. it really means a lot to me. Ab se yeh KHAMOSHI khamosh hi rahegi..jab tak ek OS naa likh daale.. par tere orders sar aankhon par..zarur sab kuch likhne ki try karungi..bas bhagwan kare ke hume hamare SaBir mil jaye serial main..taki interest badhe ab.. and lots of love to u… dher dher dher saraaaaaaaaaaa a tight teddy hug to u ???? lots of kisses also ☺???
Ye kya tha vishu?????????????????.. bas kar pagli itna rula diya ki ab rone k liye glycerin use krna pad raha h..?.. kya yaar aise bol.rahi h jaise tu kisi dusri duniya se aai pk type h or hamein chod k jaa rahi h.. soch bhi mat jaane bahar dil-e-gulzar wrna teri battishi tod dungi..?…. ab thoda ff k bare m sun.. ekdum nirala jhoom barabar jhoom nachane wala… ??.. darwaja khidi mohalla sar TU(nahi isse baksh deti hun ye chala gya to phir kaise aayega?) tod daala.. bole to ander se hila daala.. ye naye tarike se tha sara bhashi ho gya tarif krne ka tarika new invent kiya h one nd only nautanki ki dukaan niyaa ne???.. ok ab sun sanyasan hamare
kanchi k liye ghorr tapasya krna.. agar naa mile to hum samjh jayenge tune dil se sadhna nhi ki???.. or haan last tera os toh definately chahiye mere ko wo bhi ek dum fadoo aisa naa ho sanyasi ban k hamein baba types gyaan dene wala parvachan chaap daale ..daya kar hum bachchiyon p apni krur drishti se bacha lena???ok bye ab chalti hun duwayon m nahi hakikat m yaad rakhna wrna haddiyaan tod k yaad dila dungi.. zombie kisi ko bhul jaye aisa ho nhi skta or zombie ko koi bhul jaye aisa hum hone nhi denge bye.. ab insta p baki bachchi khuchchi kasar puri kar lungi pata chala commnt agle saal mile?????.. lovv u vishu/mitu/devi ji ??????.. ab khamoshi khamosh nhi honi chahiye???
Aww meri niyaaa ne mujhe rula diya or hasa bhi diya… shock mat ho..main nahi royi par tera dil rakhne ke liye bol diya ???? arey iss sanyasan ki tapasya rang layegi zarur..dekha Kaanchi nahi hinge dur… hahah Veer ab sanyas le lega or Kanchi ki shaadi ho jayegi..malhotra hamara udhaar kare yehi khwaish bachi hai ?? chal back to ff.. yaar thank u so much dhamakedar tareef ke liye..tune to mera din hi barbad kar diya..ab oure din teri tareef mere sar chadd kar bolegi …?? lots of love to u yaar..baki kasar Insta pe ?
Din barbad kar diya???.. ab teri zindagi barbaad karungi.???.. dekha mera asar pehle hi tere do din gye ??haha..ab byelo u vshkaNya urff sanyasan ji????
This ff was amazing…. I wish that something like this happens in the serial too…
Thank u so much Guli.. ☺? for the comment..keep smiling and i too hope that sabir gets united.
Dear sis…lovely..super duper climax yaar …I know you are an amazing writer.. This is my favorite ff.. I miss you dear…love you dear …. God bless you…
Hey sis.. i will miss u too.. and thanks for the compliment and commenting ☺? it really means a lot to me.. i am glad to know that my ff is your fav one.. this is kind of precious moment for every writer when their reader says like this for their work..really thank u so much..lots of love to u..tc and keep smiling ☺? thanks for memories
First of all I’m extremely extremely sorry for not being able to comment… But yaar you ended my one of the most fav ff? Will miss it yaar… It’s been a great journey… Love you so much yarr.. It’s a blessing for us readers to have amazing and great authors like you.. But khamoshi.. Take it as an advice or order, but you need to continue writing.. Do come with another such beautiful ff of yours as a lot of your fans are addicted to you and your writing.. I never understood how on the earth you managed to create such beautiful ideas… Seriously your every epi was outstanding… Kaanchi scenes were so cute.. Am gonna miss everything so much… Plz plz dosra ff b start krna plz … Love you.. Tc
Heyy Prakruti.. yaar i don’t know u by your face..but i feel a comnect with u.. and it really didn’t matter to me that u missed commenting before as many times i too fail to do so on many articles of my frnds.. ur comment and your appreciation brought a big smile on my face.. i am so gkad to know that u like my ff so much. And dear i am not a gr8 writer..i was just a beginner..but u all supported so much to me that now i able to write more such things..so the real credit goes to u all…my readers and frnds.. and coming to ideas.. i don’t know..hehe bcoz when i start writing..this a comes to my mind and i juat type it..☺? dear i am glad that u like SaBir scenes of my ff.. and take my advice..u too start writing..bcoz mujhe bhi nahi aata tha..par tum sab ke wajah se sikh gayi.. i will eagerly wait for ur writings. Lots of love and keep smiling
Yeah I’m planning to write an OS on kanchi during my semester break as i hardly get time exams are on head.. I know I’m not a good writer as yo guys but I’ll try to write an interesting one..
Mitu….omg this was such an amazing perfect ending ….I just wished the epi never ended…too good yaar…..so sorry for commenting late…actually I read your previous and this one together…as I hadn’t opened TU for many days….this was one of the best ff I have read till now…i can’t describe in words how good the epi were…you are indeed a writer…and will miss you a lot…but yea plz try to post an OS…….love you tremendously and will miss this ff a lot …..??????❤❤❤
Thank u so much Tania… No issue yaar..bcoz i too occassionaly come on TU.. lots of love dear u took tym to read this ff and all my bakwas..love u alot and miss u too
Super fabulous fantastic mind blowing khamoshi ur really good dear I will miss you so much dear ????? please come back with ur OS dear for ur this sweet little sister ??❤❤love sooooooooooo much my best friend cum sister take care of yourself love you so much
Thank u so much Divya.. i am so glad that u liked it.. will miss u too..and yeah i will try to come back with an OS …lots of live
Sorryyyyyyyyy…..Mitali darling……itna late…umeed karti hun tu mujh se ziada khafaa nahi hogi……btw seriously…………Outstanding……..OOOOOUUUTTTTSSTANNNNIINNGGG……..OOUUTTTSTTTAAANNDDDIIINNGG……Samjhi Paglet……….Rula diya Phir pata nahi kab moka mile tere updates par comments karne ka……..Tu wapis se zarooor likhna….samjhi na??….PLzzz likhna??…..you are such a great writer…..you have ability to write more and more story like that……luv you sweettie……..your……pagle friend cum sis….Anee.
Mitu sbse phle Dino kaan pakad k sorry for commenting this much early …….u know what I mean…….and te4e episode k liye bed pe chadh krovation deri hu receive it………yr senty ho gyi………but it was really the bestest ending which could be …….,.love it Etna oceans me panii hai lu uh dher sara…….kya bolu ……..words km h there tareef me ……..ye ending totally unpredictable I…………his tareeke se tune twist diya …..aye Gaye kudio dil garden garden kr ditta …………,.?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????