First of all THANKS to each any every reader of my FF. And a big wala SHUKRIYA to those who takes out time for my FF and give Comments on it. This makes my work countable and special. Thanks for that.
——–Now onwards i will improve my writting style with some dialogue writting. So the scenes become more easy to visualize.
So the story starts with the scene where Kabir came to drop Sanchi to Hostel.
Kabir- So Sanchi we have reached your hostel.
Sanchi-Thanks Sir
Kabir- Again Sir.. now we are good friends , you can call me Kabir after our duties. No more Formalities.. Vaise bhi kisi Mahaan insaan ne kaha hai. DOSTI MAIN NO SORRY NO THANKS..samjhi madam.
Sanchi- I must say today i saw your another side for the 1st tym..in a good way. 1st Your Ice-Cream treat at roadside sidelining Health hygiene. And now this Filmy Dialogues. Are you alright? Pulling his leg with a smile.
Kabir- (He felt relaxed seeing her smiling) This is all the result of your Company. I used to see how u carefree ate those Roadside GolGappas (Pani Puri) enjoyingly. So this change is specially for you.
Sanchi- (In Mind remembers Veer teasing her with the name Ms.GolGappa…and gets in deep thought) Sir kayi baar hum bina soche samjey kuch aisi cheezo ko aadat bana dete hai jo hamare liye Sahi nahi. {Sir, Many times we make some habits of things which are not good for us}.
Kabir- (By seeing her lost somewhere, he made snap sound by clicking his fingers) Where are you lost? You remember naa that u have duty tomorrow?No excuses will be acceptable on account of our frndship. I’m still that Khadoos for u all. So,go now and take rest.
Sanchi- yeah Sir..Sorry Kabir. Thanks for everything. Good Night.
Kabir- You’re Welcome.. Anytime. What u have done for me and Specially for my Mom, i would never be able to payback for ur good deeds. Good Night Bye.. i should leave now.
Sanchi gave a gestures of I HAVE NOT DONE SUCH A BIG THING. And just gave a smile to him.
Kabir left the hostel in his Car.
Sanchi enters her Hostel where Veer is already waiting for her to come. Sanchi was going straight to her room when Veer Called her to stop. But she still walking towards the upstairs.
Veer- Wait Sanchi. I want to say something. (By not getting any response he furiously pulled her and pinned her to wall)
Sanchi- Leave me Veer. It’s paining. You lost the right to touch me or talk to me. It’s all finished between now.
Veer- i know what type of girl you are.. you wanted to kill my mom with teaming up with ur Family. All your game plans failed in trapping me into your love so now u trapped Dr. KABIR with same Dirty love Trap.
Sanchi- (Hearing this..she gets more hurt and tears started rolling out from her eyes.) So with so many days together u learned this much only about me. First I was feeling guilty that i have kept my secret hidden from u. But now i feel .. i was stupid that i fell for u without caring my Mission and my parents dream. I was stupid to do friendship with u. U r not that deserving. Like Father Like Son. You both can stoop low for your Aims.
Veer- (getting more furious was about to slap her but stopped) Sanchi mind your tongue. Just leave our hospital after the Contract gets Finish between u and our Hospital Policy.. then u happily stay with Dr.Kabir as per your wish or need.
Sanchi- Just Stop it Veer. It’s none of your business with whom i roam or with whom i befriend. Yes i will live my life happily with Kabir because he is not like you. He is far more better than you, he trust me and love me true sense.
{SANCHI leaves from there furiously and came to her room and thinks what she right now spoke…there Veer is upset what has happened just now and thinks that i know i have crossed by all limits today but then consoles himself by telling that SHE DESERVES IT.}
Here in room Sanchi was thinking about Veer Sentences about Kabir and Her. She Thinks (Do i really started feeling for Kabir?) She recieved Kabir’s Msg on her Cellphone.
[Chatting Conversation]
KABIR- I have reached home safely but. (Incomplete)
SANCHI- But What?
KABIR- but i am still surprised how can i reached home safely? Inspite seen u at night.. ߘᅠ
SANCHI-Hahaha(Smiled with the reply) Same here!!
KABIR- Now Stop thinking much and keep this smile on your face forever. Stop blaming yourself. Whatever happened with u was not your fault so leave it on destiny.
SANCHI- (in mind- How he came to know what i am feeling? Do we both feel same for eachother?)
KABIR- Are you there Sanchi?
SANCHI- Sorry i was just got busy with something. Thanks Kabir for your throughout support. If you were not there then it would be tough for me to came out from that trauma. Thanks again.
KABIR-Stop lying i know u were not busy with anything. U surely lost in some thoughts. And Agian i will repeat No Need of Thanks. Call me anytime .Now take rest GOOD NIGHT
SANCHI- GOOD NIGHT.
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Just then Isha and Pragya came back from Shopping and started showing there stuffs which they bought.
Sanchi still lost in Kabir’s thought. Ishagya noticed and asked her.
IshAgya- What happened Sanchi? Are u alright? Where r u lost?
SANCHI-Without taking much time, tells them everything that what Kabir has done for her all this days. And tells them what Veer said to her before some time.
PRAGYA-Don’t think about that Stupid Veer. His mind is not stable right now to understand anything. Give Some time all will be good.
And Kabir Sir takes so much efforts for us that We all are very lucky that our Senior Mentor Doctor cares so much for their Students.
ISHA-I know but i want to say something to u both which i never told u before. Dr.Kabir has feelings for you before Kusum Aunty’s Operation..thats why he lied to her mom about your and his relationship easily. If there was someone else at your place..he must told all truth to his mom. I heared him once that He can’t marry u without your consent bcoz of gap between Senior and Intern. And also don’t want to lose u forever.
SANCHI & PRAGYA shocked.
SANCHI- Why did u told me that before?
PRAGYA- Oh teri !!…now we can say Dr. Kabir is our Would be Jiju (to make atmosphere of the moment light) in funny way.
SANCHI- Stop it Pragya..it’s not funny.
ISHA- I Didn’t bcoz i thought u will hurt him by breaking friendship with him. And i literally feels that he needs u more than anybody else.
Sanchi was with mixed emotions..How to react she was not able to understand.
{IN MIND> She said- How he has been feeling all these days without expressing his feelings? He must be feeling exactly what i was feeling when i was hiding my feelings for veer before Him and still supporting him inspite of his rude behaviour[Sometimes it has happened] towards me}
ISHA- BUT one more thing i want to say…
SANCHI- What now? (With tensed expression..bcoz she also wants to know with confused mindset)
ISHA- It was long back.. now he still loves u or not..i don’t know. If he has someone in his life now, i am not sure about it.
PRAGYA – Abe teri to.. makeup queen why can’t u make-up the bridge of love for the lovers.
SANCHI- I still don’t know about my feelings. But i know one thing that today Veer’s harsh words did not affect me much compare to his doubts regarding me and Kabir. I am not able to understand but i think i am falling for Dr. KABIR afterall what he has done for me all these days. And its total different feeling which i never felt for Veer. It’s first time i don’t want to lose Kabir who always stand by my side in every ups & downs of my Journey till now and wanted to be with him always.
IshAgya- This is LOVE !! Stupid. We are happy for you..
Sanchi still not able to understand how to react and accept this so soon.
Then Sanchi leaves to attend Jaya’s Call.
IshAgya- We have to make sure. Do still Dr. Kabir have feelings for u or not as well as make u realize ypur feelings for Dr.Kabir also.We will find out soon.
Both gives ߑᅠand give there mission name MISSION LOVE POSSIBLE and cheers to that.
Sanchi remembering SaBir’s love counters emotionally and hope for the best & leave everything on Ganpati Bappa than sleeps.
#Sorry i didn’t got any ideal mission name so i kept this just like Priyanka’s movie name PYAAR IMPOSSIBLE. And also made changes with the story plot. Previously it was TRIO who trys to find out Kabir’s feelings but i changed it to DUO (isha & Pragya) which will be good.
So do Share your Opinions About this episode track. Thanks for reading such a lengthy article.
46 Comments
It was awesome Khamoshi ! It was perfect and continue this writing style .. Show a little closeness between Kaanchi … I want to suggest that don’t let veer be so harsh to Saanchi …and please don’t make Saanchi a really helpless and crying girl … and update asap ..
Ok i will take ur opinions seriously. My next post will be as per ur advice. Sorry but i don’t have romantic sense of mind thats why i am lacking in this kind of things..but will try my best. I don’t want to make sanchi a crying baby but i thought its a need for the scene ..today she gave back answers to Veer with confidence. Thats the new change in my track but still will try to make it better.
Thanks for the comment
AWESOME MIND BLOWING .
WAITING FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER PLZZZ UPDATE SOON
Thanks Alia. Will try to write asap.
khamoshi tum toh khamosh kar diya yar it’s amazing outstanding very nice very good khidki tod awesome superb fantastic and waiting for next part
Ashnita, with ur lovely comment u made me speechless. Thanks for that..it made me smile truely
Wow khamoshi very nice plot…
Thanks Tiya. I am glad u like it
Awesome superb yr u nailed it sweetie ?
Thank u so much Trisha. I am nothing in front of u all yaar.. u all r just awsm i would definately wants to be like u all. Thanks for appreciation.
Awesome KHAMOSHI it’s really very good dear
Loved it to the core amazing bdk suprb.
Sorry it’s amazing nd suprb
Thank u so much dear for your amazing words.. i don’t know how to pronounce your name but its unique. Just a request..plz keep reading my article as usual.
Amazing khamoshi please update soon dear
Thanks Divya. I will surely update it soon as i complete it. Keep reading
Superly amazing…… Uodate soon
Thank u dear. I will update it soon..keep reading
It was superbbb loved it keep writing dear update next part soon
Thank u Jessicca. I will surely uldate next soon. Just keep reading
IT WAS AN AMAING ANS AWESOME UPDATE…..THE ‘MIXED FEELINGS IN SANCHI’ SCENE IS INTERESTING…..IT WILL BE FUN TO SEE THE DUO PLANNING TO FIND IF KABIR LOVES SANCHI OF NOT….I THINK THEY MIGHT END UP GETTING PUNISHMENT FOR THAT…..ALL AND ALL ITS AN INCREDIBLE PLOT…..LOVED IT VERY MUCH
PLZZZZZZZZZZZ POST THE NEXT PART AS SOON AS POSSIBLE
EAGERLY WAITING FOR IT
SIYA
Thank u so much Siya for your lovely reply. Punishment wala idea achha hai.. surely i will use it bcoz still my writing is incomplete. Thanks for giving me a point to write.
Really fantastic yr……if it happens in serial then it would have topped on trip list but ur story is incredible!!
Thanks for your kind words Abhilasha. Hope so we get to see Sanchi and Kabir scenes soon in serial also.
Superb, you nailed it hopefully there will be some romantic scenes later on
Will surely try to..but with no false hope. My next two part will be of No SaBir Scenes but a track which will bring them more close to eachother for future story.
Btw thank u so much for tge appreciation
Khamoshi, it was superb loved it…wished it happened same in the show…fantastic dear…post soon ??? love you
I am glad u like it. Hope so we get to see Sanchi and Kabir scenes soon in serial also.
It was truly amazing episode.
If it really happens in the show then that will take the serial to a new level with awesome episode. Nd M sure trp would also rise.
Keep writing. ????
Lol??
Thanks for your kind words dear. Hope so we get to see Sanchi and Kabir scenes soon in serial also.
MISSION LOVE POSSIBLE- wow………….amazing………..I would just love to read how the 2 cupids r going to unite our kanchi……….it’ll be so much fun………& yaar, kanchi scenes as usual r just mind blowing……………keep up the good work & dear, eagerly waiting for ur nxt one………do u mind if I call u Anami, cz I don’t know ur name……..hope u don’t mind………
Thanka dear.. u are giving me an extraordinary feeling.. ur comment always makes me feel special.. and yeah u can call me Anami.. NAAM MAIN KYA RAKHA HAI ? but chill ..i will reveal my real name in next episode..so suspense remains ?
Thanka dear.. u are giving me an extraordinary feeling.. ur comment always makes me feel special.. and yeah u can call me Anami.. NAAM MAIN KYA RAKHA HAI ? but chill ..i will reveal my real name in next episode..so suspense continues ?
Khamoshi dear, I’m loving your ff day by day ??? it so awesome ???
Thank u so much dear. Your comment just touch my heart. Thank u so much for this..it feels special
It was superbbb loved it keep writing dear update next part soon
Thanks Kanchi. Your name .. i am just a mad fan of that. Keep reading
Sorry khamoshi i dont know what happened actually i commnted early but not updated btw ur epi is just amaz mindblowing nd really awesome dear no more suggestion u r doing very well post nxt asap i m not sure this will be update or not…
Firstly Thank u so muchhhh. It’s perfectly alright dear no need of any formalities. And plz suggesting me, it really helps me. I get happy with every suggestion bcoz it shows involvement in making a thing much better. My story has ur efforts also wgich turned it so {beautiful (In my view)} hehe. But plz reading and suggesting.
Sorry khamoshi i dont know what happened actually i commnted early but not updated btw ur epi is just amaz mindblowing nd really awesome dear no more suggestion u r doing very well post nxt asap i m not sure this will be update or not…lets c
Wow its super good I am really enjoyed ….and pls make kanchi pair
Thank u dear. Yeah i will make sure to fulfil your wish bcoz my aim is also that only ??
Nice episode……..
Thanks dear
Hi i loved ur ff keep going its an amazing ff khamoshi i dont know ur name ? I had a request you used my edit for your ff also in other episodes you used my friends edit we dont mind u using our edits but plz give credit when u use it or ask coz we r having some problems in insta coz many people r using our edits without permission and if u use someone else’s effort it feels bad how will u feel if i use ur ff story u will feel bad so plz dont mind im just saying to ask before u use so i can see how many people r using it its important for me to know
First of all Sorry if i hurt your sentiments in any form, i really not done it intentionally..in my previous episode i mentioned the courtesy of pic but in this episode i just forgot to do so. Sorry but i promise you that this will not happen again. And i must say that your edits are truely amazing. Sorry again.
And Thank u so much from core of my heart for your appreciation.
Keep reading my ff, it’s a request.
Keep Suggesting for my ff betterment as well as my betterment also.
Hello dear. Are you still angry with me?