DIWALI DHAMAKA PART-II
The episode starts with Rhea calling Sanju and asking him, where is he??? Sanju on the other side of the phone tells to look towards her right. Rhea along with Priyanka, turn towards their right when they see, Sanju standing there dressed brightly. They giggle at his outfit “He comes towards them and asks them, Don’t I look ek dum mast for meeting Prachi??” Priyanka tells him “You look Superb!!!” Sanju says “Thank you ji, so where is my Prachi???” Rhea tells him “You took so many efforts and came here just for Prachi right?? Don’t be so impatient dear!!! Just wait for some time, then she will be yours forever!!!” They take him to Priyanka’s room and ask him to wait there, while they bring Prachi over there. Priyanka signs at Rhea, who goes and fixes a CAMERA in front of the mirror and thinks “Now, whatever is going to happen here is going to be recorded in this CAMERA and then Prachi your life will be shut in darkness forever.” She goes along with Priyanka downstairs to look for Prachi.
Aryan asks Shahana “So what type of guys do you like???”, Shahana asks him “Why are you asking me that???” Aryan nervously tells her “Well, you too asked me during my Mom and Dad’s anniversary, what is my type and then I did say you that I like timid and girly types of girls!!!” Shahana smiles getting reminded of that and how she had asked Prachi to lend her accessories, so that she could impress Aryan. While Aryan continues “While you also told me twice that I’m not of your TYPE, so I’m just curious to know WHAT IS YOUR TYPE??” Shahana is about to say when Rishi calls out “Shahana!!!” Rishi and Pragya come there, Rishi asks her “Why did you come here??? I asked you stay there right!!!” Pragya tells her warningly “Who asked to show yourself off in front of Priyanka?? Can’t you keep your mouth shut??? Come with us, and stay with Rishi, don’t go anywhere else.” Shahana unwillingly goes along with them. She turns back towards Aryan and thinks “I don’t have any type, because I already know what kind of person I want!!” she smiles. He smiles back at her and wonders “Why have started feeling good when she is around and curious to know the type of guys she likes!! What is the meaning of all these emotions???”
Abhi comes to Pragya’s house and finds the door locked, He asks a neighbour if there is no one in the house and the latter informs him that the whole family is out for some function. Abhi wonders “Where is Pragya???” He calls her on her phone. Pragya picks up the call, Abhi asks her “Where are you??’; Pragya counter asks “Where are you?? I’m in your house!!!” Abhi is surprised and happy to know that, he tells “I was waiting for you there and then when I didn’t see you, I thought I will come here and surprise you!!!” Pragya tells him “Now you yourself got surprised right???” Abhi laughs and tells her “Okay don’t go anywhere Fuggy, I’ll come soon then I’ll make you meet our younger daughter.” Pragya says “And I’ll introduce my daughter to her dad!!! Now please hang the phone and come fast!!!” Abhi says “Yeah, yeah, I’m coming!!!” Pragya hangs the phone smilingly and gets thinking “Finally, Prachi is going to meet her dad!!! But my god!!! I almost forgot her, where is she???”
Rhea and Priyanka come downstairs and look for Prachi. Priyanka notices Rishi with Shahana and goes towards them, telling Rhea “You just manage Prachi for now, I’ll come in a second!!!”. Rhea asks her to wait but then she leaves hurriedly. Rhea calls out Mitali and asks her to inform Prachi that her Mom is calling her to Priyanka’s Room. Rhea keeps her fingers crossed and thinks “I hope the plan just works, but where did Priyanka go???” Priyanka comes towards Rishi and Shahana, she tells Rishi “Rishi, I need to talk to you!!!” Rishi denies going along with her and gets tensed. Shahana notices his discomfort. Priyanka goes near him and whispers in his ears “Come with me or else, I’ll reveal everything about the molestation charges to Shahana.” Rishi gets irritated and helpless. He agrees to go along with her. The two go together to the kitchen, Shahana is surprised thinking “What does she want to talk to him alone??”
In the Kitchen
Rishi asks Priyanka “What is it??” Priyanka asks him “What is it that you see in that Shahana that I don’t have??? Tell me Rishi, what is it??” Rishi tells her “Stop your nonsense Priyanka, I’m not going to bear any of my madness anymore!!!” He starts to leave, when Priyanka catches his hand “Why are you getting close to that middle-class woman Shahana, am I not as beautiful as her?? And I’m also rich!!! I’ll make you rich, Rishi, once you marry me, please don’t go close to Shahana” She hugs him tight. He gets vexed “Leave Priyanka, don’t repeat, what you already tried doing!!! You will not succeed!!!” As Rishi tries desperately to free himself from the clutches of Priyanka, Shahana comes there, pulls her from Rishi and slaps hard on her face. Rishi is shocked. Shahana shouts “What kind of woman you are??? Yuck, you are an insult to all women!!!” Priyanka gets angry. Shahana continues “I saw everything that happened here, Why the hell are you after him, when he clearly said he is not interested!!! Don’t you dare try to come near Rishi once again!!!” Shahana leaves after saying that while holding Rishi’s hand. Priyanka says frustratingly “You didn’t do the right Shahana, you will have to answer for this.” After they come out, Shahana tells Rishi “Didn’t I tell you that I’m DANGEROUS!!!” Rishi is confused “What!!”. Shahana says “When we met Priyanka before, I said that I’m dangerous and I can teach that Priyanka a LESSON!!! But I should say that woman is really a PSYCHO, now if you have any troubles just notice me, I’ll take care of her.” Shahana leaves while Rishi keeps smiling staring at her.
Mitali comes and tells Prachi that her mother is calling her upstairs, Prachi “Oh ho!!! Where Ma had been so long??? I had been waiting for her!!” She rushes upstairs while Rhea smiles seeing her go upstairs. Priyanka comes there dejected, Rhea asks her “What happened??” Priyanka tells her “Nothing, so how far is our plan working??” Rhea informs her that Prachi has gone upstairs to her room. Priyanka angrily murmurs “Now you see Shahana what I do to your sister!!!”
Prachi comes inside the room and calls out “Ma, Ma, where are you??” Someone catches her shoulder. Prachi thinking it to be Pragya turns back and asks “Ma, where have you been??” but is surprised to see Sanju. She gets reminded of the incidents when he used to stalk her in Hoshiapur and how she slapped him for that, she asks “You, what are you doing her? And where is my Ma??” She looks all throughout the room but doesn’t find Pragya, so she decides to leave. But Sanju pulls her inside and closes the door. Everything gets recorded in the camera. Sanju says “Prachi, just listen, I need to talk!!!” She says, “But I don’t want to talk to you” She is about to leave once again but this time Sanju forcefully catches her and tells “I came all the way from Hoshiapur only for you, you must listen.” Prachi pushes and goes to the balcony of the room, she tries calling out to people, but Sanju covers mouth and pulls her inside and at that very moment Prachi’s dupatta catches fire through a diya kept in the balcony unnoticed by both Sanju and Prachi.”
To be continued
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Sorry, Aleyaamm!! But your update is becoming as bakwas as the real one. Still no sign of Kiara or sunny?? BYE aleyamm!!
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Thank you Steeva for your comment, and I’m someone who welcomes the negative critcisms as mush as the positive ones
But I should say you are someone who is too quick to JUDGE!!!
That’s why you jumped from Episode 4 to episode 18 without reading the episodes 5-17
I can guess that you haven’t even read episodes 1-3
Well i can say in real life you are a critic who just reads the 1st page and the last page of a novel and then judges it
I’m extremely sorry, I cannot nor I will make any changes to please your expectations, because I don’t write to please anyone but I write because I like to recreate visuals which is happening in the original series in a more LOGICAL manner.
It’s absolutely pathetic to appease readers like you, who don’t analyse any writng in it’s proper manner, because if you would have read the other episodes then you would have thought twice before putting it down “THERE IS SO NO SIGN OF SUNNY AND KIARA IN MY FF”
However, good to hear that you are not going to read ff my ff and make ridiculous comments like this.
And thanks for reading episodes 4 and 18
Goodbye forever!!!
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Aleyamma?? What a name, anyway, You say I’m too quick to judge?? But you just made the assumption that I didn’t read all your crap!! How do you know?? I commented on your trashy KKM fake story like twice and you assumed I only read 4 and 18! ? ? ? you know what you type of people who don’t have the ability to take feedback. You even judged me by one comment saying in real life your a critic?? do you know me?? so your the one who JUDGES quick. Anyways, what the point of your crappy writing?? Nothing… You’re not the KKM producer and I pray you never become one. Because you can’t take feedback. SO Go DIE
you’re as dumb as the real writers. Who keeps Rakhi as a name for sweetheart Kiara.
Firstly thank you for calling me such sweet names Steeva,
I would say your are right!!! I was DUMB and judged you too QUICK, you are not just a critic
In real life you are a blind, psychotic, fool who doesn’t know english well !!! That is why you don’t even know the meaning of A CRITIC
Morever since you read all the crap of 19 episodes I published it makes even more clear that you are indeed BLIND, PSCYCHOTIC, FOOLISH AND A PERSON WITH A DISABILITY IN UNDERSTANDING ENGLISH
Because as far as i remember i had included Sunny’s character in every episode except from episodes 16-19, while there are two huge episodes only on Kiara but you couldn’t see nor understand all that!!!
Maybe you should take an appointment with an occulist, a psychiatrist, a counselor and also attend some English tutoring classes.
And thank god you pray that I’m not KKM producer, while I pray that you are one among them, because listening to your wild speech they will surely change their crap writing in a better way, moreover
You should also mention my crap writng with my NAME to them to help you!!!
By the way, my name has a significant meaning with respect to my region, my culture and my identity so I’m really proud of having such a name, if you don’t get it, it’s none of my problem.
In the same way, I already explained well to your comment abt the name RAKHI in the 4th episode but since you are blind and cannot understand English, you are keep on bringing it again and again
RAKHI means BOND
In my ff, RAKHI will bring back the familial relationship bond between Pragya-Abhi, Rhea-Prachi and to a certain extent Sunny-Purab-Aryan.
We writers don’t write crap just like that, while we do use our brains, not like FOOLS like YOU.
Hope I don’t have to give any more explanations to you, Steeva
Goodbye Sweetie
Aleyamma
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Hey Aleyamma, I smiled and laughed at the way you’ve dev’l Shahana. Yaaah! A girl with gusto who won’t allow hyena women (Priyanka) to win their attack. I am glad that you have a note on top to explain that you are creating an adjunct to KKB because it might become confusing to some watching/reading both. And I guess it is important for all readers to understand that you are unable to include every sub-plot in every submission. You are doing well… and even I have had to remind myself that you are writing ‘beside’ KKB!
How do you read each and each everything in my mind Akituster, you have become more like a REAL LIFE FRIEND for me. Shahana is a character whom I have always liked more than Prachi in the original series, because she is way more realistic and approachable and I like the way you remarked her “A girl with gusto”, and good name for Priyanka “hyena”, she does ressemble one of them.
You are really understanding and supportive Akituster that you are trying to reply back to Steeva’s comments by explaining to her what issues I’m facing, I’m extremely alright with her comments because as a writer I always feel negative feedbacks are required to help oneself progress in a better way, and i will reply for the misunderstandings she is creating within herself.
But at the end I’m so moved with the fact you are so understanding and supportive inspite of everything.
You are indeed a “GOOD FRIEND” for anyone in your life.
Have a great day!!
Aleyamma, you have hurt me.
Wow! Aleyamma, you again assumed that I am a girl.??? I apologise if I wrote wrong things. But I was just suggesting things which could potentially improve ur story. From now on, No more arguments from my side. And about my English, I speak well and for proof you can read my articles on telly Updates. Admit it or not, you took me way too seriously. And somehow hurt me. I guess the only common thing we have is we like Akituster! Even I have loved his comments and ur right, he makes me feel like I’m speaking to a real life friend! I would like to recommend to you some serious ted talk videos on “Cyberbullying” keep the chat safe. And I will continue to read ur blogs coz they inspire me.??? you have misread me.
Firstly, you did not write anything wrong, but the way you wrote was rather a rude approach and I behave in the same way to the people the way they approach me. I think evey commentator has the right to point out what he or she thinks and when you pointed the absence of Sunny-Kiara, then I did give answer to that in as much polite manner as possible even though you called my writing BAKWAS.
And i never meant to hurt you either, so I don’t think I have to watch the ted talk videos on “Cyberullying” to justify with what you are saying. Morever, I have been a victim “Bullying”, so I know what it means to go through that, believe me I was not at all DOING THAT. I just approached your comments the same manner you approached.
Yeah I agree with you that I mistook you as a FEMALE, and I really find lots of comfort and encouragement with Akitutster.
I don’t think I need proof to check your English, I just pointed it out because you were misquoting of not seeing Sunny/Kiara’s character in my ff.
I don’t know whether you are lying or saying the truth of my ff being an INSPIRATION FOR YOU, because I’m not a GREAT WRITER, just a COMMON MAN, but happy if it does.
Hope we are better co-commentators from now on.
Thanks Aleyamma! And I’m not lying about your ffs. I truly feel inspired. Too be honest, I enjoyed reading your story at first when you showed Sunny’s revengel But when Kiara was shown abused by Tanu, I was disgusted. This is just my opinion, And YES!! Your right, My approach was wrong, and I have penitment for it. Actually I didn’t mean that I didn’t see Kiara or Sunny, but I meant like in that particular episode. So sorry I forgot to add the details of that. I just read this for Rakhi/Kiara and Sunil/Sunny. I would love it if Sunny destroyed Purab and Aaliyah’s lives. Not Aryan. Coz that would be GREAT!
Well that is a great response from you Steeva, Hope you get to see the SUNNY / KIARA scenes you wished for in the episodes i’m still uploading. And thank you, for clearing out your opinions, I will take those into consideration for my later episodes
shahana telling Aryan that she doesn’t have any type as she knows what kind of man she likes…aryana smiling at each other was sweet.sad that they couldn’t spend time together.shahana slapping priyanka when she was forcing upon rishi was cool.but I am scared whether this will provoke priyanka to harm shahana.sanju is so cheap to prachi last scene. ..omg….