Kohli House, In the night, Ranbir’s room
The episode starts in Ranbir’s room. Both Aryan and Ranbir are present and are starting off to sleep when Aryan warns Ranbir, “Ranbir, sleep a few metres away from me, you know what? A few days earlier you were sleep talking with me thinking me to be Prachi!” Ranbir is surprised and embarrassingly asks Aryan, “Did I do something wrong?” Aryan exclaims, “SOMETHING WRONG? If I would not have freed my clutches from you, then that day you would have made your SUHAAG RAAT with me!” Ranbir blushes in embarrassment and says, “Sorry Bro!” and he keeps his hand on Aryan’s shoulder which the latter shakes off. Ranbir continues, “Okay, okay I won’t touch you! But understand, even though I get most of the day together with Prachi, I don’t get enough time to spend with her and miss her desperately, do you get that? You don’t know HOW DIFFICULT IT IS TO STAY AWAY FROM A PERSON WHOM YOU LOVE SO DEARLY!” Aryan gets saddened at his words, as he reminisces his and Shahana’s break-up with tears filling his eyes. Ranbir without noticing Aryan change of emotions, continues, “Oh geez, How can I?” Aryan asks him in an astonished tone, “What happened?” Ranbir tells, “I forgot to inform Prachi about yours and Mishti’s engagement tomorrow!” Aryan exclaims again, “What? You spend most of the day with her, miss her so much when she is not with you and still forgot to inform her about your sister’s ENGAGEMENT?” Ranbir apologetically says, “I know, I know, it was wrong but I don’t know how it skipped off my mind?” then he takes his phone saying, “Never mind, I will do it right now!” he dials her number, reflects for a moment and tosses it towards Aryan informing, “It would be better, if you yourself inform your Cousin Sister cum Bhabhi about your engagement!” Aryan frowns at him confusingly, while Ranbir continues, “Go on inform her!” Aryan keeps the phone onto his ear.
Prachi and Shahana’s room
Prachi is excitedly exclaiming, “Wow, Shahana I knew that you like Rishi and since you could not reveal it in front of him, you secretly agreed to Ma regarding your both relationship, right? Now soon you will get married and then……” she stops herself realising that Shahana is closely listening to her with a mocking smile. Shahana asks Prachi, “What happened Prachi? Why did you stop? I know that you are so desperate to get married after me!” Prachi frowns her eyebrows towards Shahana and says, “There is nothing like that!” Shahana teases her back, “Of course Not! There is something like that!” and she continues to tease her, while Prachi asks her to shut up. As their fight continues, Prachi’s phone rings, but before she could pick it up. Shahana jumps in between takes it and on noticing it to be Ranbir’s call, she says, “Awwh! Looks like my Jiju is in the same condition like you, very desperate to get married to YOU, which is why he has called to get the dates fixed! Now, let me ask him!” Prachi tries to stop her, however, Shahana manages to pick up the call and says “Hello” Aryan feels a chill down the spine when he hears Shahana’s voice on the other side. All the events of that day on how they were forced to break up with each other runs in front of his eyes. On the other side, Shahana too realises that it is not Ranbir but Aryan who is on the phone, gets freezed, with her eyes filling up, while going through the same sorrow filled emotions as Aryan. Both stay dumb without uttering out a word. On noticing complete silence, Ranbir and Prachi get puzzled. Ranbir asks, “What happened? Can’t you hear her voice? Give me the phone!” Aryan hands over the phone to Ranbir. On the other side, Prachi asks Shahana, “Shahana, why are you not speaking anything?” Shahana quickly gives the phone to her. Both Prachi and Ranbir simultaneously say “Hello” and laugh. Prachi asks Ranbir, “What did you say to my sister that she grew pale and dumb?” Ranbir asks her in a baffled tone, “Oh excuse me, I just got the phone right now, it was Aryan on the phone till now and he too looked the same way you described Shahana to be! I think he just got nervous as he wanted to talk about his engagement to you!” Prachi astonishingly asks, “What Aryan is getting ENGAGED?” Shahana gets aghast on hearing that and turns her head curiously towards Prachi’s conversation. Ranbir bangs his forehead and continues, “Yeah I knew you will react in this way, that is why I wanted Aryan, himself to inform you!” Prachi demands him, “When did all this happen? And why are you informing me just now?” Ranbir sticks out his tongue and says, “Okay, I myself was so excited that I almost forgot to let you know about it, Sorry……” then he continues to explain how Mishti-Aryan’s engagement got fixed. Prachi listens to him eagerly and narratess, “And you know what Ranbir! It is double happiness for me today because Shahana-Rishi’s alliance also got fixed and soon they too are going to get engaged!” Ranbir shouts out in happiness, “Oh wow, Shahana-Rishi too are getting engaged, that’s great news!” Aryan gets astounded on hearing that and his eyes grow big in pain. Ranbir without noticing Aryan asks Prachi, “Now, when are they getting engaged?” Prachi replies, “As soon as Rishi’s parents reach here!” Ranbir asks, “Well then, you two will be present for engagement function tomorrow, right?” Prachi says, “Of course, why not because Aryan is my brother too and it’s my family function, then why wouldn’t I be there? Me and Shahana will be present for the engagement party tomorrow!” just when Shahana tells, “No Prachi, I won’t come tomorrow!” Both Ranbir and Prachi frown quizzically at that, but soon Prachi continues teasingly, “Oh looks like someone wants to spend her time with her would-be which is why she doesn’t want to come for the engagement party!” Ranbir, on the other side, says smilingly, “It’s alright Prachi, if Shahana wants to spend time with Rishi and doesn’t want to come for the engagement party!” Aryan looks on. Ranbir continues, “You be here on time!” Prachi says, “Okay then, see you tomorrow, Good night!” Ranbir disappointedly asks, “What? Won’t you wish Good night with a kiss?” Aryan shakes his head while Prachi immediately pronounces, “GOOD NIGHT!” and hangs up the phone. She wishes Shahana the same and quickly lies down hiding her smile in thoughts of Ranbir, while Shahana facing on the opposite side, is weeping bitterly without letting out any sound to Prachi. After Prachi hung up, Ranbir annoyedly tells “God, Aryan your Cousin Sister cum Bhabhi has such attitude that she hung the phone onto my face when I just asked for a Good night kiss!” Aryan says, “You needed that, now go to sleep keeping a distance from me!” Ranbir is left agape on that demand. Aryan ignores him and lies down, Ranbir too is about to lie down, just when something passes in his mind, he goes near Aryan and whispers, “Dude, do you know what? Seeing yours and Shahana’s fights, I always felt that YOU TWO WILL ALSO FALL IN LOVE LIKE ME AND PRACHI!” Aryan opens his eyes in amazement, while Ranbir continues, “But maybe it was destiny that YOU WERE MEANT FOR MISHTI WHILE SHAHANA FOR RISHI! Have sweet dreams Bro, tomorrow is going to be one of the most beautiful days of your life as you are getting ENGAGED!” after saying that Ranbir lies down and dozes off to sleep, while his words keep ringing in Aryan’s head breaking him into tears.
Next morning, Kohli House
Aliyah, Pallavi and Beeji are looking at the arrangements of the engagement party, when Aliyah asks them, “What was the need to keep all the functions of the marriage in your house? Okay, I understand, you are from the bride’s side, but we Mehras are not of the old thinking that the bride’s family should take all the expenses in the marriage. Come on, it is my son’s marriage too! So, I personally feel we should share all the expenses!” Beeji tells her, “Aliyah puttar! We understand that it’s your son’s marriage too, but for us Mishti is our only daughter and after this marriage she will become a part of your family, so we wish that all the celebrations of the marriage, Roka which is happening today, Chunri, Mehendi, Sangeet and Haldi happen in our household because we want to celebrate our Lakshmi’s Bidaai with grand austerity!” Aliyah at first shakes her head denyingly but then gives in when Pallavi and Beeji fold their hands. Just then Sanju enters, Aliyah notices him and furiously draws near him asking, “What the heck are you doing here during my son’s engagement?” Sanju gets nervous on seeing her and tells, “Arrey ho Rhea’s Booji and Aryan’s Mom! Your son himself invited me here!” Flashback, Sunny and Sanju’s conversation, Sunny tells Sanju “Tomorrow you should be present for Aryan’s engagement instead of me and if anyone questions you, then tell that Aryan himself invited you for his engagement!” Flashback ends. Aliyah frowns asking, “What? Aryan, called you here? I don’t believe you, come with me!” she pulls his hand and takes him to Aryan’s room in Mehra Mansion.
Mehra Mansion, Aryan’s room
Aryan is getting dressed for his engagement, when Purab asks his permission to enter, Aryan asks him, “What Dad? Why do you have to ask my permission to enter?” Purab smilingly enters and hugs his son dotingly. Aryan smiles back and demands, “What happened Dad? Why are you being so emotional like Indian mothers of Ekta Kapoor’s serials?” Purab laughs out and says, “And when did you start hiding your emotions?” Aryan is stunned at that remark and questions, “What do you mean Dad?” Purab puts on a doubtful look and demands, “Aryan, are you really happy with this marriage?” Aryan is taken aback. He reminisces his love for Shahana and Sunny’s warnings, he gulps his saliva, turns around and without facing his father says, “Of course, why not Dad! Me and Mishti have been good friends since childhood and she has all the qualities which I want for my life partner! Then, why wouldn’t I be happy?” Purab still unconvinced, turns his son facing towards him, makes him look into his eyes and asks, “But is she the one whom you LOVE?” Aryan is dumbstruck as he doesn’t know how to answer that question; just when a knock on the door is heard. Both turn to see Ranbir on the doorstep hiding something behind. Ranbir smilingly tells Purab, “Uncle, I just brought something for Aryan, can I give it to him?” Purab cheerfully says, “Of course, he is all yours! Will meet both of you downstairs!” and he slowly leaves from the room. Ranbir keeps hiding the object he brought and comes near Aryan. The latter asks him, “Now what is it you have brought for me?” Ranbir slowly forwards his hands and reveals the perfume which Aryan’s used to borrow from Ranbir as it was the favourite of Shahana. Aryan is shocked and left mouth agape with sad memories of Shahana running past his head as he gazes at the perfume bottle.
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To be continued.
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That was both romantic ?n emotional?. You r a great writer aleyamma. Especially great work on aryan telling purab that he behaved like the Indian mothers in Ekta’s serials bcoz the serial is indeed ekta’s production ??
I m really getting curious to know what’s gonna happen to arhana ??
Looking forward for the next update soon??
Thanks a lottts Shanaya! You are a great reader too!
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Oh Wow, Ranbir felt earlier that Aryan would fall for Sahana but couldn’t see the pain in the eyes of his friend, same applies to Prachi. Ranbir and Prachi are the most selfish beings in this episode.
Aryan has now sacrificed his love just for some stupid promise that too from the guy who doesn’t even consider Aryan as his brother and wanting revenge!! Aryan is dumb. He has no right to cry. He is not only spoiling his life but 5 lives all together of Sahanaa, Mishti, Rishi and Priyanka. Ok let’s not include Priyanka ? ? ?
I find that Ranbir and his family are the worst characters of KKB for me. Because they are the biggest helpers of Sunny’s revenge and enemies of Arhana’s love story?.
It feels as if they are with Sunny!! Why such a hurry for marriage??
Well, at least Purab’s character is a little realistic in this ff. At least he understands his son’s emotions unlike those two faku ‘sibling’ b*t*hes Prachi and Ranbir.
Okay Okay I understand your feelings on Arhana’s tragedy! But don’t turn so bitter!
Aryan didn’t sacrifice his love just for his promise but also because of Sunny’s words, Remember what Sunny told Aryan, SHAHANA WILL HAVE THE SAME FATE LIKE DISHA IF HE MARRIES HER, so also to avoid that Aryan has sacrificed his love.
Next, I know you and Lisa really hate PRANBIR but their misunderstanding is NO FAULT OF THEIRS, they are just acting to the situation.
So, please don’t abuse Pranbir, they are not wrong here as it also happened because Sunny through Sanju never allowed Aryan-Shahana’s love to come out in front of anyone. Obviously, if they had known about their siblings’ love they would never have allowed the marriage to happen!
But I APPRECIATE THAT YOU GOT THE ESSENCE OF MY HEADING “LOVE AND WAR BETWEEN SIBLINGS!”
And don’t hate Ranbir’s family, the marriage thing started with Abhi actually, when Abhi said he wants Pranbir to get married; Vikram put forth the condition that he wants to marry his daughter before his SON, which happens in many Indian families. So, even they are not wrong!
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Hey Aleyamma, you cleared some of my misunderstandings, but not all of them!! ?
1. Just for your information, NO educated parent would want their children to marry an guy who doesn’t have any skills and even finished college. and Purab as an father has made it clear to Vikram beforehand that Aryan is weak in studies and has no skills, that is why I guess he is so dumb or not using his brain enough. And his brain is not also devolped to take such a big decision in his life. And from what I heard Aryan is only 21 yrs and to marry you have to be 21 years old!!?
Secondly, I’m not abusing your Pranbir or Kohlis verbally because of their ugly looks or no CHEMISTRY. but they are not acting at all to the situation. I feel as if they god hired by Sunny!! Because they are being very bossy in everything if you know what I mean. Or should I say clingy expecially Prachi who was not letting Sahana speak when Pragya was asking Sahana about her will this blo*dy Prachi wouldn’t let her speak ? which became one of the biggest reasons Shahana had agreed to marry Rishi. Otherwise she has no half-brother like SUNNY in her life compelling her to marry. Well she does have one so-called sister who keeps putting her tongue? in her life. ??While on the other,Ranbir,
who I feel never actually cared much about Aryan and just used him as his toy. Aryan is just his slave who will do anything for him. Did Ranbir ever even bother asking Aryan if he truly loves Mishti? at least care about you’re sister’s life man!! ?♂️He just goes on Prachi.. Prachi.. Prachi..the whole day long. It’s just all about his life, his love, his kisses ?,his romance, his suhaagrat???.. EVERYTHING IS ABOUT HIM HIM HIM!! ???I hate him even more every episode. Ranbir is SELFISH even in the real show. ???
An CLINGY person is both annoying and upsetting. … In my opinion, There’s really not much worse than a clingy person. They might smother you with affection until it no longer feels special and you feel the need to get away more than anything. And that’s not how a relationship of Brotherhood/ sisterhood should be And that is what makes me against the ?? Prachi and KOHLIS.
I hope you learnt something from this comment. ?
See Aleyamma, I absolutely LOVE this fan fiction but there are some bits which just piss me off ? ?andneed to have LOGIC behind it!! ??That’s all I’m expecting from you. LOGIC.?? Which always lacks behind in the original show. This marriage track is really not working in any way!!
ANYWAYS, I hope something went in your creative brain.??
And as ALWAYS, Good luck for next episode
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Sorry I meant Aryan is 20 years old and needs to be 21 to marry!!?
Hey Aadat, I understand how much pissed you are because you are looking out for logic and let me explain the LOGIC to you!
Firstly, Aryan is 21.5 years old this new year, which I mentioned in one of the episodes through Purab when this marriage topic first started.
Secondly, I understand how you feel that Pranbir are selfish, but that’s how it goes when you are over excited. Ranbir is excited that his sister is getting married with his best-friend; while Prachi is happy that her sister is getting settled when so much happened with her (rape attempt of Fashion event). So that is why they are not able to see the depression in their siblings’ eyes when all they see is in PINK. (Everthing is happening positively according to them!)
Next, even I mentioned this in the earlier episode, Aryan may be weak in studies and an average personality, however his dad is a rich businessman which will make him easily settled in life in future as it happens to all sons of rich businessmen in our country, Moreover, Ranbir’s family also got the character certificate of Aryan who has been always protective about Mishti, which is why they want him to be his damaad.
So now did you all the LOGIC which you are asking for?
Hope you got it! And I need not explain it more!
Aadat I was trying to explain things to you and make your misunderstandings clear, hope you got it!
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then please do something to unite Aryan and Sahanaa.
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I repeat Purab’s whole family are tragic members. So wait and see what will happen in Arhana ‘s story!
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The way Aryan and Shahana care for Mishti and Rishi subconsciously, is more than enough for others to misunderstand!!
At least you gave Purab some brains to ask his son, if he is okay with the marriage, else he is just lost in the thoughts of the past!
Aryan’s breaking down scene had so many emotions!! I re-read that scene for like 10 times!! I must appreciate you for always putting up emotions this perfectly!! I could visualize the pain on his face, when he realized Shahana also loved him after the bitter break up!! Both are shattered, but can’t show it!!
The small efforts they took for each other were always cute! Shahana wearing the anklets he gifted her, Aryan despite being allergic put the perfume she liked the most, both dressing up for each other and feeling comfortable in each other embrace, Aryan laying on her lap, being conscious when Rishi and Mishti were around so the other doesn’t feel bad, realizing each other’s presence on the other side, all this adds simplicity and sweetness to their story. And not to forget their realization, which is something I would wish they show in the serial the same way!! Both the couples (Pranbir and Arhana) had a similar realization, just the proposal and situations before and after were different!!
I literally cried on their fate, which was being written by Sunny, Aryan’s scene with Sunny, if they ever show it in live action, the audience would literally cry, {also the Arhana break up scene} (If the actors put the emotions well)!! Aliyah would just scheme and won’t be able to do anything if Purab finds Aryan loves Shahana, but Sunny…. he seems to have left Aliyah, Tanu,Rhea and even Prithvi and Sherlyn wayyy behind in plotting and reaping his own benifit!!
Another great series of episodes!!! I really really wish that you achieve your dreams and continue with your passion of writing!! Your imaginative and writing skills are what our serials lack!! Take care and best wishes!!
P.S – Dunno why, but, I find Sanju and Ranbir scenes a bit comical!! Sanju is obviously for comic reliefs only in this ff, which is why I kinda like him here, else he became irritating by the end of his character in the serial!!!
Wow wow wow ?, you just put in all my thoughts while writing the Episodes which is why I keep saying you are a skilled reader and writer too.
The way you described each and every portion of my FF is what I had in my writing!
Misunderstanding caused due to Arhana’s care for Rishi-Mishti. Full fledged emotions of their break-up and Sunny-Aryan scene, how Pranbir and Arhana realisation of love are similar because both happens during rainy day (I added that because rain is associated to LOVE) with the difference arising from the situations from which they realised are the ditto of my thoughts. Bravo Serial hater you have captured each and everything in detail!
And just loved your comment on Sunny left behind Aliyah, Tanu, Nikhil and even Sherlyn in his ploys. That was really sweetly sarcastic!
Finally you are absolutely right Sanju-Ranbir scenes are also funny as there is a bit of jealousy arising for Prachi from both of them, that is why I have created the scenes in that manner.
Thanks a thousand million times for the world’s best appreciation dear.
If I had a choice to add a co-writer, then I will have surely made you one of them.
You are just simply superb Serial hater!
Wish that your voice is heard by the serial creators as wise advices like yours needs to reach them.
Wishing you all the success and good luck once again,
With love!
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I hope Aadat reads your comment because your detailed description will surely clear his doubts!
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when shahana picked up the phone it was Aryan.though they were silent it had impact on the readers.now aryana came to know about rishana n aryishti.so sad.they are so helpless. ranbir telling Aryan that he thought that he n shahana will become lovers was striking.I hope ranbir finds out the truth.I loved purab understanding that something is wrong with Aryan n asking him whether he is happy n the girl he loves is mishti. perfume scene was emotional too
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Aleyamma – DUMB AADAT!!
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Aleyamma, Ok I understood how in your imaginary writings, Aryan is being made 21.5 ? but It’s funny how you say that Ranbir and Prachi were really worried about their ‘siblings’ because from the first paragraph only Ranbir is not even talking about Aryan or Mishti!!
He is just talking about his Suhaagraat with aunty, spending time with his PRACHI!! And Ranbir is not bothered at all about his sister and Aryan’s feeling but just about his feelings for Prachi which I’m not at all interested in!! No real brother would act like this in the situation.. And what upsets me more is the fact that even the last scene Ranbir is using Aryan to invite Prachi so he could ENJOY with her!!?♂️
It’s very sad how even if you’re ff Aryan and Sahana’s feelings are sidelined just to pave way for Ranbir and Prachi as the main lead couple. Very disappointing
And you misread my comment about Ranbir and Prachi entirely.. the problem is not that they are not being able to read the depression in their sibling’s eyes but the problem is that they are not also letting others like Pragya who actually care about Sahana’s will irrespective of what might have happened to her!! Pragya was asking Sahana about if she wanted to marry Rishi but Prachi wouldn’t just SHUT UP and not letting Sahana speak!!!! Like Pragya is one person who selflessly loves Shahana!! Otherwise, everyone else has their own SELFISH MOTIVE. Sunny wants his revenge, Ranbir wants to romance his aunty, Sarita wants to save Rishi from Priyanka, Kohli’s want to get rid of their burden Mishti ?♂️. Aliyah wants her business… Only Pragya cares about Sahana which is why I love her soo much!!
Anyways, It’s good that you’re taking a break from this ff because I really feel you need to think of some new ideas ? We have seen this forceful kind of marriage tracks in so many stupid shows. Please we don’t want more of it?
BRING SOMETHING NEW FOR GOD SAKE!!! BYE
Aadat you are right in some places but MISINTERPRETATING most of it, anyways I don’t think I can really help with that because you seem to get more and more into your confusions.
And actually, I’m back but maybe not on a regular basis, but yeah to ward off my boredom!
And I’m continuing with the track in the same way.
And, Im not forcing you at all, you can continue to read if you want, otherwise just leave it!
Bye dear!
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Dear Aleyamma,
Nice try but I’m not leaving!! And I’m not asking you to CHANGE the god damn track but at least TRY to make the story focus on Kiara-Sunny- Aryan-Sahana-Mishti-Rishi and not Pranbir!! The full story of the original series revolves around Ranbir and Prachi as the primary characters. Ok, you want to separate Arhana then do it!! But give full focus to their story and not Pranbir!! Don’t make the same mistake as the makers are doing!! Otherwise, what’s the point of making this ff if you will give Pranbir main focus and not Arhana!!
I hope you got what point I was trying to make ?
Yeah I completely got your point dear! But since, Pranbir are necessary characters they will be present, but yeah not the central figures!
And yeah, thanks a lot for choosing to follow my FF, I will be looking forward for your great and hillarious comments!
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