I know I seen you…. But it took me forever to find you…. Episode 1 (10-12 Shots)
(A Thahaan love story)I think you guys know me…. But hi guys I am any guesses…. I already have written a Fan-Fiction calllledddddddddddddddd Destiny vs. Love. But it seems like many people left and Thahaan romance in that Fan-Fiction will be getting cuter!! I hope you guys still read it) And I am still writing it… I hope you guys can read it and tell me if you liked it or not… But anyways this is my third shot … Please don’t hate on me… I am not from Asia I am from England so please do bear with me!!!! If I do anything wrong… Anyways let’s start!!! (I am Nusz aha)
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Let’s start…
This story takes place in a beautiful city of India called Mumbai….. Near a hospital she comes inside a room and sits near a guy… She kisses his forehead…. The girl is wearing a beautiful pink sari… and then she says something…
Girl: Happy 2nd anniversary my love… I want to spend this beautiful day with you…..
The guy was in a coma for almost 6 months…. She always came and took care of him… She knew that one day he would get up and hug her…. The girl didn’t lose her hopes because she knows their love is very strong… Then a woman comes there wearing glasses…. And calls the girl’s name….
Lady: Thapki!!!!
The girl is Thapki Bihaan Pandey…. She’s really understanding and helpful…. Thapki is a girl who always was made fun of in the past… But someone held her hand and took her away from that pain… That guy changed her life but something happened in the past that changed everything… But she knows that her prince will wake up and come back to her… The lady that was calling her name was Vasu…
Thapki: Ma, look I decorated this place for him….
Vasu: Thapki you love him a lot don’t you?
Thapki: He knows I can’t live without him… He changed everything in my life…
Vasu: Thapki you have to understand he won’t wake up (Starting to cry)
Thapki: No please Ma, don’t cry in front of him… He hates tears… I know my Bihaan he will wake up…
Vasu (in mind): How do I explain Thapki that Bihaan won’t wake up….
Thapki: Ma I want to spend the day with Bihaan today…
Vasu (In mind): She will never understand me… I think I need to leave right now…
Thapki: Is there something wrong Ma?
Vasu: I have to back home… I need to make some food for Bihaan too…. We will all see you later….
Thapki: Oh Okay Ma I will see you later…
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Outside the hospital Vasu sees Dadi and takes her to the doctor’s room and they discuss about some stuff….
Dadi: Doctor please tell me when will my grandson wake up… Thapki is going mad thinking he is awake but his only sleeping….
Doc: Dadi I can’t really say anything… But all I can say something big will happen when he wakes up…
Vasu: You need to make Bihaan come back to life… I can’t see Thapki like this…
Doc: We’re trying are best Ma’am… But it all depends on god and your prayers….
Dadi: It’s been 6 months since he was in coma and that’s very long….
Doc: I know Dadi but you have to stay strong in front of Thapki… If she finds out the truth she won’t bare it…
Dadi: I can’t hide this from her forever….
Doc: You’re right but you have to tell her somehow…
Vasu: We’re not telling her anything yet…
Dadi: Vasu have you lost it… Did you see Thapki she thinks that Bihaan is sleeping… Tomorrow is the day I am telling her the truth
Vasu: Ma please try to understand….
Dadi: That’s my final decision…
Doc: You need to make her understand Doc..
Doc: I can’t do anything… we just need to wait till tomorrow….
Vasu (In mind): If Thapki finds out the truth she will be shattered…
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In Bihaan’s hospital room
Thapki: Bihaan look what I got today….
Thapki goes near the table and she picks up a beautiful locket that he gifted her two years back….
Thapki: Bihaan do you remember how our love story started?? It was the funniest way… Hate to love… I want to talk about our love story for our anniversary today…. Will you listen to me??
Thapki sees him and has tears falling from her eyes…. She quickly turns around and wipes it…. Then she touches his hand and starts telling the story….
Thapki: Bihaan after this story you need to come back to me….
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2 years back (Flashback)
Bihaan: Ma I am off to work…
Vasu: Since when did you start working?
Bihaan: B for Bihaan and P for Pandey is not going to work…
Vasu: Then?
Bihaan: I am going to go meet Dhruv; I need to tell him some stuff
Vasu: But I need your help with the food
Bihaan: I am not a housewife
Vasu starts laughing and Suman and Preeti come there
Suman: Bihaan you will have to wait till you fall in love
Bihaan: Ewe I hate love
Preeti: Every man says that
Bihaan: I am not every man… You know that every girl loves me at Dhruv’s office… But I rejected all of them…
Vasu, Preeti and Suman start laughing and Dadi comes there and slaps his head…
Dadi: You bad boy
Bihaan: Dadi they were making fun of me
Dadi: And you were saying stuff like this
Bihaan: But Dadi B for Bihaan doesn’t L for Lie
Dadi: Okay Bihaan are you leaving or what?
Bihaan: Yes Dadi I will see you later!!!
Vasu: This Bihaan always saying he doesn’t believe in love… But trust me one day… He will find someone who will change him into a believer…
Dadi: But we don’t know who that girl will be
Suman: Someone who is the total opposite of Bihaan
Preeti: What do you mean?
Suman: We will have to wait and see!!!
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At Dhruv’s company
Bihaan enters the place and all the girls are staring at him… Bihaan winks at them when he passes by them… All of the girls are sweating….
Girl: His so cute
Girl2: I know right… I want him
Girl: I saw him first
Girl3: No I did
Bihaan: oh don’t fight over me guys… I will choice when I feel like it…
Dhruv comes out and sees Bihaan flirting with the girls…
Dhruv: Bihaan what the hell are you doing?
Bihaan: B for Bihaan and P for Pandey was just telling the girls something
Dhruv: Everyone get back to work and Bihaan you come with me…
Bihaan: Okay Dhruv whatever you say
Dhruv: I am not joking this time
Bihaan: Same here
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Dhruv’s Cabin
Dhruv: Bihaan I am going out for a urgent meeting and I think there is someone coming for an interview I need you stay here for a while till I come back…
Bihaan: Sure Dhruv (Touching his stuff)
Dhruv: Bihaan are you listening to me?
Bihaan: Okay I will them know
Dhruv: You better not do anything wrong
Bihaan: I won’t
Dhruv: Okay I will be back in a hour or two
Bihaan: Alright (sitting on his chair and putting his legs on the table)
Dhruv: You’re very weird Bihaan
Bihaan: After all I am your brother
Dhruv: Alright my brother you better not do anything wrong….
Dhruv leaves and Bihaan orders food he sits down and watches a movie and laughs cutely…. Then a beautiful girl with her hair out walks into the company…. She was wearing a beautiful blue salwaar Kameez…. She enters the place and talks to one of the girl’s and asks them where Dhruv’s cabin is…. When the girl was talking… she was stammering a lot and some of the girls were making fun of her… But she didn’t care because her parents taught her not to listen to bad things people say they will always want to make you feel weak… They show the cabin to girl and she leaves… Bihaan is enjoying his popcorn and pizza while laughing at the movie… The girl was standing outside his cabin… She prays to god before going inside… Then she finally knocks… But first Bihaan doesn’t hear it… Then she knocks again… Bihaan then hears the knock and tells her to come in…
Bihaan: Come inside…
The girl opens the door and enters the cabin… She sees the place… It’s a mess and sees a movie on the TV… Then she finally spoke…
Thapki: Si—-rrrr…. I am here for the interview (Stammering)
Bihaan then hears her voice he finally turns towards her… He sees her and stares at her nonstop… (Na Na plays) Thapki speaks again…
Thapki: Si—rrr are you listening to me (stammering)
Bihaan hears her voice and thinks she’s a chuk chuk Gadi who stops at every station when you’re riding a train… He starts laughing while Thapki looks at him with a weird face…
Bihaan: Chuk Chuk Gadi
Thapki: What do you mean?
Bihaan: Are you from the train station?
Thapki: No sir I am here for an interview for a job
Bihaan keeps on laughing but then he remembers that Dhruv said someone will come for an interview…
Bihaan (in mind): Oh she’s the one who came for an interview… Well a chuk chuk gadi I can’t let go easily… I will pretend to be her boss….
Thapki: Sir (stammering)
Bihaan: Yes you may sit down?
Thapki: But sir there is food on the chair…
Bihaan: Oh can you help me clean this place up….
Thapki: But sir
Bihaan: Come on that’s your first task
Thapki: If you say so
Bihaan: Now I can sit down and watch my movie…
Thapki (in mind): What the hell is this… why do I have to clean everything… Did I come to the right place?
A couple hours later
Thapki already finished cleaning many things… Then Thapki starts cleaning other books that were on the ground while Bihaan is watching his movie and is laughing… The bookshelf was about to fall on her and he was laughing but then he turns to see what she was doing… He sees the books about to fall on her… He pulls her and she slips because of the soda on the floor… They both roll on the ground and finally Thapki is on top of Bihaan…
The song plays Mujhko Barsaat Bana Lo from the movie Junooniyat plays (New movie coming out soon)
Link for the song
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QzJfW1sij9k
Thapki is on top of Bihaan… He stares at her and she does too….
Mujhko barsaat bana lo
Ek lambi raat bana lo
Apne jazbaat bana lo jaana
Mujhko alfaaz bana lo
Dil ki aawaaz bana lo
Gehra sa raaz bana lo jaana
Nasha hoon main behakne do
Mere kaatil mujhe jeene ka haq toh do
Mujhko barsaat bana lo
Ek lambi raat bana lo
Apne jazbaat bana lo jaana
Mujhe apne sirhaane pe
Thodi si jagah de do
Mujhe neend na aane ki
Koi toh wajah de do (x2)
Hawa hoon main lipatne do
Mere kaatil mujhe jeene ka haq toh do
Mujhko barsaat bana lo
Ek lambi raat bana lo
Apne jazbaat bana lo jaana
*****Then she looks away and tries to get up but necklace is stuck between his shirt button… She falls back on him again…. She tries taking it off while Bihaan is still staring at her****
Tere sang guzar jaaye
Yeh umar jo baaki hai
Hass do na zara khul ke
Kaahe ki udaasi hai (x2)
Subah hoon main aane do
Mere kaatil mujhe jeene ka haq toh do
***** Then finally she opens it and gets off Bihaan… Also Bihaan stands up… They both look at each other exactly for a minute… after
the fall….
Mujhko barsaat bana lo
Ek lambi raat bana lo
Apne jazbaat bana lo jaana (x2)
The music ends when Dhruv enters the cabin…
Dhruv: Bihaan I am back
Bihaan (in mind): Oh shish Dhruv is back… If Chuk Chuk Gadi finds out I am pretending to be his boss… I wonder what Dhruv do…
Dhruv: You much be the one who was waiting to get interviewed, Right???
Thapki: Yes but who are you? (Stammering)
Dhruv: I am the boss of the company and this cabin belongs to me
Thapki was shocked and looks at Bihaan while he is covering his face…
Thapki: But I thought his the boss of this company…. (Stammering)
Dhruv: No that’s my brother he just comes and fools around with all the girls here
Thapki gets even angrier…
Dhruv: Did anything happen?? Also this office looks so damn clean now…
Bihaan: I think I should leave… (Sneaking out like a mouse)
Thapki (in mind): How dare he fool me like that…? I will teach him a lesson
Dhruv: Is everything all right? Did my brother do something?
Thapki: No he didn’t… Actually he helped me a lot with the cleaning idea
Dhruv: What cleaning idea?
Thapki: Nothing sir…
Dhruv realizes she stammers and asks her something…
Dhruv: Are you scared because you’re stammering?
Thapki: I have always stammered in my entire life…
Dhruv: What’s so bad about that?
Thapki: I don’t know people think I am weak to become a leader….
Dhruv: I want to see you at my office tomorrow morning…
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Bihaan outside the company was thinking about how he treated Thapki… and he knew she will take revenge for doing that to her… Then Thapki comes out…
Thapki: YOU!
Bihaan: Oh no Chuk Chuk Gadi is coming this way
Thapki: You made me work for three hours for no reasons… when I could have been practicing my lines for the interview
Bihaan: Excuse me Mahan Matma you think you know everything?
Thapki: You’re such a rude guy
Bihaan: Oh shut up Chuk Chuk Gadi you can’t even say a word without stammering
Thapki: Oh that’s why your brother has a job and you don’t?
Bihaan: Ayeeee don’t you dare to insult B for Bihaan and P Pandey okay
Thapki: Oh what are you going to do if I don’t stop?
Bihaan: I can do anything
Thapki: After what you did almost made me lose my job… I will teach you a lesson
Bihaan: Oh a chuk chuk gadi is going to scare me
Thapki: I challenge you that I will win (pointing a finger at her)
Bihaan: You pointed a finger at Bihaan Pandey (getting really angry)
Thapki: What is there something wrong at pointing a finger at a devil?
Bihaan: You (pointing a finger at her too)
Thapki and Bihaan both get mad and walk separate ways….
Flashback ends
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Present day
Thapki: Bihaan do you remember that day how we first met?? How my god it was really funny because after that day something funny happened at the park… Do you remember that (She was staring at him but he was still sleeping)
Thapki eyes were filled with tears… Even though she tried so hard to make Bihaan come back to life again… But she failed to do so… Thapki was about to tell the park incident… When the machine started beeping loudly… Thapki sees Bihaan moving and sees him breathing heavily… She gets scared and calls his name….
Thapki: BIHAAN!!! WHAT HAPPENED???
She panics and screams for the doctor… They rush into Bihaan’s room and so do Dadi and Vasu…
Vasu: What happened Thapki?
Thapki: Bihaan is breathing heavily?
Dadi: Don’t worry everything will be fine…
A while later the doctor tells Thapki, Dadi and Vasu some good news and bad news…
Thapki: Doctor is my Bihaan fine?? (Crying so much)
Doc: Look Ms. Thapki, I think something is bothering Bihaan that might of caused this kind of incident to happen after such a long time… But he will start moving if you show care and love towards him… I think the stories that you’re telling him will get him back to life… But there is something else that I need to tell you…
Vasu looks at the doctor and says no…
Thapki: What is it doc?
Doc: Nothing… just take really good care of Bihaan…
Thapki: I can do anything to get Bihaan back to normal…. That’s my promise to god…
Thapki goes back inside and sits near Bihaan she kisses him on the forehead and puts her head on his chest… Vasu and Dadi see the care and love she has for him…
Vasu: Thapki hasn’t even done anything within these 6 months… All she did is stay at the hospital and sleep here with Bihaan… I can’t see her like this anymore…
Dadi: When she finds out the truth about Bihaan… Then she will be shattered…
Vasu: I am scared… I can’t do this anymore…
Dadi: That’s why I told you to tell her…
Vasu: I can’t Ma you need to understand… look at the love she has for him…
Dadi: We will talk about this tomorrow first we need to go tell the doctor something…
Vasu: Okay let’s go…
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Bihaan’s room
Thapki: Bihaan I know that incident that happened that night is still bothering you… that’s why after 6 months you moved… Bihaan please wake up… I can’t live without you anymore… I have become so weak without you… I need you by my side (She slowly falls asleep on his chest)
Moral- “When someone is far away from you doesn’t mean they left your heart… you just need your family’s help… But doing it yourself will give you more strength”
The episode ends
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Thapki really loves Bihaan but she doesn’t know how to bring him back to life… What is it that Dadi, Vasu and Doctor hiding from Thapki??? Will Bihaan be able to get up and see Thapki again??? Will Thapki be able to bring Bihaan back to life after telling the cute stories of their love stories… well you have to stay tune by reading this Fan-Fiction, but if you guys loved the first episode… I will continue….
Recap: Thapki tells Bihaan more about the stories… Dadi and Vasu are shocked to find out something…. (Will Thapki’s care and love cure Bihaan…? Or will there be something big that is going to happen after he comes back to life)
(Remember guys if you really loved this storyline please do destiny Vs love… Many Thahaan fans left it!! It’s very sad, but anyways if you want to read more Fan-fictions me…. I will send you the links for it aha)
(look below aha)
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Here’s the links (Other Fan-Fiction by me)
Destiny vs love (Based on Thapki Pyaar Ki, Qubool Hai and Jamai Raja)
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=destiny+vs+love+Thahaan
A one shot on Ragsan (Based on Swaragini)
http://www.tellyupdates.com/sanskar-ragini-will-soul-mate-ragini-always-willmere-haath-mein-os/
Sanskar: Will you marry me, Ragini: Yes Sanskar I will (Based on Swaragini) (I will be ending this soon)
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=Sanskar%3A+Ragini+will+you+marry+me%3F%3F+Ragini%3A+Yes+Sanskar+I+will+%28%28%3A
Qubool Hai love like Beintehha (Based on Beintehha and Qubool Hai)
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=qubool+hai+Beintehha
The dark side that everyone sees but not the light side (Based on The Vampire Dairies with shorts stories of Ragsan, Thahaan and Asya at the ending for a treat)
http://www.tellyupdates.com/dark-side-everyone-sees-not-light-side-tvd-intro/
My heart belongs to yours… But why are you hiding from me?
http://www.tellyupdates.com/heart-belong-hiding-guess-wrote-episode-1/
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(By the way, if you’re reading this ff, please do comment your ideas and how is the story going for you. Also love you all aha x)
Btw I’ll post the next episode maybe Monday May 30th or Tuesday May 31th 2016. But till then please bear with me if I can’t. Till then bye, bye He-he ((:
68 Comments
This one is the best ff ever.. I have read many but now after reading yours I must say you are writing brilliantly. You made me cry. But at last given me such a story to wait for. Please continue and update soon.
Thank you so much Akanksha, Aw I am happy you’re enjoying this!! and I am so sorry for making you cry and yes I will continue it :))
Really soon I will update, keep smiling like always!
~Nusz
Pst nxt epi?
Really soon Hun, but yes I posted Destiny vs love then I will post that a day or two~Nusz
nxt part yr….:-) 🙂