The link of the pre: Part 14
Hi guys… it me Mayesha with the last part….
My special thanks to Shaani akka( I don’t know where u r.. No ff.. No contact..nothing ), Anahita,, aarti,aisha, aman, anshu, arav, aravjaikar, asia, dinu, fenil, fidato, harini, isha, ishika, jenita, kriyam fan,maria, misbah, mithila, muniya, naina, richa, samaria, sara, shiza arif, somi, sree. Zani saleem. And all my silent readers.. (sorry if I have missed any name and the names r in alphabetically except the 1st two)….
U all support me all through my likings.. I cant describe in words how much encourage u all gave to me.. .. Here is the last part….
Sayyam and krishna left for Sylhet….. Though it wasn’t expected but Sayyam was happy in mind as he was going out with Krishna…
AND Krishna.. Yes, she was also happy but was too much nervous….
At the airport…
Krishna was panting continously….
Sayyam: Krishna, r u alr8? What happened?
Krishna: ummm.. Nothing much..
Sayyam: how nothing? R u nervous?
Krishna: wo, actually I don’t feel comfortable in plane… especially at the departure and the landing!!
Sayyam: then we can cancel it na?? Let me do something.. (was about to stand)
Krishna: (stopped Sayyam holding his hand) aree aree w8.. Plz don’t cancel.. I will manage…
Sayyam: no.. I am going..
Krishna: I am saying na that I will manage.
Sayyam: pakka?
Krishna: hmm..pakka… besides u r here na? so it will be alr8..
Sayyam was amused at Krishna’s word and was happy in heart…
Krishna was yet holding Sayyam’s hand…. Sayyam looked at their holding… so as Krishna..
Krishna quickly left Sayyam’s hand in jerk and was becoming red in shy…
Sayyam was also smiling cutely in shy but was very very happy…
At the departure time of the flight….
Krishna was chanting something closing her eyes and Sayyam was looking at her continuosly….
Sayyam: krishna.. Don’t fear.. It will be alr8…
Krishna: hmm.. I will try..
At the moment Krishna quickly kept her hand on Sayyam’s hand and was pressing his hand in fear…
Sayyam, understanding Krishna’s fear, also kept his another hand over the Krishna’s…
Sayyam: don’t worry, I am here…
Krishna: plz.. Don’t leave my hand.. Plz..
Sayyam: never Krishna.. Never…
Krishna opened her eyes hearing the “never”….. She looked at Sayyam who was consoling her as always..
Sayyam: look.. U r not afraid now.
Krishna: (coming senses) hmm… thanks ..
Sayyam: but y u r so afraid..?
Krishna: in past, once we all in the family were planning to go London by plane.. But the plan was canceled ..
and the plane, we were supposed to travel was crashed.. Hearing the news, just one thing peeped up in my mind what would have happened with us if we were in the plane… that’s y, whenever I travel on plane, the incident came into my mind..
Sayyam: hmm… ok.. Just forget that..
After sometym…
Airhostess: excuse me, sir.. Would u like to have something?
Sayyam: something?? What can u give me?
Airhostess: anything, sir.. Just ask.. If we r not in want to that, I will provide that for u..
Sayyam: oh.. Thank u very much… u r very amiable, I must say..
Airhostess: thank u sir… u r also a very nice person..
Krishna, who was listening the whole convo , was fuming in anger or u can say in jealousy..
After the Airhostess was gone..
Krishna: Sayyam.. Stand up..
Sayyam: ha?
Krishna: I said na stand up..
Sayyam stood up and Krishna sat on his seat and asked Sayyam to sit down on her seat inside…
Sayyam: why? Wht happened?
Krishna: nothing.. I like this seat..
Sayyam then looked other side and was smiling… he knew that someone was burning…
Again the airhostess came…
Airhostess: sir… ur food…
Krishna: give me that…
Airhostess: but sir ordered that..
Krishna: so what? I am his ” only one ” wife.. So give me..
Airhostess: ok.. Take this.. Sir do u need anything else?
Sayyam: yes.. I need a..
Krishna: no.. He doesn’t need anything . U can go..
Sayyam: but Krishna… I
Krishna: what? ( angry)
Sayyam: no. no.. No.. Nothing.. U can go..
Airhostess: ok..sir.. Bye..(waving her hand)
Sayyam: bye..( wave )
Krishna at once looked at Sayyam with angry face and Sayyam gulping sit back properly…
Sayyam: I think something is burning, na?
Krishna: asked ur dearest airhostess…
Sayyam: yea, r8.. Let me call her..
Krishna: no no no.. Just sit here silently.. If u call her again I will not give u this food..
Sayyam: ok..ok.. However I am feeling soo hungry..
At the tym of landing, krishna again was in fear.. But became normal quickly as Sayyam was with her…
At the resort…it was noon…
Krishna: Sayyam.. App jaldi se fresh ho jayiye.. Then after lunch we will take a short nap and then will go for outings..
Sayyam: abhie?
Krishna: yes..
Sayyam: let’s go tomorrow. I am very tired today..
Krishna: u should be tired getting flattered by the airhostess na?? No excuse.. Just be ready..
Sayyam: ok.. ( entered the washroom but opened the door again) but the airhostess was very beautiful…(closed the door at once)
Krishna was smiling realizing Sayyam’s taunting..
After sometym.. Sayyam was waiting for Krishna outside the room..
Krishna opened the door … she was wearing a purple coloured tops with jeans and a voilet scarf around her neck.. Her hair was panityled… just some single was on her eyes which was put behind ears by Krishna..
Sayyam was mesmerized seeing Krishna….
Krishna: chale?
Sayyam: ha..
After lunch , they took a short nap and after that they went for the “Tea Estates”…
Sayyam: it’s so beautiful..
Krishna: yeah…. It’s so very beautiful… look at the ladies.. Their hardworks r showing us this beauty..
They took some pics among the tea plants… they also took pics with the ladies…
They were walking between the tea plants.. It became dark…
They were walking on the streets..
Krishna suddenly take a long breath..
Sayyam: the JAZMINE..
Krishna: yeah…
Sayyam: this is ur fav.. R8?
Krishna: yes… this smell..!! I just loved it..
Sayyam, in our house who planted so many jazmine trees… when there scent comes to our room.. !! Uff.. I just cant described that in word..
Sayyam: woo.. Actually I have planted that… when I saw u first tym in ur balcony, I saw the same smile on ur face just like now..
that’s the tym, I could realized the matter… so the next day I planted the trees beside my windows for u..
Krishna was shocked knowing Sayyam’s conception..
But she didn’t utter aword rather smiling…
After sometym..
Krishna: thank u..
Sayyam: y?
Krishna: app k support k liye.. For the trees.. App bohot acche hain..
Sayyam: u r welcome.. But I want something in return…
Krishna: (stopped walking and turned towards Sayyam) what?
Sayyam hold Krishna’s hand… krishna was becoming nervous..
Sayyam: Krishna, I know .. We both don’t share that typical relation.. But we r friends r8..?
Krishna: hmm
Sayyam: then.. Could u plz call me “tum” rather than ” app”?
Krishna: (shy) woo.. Actually..
Sayyam: plz.. Krishna.. I mean.. Yea I know we r not husband and wife in mean.. But as a friend..plz?
Krishna tilt her head in positive..
Sayyam: thank u Krishna.. Thankx a lot…
Krishna: app ko bhi thank u… sorry sorry.. I mean tumhe bhi thank u…
Sayyam: ok.. Let’s go back to resort..
Sayyam was about to left Krishna’s hand but krishna held his hand more tightly…
Sayyam looked at Krishna.. But Krishna was looking at other side for avoiding the situation…
Sayyam smiled at himself.. Both began to walk holding their hands….
The next day…
They went to the ” Lawachora forest”…
They were walking in the forest… krishna was very happy for this adventure… she was very excited hearing the voice of new birds.. Along with some beautiful views…
At a tym, they reached “Khashia Polli”… (“Khashia” is a tribe of Bangladesh.. Khashia polli is the place where they live in Lawachora, Sylhet on the hill)
Kriyam began to climb the hill… but the hill was not that easy to climb.. At a moment, Krishna got tired…
Sayyam: kya hua?
Krishna: I can’t walk more… I am so tired..
Sayyam: aree.. Try a lill more.. U r at near..
Krishna: plz.. Sayyam.. App jayiye..
Sayyam: kya?
Krishna: sorry.. I mean.. Tum jao..
Sayyam: how ? Leaving u?
Krishna: no pblm.. I will take rest here..
Sayyam thought for a while…
Sayyam: krishna.. Stand up..
Krishna: no..
Sayyam: aree.. Plz.. Just once..
Krishna stood up.. Then sayyam offered his back to krishna and asked her to get on…
Krishna: no.. Plz. U will get tired..
Sayyam: I don’t think that u r that heavy… r8? So get on..
Krishna: no.. Sayyam..
Sayyam quickly held Krishna’s waist from his back and lifted her a lill to get Krishna on his back..
Krishna: Sayyam..
Sayyam: just stay quiet and enjoy the beauty…
Being beheaded in front of Sayyam, krishna accept that and kept her hands around Sayyam’s neck…
At a point, krishna left her body on Sayyam..
Sayyam: Krishna.. Get urself.. Don’t put so much presure na.. Just hold me..
Krishna: y? u were very excited to lift me,r8?
Just then Sayyam tilt Krishna and Krishna fell over him..
Sayyam: aise hi pakar ke rakho… agar jada badmashi ki to ei hill se hi niche phek dunga..
Krishna: u don’t have that courage..
Sayyam: wanna see my courage?
Krishna: no no.. Plz..
Then Sayyam walked to the place… krishna was on his back ..her hand around sayyam’s neck.. Head on his shoulder… at a point, Krishna looked at Sayyam’s face cordially..
Sayyam: see.. We have reached..
Saying that Sayyam just moved her head to see Krishna a lill….
He realized a soft lip on his cheek….. As krishna was seeing Sayyam, so krishna’s lip was on sayyam’s cheek…
Both were shocked…. For this, Sayyam loosed his balanced and got Krishna down..
Sayyam: sorry..
Krishna: noo.. I am sorry.. It was my fault..
Both of them remained quiet for sometime… some Khashia people came towards them and talked with them..while talking wth them kriyam became normal…
Kriyam looked the whole region… the betel leaf hanging on the trees was eye sighting.. Their houses.. There churches were also very pretty.. Kriyam were amused at them… them also ate the famous “bash corol” there..
After that they returned to their resort..
The next day…. They went to “madhavkundu”… the stream and the tea estate were mervalous..
Krishna: see, Sayyam .the stream looks so gorgeous…
Sayyam: yea.. That’s r8… the flow is sooo relieving..
Kriyam went near the stream and took many pics..
After that they went to the biggest estate of Sylhet…
They went up to the hills.. The hills were full of tea plants… it was in the afternoon…
At the top of the hill… the sun was about to set.. The setting red circle sun with a lake at the bottom of the hill…
Krishna: how cold warmth the sun is getting na?
Sayyam: cold warmth?
Krishna: yea.. See..the warmth at the sky.. And the cold at the lake..
Sayyam: deep conception..
Krishna was walking between the tea plants.. There was a place where some big stones were put…
Krishna: sayyam, let’s go there…
Sayyam: w8.. Let me take the call..
Krishna didn’t w8 for Sayyam and began to walk in speed..
Unknowingly krishna went near the edge of the hill… at that tym, she stepped on a stone and she slipped..
But Krishna didn’t get tym to utter a word.. Before that , Sayyam held her hand…
Sayyam slapped Krishna…..
Krishna was shocked at his behavour. .
After few seconds, Sayyam pulled Krishna by her hands and embraced her tightly..
Krishna couldn’t understand what to do… then Sayyam held her more tightly..
Krishna could realize that Sayyam got afraid of loosing her… she also embraced him…
They stood there motionless for few mins..
Then Sayyam broke the hug..
Sayyam: could u not wait for me? Huh? What would happen to me if u fall down from here?
( holding her arms tightly and bringing Krishna close to him) how dare u to leave me Krishna?
how could I live without u? And u? U also didn’t think of me for a time?
what about my feelings????? U should just do ur “manmani”?
Krishna: sorry…
Sayyam: what sorry?? At first, do mistakes then say sorry..!! U don’t u understand Krishna, I don’t want to loose u… how will I live if u not with me?? How krishna? How?
Krishna: Sayyam.. i..
Sayyam: u what? U always want to break the relation r8? U always took the decision without me..
Krishna: no.. But..
Sayyam: no.. Krishna let me say… u know what krishna, I saw u for the first tym at a slum… but there I couldn’t see ur face.. On that day, I saw u in ur house…
that day after meeting u, I have decided to leave the past behind me and to start a new life with u…
I burnt all the memory of Anayha as I want to feel u secured…. I don’t wanna loose u..
but u brought Anayha between us… u didn’t trust me at all… but still I didn’t mind.. As I could feel ur insecurity..
but now Krishna, u tried to leave me? I couldn’t tolerate that Krishna.. Everything I can consume \, but live without u.. Before that I should die..( a tear dropped for Sayyam’s eyes)
Krishna: (keeping her fingers on Sayyam’s lip) how could u think I will leave u? But why do u care if I die..?
for u, I am just ur friend r8?
Sayyam: stop it Krishna… y don’t u understand? U r more than my friend… something..(stopped)
Krishna: something?
Sayyam: kuch nehi.. U will not understand..
Krishna: something what Sayyam? (loud voice)
Sayyam: I love u Krishna.. I love u…. I love u from the moment I see u… I want to love u throughout my life…
I love u Krishna.. I love u..
The words of Sayyam was reverberated continously from the hill….
Krishna stayed quiet hearing Sayyam’s word..
Sayyam took that quietness as negative and was about to go.. Turned back..
Krishna held his hand from back…
Krishna: where r u going?
Sayyam: don’t know?
Krishna: will u be able to leave “UR” krishna alone?? Wont krishna will die without “HER” Sayyam?
Sayyam turned to Krishna with a suspened..
Krishna tilt her head in positive….
Krishna: I love u too Sayyam… I love u too…. Yea.. I don’t love u from the moment I saw u.. But I also want to have u by my side throughout my life… I want to see if u still help me, when our lill kriyam will commence on this earth…
Sayyam quickly embraced Krishna around his arms… krishna also hugged him back…
Krishna: sorry.. Sayyam.. I know I wasn’t ready for the marriage.. But I was wrong.. And I knew that…
sorry for not trusting u… I was just then in fear of loosing u… sorry..
Sayyam: it’s ok.. Krishna.. I love u…
Krishna: I love u too…
Sayyam broke the embrace… he kissed Krishna’s forhead gently while Krishna was closing her eyes…Sayyam cupped her face..
Sayyam: I promised u krishna that I will never leave u…
Krishna: me too Sayyam.. AND I will never distrust u…
Sayyam: and.. I will also help u when our lill kriyam princess will come..(wink)
Krishna: no..prince…
Sayyam: no matter what Krishna.. I will give my child the best mother like u…
Krishna: and I will give her the best papa….
Sayyam: but.. Uske liye to hame kuch kam karna hoga?? (smiling mischeviously)
Krishna: ha to karona..uss airhostess ke sath..
Sayyam: mujhe phir se jalne ki budbu aa rehi hain..
Krishna slightly hit on Sayyam’s chest and hugged her to hide her shyness…
After sometym, Krishna broke the hug.. AND slapped Sayyam tightly…
Sayyam: ye kya tha? Phir se thappar?
Krishna: to tumne mujhe thappar q mara?
Sayyam: that’s bcz u were about to slip and if u slip, how my lill kriyam will come…?
Krishna: aaww.. Sayyam u r soo besharamm..
Sayyam: ok ok.. But don’t slap me more huh? It hurt a lot..( caressing his cheek)
Krishna: okk.. Baba… sorry… I love u..
Sayyam: I love u too…
Krishna: to resort chale.. The sun will set now..
Sayyam: itni bhi kya jaldi hain..?
Krishna: matlab?
Sayyam hold Krishna’s waist and move towards her…
Krishna: Sayyam… abhie..!!
Sayyam: q?? Don’t u have courage?
Krishna: no.. I don’t have..
Sayyam: no problem my dear wify.. I have that courage…
Krishna: sayyam.. (hit his chest and kept her head on his chst)
Sayyam: look how the sun is setting seeing ur shyness..
Krishna broke the hug and saw at the sun..
The sun set…
Sayyam leaned towards Krishna.. Held her from waist and bring her close to him..
Krishna clutched Sayyam’s shirt…
Sayyam leaned his lips towards Krishna’s lip…
Krishna closed her eyes… she felt a soft touch over her lip…
She clutched more and stepped on Sayyam’s feet..
Krishna also reciprocated to Sayyam and kept her hands around Sayyam’s neck and brought him more closer…
The entire scene goes under black darkness… as the sun set…
Then a little star appeared at the sky just to wink at at them………………………………………………….
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The END
That’s the end guys…I know it’s a long one.. When I sat to write, just new ideas came up to my mind.. I just write them on.. I can’t write that hot scenes at all.. Sorry for that if anyone wants that scene…
Hope u liked my ff…
Shaani akka, Anahita, sreya, fanficwriter, fidato, diya, faqea u all r my fav writers… ur writings always inspire me.. Keep going on.. I always read ur ff but can’t comment always .. Sorry for that… I know it takes much hardship to write an ff….
Guys, plz pray for me so that I can achieve my goal… I wont be on tellyupdates for the next 4-5 months… as I have to work really tough hard for my goal… so wish u all a very very good luck…
Guys,, plz let me know among these 15 parts, which one is up to ur expectation?? And also let me know the lackings of my writings…. Plz.. Guy…
AND the silent readers,plz comment me for today…
At last, Eid Mubarak to u all…. Bye bye..
35 Comments
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Eid mubarak
First of all Eid Mubarak…. And what a ending…. You described sylhet so nicely…. My favorite part is the anayha misunderstanding part…. But loved the whole ff …thanks for writing this ff and you earned a lot of respect in my eyes because of being a Bangladeshi writer. When I read other ff I was thinking that no one is from my country…. But now I can say that yes we have a skilled writer too.. So thank you so much… And pray that you may reach your goal…. (sorry for the grammatical mistakes)
Thank u soo much Jenita for such an adorable support..and yeah I also feel so glad when I get comments from my country people..it gives me much encouragement to write…. Again thankx a lot… bye bye..???
Apu… I am sooo sad u are ending it.. But loved the episode amd the confession a lot.. Something is crazy becoz I love the take off of the plane.. Its scary for some people but I just love the sudden change..but I hate the landing.. Mostly becoz it slow and irritating..and due to the air pressure change the ears hurt like craxy..anyways, the lawachora revived my memory about camping.. It was a overnight camping trip by UK.. Known as the Duke of Edinburgh.. Apu, i will miss ur ff soo much.. There were no lacking at all.. Amd saiyyam is too naughty.. I absolutely loved the ff.. Hope that u could be in touch..?
Sorry Anahita..but I can’t get this ff more longer…
Thank u soooo veryyy much to always stand beside me… u were the 1st one to be my friend here.. love u so much appi… I also hope that we will be in touch…
Till then bye… will miss u very much..
Superb episode yr..
But this ff was really short…?
Thnkx Ishika…. actually in the 1st part, I had said that this one will be short.. I wanted to stop at 10 but still it is 15…….sorry for that… hope that u have enjoyed it… bye bye
Superbbbbb yaar and come back with another kriyyam ff plzzzzzzz
Superbbbbb yaar and come back with another kriyyam ff plzzzzzzz And all the best
Thanks and glad that u like it… but sorry as I can’t come back now with an another ff…
Hope that u will be in the best position of ur life…best of luck..may I know ur name?
Yashica
Nice name dear… Yashica…
Superb Chappy.
Will miss this story.
gazab
Thankx Fenil… ur support encourages me a lot all the time.. thankx for being by my side… bye bye
?Eid Mubarak Mayesha..May Allah bless u & ur family? ..Final epi was long and a perfect ending…I was imaging and experiencing Bangladesh while reading some parts..It was a short journey but an amazing one..Will miss u? and Best wishes for life ?..keep smiling?
Lots of love ?
Isha AKA Lamiya (u can call me Lami if u want)?
Thankx Lami.. I will miss u too.. u were always there for me in this ff… thankx for ur cutie pie support… love u..??
Eid mubarak Mayesha
All d chapters were above aur expectations..it was rilli a sweet journey
Thnkx Aarti… and sorry that I didn’t realize that I have not put ur name as my fav writter… u r my only fav modern writer.. hope to see more ss from u… thankx for ur kinda support.. bye bye
Hi dear…like you said even I read everyone’s ff but…cudnt comment…and to say abt ff…loved every part of it….but this ff was too short…and all the best…im sure you will be able to achieve your goal….after that please come back with another ff….dear…luv u lot..will miss you..and your ff
Thankx diya… I will also miss u all… but sorry I cant come back with another one… it will hamper my career for this tym.. but if possible I will do tht after a few months…. best of luck for ur ff.. bye..love u??
Eid mubarak mayesha apu…i’m feeling so sad that it was the last episode…will miss this beautiful ff soooo much…while reading this i felt to visit sylhet again…and loved that naughty sayyam at the end..and best of luck for your future…
Thnkx mithila..getting wishes from my native one is always the best… I will miss u very much Mithila… valo theko.. bye bye….
Eid mubarak mayesha❤and best of luck for your studies✨always shine girl ?I’ll miss yew❤And coming towards the ff it was amazing ❤I’ll miss an amazing writer?
Thankx Zani.. u were with from the 1st part to the last one…I will miss u veryyy veryy much?? Eid mubarak… love u??
I just love it and i think u should write one more ff on the kriyam and nce episode. Don’t end this ff so fast
Thankx for ur support till the last. Sorry as i cant write an another one as now… will miss u… be happy in ur life always… bye
I love this ff
Thank u very much….
Hey Mayesha dear…Eid Mubarak.
Loved ur ff to the core.
All the descriptions of Sylhet were so beautiful. Can imagine them in front of my eyes. At the end naughty Sayyam was really nice.
The ending at the time of sunset and the start of evening is definitely an example of ur creative mind. u described that part perfectly.
I remember u were the first one who replied to one of my comment for the first time in TU.
It was a short , sweet and very beautiful journey with u. Will miss ur amazing ff.
All the best wishes for ur future life. Hope u achieve the goal of ur life.
And u r the 1st one from Kalkata whom I know… thank u muniya for being by my side always… sorry I forget to write ur name as my fav writter… I have always read ur OS each one.. they were best… though I didnt comment always… but really u r an amazing writer…. best of luck for ur future..will miss u a lot..love u..??
Hi Mayesha, I just read all the parts of your ff and it was such a lovely story! I really enjoyed reading it and Kriyam was so cute in your ff, it made me smile so much ? Wish you all the best for your future and hope you achieve your goals. Finally Eid Mubarak!
Eid mubarak for the later…?? glad that u found my ff lovely but may be not soo lovely as urs one… I really wanna appreciate ur writing skills… it is just beyond my expectations… keep it up faeeqa.. love u …. bye
Eid Mubarak… Mayesha… That’s a lovely ff…And so sad it’s ending so soon…But I know… It’s really important…To achieve your goal… I wish all success and wishes to achieve your goal…May God bless you for that… I will pray…
Thank u Fidato… u were always been so supportive to me… u always understand my situation the better than others amd always support my decision… really appreciate ur deep concern about life… thankx for ur entire being with me… really a big big thankx from me…