thnku every1 for ur valuable comments…im happy tht u liked the plot….but i even want more of your judgement…as this is my first story..im new to this …so pls…critisism are always welcome…n u can give me suggestions..on wat shud happen or can happen…so here is the first official chapter…hope you all enjoy..
Saiyyam was sitting in his room and thinking of all the recent happenings…
Saiyyam(thinks)-why the hell did i cum here?why was i worshipping that monster so much?now how can i look into maa’s eyes?why was she caring for me so much?did she really forgive me?can she really forget wat all i did to her this family n krishna..?(questions after questions came to his mind) no…no..no..she cant ever love me..im the sign of wat all tht monster did to her…(tears starts to flow from his eyes) …he lays down in bed….
Baby who dint want saiyyam to stay in Birla house..had started to plot to get rid of him..she went to saiyyam
Baby-after all that happened your peacefully sleeping?(saiyyam slowly gets up)
Saiyyam-leave me alone for sometime….n im not interested in talking to you…so leave…
Baby-its not me who should leave…u know that very well…(she smirks..saiyyam luks on..)this is my husband’s house, so i have all right to stay here…n by the way wat right do you have to stay here?u r suhani birla’s illegitimate son.so do you think you have the right to stay here?.(saiyyam clenches his fist in anger)
Baby- saiyyam do you remember in school when you used to fight with rich boys..they used to say they u r unwanted and illegitimate?but that time i dint know that this was actually true…(saiyyam looks on)
Saiyyam-baby i said leave me alone…
Baby-why do u get angry when im saying the truth?poor mummyji she will have to fight with this whole family to make you stay in this house…(suddenly krishna cums there)
Krishna-saiyyam..i want to talk to you
(baby smirks at saiyyam and goes)
(saiyyam was still thinking of baby’s words n the harsh words people used to tell him when he was young.)
Krishna-so whats next?i think your revenge drama is over..
(saiyyam is about to leave when krishna stops him)
Krishna-without giving me an answer..u cant leave saiyyam..
Saiyyam-(saiyyam thinks to open infront of krishna,he just wanted to cry his heart out)Krishna ….i know i did wrong to you…i was mad in anger..i..(krishna interupts)
Krishna-im not here to listen to your long story of guilt…
Saiyyam-i know here im at fault..so the decision will be yours
Krishna-if you do this will i get my life back?(saiyyam doesnt say anything and luks down)
Saiyyam-i said choice is yours if you want to seperate..i will do the necessary..or else if..i mean im ready to continue our relation…i mean..(saiyyam very badly wanted someones’s company..he had hope in his eyes..)
Krishna-you think after all this i will stay with you..you know what u dont deserve anyone’s love(saiyyam interupts)
Saiyyam-(a bit angrily)krishna enough….i said what i had to ….im silent it doesnt mean that u can go on taunting me…as you said come to the point…now wat u want?
Krishna-i want divorce(saiyyam looks on with a blank face)(somewhere he knew that she wud be asking 4 this..)
Saiyyam-ok..but i have to talk to maa..
Krishna-dont you have any shame?u made me marry you by blackmailing her with her husband’s life..and i started hating her n was mad at her..still u dint tell me the truth..u made her villain infront of me..afterall this i wonder how you can got to her and talk looking into her eyes..
(yuvraj cums there)
Saiyyam-(angrily)krishna enough is enough..dont try to be oversmart…if i can forcefull marry you…i can even make you stay with me forcefully…(yuvraj hears this and gets angry…he sees sambhav in him…he angrily goes from there)i said no that i will give you divorce?then what is your problem..u will get wat u want..but pls stay out of my matter..that will be better for u…and he goes..
Precap-Saiyyam gets drunk