Hello all you lovely people. My sincerest apologies for the extremely late update. I needed time to brainstorm and figure out where the story should go. Thank you all for your suggestions.. I hope you will continue reading and loving my ff
Saiyyam came down for the veneration. Everyone had gathered in the temple while Krishna was no where to be seen. He went over to yuvani and asked about Krishna. Yuvani informed him that she was in the garden picking flowers for the veneration. Saiyyam went to the garden area and saw Krishna. He called out to her. She ignored him.. He angrily went over to her
Saiyyam: Main tumse baat kar raha hoon. ( im talking to you )
Krishna: par muhje tumse baat nahi karni ( but I don’t want to talk to you )
Saiyyam grabbed Krishna’s arm
Saiyyam: Kal poori raat kahan thi tum ( where were you the whole of last night )
Krishna didn’t say anything..
Saiyyam: Jawaab do. ( answer me )
Krishna: Muhje tumhare kisi bhi sawaal ka jawaab nahi dena…aur agar tum bhool gaye ho toh main yaad dilaadun hamara divorce ho chukka hai..ab humare beech koi rishta nahi toh tumhe muhjse sawaal karne koi haq nahi.. ( I don’t want to answer any of your questions. And if you have forgotten let me remind you we got divorced, there is no relation between you have no right to question me..)
Krishna stormed off inside…. Saiyyam said to himself..
Saiyyam: Rishta hai Krishna…..kal sirf rishte ka naam mit gaya…par shayad humara rishta kabhi nah mit sakta(there is a relation Krishna. Yesterday the name of the relationship was destoyed but perhaps our relationship can never be destroyed)
After a while the veneration had commenced.. Suhani distributed Prasad to everyone she went towards the temple idol and kept the veneration plate. She folded her hands and said…
Suhani: Sab ek saath bolo… ( Everyone say it together )
JAI MAATA DI ( ALL HAIL THE GODESS)
A loud shout came from the front door…everyone turned around to see… at the door there was a man…He was wearing jeans and a black t-shirt with a bright blue blazer on top… He also had a suitcase with him. He was looking at everyone with a bright smile..
Suhani went over to him and asked him who he was
Man: Hum hain rahi pyar ke phir milenge chalte chalte… (I’m a traveler in the love lane, down the road we’ll meet again )
Suhani: Kya ( what)
Man: offo aunty..nahi nahi aunty nahi madam ji… romantic story main hero ki entry hui hai toh shahrukh khan ka dialog churaana toh banta hai..( oh god aunty no no not aunty madam… now that the hero has entered the romantic story stealing a shahrukh khan dialog was necessary)
Suhani: Dekho tum yeh paheliyan bhujaana band karo aur saaf saaf batao..kaun ho aur yahan kyun aaye ho..(look, stop beating around the bush and clearly tell us who you are and what you are doing here)
Man: badi serious type ki hai…yeh zaroor saiyyam ki maa hai.. ( seems like the very serious type she’s definitely saiyyam’s mother)
Man: Madam, aapke ghar main shaadi hone waali hai na… yahan dulhan toh pehele se maujood hai bas dulhe ki entry honi thi..toh main aaga ya..mera naam Raj hai..aur yeh dilwala apni dulhania ko le jaane aaya hai. (madam, there’s going to be a wedding in your house isn’t there..well the bride is already here and the groom needed to make an entry..so im here..my name is raj.. and this brave hearted boy is here to take his bride away)
Everyone is shocked. Yuvani goes over to yuvraj.
Yuvani: Papa I know ki humne plan aage badane ka faislal kiya tha par yeh todha jaldi nahi hogaya.. ( papa I know we decided to continue with the lan but isn’t this a little too soon)
Yuvraj: Yuvani main exactly yahin tumhe aur yuvaan ko bolne waala tha..maine nahi bulaya iss cartoon ko..(yuvani I was going to say the exact same thing to you and yuvaan.i didn’t call this cartoon here )
Yuvani went over to yuvaan
Yuvaan: yeh sab kya ho raha hai maa aur papa naii hamein bina bata ey is joker ko bula liya.. ( what is going on.maa and papa called this joker without informing us..)
Yuvani: yuvaan isse mumma papa ne nahi bulaya aur agar tum ne bhi nahi bulaaya toh…( yuvaan mumma papa didn’t call him here and if you didn’t either then..)
Suhani looked back to yuvraaj yuvani and yuvaan, all of them shook their heads no in unison. She turned towards the man..
Suhani: dekho tumhe hum mein se kisi ne nahi bulaaya..shayad tum ghalat ghar mein aagaye ho…(look none of us called you here perhaps you are in the wrong house)
Raj: nahi nahi muhje birla house hi bulaaya gaya tha..( no no I was called to the birla house only)
Suhani: Par kisne bulaaya tumhe (But who called you here)
Maine! ( I did) Saiyyam spoke up..
Precap : Raj’s antics continue..
Hey guys I hope you like where this is going. And I hope you like Raj. You all can imagine harshad chopra as Raj
With love
Nnnya ( Naina)
30 Comments
When will u update next part?Today?
Nnya pls update today no
U r ff is superbbbbb pls update todayyyy
Hi pinky next part has been updated. And im currently writing the part after that. Thank you for reading
@ niya
Where is the next part lyk u said its updated …
I dont know dear. it hasnt been put up yet. usually it doesnt take this long though
Update one more tym we r very much impatient to read the next part
This is amazing i have been waiting for the update please update soon 🙂
Keep the amazing work up 🙂
Aww thanks so much for waiting.. and appreciating my work. Next part has been uploaded
Beautifully written. ..plz update next part soon….and I want jealous possessive sayyam. ..
Thank you..yes thats coming up keep reading..
Lovely , superb , awesome update.
Did not expect that it would be sayyam who would bring in the bridegroom. Anyways life is full of surprises and a few of them come from really good people which make them truly unique.
Thanks a lot naina for this update. God bless and update soon.
Thank you sooo much shivani.. and yes i agree with you.
Great!! Ab kya Saiyyam Krishna k bacche krwakar rahega!! Kitne natak h Saiyyam k..I’m telling u Krishna, do thappad lagao Saiyyam ko..Apne aap line pe aa jaega
Hahahahahaha aarti dear i just love your humour…..Thank you for reading dear
Woah amazing , marvellous.. episode plzzz update soon
I’m eagerly waiting to read next eppi..
Thank you 🙂
hahaha…laughter riots during this dialogue
offo aunty..nahi nahi aunty nahi madam ji… romantic story mainhero ki entry hui hai toh shahrukh khan ka dialog churaana toh banta hai..
not only dis but all of his…nyc 1 really..
n seriously saiyyam called raj..icing on d cake…waiting to c d jalkukda saiyyam…
update d nxt part soon…love ur ff…truely
Haha well it always seems like guys try to do that so i decided to interpret it in my ff. Thanks so much dear
Interesting…..and most surprise part was that Saiyyam called raj
too interesting waiting for next part eagerly….plz updater very soon
Thank you sanju.. 🙂
Very nice… Loved it… Keep going.. Waiting for the next part.. Keep posting.. I missed ur ff very much.. I love ur story ??? ?
Awww thanks so much Shaani dear 🙂
Beautiful update
Thank you 🙂
Wowo interesting story but thodi long hoti to accha hota plz next epi upload 2to 3 epi plz ekto kitna let updates karte ho aj kiya phir kal nhi ayega epi plz aj hi next updates do
Thank you. Next part updated
you got my idea exactly the way i wanted you to get it
go on girl ,loving the new character -RAJ his antics are reallllly interesting
Thank you saYna.. Glad you liked raj. but uff next part still hasnt been uploaded by telly. i submitted it this morning 🙁
wat a twist!….dint expect this at all….poor saiyyam digging his own grave….wen will u update next part…pls make it soon…
Thank you dear. i did submit this morning, the next part. But telly still hasnt put it up. i dont know why 🙁