Fan Fiction

Kriyam: Kyun karte ho mujhse itna pyar (Chapter 42)

The sangeet is about to start any minute..yuvani is dragging krishna hastily…but not towards the function area,towards saiyyam’s room
Krishna: Yuvani humein sangeet ke liye deri ho rahi please yeh tum kahan lekar ja rahi ho mujhe…please yuvani tumhe pata hai na shaadi se pehele mera usse milna mana hai..Yuvani tum samajh..( yuvani we’re late for the sangeet..please where are you taking me,yuvani you know I’m not supposed to see him…yuvani please undertand..)
Before Krishna could finish they both ran into Raj
Yuvani: TUM? TUM YAHAN KYA KAR RAHE HO(YOU? WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE)
Raj: Yuvani ji aap ko bhool ne ki bimari hai kya….badi bekar ki sawaal pooch thi ho…Arey aaj subhe hi toh aap ki maa ne mujhe yahan rukh ne khe liye kaha tha..aur jahan tak mujhe yaad hai..kyunki meri yaadash bilkul teek hai aap bhi chahti ti ki main yahan rukh jaoon(Yuvani ji do you amnesia? You ask such useless questions..this morning only your mother told me to stay here and if I remember correctly because my memory is fine, you also wanted me to stay)
Yuvani: Zyada oversmart baneki zaroorat nahi hai..mere kehne ka matlab ta ki tum saiyyam ke kamre ke bahar kya kar rahe ho…(no need to be oversmart. What I meant was what are you doing outside saiyyam’s room)
Raj: haeyy jab aap aise chilla ke mujhe “tum” bulaatey ho na..kasam se bada acha lagta hai..ek aur baar boliye na yuvani ji..(ohhh whem you scream at me like that I like it a lot can you do it one more time yuvani)
Yuvani: Dimaag kharab he tumhara? Main koi gaana ga rahi hoon jo tumhe acha lagta hai…( Have you gone mad? Am I singing a song that you like it?)
Raj was about to say something when yuvani pushed him aside and raced towards saiyyams room…Seeing this Raj comes running infront of them..
Yuvani: Kya kar rahe ho tum raaste se hato humein saiyyam se milna hai..(What are you doing..get out of the way we have to see saiyyam)
Raj: in dono ka shaadi se pehele milna mana hai na..( these two aren’t supposed to meet before the wedding aren’t they)
Yuvani: tumhe kab se reeti riwazon mein interest hone laga..get with the times mister..yeh hota hai romance..aise milne mein maza aata hai…(since when are you interested in the customs and traditions…get with the times mister..this called romance..its fun to meet like this)
Raj: tab nahi jab milne wale ko chad gayi ho…( not when the person you are meeting is drunk)
Krishna: Kya kahan tumne? ( what did you say)

Raj: tumne poocha ta na main saiyyam ke kamre mein kya kar karah tha…(You asked didn’t you what we were doing in saiyyam’s room…)
Raj makes drinking gestures with his hands.and yuvani makes strangulating gestures with hers..
Krishna: Raj yeh tumne kya kiya ( Raj what did you do)
Raj: I’m really sorry Krishna mujhe nahi pata ta ki itne mein usko chad gayegi..actually humne kabhi saath mein sharab nahi pi aur mujhe ek dost ne whiskey ki bottle gift ki thi…isiliye main gaya tha ..aur maine suna bhi ta ki woh kaafi drink karta hai toh mujhe nahi laga ki usse chad jaegi..( I didn’t know that from this much he’ll get drunk..actually we’ve never had a drink together..and a friend of mine gifted me a bottle of whiskey that’s why I went there..and I had heard he drinks quite a lot so I didnt think he’d get drunk that easily)
Yuvani: ( angrily) Dimaag kharab hai tumhara? Whiskey doosre drinks se zyada strong hoti hai..bohot jaldi chad jaati hai…kya zaroorat thi aaj raat sharab pi ne ki..shaadi ke baad drink karne ke liye intezaar nahi kar sakte te kya..abhi sangeet shuru hone wala hai…aur…jab se aaye ho kuch na kuch irritating kar hi rahe ho..par yeh toh had hi ho gayi..tumse aur expect bhi kya ki jaa sakti hai…manners toh bilkul hai nahi..shukar hai yeh sab dekhne ke liye tumhare maa baap nahi hai.kitna embarrass hote woh log.( are you mad? Whiskey is stronger than other drinks you get drunk very easily..why did you have to drink tonight.couldnt you wait until after the wedding. The sangeet is about to start and..ever since you came you have been nothing but irritating..but this is the limit..but what can we expect from you..you don’t have any manners..its a good thing your parents aren’t here to see this. How embarrassed they would have been)
Raj had gotten emotional..Krishna grabbed yuvani’s arm before she could say anything else…
Raj: sahi kaha tumne yuvani…acha he ki woh yahan nahi hai…warna mujh jaise nalak aur irritating bete ko dekh kar woh toh embarrass hi hote…(you’re right yuvani..it is a good thing they’re not here. Having a loser and someone so irritating as a son would have surely made them feel embarrassed)
Yuvani has seen raj like never before…he was hurt..his voice was cracked and as he walked away she felt a pang of guilt creeping up…she thought to follow him but decided against it and followed krishna inside saiyyam’s room.
Saiyyam was on the floor hugging a pillow when they walked in…Saiyyam saw Krishna and got mesmerized…
Yuvani: What the hell saiyyam..yeh kya haal bana rakha hai apna…(what have you done to yourself)
Saiyyam: Arey…yuvani tum kab aayi…..aur yeh haan woh kya tha…main na todha nervous tha..aur raj aaya tha drink lekar toh main…Usne na sirf ek hi glass di ti. Kanjoos kahi ka… Par maine kya kiya pata hai…..main uska glass bhi pi gaya….tumne dekha kya usse..woh mere liye nimboo paani lene gaya hai…( laughing) woh bechara toh pareshaan ho gaya…kehe raha tha ki usne sangeet kharab kar diya….arey aise kaise kharab hoga..mein hone hi nahi doonga.. main dance karoonga sangeet mein….( oh yuvani when did you come here and oh yeah um what happened was..i was a little nervous and raj came with a drink so i…he only gave me one drink you know…cheater! But you know what I did I drank his glass too… (laughing) he got so worried..kept daying he ruined sangeet….how is it ruined..i wont let it get ruined…I’ll dance in the sangeet..

Saiyyam was still rolling around on the floor when Krishna turned to yuvani..
Krishna: Yuvani..tumhe raj se woh sab nahi kehena chahiye ta…who already itna guilty feel kar raha tha aur tumne…jaake baat karo usse…( Yuvani you shouldn’t have said all those things..he was already feeling guilty and you…..go talk to him)
Yuvani: Par saiyyam..aur sangeet bhi shuru ho chukka hai…( but saiyyam..and the sangeet has also started)
Krishna: Saiyyam ko main samhal loongi…tum jao…aur yuvani kisi ko batana mat ki saiyyan nashi mein hai..(I’ll take care of saiyyam..You go..and yuvani..dont tell anyone that saiyyam is drunk)

Precap: Yuvani apologises to Raj. Kriyam scene featuring drunk saiyyam…

Guys is this getting too draggy?… there’s still some stuff going on before I begin the actual sangeet. Bear with me…
Also I know it was ages ago but I want to discuss the kriyam confession with you guys.. I personally didn’t like it. It felt too rushed and forced.. Saiyyam is such a complex character and there was zero buid up on his part before the confession….He mentioned in the confession how he thinks he is a bad person and Krishna cant love him..which is exactly what I did in my ff. I just wish they explored that more..him struggling with his demons and his growing feelings for Krishna….Kj is so phenomenal in potraying saiyyam he would have done full justice to all those layers….
Thank you fro reading and please share your thoughts on
A) Is the sangeet dragging and boring?
B) Kriyam confession in the serial..

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