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Episode 151
Krishna n sayyam Reached Birla Mansion Entrance n The Entire Family Welcomed The Two Love Birds with Happiness n Excitement. As soon as Krishna n sayyam Stepped Inside The house The Two Lovely n Innocent 5 years Kids Came Running n Hugged Both Krishna n sayyam in Excitement n Started To Talk to with Them in Excitement n in Childish Tone.
Girl : ( Runs n Hugs Sayyam in Excitement ) Paapaa..Finally U came… ( Kisses sayyam’s Cheeks Lovingly ) Missed U Soo Much Pappa
Boy : ( Runs n Hugs Krishna in Excitement ) Mummaa..Finally u also came.. ( Kisses Krishna’s Cheeks Lovingly ) n I Missed U Soo Much Mumma..
The 2 Kids who Ran n Hugged Both Krishna n sayyam were None Other Than Their 5 Yrs Kids Suhana Birla n Sohan Birla ..The 2 Lovable 5 Yrs Kids were Really Happy n Excited to see their Parents Back in front of them after A Long Holiday becoz even it was A Short Holiday fr Elders bt fr Kids like Suhana n Sohan Staying Away from Their Parents fr Only 1 Day was Like A Week..
Sayyam : ( Hugs Suhana Back ) Aww My little Princess..I Missed U too… ( Kissed Her Cheeks too ) Love U..
Krishna : ( Hugged Sohan Back ) Aww My little Prince..Missed U too ( Kissed His Cheeks Back ) Love U..
While The Kids n kriyam were Having A Cute Family Bond The Rest of The People who were Present in BM Adored n Admired The Family Bond n Blessed them with their Wide Smile on their Face.As kriyam n Kids were Hugging Each other Another Kid of Around 6 Yrs too Came n Hugged kriyam Happily n Showered His Love too…Seeing The Kid Coming Towards them kriyam too Hugged Him Back n Showered their Love too on The Kid Happily..
Kid : ( Ran n Hugged kriyam Lovingly ) chachi n chacha..U Came Finally..Nt Only Suhana n Sohan bt I also Missed U both ..bt Finally U both Came..bt No One Informed Me about ur Arrival ..Not Even Maa n Papa.. ( Sees yuvvan n kushi with Pout Face )
That Kid who Hugged kriyam was None Other Than kushi’s n yuvaan’ Child Rohan Birla…Rohan was One Yr elder than Suhana n Sohan…All 3 kids were Really Intelligent n Smart…
Sayyam : ( Smiled n Hugged Rohan Bak ) Awww My Baby..chacha n chachi too Missed U too Beta..
Krishna: agr apko kisi ne nhi bataya toh kya…. Now We came bback na So We, U,Sohan n Suhana all Together will have soo Much Fun ok na ??
Kids : ( Happy n Jumps in Excitement ) Yaaayyy…
Soon Finally after Having a Some Cute n Family Moments kriyam Headed towards their Room…
Days passed
BM was decorated..
As Everyone to their Respective Rooms to get Ready kriyam Along with their Kids too went to their Room to get Ready..The Moment The Kids Entered their Parent’s Room Both Sohan n Suhana Ran n Jumped on their Bed n Started Jumping on The Bed as They Likes The Softness of kriyam Bed n Krishna seeing them got Irritated n Started Scolding while sayyam Smiled n Went to His Work on Laptop Like Any other Men would do..
Soham : ( Happy n Runs to the Bed ) Yaayy..Mumma..Ur Bed is Soo Comfortable…Loving Ur Bed
Suhana: ( to sayyam ) Papa..Plzz We too want Same Bed in Our Room Plzzz.. ( request While Jumping on Bed )
Sayyam : ( Smiles ) Ok Done My Kids..Kal tak U will Get ur Dream Bed in Ur Room..N that’s A Promise of Ur Father..Ok na ??
Kids : ( Happy n Excited ) Yaayay..Love U Papa..U r The Best..
Sayyam : ( Laughs at their Childishness ) Papa too Love My Kids..
Krishna : ( Irritated ) Wowow..what A Love of Father n Kids..Bas Haa.U guys only know hw to Mess Up Things n don’t know hw to Mend it Later…Its Me who always Mend Things after u a Messing them..Nw its Over ( To Kids ) Abb Chalo tum dono… ( Points Towards Her ) Come Here Ryt nw..n get in Washroom One By One…Will Make U both Ready n get Ur ( Sees sayyam in Anger ) Papa Ready..
Sohan : ( Laughs ) Mumma..is Papa A Kid that U have to Make Him Ready like Us ?? ( Innocently n Unknowingly ) toh It means U might have to Give Shower to Papa na Like us coz According to U He is Kid na. ( Giggles )
Suhana : Haa Na Mumma..We r ryt na ?? Do U give Shower to Papa every day like U give Us..Bolo na ??
Krishna n sayyam who were busy in their Own Work got Embarrassed n Red on Hearing Their Innocent Kids n Avoided Each other’s Eye Contact n Tried to Divert The Topic making the Kids Confused.
Sohan : Bolo na Mumma..do u Shower Papa too ??
Krishna : ( Blushes ) Bas Karo Bachcho ..Come On ( Shows The Washroom ) Get Inside The Washroom One By One.. Abii…. ( Angry )
Kids : ( Sad ) Ok Mumma ( Runs Inside The Washroom )
Soon Krishna n Kids went inside the washroom n krishna made them bath n made them ready for the party while sayyam kept smiling throughout the procedure of making the kids ready while doing his some important work on his laptop n on the other side all that krishna could do was only avoid eye contact with sayyam.soon the kids got ready n both the kids were looking really adorable n admirable in their new birthday dresses which were gifted by their parents only…sohan wore a 3 piece suit with simple yet fashionable hairstyle same like his dad with same attitude n manner while suhana wore a pink colour frock looking gorgeous n elegant like her mother..both the kids really depicted as the younger version of their parents with same attitude n same manner of their parents…as soon as the kids got ready both krishna n sayyam stared n admired their own kids n blessed n showered their love on their kids with teary eyes filled with tears of happiness.
Krishna : ( Teary Eyes bt Smiles ) Aww..My Babies..kitne Pyaare lag rahe ho tum dono..God Bless U My Kids..Mumma Loves U.
Sayyam : ( Gets Up from the Sofa n Stops His Work n goes Near Kids ) Papa too Love U Bacchoon..( Pats their Cheeks Lovingly ) U both r Looking Really Good ..Happy Birthday My Kids..God Bless U ( Kisses Their Forehead )
Kids : ( Happy ) We Love U too Mumma n Papa ( Kisses kriyam’s Cheeks Lovingly n Ran Out of Room )
Krishna n sayyam seeing their Kid’s Childish Behaviour Laughed n Admired their Childishness
Krishna : ( Smiles n Side Hugged n Kept Her Head on sayyam’s Chest with Love ) sayyam….Thank U fr giving Me such 2 Wonderful Kids n Thank U fr Giving Me Such A Wonderful Life..U were always there with Me whenever I needed U… U gave me strength to fight with all problems… U r truly my strength whenever I am weak…Thanks Alot..thankx for coming in to my life ( Teary Eyes n Kisses sayyam’s Palm )
Sayyam: ( Feels The Tears n Cups Krishna’s Face n Wipes Her Tears ) Ohh Come On Princess..kitne baar bolu I Hate Tears in ur Eyes..chahe it’s of Sadness or Happiness..I just Don’t Like Tears in ur Eyes..So Come On Wipe U Tears..Warna u know main kya karunga as ur Punishment ( Winks Naughtily )
Krishna on hearing sayyam’s teasing words blushes n immediately wipes her tears while sayyam smiled naughtily n leaned towards her rosy lips seeing her bluishness..seeing sayyam coming near her lips krishna feels shy n closed her eyes giving sayyam a positive sign.. sayyam leans towards krishna n kissed her passionately..
Screen fades away…
It’s been 1 Hour n party has almost started n almost all the guests had arrived including rahul naina maan yuvaani… .soon all were waiting for the cake cutting…as it was the time for the cake cutting krishna called both suhana n sohan to cut the cake as it was the birthday of suhana n sohan… . everyone present in hall clapped n wished both kids for their special day…soon cake was cut the cake was distributed among all the guests…
After sometimes
Krishna announced a family photo session making everyone happy n excited..listening to the family photo announcement everyone including elders of all the families were made in front while the second generation were made to stand back of elders n the third n latest generation were made sit on ground in front making the pic a complete n a perfect family photo with all the people present in the photo were happy in fact super happy seeing their entire family happy n blessed…
Photographer : say Cheese…
Family Members : ( Smiles ) cheese..
Story ends with the family photo…
Finally Done with The Last n Final Part of Kriyam- u r my strength..Thanks Alot for The Immense Love n Support U All Provided n Showered on Me n My Work..Hope u will Like The Last Part too..Hope it Reaches Ur Expectations…Do Leave Ur Valuable Comments n Let Me know Ur Views about The Last n Final Part of My story….
I hope everyone(including silent readers) will comment on this as this is the end of my story…
Thank you so much everyone who helped me n support me I love u all…
With love Shaani( Uththara )
Bye… Bye..
52 Comments
Shani superb amazing writer i love your ff ?????but sad because your ff end ?????? come back soon thanks for update ?????????
It’s sad you ended such an amazing ff, but thank you for writing it, enjoyed it all thoroughly and it was a wonderful ending too!
i really liked ur ff..it was all started with a beautiful journey..but itz not the end…i hope u cum up with the new story..n a new ff..will miss u…n this ff too..
Look at everyone shaani..have a little pity on us.. I know u don’t want to continue this story anymore but I can’t pass my day without ur outstanding work.. I say on behalf of all other kriyam fans plz plz start another ff ok a least starts a TS.. I know SSEL is going to end..that means we have only ffs to enjoy kriyam.. I won’t force u becoz as a writer I understand its hard and u need time but plz..plz consider..
Coming back to the episode it brought tears in eyes..it was soo good and the emotions were so cute and adorable. The introductions were fantastic.. And I was enjoying it soo much. I could feel it happening before my eyes..ur writing is always so well described and beautiful. U give time and effort to every scene.. I don’t know if u will start a new one or not but I hope u will remain in TU and we could be in touch…
Again, u, Hafsaa and shreya are my fav writers.. U ended this one.. Hafsaa intends to end her one too.. I really hope Shaani u will consider our requests..
And I am really happy that I could be a part of this wonderful journey.. I have enjoyed kriyam love, marriage and children through ur writing.. I have created friends and obviously took a lot of inspiration to start my own ff.. Thank u for giving us such a wonderful masterpiece.. I really feel lucky that I started reading it from the beginning becoz all the episodes were mindblowing.. I can’t find words to describe my feelings.. But I would say this much that this was a great ff.. I loved it a lot..and it was an amazing journey…but I am sad to say goodbye.. I am sad becoz everyday after school I won’t be able to enjoy my leisure time reading and looking forward to one of the best ffs.. I loved it through out…
Love u too…❤❤?
Shaani ur ff is the best ever ff on kriyyam. Sad that u ended it. Will miss ur fabulous writing. Plzz come back with another ff or at least some os. Ending is perfect. This is what called “HAPPY ENDING”. Very nice. Kriyyam family is perfect & adorable.kids name very nice. Thank u so much for this awesome piece of writing. Plz try to come up with new one.Will b waiting with hope.
Oh noo shaani plz dnt end this..!! i actually enjoy reading this ff daily in my free tym.. This is the best ff and u r such an amazing writer…U describe each n every thing so perfect that i feel like its happening really in front of my eyes.. i vl miss this ff a lot??
Shaani don’t end this ff yaar pls??? ur writing is amazing…everyday I will be waiting for ur update or else I feel like someting is missing
Pls start at least next season pls pls pls
What u ended it?!!!? di The last episode was so cute to read..if u stop this then u will have to come up with a new ff…Seriously we all will miss this ff alot??? and u too shaani di..May god bless u and your family.?
Keep smiling..?
Lots of Love & wishes?
Isha?
My real name is not Isha..I am Lamiya….
you must be joking yr how can Gujar Shabh can stop writing….. well lady its your game….. if you think this was the perfect time than….but wished i could really congrats you for 200 an dthan for 300 or 500 episodes… happy too… may you now think to debut for jndsd too…
if you start fanction there people from here will quickly run there to support……
but really your end Fanfiction shocked people same way as people were shocked to know about news @Sunil paji quiting show…. really salute and respect your work…. keep achieving the high feats……….. All the best….
ignore my unnecessary talks as i’m little Insane man…….i don’t know what i speak sometime….but its true i resect your hardwork and decision…. keep writing more.
No….? u ended your ff ? i will miss your ff so much ? I knw i dnt comment everyday but I love this ff since day one. And my heart is still not believing that it is ending. ? Shaani, no words can express how good you are.. I love your writing. Since you are ending it please start a new one please ? I cant even tell you how much i wl miss this. Ssel is also ending. I wonder how will i stay. But hoping that you will start your new ff. Looking forward to hear from you dear☺
I love you and your ff ❤. Will misss both soo much ?? this ff will always be in my heart?. And i hope you knw that you are a star. Im gonna miss kriyam so much???
And congratulations on your amazing ff ❤
Love you?
Bye….. ?❤
Supremely emotional and great. This story had all aspects of the everyday lives of a greatly unique couple presented in a beautiful and pristine way. The story was a true embodiment of the various highs and lows and varied strifes and glories of a mortal life. Each episode was a true work of art and a masterpiece in itself. Every episode was exceptionally conceptualised and presented meticulously. The intricate wordplay and magical depiction of a myriad variety of emotions is beyond the ordinary. The way in which you managed to perfect all the dialogues and actions in the episodes is truly fantastic. The concept and storyline was extremely unique and lovable. This story has surely overcome all odds and has become a milestone in many aspects. Every composition penned down by you has helped me love my life and enjoy even the turmoils and griefs. So in all, you are my true strength uththara…
Amazing episode for sure. The episode had a truly heady dose of romance, humour and all aspects of the beautiful life led by krishna and sayyam. It was truly endearing to have met the cutest kids on earth in the mortal being of suhana and sohan. The children are really cute and adorable and their antics were just awesome. It was a brilliant piece of art with great wordplay and stupendous conception. A wonder-episode for sure..
great episode and loved your ff from the beginning to the end thank you for this great ff and just like everyone hope you start a new one soon,
Omg..I can’t believe..U ended..This was such a beautiful ff..Hope to see u soon with another one..All the best dear..
Last 2epi other epi amezing amezing writters final epi was good happy ending next koi topic writering karnewali ho kya
Ur story was just awesome
I m not getting words to explain..
I m going to miss ur story…
I was thinking that I should start reading it again from starting…❤
Hiiii? I’m sorry for not commenting in ages.
But omg you’ve finished your story???
This was the first and best story I’ve ever read on this site. I loved the way you portrayed the characters and just made the story absolutely amazing. I really hope that you start a new story soon because I will be dying to read it ❤️️✨??
Anyway once again LOVED❤️️ this story ????
Hey Shaani. Its sad you ended your ff but I really liked this story. I know I commented about 2-3 chapters of this story, but then I absolutly needed to ccomment on this ending chapter. I’m a really big kriyam and kj/sj fan I like reading ffs. I usually dont comment as Im a silent reader but sometimes I just blurt out all the compliments I have on the chapters ? You did a really good job Shaani. You are indeed a great Arthur. ?✌ Your story inspired me to write a story too.. do you think that I should write a story though? ❤ Need suggestions.. Loved this story ??❤✨❤??