Hello frnds, Muniya here, back with my 4th story on Kriyyam. Hope u all r good. Thanks to all of u for liking all my stories. Hope u also like this one.
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Krishna is tired of trying hard to get Sayyam’s consent for their relationship to progress. But Sayyam is too stubborn to get convinced.
A beautiful and shiny morning.
The sun is rising with a bright hue of golden rays, mingled with the light shades of orange, pink and red, spreading all over the blue sky.
Krishna wakes up, hearing the sweet chirping of the birds in the tree, near the window of her room. She sits up on the couch and tilts her head to the right side, with a cute smile, to get a glimpse of her dear husband, Sayyam.
But, soon her smiling face turnes into a disappointed one, as she finds the bed empty. Krishna gets really sad. She gets up and goes to the washroom while thinking about Sayyam.
Krishna can understand that Sayyam is avoiding her for past few days. He is coming late at night and leaving the house early in the morning when Krishna is sleeping. She even tried to ask him but with no result.
Krishna comes out of the washroom, the hint of deep thinking is visible on her face. She gets ready and goes out of the room. But collides with Yuvaani, as she was absent minded.
Yuvaani: Oh hello….Krishna..dhyaan kahan hai tera…dekhke nahi chal sakti?
Now Krishna comes to sense
Krishna: Oh sorry…Yuvaani…i didn’t see u….actually i was thinking….
Yuvaani: About Sayyam?
Yuvaani says in a teasing tone but Krishna looks at her sorrowfully. She takes Yuvaani to her room and tells her everything. She tells her that Sayyam is not showing any interest for their relationship to grow up. He is just not listening to her. Krishna says in a broken voice. Yuvaani reassures her.
Meanwhile, Suhani is walking towards Kriyyam’s room to call Krishna. She was about to enter the room but stops and fortunately or unfortunately, eavesdrops Krishna and Yuvaani talking about Sayyam. She gets shocked to hear all these. She becomes really sad and enters the room.
Suhani: Krishna…
Krishna and Yuvaani gets shocked. They stop their conversation and smiles at Suhani. But Suhani goes to Krishna and hugs her.
Suhani: I m sorry Krishna…i m really very sorry…hamari wajah se tumhari zindagi barbad ho gayi.
Krishna and Yuvaani gets shocked. They look at each other.
Krishna: Aunty..what r u saying?
Suhani breaks the hug and looks at her.
Suhani: Humne sab sun liya Krishna…
Krishna and Yuvaani gets more shocked. Suhani again cries and apologises to Krishna for ruining her life. Krishna and Yuvaani tries to calm her down.
At the meantime Sayyam was coming to the room as he forgot his phone. He hears everything. He feels the guilt forming inside him, hearing Suhani crying. He stands there for sometime and calms himself down. He thinks something and then enters the room, with a smile.
Sayyam: Maa… why r u crying?
Suhani turns to him. She cries and tells him how bad she feels seeing Krishna in pain.
Suhani: Sayyam…tum Krishna se…
Before she finishes Sayyam holds her hands and wipes her tears and says
Sayyam: And u r crying for that?…Nahi maa…aisi koi baat nahi hai… nowadays i m lil busy with office works….and thats it.
Suhani doesn’t get convinced.
Suhani: But Krishna is very hurt with ur behavior.
Sayyam: Ok…maa..
He turns to Krishna and holds her hands. Krishna gets shocked.
Sayyam: I m sorry Krishna…plz mujhe maaf Kardo.
Krishna is more shocked. She looks at him surprised. Sayyam than turns to Suhani
Sayyam: Ab theek hai…
Suhani gets really happy. She hugs both Krishna and Sayyam. Than she leaves with Yuvaani.
As they leave, Krishna turns to Sayyam, with a smile. But soon her smile fades as she notices the rage in Sayyam’s eyes.
Krishna: Sayyam…tum..
Sayyam: How dare u Krishna…tumne maa ko ye sab kyun bataya?
Krishna: No Sayyam…i didn’t tell her anything…me and Yuvaani were talking and she heard everything…thats why…
Sayyam: That means u told Yuvaani..
Krishna remains silent, looking downwards.
Sayyam: Whatever…leave it…and now listen to me carefully.
Krishna looks at him and he says
Sayyam: Dekho Krishna…i can’t see maa in pain anymore…she has bear a lot bcz of me…and now i want her to be happy always…main nahi chahta hamari wajah se unhe koi bhi problem ho….tum samajh rahi ho na main kya kahe raha hoon?…i mean…i know that we don’t like eachother…but maa shouldn’t know the truth of our relation…that will break her heart…so, for maa…we hv to act as if we love and care for eachother…understand?
He looks at her. Krishna is so shocked. She is about to say something but Sayyam holds her hands and says
Sayyam: Plz Krishna…i want my mother to be happy…and for that i need ur help…plz.
He says in a pleading voice. Krishna is lost in his eyes. She unknowingly nods her head in positive. Sayyam heaves a deep sigh. He leaves her hands and goes out of the room in hurry.
Krishna sees him going and says to herself
Krishna: Pata nahi tumhare liye mujhe aur kya kya karna parega Sayyam…may be for u this relationship is just a acting in front of others…but not for me…still i’ll do it bcz i really love u…and for the first time u hv wanted me to help u…than how i can i deny that?…and i also love Suhani aunty…she is like my mother…i also want her to be happy…and if this acting will make u both happy…than i’ll do it…i’ll do anything for u…but that doesn’t mean i’ll give up my efforts to win ur heart…i’ll try my best to make u realize my love for u…i must do that.
She seems to be determined.
Few days passes like this.
Kriyyam carry on their acting to be a loving couple, very successfully, without any flaw.
But is it their mere acting in front of other or is it the real action of their suppressed feelings of their subconscious mind? It was clear that, for Krishna, it was not acting, at least. But what about Sayyam? What happened to him? Why is he rushing to Krishna every time, when she needs small helps? Why is he raising voice against Dadi when she scolds or taunts Krishna for silly mistakes or standing by her side with a consoling look? Or is he such a good actor that his acting compelled Suhani and others, including Krishna, to think that this is not his acting, this is the real him?
But Krishna just failed to understand that Sayyam is Sayyam. He won’t let go off his ego so easily and change. Krishna takes his acting to be real and fuels her efforts.
One week later
At night
10:30 pm
Krishna is waiting for Sayyam, in her room. She has decorated the room as a candle light dinner set up, to surprise Sayyam. But it is too late now and Sayyam is not back yet.
Krishna looks around the room for the third time. She again admired her own effort with a broad smile. She has spent the entire evening in this. There is a soothing atmosphere in the room due to the fragrance and dim light of the scented candles. Sayyam’s favorite dishes are laid on the table, along with Kheer.
Krishna feels her eyes getting heavy bcz of tiredness. She goes to washroom to splash some water on face.
On the other hand, Sayyam enters the room. He gets surprised. He stands at the door observing the decoration. Then only Krishna comes out of the washroom, wiping her face.She sees Sayyam and gets happy. She goes to him and looks at him, smiling. Sayyam looks at her, indifferent.
Sayyam: Ye sab kya hai Krishna?
Krishna holds his hand and brings him inside the room.
Krishna: Ye sab maine kiya….tumhare liye….u like it?
Sayyam frees his hand
Sayyam: How many times i hv to say Krishna…that i don’t like all these?
Krishna becomes sad but She ignores that and again pulls him near the table, holding his hand
Krishna: Achha theek hai…leave all these…see i hv prepared all ur favorite dishes…so u go freshen up and than i’ll serve u.
Sayyam again frees his hand
Sayyam: Krishna don’t u forget that we r just acting to be a loving couple in front of others…but here…in this room we r just two different persons…who don’t like eachother…so u don’t need to carry on that acting over here.
Krishna gets so shocked. She feels her eyes getting wet.
Krishna: But Sayyam…this is not my acting…i really want to…
Sayyam: Oh plz Krishna…i don’t want to hear anything.
Krishna gets afraid by his loud voice and tears drops from her eyes. Sayyam sees her crying and feels bad.
Sayyam: Plz Krishna…don’t cry…i can’t see u crying…i feel guilty…i know i m the reason of all the sadness of ur life…maine apna badla lene ke liye tumhari zingi barbad kar di…main toh tumhari maafi ke bhi layek nahi hoon…still when u do all these for me…i feel more guilty…every drop of ur tears pierce my heart…it hurts me…mujhe apne app pe gussa aata hai…why don’t u understand that?
He sits on the bed, lowering his head.
Krishna listens to him silently. She then wipes her tears and looks at him
Krishna: Ok Sayyam…if my tears hurts u…if u feel bad when i cry…than i promise u Sayyam…u’ll never see these tears in my eyes again…never… and i m really sorry for hurting u.
Sayyam: Krishna… tum meri…
Krishna cuts him off and says, with a bittersweet smile
Krishna: Don’t worry Sayyam…i’ll continue our acting.
Sayyam was taken aback. There prevails a pin drop silence for a while. Than Sayyam slowly gets up and goes to the washroom.
After sometime when he comes out, he finds the room totally dark. Krishna has blew off all the candles and has lied down on her couch. Sayyam stands in darkness for sometime and goes to bed and falls asleep.
Some days passes. Suhani notices the coldness of Kriyyam’s behavior.
One day Suhani is sitting i her room. She seems to be in deep thinking. Yuvraaj comes to the room and calls her two times. But she doesn’t answer. Yuvraaj than goes to her and shakes her arm. Suhani now comes out of her thought.
Yuvraaj: Suhani kahan khoyi ho tum?…main kabse tumhe bula raha hoon?
Suhani: Sorry Yuvraaj…actually i was thinking about Sayyam and Krishna..
Suhani tells him about the sudden change in their behavior. Yuvraaj also gets tensed. They discuss for sometime. Than Yuvraaj comes up with an idea.
Yuvraaj: Suhani…why don’t we sent them for an outing…or we may call it honeymoon…what say?
Suhani likes his idea and smiles. She agrees and hugs him.
Next day YuvAni calls Kriyyam in their room. They go and Suhani hands them two tickets. Kriyyam looks at eachother, confused.
Suhani: Arree…aise kya dekh rahe ho tum dono?…ye tum dono ki honeymoon trip ki tickets hain…to Goa.
Kriyyam gets shocked. Sayyam looks at Krishna who was looking at Suhani. Her eyes seems to brighten up lightly. But soon she hides that and looks at Sayyam and than at Suhani.
Krishna: But aunty…daidu…
Yuvraaj cuts her off
Yuvraaj: No ifs and buts…we hv decided that u two r going…that means u r going and thats final…ok.
Kriyyam tries to deny. They give the excuse of Sayyam’s office. But with no result. At last Krishna asks YuvAni to join them.
Yuvraaj: Hv u guys gone crazy…this is ur honeymoon…not a family trip…so just go and pack ur bags…now.
Kriyyam were left with no options. They come back to their room.
Krishna: U don’t worry… i’ll again talk to aunty and cancel this trip.
Sayyam looks at her. Immediately, the flashes of her bright eyes comes in his mind. And without thinking anything, he says
Sayyam: No we r going….i..i mean…if maa wants us to go…than we’ll go.
Krishna looks at him, shocked. Her eyes again lit up brightly as she thinks to get a break from everyday life. Unknowingly, a smile crept on Sayyam’s lips as he glanced up at her face.
After two days
Kriyyam bids bye to the family and sets off for their honeymoon. Throughout the journey they both remain silent, without a word to eachother.
Kriyyam reach the hotel at night. They collect the keys and goes to the room. They were already feeling awkward as they were sent here for their so called honeymoon, and now, more to their awkwardness, the room was a beautifully decorated honeymoon suite. They don’t look at each other while entering the room.
Soon they take their dinner and goes to sleep as they were tired. Sayyam insisted Krishna to sleep on the bed but Krishna chose the couch and sleep there, without saying anything. So Sayyam sleeps on the bed.
Next day they wake up and Sayyam goes out. Krishna was alone in the room. Sayyam met some of his frnds. They were also came for vacation.
Time skips to 4 days
Sayyam joins his frnds. He spent most of the time with them. Krishna was left alone. Instead of enjoying the open air, she was confined in the room. Sayyam seems to forget that he has one more person with him.
That day Suhani calls Krishna.
Suhani: Krishna…hw r u?…and hw is Sayyam?…wo tumhara khayal toh rakhta hai na?…kahan hai wo?….phone do usse…humein usse baat karni hai..
Krishna gets shocked as Sayyam is not in the room. She stammers
Krishna: Haan aunty…he cares for me…but now…he is in washroom…he is taking bath…so..
Suhani: Oh..theek hai…i’ll talk to him later…now u say..
They talk for sometime. Krishna stammers a lot to lie to Suhani. She than cuts the call and turns to see Sayyam standing at the door. He heard everything that Krishna said. Krishna looks away and goes to the balcony. Sayyam feels bad.
After sometime
Krishna comes out of the washroom after taking bath. But she slips as her feet were wet. She screams loudly and falls down on the floor. Sayyam rushes to her.
Sayyam: Krishna…sambhal ke…kahin chot toh nahi aayi?
He goes to help her to stand up. But Krishna moves his hand without looking at him. Sayyam ignores that and again holds her arms firmly. Krishna now looks at him and says
Krishna: Sayyam…yahan pe toh koi bhi nahi hai…phir tum acting kyun kar rahe ho?
Sayyam was totally shaken. He leaves her arms. Krishna stands by her own and goes from there. Sayyam remembers the same words he said to Krishna. He slowly goes out of the room.
Time skips to night.
Sayyam comes to the room and finds Krishna sleeping, holding a book in her hand. He looks at her. The dry trails of tear is clearly visible on her cheeks. Suddenly someone knocks at the door. Sayyam opens the door and sees the room service boy.
Room service boy: Sir what would u like to order for dinner?
Sayyam looks at sleeping Krishna and says
Sayyam: Kal jo order kiya tha wohi le aao.
Room service boy: But sir…there was no order for dinner… from this room for last two days.
Sayyam gets shocked.
Sayyam: (in mind) What…Krishna didn’t took her dinner for last two days.
He composes himself and gives the order. He goes back near Krishna while thinking how much he has ignored her in these days.
After sometime dinner comes. Sayyam arranges everything and goes to wake up Krishna. She wakes up rubbing her eyes and finds Sayyam sitting near her. She gets up from the couch and goes to the washroom. When she comes out, finds Sayyam waiting for her with the food. She sits beside him and he serves her. Sayyam looks at her from the corner of his eyes and again notices the same brightness in her eyes, after these days. He feels a warmth inside himself. They took the dinner silently and goes to the bed. Sayyam was feeling somewhat relaxed seeing Krishna’s expression. He slowly falls asleep.
Time skips to next day evening.
Sayyam’s frnds leaves that day and he finally comes back to the room.
Sayyam comes to the room and finds Krishna standing in the balcony, watching the star-filled sky and hearing the sounds of sea-waves. Her silky brown hair is gently waving in the soothing, cool sea breeze.
Sayyam sees her for sometime. He can see her face from the side. There is an angelic beauty in her face due to the moonlight. But, a shadow of loneliness is prevailing in her eyes. Suddenly some flashes of her smiling face and her bright eyes comes in Sayyam’s mind. Than only he understands what he was missing for these days. It was her smile which he didn’t see for many days. He didn’t want her to cry bcz it would hurt him. That means he wanted her to smile. And now it seems to she has forget to smile only. It hurts him more.
He remembers how he ignored her only to get rid of his own guilt. He thought if he’ll ignore her, than he’ll be able come out of his guilt. But that didn’t work.
He was continuously being defeated in front of his newly found feelings for Krishna. He became unable to accept that defeat. And as a result he became frustrated on Krishna. He just couldn’t understand why did she had so much effect on him? Why does she always make him fall for her by her every action? Why does she love him despite of his wrong doings? Why is she so caring, so loving towards him?
Why? Why? Why?….there were so many Why, without any answer. And that make him more frustrated and he decides to hurt Krishna. But instead, he became more hurt seeing her tears.
He was confused that why is he being hurt seeing Krishna cry or sad bcz of him. Last night when he saw her eyes lit up as he served her, he felt relaxed. But,then also he didn’t get the answer of his ‘Why’? Than he remembers all the incidents that happened after coming here. He remembers how Krishna lied to Suhani for him, how she refused to take his help. She didn’t even took her dinner bcz of him, as he left her alone. She was always there for him but he just didn’t care for her.
But now when he saw her face, that gloomy shadow in her eyes, he at once got all his answers. All his confusion became clear. He understands that it is all bcz of him. He only tried to run away from his true feelings and in this process he has hurt her a lot. But now he decides to give her all what she wants. He’ll give her, her love.
Sayyam sees her for some more time and slowly goes near her. But Krishna was in her own world, she didn’t realize the presence of Sayyam. Sayyam stands behind her and slowly wraps his hands around her, lovingly.
Krishna feels two strong hands around her body and was snapped out of her thought. She was so shocked and tries to flinch from there. But Sayyam’s grip is so firm that she became helpless. Krishna pants heavily and slowly turns her head only to see Sayyam, looking straight, at the sea. He is resting his chin on her soldier. Krishna gets more shocked. She blinked eyes for several times to get the assurance about Sayyam’s presence in real and not a mere imagination of her mind. But soon she gets assured about his presence in real as she feels the beating of his heart against her back. Her breathing got faster and she turns her head, looking at sea.
Sayyam looks at her from the corner of his eyes and says
Sayyam: U remember Krishna…hum yahan pehli baar mile the….aur kaise hamara jhagra hua tha?…even i threw sand in ur eyes…(he pauses for sometime)…i m sorry for that.
Krishna’s eyes brims with tears. She removes Sayyam’s hands and turns to leave. But stops as she feels a pull in her wrist.
Sayyam: I m sorry Krishna…sorry for everything.. for all the difficulties i hv put u in…..for every tears u shed bcz of me…for hurting u in every step u took for our relationship to work out….i know what u expect from this relation and from me…still i didn’t….
Krishna frees her hand and cuts him off
Krishna: Sayyam… now leave all these….i hv to pack our bags….day after tomorrow….hamari flight hai na.
Her voice is heavy. She goes to leave but Sayyam comes in front of her and looks at her. He can see tears in her eyes. Sayyam holds her hand and pulls her to fall on his chest as he doesn’t want to loose this chance to make her happy for ever.
Sayyam: Mujhe ek mauka nahi dogi Krishna?….maaf nahi karogi mujhe?
Krishna could not keep her promise anymore. After all these days ignorance, when she hears Sayyam’s soothing voice towards her, she couldn’t control anymore. She bursts into tears in front of Sayyam and hugs him tightly. Sayyam immediately hugs her back.
Krishna: Kyun Sayyam…kyun…kyun karte ho tum mere saath aisa?…do u know how much it hurts me?…maine aisa kya kiya jo tum mujhe aise ignore kar rahe ho?….maine tumse aisa kya maang liya?…is it my fault that i love u?…is it my fault that i want to fill ur life with happiness…..why don’t u understand…i love u and ur ignorance pierce my heart…only bcz u wanted i agreed to act near aunty…bcz i wanted u to be happy..toh aisa kya gunah kiya maine?…i thought u’ll realize my feelings through acting…but no…instead u stopped talking with me…and after coming here…u just forget that i m also here with u…u just left me alone…
She keeps on saying her heart while sobbing badly. Sayyam listens to all her complaints, silently.
They hug for a long time. Sayyam than breaks the hug and kisses on her cheek. Krishna is shocked.
Sayyam: Sorry.
He looks at her and Krishna again hugs him. Sayyam now opens his heart to Krishna, for the first time.
Sayyam: Tumhari koi galati nahi hai…Krishna…this is all my fault…i only tried to run away from the truth…i was not ready to accept it… i started to ignore u, to avoid u, foolishly…and u were hurt bcz of me…i thought i’ll get rid of my guilt if i stay away from u…but i hurt u…i wanted u to smile…. to be happy….instead i only snatched ur smile…first i lied to myself and than to u about my feelings…i don’t know why i was so afraid to be loved…may be bcz i never got anyone’s love in my life…i didn’t know anything about this feelings…and that’s why i was scared…but i always wanted to be ur side…to be with u…but i couldn’t do it directly bcz of that fear… and stupidly enough i took the shield of acting with u…but again i failed…as that was not my acting Krishna…whatever i did that was real me…my real emotions towards u.
He tells her all about his feelings that he has gone through for a long time. He accepts his defeat in front of her.
Sayyam pauses for sometime and takes a deep breath and says
Sayyam: I Love u Krishna…i really love u.
Krishna was listening to him, silently. She is so happy now. She breaks hug and looks at him smiling.
Krishna: I Love u too Sayyam…i love u so much.
They hug each other passionately for a long time.
Everything becomes clear between them. They feel relieved in eachothers arms.
Kriyyam smiles at each other. Sayyam now smiles mischievously. He holds her tightly and leans towards her. Krishna gets the hint and moves from there.
Krishna: Sayyam…kya kar rahe ho tum?
Sayyam again goes to her and hugs her from back.
Sayyam: Krishna…tumhe bhoolne ki bimari hai kya?
Krishna looks at him angrily.
Sayyam: No…i mean if its like that…than i must remind u that we r here for our honeymoon…so u know… we can..
Krishna cuts her off
Krishna: Bhoolne ki bimari mujhe nahi…tumhe hai…tum hi bhool gaye the…that u r here with ur wife and not frnds.
She again goes from there. Sayyam follows her.
Sayyam: I said sorry for that na….
Krishna: To hell with ur sorry.
Sayyam: But Krishna i love u na…
Krishna: But i hate u…u r very bad…
Krishna argues and keeps on moving all around the room with Sayyam following her. Krishna laughs wholeheartedly as Sayyam fails to catch her. Sayyam feels so happy seeing her smile after so many days. He playfully chases her and after another round of the room Sayyam finally catches her. Krishna gets shocked and again tries to move. Sayyam holds her more tightly by her waist and leans himself backward so that they fall on the bed, with Krishna on top of him. Krishna shrieks loudly and clutches his arms. They have a cute eyelock, full of love, for a long time.
Suddenly Sayyam rolls her over the bed and and comes over her. Krishna gets more shocked. Sayyam kisses her cheeks one by one. Krishna clutches his shirt tightly. Soon his attention shifts to her rosy lips. He places his hand on her cheek and gradually leans to kiss her lips. Krishna understands his intention and blushes furiously. Sayyam touches her soft lips with his and feels a surge of heavenly feelings. Krishna feels his touch and clutches his shirt more tightly and curls her toes.
Sayyam tastes her lips deeply but gently, as if he wants to carry out all the sadness of her life and replace them with happy moments. Krishna also wants to join him but feels nervous. Sayyam continues to kiss her and Krishna couldn’t resist the temptation of tasting his lips anymore. She kisses him back, nervously. Sayyam feels the kiss. It was enough for his further encouragement. He smiles into the kiss and mumbles
Sayyam: I love u Krishna.
Soon the gentle kiss was turned into an intense liplock, full of their desire for eachother.
Few minutes passes. Krishna tries to pull out from the kiss as she needed to catch her breath. But Sayyam doesn’t leave her. After few more seconds he breaks the kiss and looks at Krishna, who was now panting heavily, closing her eyes. She slowly opens her eyes and sees Sayyam staring her intensely. She blushes. Sayyam smiles at her and
holds her dupatta to remove. Krishna gasps and hold his hand. She nods in negative. Sayyam smirks seeing her reaction. He removes her dupatta and kisses her neck at once. Krishna’s heavy breathing again starts. His hand reaches to her back and opens the zip of her salwar and caresses her bare back. Krishna slowly enjoys his touch. (Baahon ke Darmiyaan song plays in background)
Baahon ke Darmiyyan
Do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole man
Dole sun ke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan….
Sayyam carry on his intense lovemaking to his beautiful wife. Krishna reciprocates with him. They become one, but not only outwardly. They bind their souls with the thread of love, forever. In the other term, they step into the destination of their love together, for lifelong.
Next morning Kriyyam wakes up in eachothers warm embrace and smiles. They get ready and goes out. They spent beautiful time together.
Krishna keeps on irritating Sayyam with her playful antics. Sometimes she asks for ice cream or sometimes she drags Sayyam for shopping. But Sayyam doesn’t mind. He wholeheartedly accepts all her childish demands and pampers her a lot as he thinks that she deserves all these from him as he has hurt her a lot in past few days. He can even die for her one smile, he thinks.
Krishna enjoys every bit with Sayyam which were pending till now. They spend some time in sea beach. They falls in the sea while chasing eachother and gets wet. Kriyyam were so happy to see the playful side of eachother. They spend the whole day outside and comes back to the room nearly at night. They freshen up and soon Sayyam turns on his romantic mood once again. That results into an intense lovemaking session that lasts long for the whole night.
Next day they returns to BM. Everybody becomes happy. YuvAni smiles seeing Kriyyam happy together.
Time skips to one and a half year
Kriyyam is now blessed with Aayush, their cute baby boy. They live a happy life now.
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So guys, thats it. Hope u like it.
Sorry for late update guys. I had to study a lot for some tests. And then i was stuck in net problems. I couldn’t even comment in all ffs.
Actually, recently (in April) i went to Puri (Odisha) and i hv enjoyed the sea very much. Watching the sea from a distance and hearing the sound of sea- waves at night is just awesome. I just loved it. The experience is very fresh in my mind. So i just thought to pen down my sweet memories, including it as a part of life of my another love, that is obviously Kriyyam.
One more news guys…may be u all know…that both KJ and SJ are respectively in India’s 100 most handsome and beautiful faces of the year 2017….a big round of applause for them…Isn’t it a good news?….They hv to be the best…after all they r our Kriyyam…right guys?
Last but not the least, Happy Rathayatra (belated) and Eid Mubarak (belated) to all my frnds.
Ok…so enough of my blabbering now.
Again sorry for late update. Awaiting ur valuable reviews.
I’ll come soon…bye.
Yours Muniya (Moumita)
43 Comments
Aww..they care so much for each other..it was superb
Thanks Aarati Dear….
Awesome awesome awesome plz update more as der is no kriyyam in tv and over here very less Kriyyam ff plz update another 1 plz plz
Thank u Shagufta…i’ll update soon.
Really missing Kriyyam.
Wow muniya i was eagerly waiting for your os…don’t know how to praise your writting ….i was lost to your story while reading..at first felt bad for krishna…then the happy ending was awesome…sayyam can’t control himself before krishna for long..try to write another one soon…
Thank u Mithila…i’ll update soon.
I love happy ending.
By the way Kemon Achho?
Ami valo aci.asha kori tumio valo aco.tumi kokhono bd te esheco?
Yes..amio valo achhi…
And unfortunately enough 2 baar bd jaoar plan cancel hoyeche.
Very sad about that.
Wow Muniya, that was amazing! ? I am already a fan of your OSs and I enjoyed this one just as much as the previous ones. The emotions of Kriyam were described so well and the ending was so romantic. I particularly loved the balcony part. Beautifully written OS!
Thank u so much Faeeqa…
First of all i wrote the Balcony part…that’s my fav part.
Liked it Muniya!!! But I loved the ones u wrote before(plz forgive me if this hurt u)..I know u worked hard on this and that was fruitful..Loved to read an other story of Kriyyam..Pls don’t feel upset by my comment..keep smiling Dr..?
Thanks Isha…
And don’t be sorry bcz i m not at all hurt or upset…rather i like the way u gave ur opinion to my wrting…it really means a lot.
That’s the spirit?Muniya..
This was great! Poor Krishna, she tried so hard to earn his love and it paid off in the end. Really enjoyed this OS
Thank u so much Shaz…
Awesome os??
Thanks Zani dear…
Thats was soooo cute.. Muniya u are such am excellent writer.. Saiyyam was firstly rude though but later he became the lover not and naughtiness is always present in him.. Totally in love with ur writing skills.. Amazingly written Muniya.. I am a big fan of ur OSs.. Be back soon becoz I can’t wait to read more from u..
Thanks Annie dear…i m glad that u like it.
I’ll be back soon.
Love ur new ff.
Wow..Can’t decsribe how beautiful it was..U r such an excellent writer di..Krishna was well paid by the love of saiyyam for all the misery she felt in the start..Their bonding was awesome..
Thank u Tejaswi….
Post another one soon’nnn
Thanks Aman…
Will be back soon.
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Can you please give the link of all your OS
Update asap
Thanks Gargi…
I’ll be back soon.
And the links of my other os r below…(don,t know if it’ll work or not as i m sending links for the first time…and if it doesn’t work than u can go to my wall in TU and there u’ll get all the os in ‘post’ option)
So here r the links
http://www.tellyupdates.com/kriyyam-os-humsafar/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/kriyyam-os-new-journey/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/kriyyam-os-made-muniya/
Thank god the links r working…so u can read them here only.
I m so happy i hv done it for the first time and it worked…really happy.
And plz let me know ur reviews…will be waiting.
Another amazing os u know what you are queen of kriyyam os
Thanks Kriyyam fan…. Glad u like it.
I m totally flattered with ur compliment.
Aww, Muniya, this was so cute?…Sayyam was so naughty and adorable after he admitted his feelings for Krishna…loved how he went through those feelings and slowly had a change of heart…too cute Muniya, amazing writing…just beautiful??
Thank u so much Shreya…I m glad that u like it.
Wow…Muniya… That was yet another beautiful OS from you… Like always you are very good at writing the kriyam scenes.. your writing… amazing.. I’m in love with your.. OS… Waiting for your next OS…
Thank u so much Fidato…
I m happy that u like it.
Will be back soon.
By the way if u don’t mind can i know what Fidato means?
I think it’s French… meaning someone you can trust….?
Wow… So Nice to know that…
thnk u muniya this is tha best gift for me.(eid)
Thanks Sabana…ur encouragement means a lot.
Hi Muniya, i m kriyam fan and i silent reader of all kriyam ff, i never comment on any ff jst bcoz of lack of tym but today u compelled me to comment. Ur all OS are vry amazing and fabulous, ur writing and scenes demonstration work iz splendid ,u explain them vry well. jst hats off to u.Today i wnt to request u something for the nxt OS. As u know in our india monsoon season iz prevailing right now..so plz write ur nxt kriyam Os related to rainy season like their confession in rain, and also they went somewhere for outing n their confession happen their or it cn b on honeymoon also.dnt show their confession in BM and intimate scene should also near by rainy area like in a hut or resort something like garage, I hope u understand my feeling and consider my request. plz pay attention to my suggestion for ur nxt OS n plz update it asap. All the vry bst to u .
Hi Muniya, i am a huge kriyam fan and read all ff.I am a silent reader but do’t comment just bcoz of lack of time but today u compelled me to comment. Your Os are just amazing and ur writing and way of demonstrating scenes is splendid.You are doing great work.Today i wnt to request something for next os as u know in our country monsoon is prevalling so plz write next os related to something rainy season like kriyam confession in rain and also they went for some outing or honeymoon, dnt show it in BM. Their love making scenes should also near rain area like in hut or garage, some fire has been burning their. i hope u understand my feeling.plz consider my request plz .All the very best.
Thank u so much Palak dear..
So happy that u came forward…even i was a silent reader for a long time.
I like all ur ideas and i’ll try my best to fulfill ur wish.
Keep commenting in other ffs also.
I have already read all of them and also on the 1one but felt like to read them again so requested u to give me the link
And u r really good writer
Keep up the good work
Agree with palak
Post the next one in the coming week only ?
Thanks Dear….i’ll post soon.
Plzzz muniya holi specl os update for me Plzzz