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Home»Fan Fiction»Kriyyam SS- Ok Jaanu!! (Part 5) by Aaru
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Kriyyam SS- Ok Jaanu!! (Part 5) by Aaru

Aarti32By Aarti32June 13, 201710 Comments6 Mins Read
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Krishna n Saiyyam were sleeping..Saiyyam holding Krishna from her waist n their legs entangled..Saiyyam woke up, rubbing his eyes n saw Krishna sleeping next to him..She looked so innocent in her sleep..He caressed her hair n said “baby..Wake up” Krishna snuggled in her pillow n mumbled ummhm. Saiyyam sat on d bed n said “hey..U shud be snuggling into me..” n he slightly frowned. Krishna thought to tease him n said “Kyu?? Tum kaun?? Kya main tumhe janti hoon??” Saiyyam smirked n said “oh rilli!! Kal raat k baad bhi..U don’t know me!! Shud I remind u” while nuzzling on her neck.

Few days passed like dis. Krishna’s tantrums, Saiyyam’s all-time-romantic mood, their love n lots of fun. One night, Krishna had come out of d washroom after freshening up. Saiyyam was on a video call on his laptop. Krishna jst came n sat next to him n saw he was talking to his mom (Rags). Rags made a face seeing Krishna. Krishna made a straight face but faked a smile, jst for Saiyyam. Rags excitedly said “Saiyyam, main kal aa rhi hoon..Tumhare paas.” Saiyam beamed joyfully n said “rilli mom..Dats great” Rags then said “but ab to Krishna bhi tumhare ghar mein rehti h, I hope use mere aane se koi problem na ho” taunting Krishna.

Krishna sternly said “ye hum dono ka ghar h aur..” but then Saiyyam held her hand indicating her to stop. He said “Mom, Krishna no kyu problem hogi..Right Krishna” he turned towards Krishna but Krishna got up n left from there. “Mom..I’ll talk to u later..Bye!!” Saiyyam followed Krishna to d hall after shutting his laptop. He went towards her but Krishna turned to leave. Saiyyam held her arm n turned her to face him n asked “wat is all dis Krishna?? Tum aise kyu chali aayi??” Krishna replied “kyuki mujhe wahan accha nhi lag rha tha” n before Saiyyam could say anything she said “plzz..mujhe us bare mein baat nhi krni..Main sone ja rhi hoon..Waise bhi kal Jai aur Rhea k ghar bhi jaana h unki wedding preparations mein help krne” n she left without waiting for Saiyyam’s reply.

Dat night both of them slept on their sides, without even looking at each other..Their backs facing each other.

D next day, Krishna returned from office n yelled all d way from d door to d room “baby, tum mujhe lene mere office kyu nhi aaye..” but stopped when she heard Rags n Saiyyam sitting in d guest room, talking n laughing. Rags, wid a smirk on her face, said “Saiyyam mujhe lene airport aaya tha” Krishna said to Saiyyam “tum mujhe bata dete..Main wait to nhi krti office k bahar” Rags interrupted saying “I’m so sorry Saiyyam. Meri wajah se Krishna ko wait krna pada. I’m so sorry..” Saiyyam held her shoulders n made her sit n said “no mom..It’s not your fault” he turned towards Krishna n continued “n Krishna..It’s ok, itti chhoti baat pe overreact kyu kr rhi ho..” Krishna shakes her head in disbelief n said “I’m overreacting!! Great!!” n she left d room.

Saiyyam followed Krishna to their room. Rags stood outside their room, trying to hear their conversation. Saiyyam held Krishna from her arm n asked “wats wrong wid u Krish?? Y r u behaving like dis??” Krishna asked “wat did I do??” Saiyyam yelled “y r u making mom feel dat she shouldn’t hv come here!!” Krishna jerked off his hand n said sternly “I didn’t hurt her..Aur wo kuch galat nhi soch rhi” Saiyyam felt anger build up inside him. “Wat do u mean??” he asked in a raised voice. Krishna too yelled “yahi hota h har baar..Jab bhi tumhari mom aati h humara jhagda hota h..Aur unhi ki wajah se hota h” Saiyyam shouted “shut up..U can’t blame my mom..” Krishna asked him “Kyu?? Jst bcz wo tumhari mom h, to kya wo galat nhi ho sakti!!” Saiyyam gritted his teeth saying “for d last time I’m telling u..Meri mom ko blame mat kro” Krishna was not ready to listen to him. She said “no Saiyyam..Tum nhi samjhoge..Tumhari mom ye sab intentionally kr rhi h..Wo mujhe pasand nhi krti isi liye..” she stopped bcz Saiyyam slapped her on her cheek.

Krishna put her hand on her cheek n looked at Saiyyam wid shocked eyes. Tears welled up in her eyes. Her voice became heavy. She said “wow Saiyyam!! Aaj tumne prove kr diya ki main kitta galat sochti thi ki tum mujhe kisi aur k liye hurt nhi kroge..” Saiyyam said loudly “mom h wo meri..” Krishna too shouted “rilli..Aur main kaun hoon tumhare liye?? Who m I to u Saiyyam??” Saiyyam said wid a straight face “koi nhi” Krishna looked at him shocked. He continued “agar tum meri mom ki respect nhi kr sakti, to tum mere liye koi nhi ho” Krishna moved backwards saying “wow..Dis is wat I get in return of my love..” Saiyyam turned his face d other side. “I can’t live here anymore..” said Krishna n she immediately started packing her bags.

Krishna immediately left d house. She went outside d building, when Rhea called her. She answered d call. Rhea said “hello Krishna..Tum aur Saiyyam kab pohoch rhe ho??” Krishna took a deep breathe n said “I’m coming” n she cut d call. She took a rickshaw n left for Jai n Rhea’s house.

Saiyyam was still boiling in anger. He threw his phone in anger. Rags came to him n pretended to be great. She said “y did u do dis..U love her..I don’t hv any problem wid her..Bring her back to your life” Saiyyam said “no mom..If she can’t respect u, then she has no place in my life..N I don’t want to talk abt it anymore” His phone rang n Jai’s name flashed on d screen. Saiyyam picked up d call n said “I’m sorry Bhai..Main bas thodi der mein aa rha hoon.” He cut d call n left for Jai n Rhea’s house after informing Rags.

Krishna reached Jai n Rhea’s house n ringed d doorbell. Rhea opened d door. Krishna tried to smile. Rhea called her inside. Jai came n greeted Krishna. Rhea noticed something n asked “Krishna.. Tumhare gaal ko kya hua?? Itta laal kyu lag rha h??” Krishna tried to hide her cheek wid her hair n “kuch nhi hua..” she stuttered. Rhea held her hand n moved back her hair n said “jhoot mat bolo Krishna..batao kya hua” Krishna couldn’t control her tears anymore n she told everything to Jai n Rhea.

Before they could say anything, they heard d door bell ring. Jai opened d door n saw Saiyyam standing at d door.

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    10 Comments

    1. shabnam on June 13, 2017 3:43 pm

      Super amazing

      • Aarti32 on June 13, 2017 7:09 pm

        Thanx shabnam?

    2. yura on June 13, 2017 6:24 pm

      I’ve already read all parts in india forums. Very nice and emotional episode. Waiting for next update. Update ASAP

      • Aarti32 on June 13, 2017 9:17 pm

        Oh..still U’re waiting..it means a lot..thank you so much yura

    3. Aman on June 13, 2017 7:33 pm

      Update son!!! Loved ot

      • Aarti32 on June 13, 2017 9:27 pm

        Thanx Aman..I’ve already submitted d last part..it’ll be up soon

    4. Shagufta Farid on June 13, 2017 7:55 pm

      Plz post d next part soon plzzzzz

      • Aarti32 on June 13, 2017 9:29 pm

        Thank u for commenting, Shagufta..I’ve submitted d last part..it’ll be posted soon

    5. fenil on June 14, 2017 3:44 pm

      Fantastically written whole plot.

      • Aarti32 on June 14, 2017 8:20 pm

        Thank u Bhai..

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