Hey guys!! I’m new to u all. I really luv Kuch Rang Pyaar Ke Aise Bhi n devakshi.. Both Shaheer n Erica look so good 2gethr. I’m writing an ff on our fav couple devakshi. The characters are all the same n the story starts from the party of the minister (the recent track of the show).
Bose House
Dev drops sona home n as soon as sona enters her house her mom asks her….
Aasha(sona’s mom):where did u go wearing such a gorgeous dress,while leaving in the morning, u were wearing something else r8!!
Bijoy(sona’s dad):aasha,she has jst now entered d house n u startd your investigation.. Let her sleep,(looking at sona)go beta u rest.
Sona:Ty baba..gn maa n baba.
Next day morning
Sona was getting ready n was about to go to the breakfast table,when her mom called her..
Aasha: (in a loud tone)SHONA…SHONA…CUM DOWN FAST…
S:ki holo maa (wat happnd maa)..(she cums downstairs).. Y r u luking so tensed??
A: (pointing at the TV) wat is all dis..u were partying wid dat Dev dixit yesterday night..u were dancing wid him.. Y??
S:maa..I went wid him bcz his mom was also going wid him n I had 2 take care of her deit n make sure she does not eat anything unhealthy..
A:sona y does he not understand dat u hv a personal life too..Mrs Roy is spreading rumors dat u r dating him..n u could hv refused 2 go 2 d party after your work hrs..
S:maa I don’t care abt Mrs Roy..I wnt 2 knw wat u think..
A:I don’t know anything..u resign from his job
S: (she starts sobbing)maa do u trust me?
A: shona plzz..I’m tired of all dis..dat man won’t let u marry your whole life..(She goes 2 her room angrily n leaving behind a crying sona)
Sona is extremely angry on Dev n leaves 4 his house immediately..
Dixit House
Sona comes n asks Kicchu Bhaiya abt Dev
S: Kicchu Bhaiya.. where’s Mr Dixit??
K: didi he left early 4 his office n will come home late night.
Sona thinks 2day I hv 2 clr dis matter.even if he comes home at 2am 2day I’ll hv 2 solve dis matter.
Its 12:30 at night..Aasha calls sona n asks her y is she so late..sona tells her dat she will sort out evrythng today itself..
Dev reaches home..he asks sona y is she here till now
Dev: Miss Bose..u here..now?? Its 12:30..y didn’t u go home??
Sona:2 u I’m doctor Bose.. N I m here to confront u abt your problem..
Dev: (shocked)wat??my problem!?
The screen freezes at his shocked face n sona’s angry face..
PRECAP:Sona aks Dev in a loud tone dat wats his problem.its bcz of him dat her mom does not trust her.she starts crying.
Ty evryone 4 reading the epi..hope u all liked it..plzz do comment n tell me whether u want Mr 2 continue or not..
19 Comments
Supr continue
Oye i too love this pair n serial plzz continue yaar n like d ff too
Awesome start….. Waiting for next update
Nice update we are true lover of devaksi
siper……………….carry on ,, eagerly waiting for nxt.
nice, please continue
finaaly this show has one ff……but vishkanya have 4 fan fiction and ek duje ke vaste have 2 ff
superb pls continue
http://poll.fm/5l21y vote for dev and I loved ur ff just continue…. I love devna
Nice. Please continue
Its really a beautiful ff. Plsssss continue
Amar kub valo legese tumar ff.Really it was just an awesome eppisode.keep it up.I’m waiting for you’r next eppisodes.
Yeh sab kaunse episode mein hua hai ?
pls continue it was superb
Nice dude!!
so nyc 2 read d 1st ff of devakshi . Realy arti u’ve done a great job yaar i luv ur ff keep goin’ & add some more romance yaar n guys i’m waiting for today’s epi coz some cosy moments gonna take place in krpkab….n arti witing eagerly 4 ur nxt ff
nice one
Todays epi was superb ! Gripping and 30 mins just flew away! Dev Sona ‘s close and funny moments and their nokjhok was absolutrly adorable.It was very well balanced with the interaction between Sourav and Sona’s father and most importantly the bond that prevails in that family! Nehas stiffness slowly being broken and the best part was the challenge thrown by Sona to our Mr Cool (Dev)! Just keep it up this way KRPAB team
When wil u post the next part? Please continue…………….