Hi guys, I’m Rithika here,
and since I got time I’m continuing the FF. And the charecter I wrote about Ishwari cz she’s not possesive she loves her child more
Let’s start
Dev a 28 year old man who’s dream of giving his mother luxury has come true and today he’s gifting her a house.
Ishwari : Dev, why have u tied a cloth on my eyes.
Dev : ma, It’s a surprise. Wait just a little longer.
They finally reach a beautiful mansion bought by Dev. It was also near a temple that’s why Dev bought that house.
Ishwari : Where r we?
Dev : this is our new home. And also speacially for you so come inside.
Ishwari : thank u beta i loved it.
Suddenly Ishwari faints
Dev : ma kya hua, Neha, Kichu somebody call the ambulance..
Neha : what happend brother, omg what happend to ma
Dev : I dont know she suddenly fainted..
Neha : wail I’ll call the ambulance
~In the hospital~
Doctor : Dev, your mother’s health is down she needs a proper diet.. And she needs a nutritionist.
Dev : But where do I find a good nutritionist cz I like everything best for my mom.
Doctor : We have a delhi’s number 1 nutritionist. Her name is Doctor Sonakshi Bose
Precap :: Sonakshi’s entry
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So this was the first ff. Hope u all like it. Now I’ll post the next episod will be posted maybe next week or on 1st october
so thanks for reading. And sorry for the delay
And post the comments please…..?
12 Comments
Good one Rithika ?Waiting for sona’s entry ?
Nice start rithika..and excepting next episode long..i also like your title..
Interesting post soon exiciteddddddddd
Nice episode waiting for next one
its not long cz of my exams and the fact i only get 30 min for writing but from 28th sept it will be long
Awesome episode.. waiting for Sona’s entry..
Rhitika…….it’s an awesome start ?❤️??. Short update but update long next time and waiting for sona entry ??
nice episode but it is very short..wating for sona’s entry
Nice
nce start:) exited to the nxtepi:)
Nice start 🙂
thanks guys for all ur beautiful comments:):)