Hi guys ayushi here?just thought to write a small Devakshi ff it will be few shots only so here goes the intro and storyline
Do read and comment ?
Dev Dixit:He is in 2nd year of college and is not an Obhodro in my ff?He is the best friend of Sona since childhood ?He is a fun loving boy and is unaware that he loves Sona ?
Sonakshi Bose:she is in the 2nd year of clg with Dev.She is her bff since childhood.She loves her parents a lot,she likes to play pranks especially on Dev ?and she is too unaware that she loves Dev ?
Friends of Dev and Sona
Rohan: he is the friend of devakshi but secretly loves Sona,Dev becomes jealous when he sees him with Sona so he always fights with him ?
Elena:Friend of devakshi and girlfriend of Vicky.In my ff she will help Dev and Sona to relaise their love for each other so u can call her a love hero
Vicky:friend of devakshi and boyfriend if elena,he will also help devakshi to realise their love for each other so he is also a love hero
There will be no role of parents as such?bcoz I hate Pisswari ?
The story will basically revolve around Devakshi who are friends since childhood but love each other and are unaware a lil bit of jealousy track will also come ??and yeah college life masti too
So guys did u like the intro and storyline ?actually I just thought ki agar devakshi college mein hote toh kitna fun hota Na??
So depending upon ur comments I will start it ?so do comment and plzzzz feel free to give any suggestion?
Positive and negative comments both are welcomed
Criticism is most welcomed
Guys do comment ?plzzzz
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Do comment guys plzzzzz bcoz according to that only I will start my ff ?
Bye guys ??
42 Comments
Nice intro plzz, start the story… ?
Thanks princess?
Awesomeee
Pls continue
Thanks?
Hai manya..loved to see devakshi in cute college love story..and i like the line ‘i hate piswari’…so excited to read it.
Thanks a lot Sakthi?And that line is from the core of my ❤️?
Plzzzz jaldi updates bhejo??????
Sure Himashi??
Wow!!! I really like reading stories that take place in college, I guess that is why I write one like that too… Thank god someone thinks the same way I do!! But seriously awesome, looking forward to it!!!
Thanks Avni and I too like stories which take place in clg??
Hii every1 I’m a silent reader of krpkab ff…!!?and ayushi di ur storyline seems really interesting ..!!
Waiting forward fr it….
And one request…..wil u give eng subtitles …if u write in Hindi..?!! Pls…??
Thanks for commenting?Ya I will surely give subtitles and plzzz I am just 14 so no dii ?
Hi ayushi
Wow intro seems quite interesting
I didn’t like ur intro I loved ur into
Vicky love hero (?)
Waiting for your next part
Waiting for clg masti
Thanks dhira??
Nice idea..start it asap..
Thanks Aarti Di?
Awesome…
❤❤
Thanks❤️
Cul…clg lyf and devakshi together…it vl b damm interesting and even jealously whch is act. d best part…waiting fr frst episode…
Post soon…
Thanks ??
amazing ayushi ..start ASAP …
luved it …post soon
Thankyou ?
Ayushi…it’s nice to hear from u ????☺️☺️??????…….awesome storyline and intro and ??????☺️?????? Lou’s of love……
Thanks maleeha ?
Lots of love to u too❤️???????❣
nice continue
Thanks maha?
Go ahead…..
Good luck…
I just wanting to know ki howz sona’s look in ur story,, i mean her dressing sense in all that….
hope u will mention this in next promo or ur 1st episode…. 🙂
Of course Di?
Thanks Di?
Yeh swt heart (??♥♥♥) sorry for late rply (???) aur what a concept dear??????????? i love to c devakshi ki college so continue soon nd i loved that their is no ishwari at all. So post soon swt heart ???????????????????. I’m exiciteddddddddd nd equally eager to know…..
With lots of love
Urs Eri di ???????
Thanks a lot eri di??❤️
Wow.. Story.. Diff from real one… Nice .. Start it.. But update a long epi .. All the best ayushi…
Thankyou ?
Nice intro… Keep it up… waiting for 1st episode 🙂
Thanks bhoomi??
Hi Manya, ur intro is super,i think it will be interesting and i love hear that there is no ishwari here …. thank you
Please start ur writings and keep writing my frnd. All the best
Thanks a lot ??
Gud job Ayushi…
Thanks?
Nze intro ?.plz jaldi sa nxt epi Ko post karoo ??????
Thanks nikki epi 1is already posted dear?