Hello guys here I am back again thanks to all the ones who commented on intro love u all missed u all too …
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Episode 1 …
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The episode starts with a new morning sunrise with brids chirping welcoming the new day screen shifts to a house it was not a lavish house but cute house a lady was shown shouting …
L : what is this usha u are not ready yet and where is monu …
U : maa he went to walk with bau g …
(So the lady was sakshi kunj gm and his mother usha …)
S : now go and get ready tanejas are coming today …
U : ok maa and she left from there ..
after sometime manohar with raj (kunj grand father) comes there …
R : sakshi is everthing ready … After all I am going to meet my best friend kuber after a long time ..
s : yes g …hai na usha ..
u : g maa …
Suddenly they heard car horn and headed outside ….
Their kuber and his family was standing and sarnas comes there and smiles kuber and Raj hugs each other while others too meet with ..
K :after so many years we are together Raj …
R : yeah let’s go and have tea from. Our favourite stall what say ..
K : okay …
Raj and kuber left asha and sakhshi went to room and manohar and RT went to play chess and usha leela looks on for kids …
L : kabir abeer where u are going ???
K & a : we are going to play mumma
L : but ….
U : leela let them go yuvi and others are there beta u go … But leela where is twinkle …
Then they heard the shouting of children’s fighting the screams were like this huh I’ll not leave u …Even I’ll not leave u rat ….
Leela n usha looks at each other n says not again ….
They went to the direction and found two cute children’s fighting which was none other Dan twinj …
Twinkle is pulling kunj hairs and kunj was pulling her cheeks …
T : how dare u called me rat u monkey
K : huh u are rat only and what u called me monkey ruk I’ll not leave u now ..
T : haww rukk I’ll show u now and she pulls his hairs more hard …
K : ouch u rat …
Leela n usha comes there and pulls twinj ….
T : maa leave me I’ll not leave him now
L : twinkle stay quiet beta I told u nah not to fight …
U : kunj what is this haa u are a grown up kid now say sorry to twinkle …
K : no I’ll not say sorry to her this rat only started this fight …
T : he again called me rat ruk monkey
L : shh twinkle …
U : kunj say sorry …
K : par mumma …
U : kunjjj ..
Kunj stares at twinkle angrily and says sorry …
T : huh maaf kiya and makes faces ..
L : twinkle u too say sorry …
Kunj laughs silently while twinkle says sorry to him …
Leela and usha left from there and twinj looks at eo …
T : if u call me rat again then see what I’ll do …Showing her index finger ..
K : huh u silly rat u can do anything this is my house and makes his collar up ..
T : huh we will see dat …
K : go now …
T : my wish I’ll stay here …
K : then I am going he left to go he turns but twinkle pushes him and he falls on floor …
T : I told u not to call me rat and smirks while kabir comes there and makes kunj stand …
Kab : twinkle what is this ???
Abr : now don’t start kabir twinkle come with me …
T : okay Bhai …
Twinkle left with abeer while kunj and kabir hugs and talked to eo ..
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@ night …
Kuber Raj and others were sitting in the lawn and having their dinner …
Asha : I am soo happy we are all together after so many days ..
Sak : yeah asha we are childhood friends now we are grandparents …
R : don’t know until how many days we will live …
K : yeah I always wanted dat our friendship turns into relation but … Shanti was elder to ram … So we could not get them married …
All laughs and Raj says yeah I also wanted that our friendship turns into relation one day …
Sak : this can happen now also …
R : how ????
Sakshi points towards the direction and they all look at it …
There twinkle was giving kunj bandage
Ku ; yeah twinkle and kunj they both look so cute together …
Twinkle offers bandage to kunj and he denies taking it …
T : don’t think I am helping u huh u got injured coz I pushed u and I don’t want to hurt anyone u can take it ..
K : huh I don’t want it anything rat ..
T : huh u again call me rat .. hate u monkey ..
K : hate u even more rat …
Twinkle throws bandage on him and they again stare at each other
R : kuber u are thinking the same what I am thinking …
K : yeah Raj they both smiles ..
Man : papa what happen Raj uncle ???
RT : ha bau g what happen …
R : kuber will u give ur granddaughter hand to my grandson and take our friendship ahead …
K : yeah they both smile and joins their hand while ushar leela and RT were shocked and sakshi and asha too was smiling …
Man : but papa they are kids ..
R : monu we are not telling to get them married now only when they have grown up will u fulfill ur parents wish ..
Manohar and RT looks at each other then hugs all smiles …
K & R : even if we die u had to fulfill our wish …
U : lets have sweets …
Raj calls for kunj and kuber for twinkle and they comes there …
R : kunj …
K : g dadu ..
R : I want something from u ..
Ku : twinkle I too want something from u ….
Twinj : yes say ???
R & K : will u marry kunj/ twinkle ..
Twinj looks at each other shocked and thinks I’ll never marry this rat/monkey
They denied and went to play while the elder smiles looking at their cute children’s ….
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Twinkle was standing near swing kunj too comes there and looks at twinkle .
T : u came here also monkey ..
K : huh rat this is my house I can roam anywhere …
T : huh u monkey get in your mind I’ll never marry u and shows tongue ..
K : huh even I’ll not marry u …
They both angrily stares each other …
Screen freezes….
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So here I ends the first episode
So how was the epi???
Hope u all liked it …
Plz plz comment guys …
Suggestions needed : I should take leap in next epi or show twinj childhood somemore ???
Babyee need to leave now ..
Love u all …
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Sameera
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17 Comments
It was too cute yaar
Loved their bond
Do continue
Hey Sameera
I really enjoyed the first part
Twinj are proper cute
Post soon
Loads of love
Hey Sam it was fabulous especially twinj they were beyond cute and that rat money talk of twinj.
Hhahahaahaa sameera dii… 🙂
Dey were too cute I was laughing n still laughing wen dey were fighting like anything n pullinh eo hair n cheeks aewiieee were looking soo cute….
Loved d episo De e of our rat n monkey….♥♡♥
Too cute adorable di….ur wish I donno wat u gonna show maybe one more fight hehehe dey r too cute….how many years old dey were dii…m still imagining them out of aww soo cute…
Lods of love dii post soon…. 🙂 🙂
Awww!! Its sooo cute❤️❤️❤️❤️Lovely loved it. Amazing
Post soon??
Amazing awesome funny cute epi…loved it
Heyy sameera….
It was aoo cute….
Our twinj were fighting???….
Loved it dear….
Post soon…
Love uh❤❤❤❤❤❤??????
hey sam awesome just loved it yaar…
lovely update..
love u …
post soon
Awesome episode ❤???
Awesome Sam
Amazing start
Dry r fights r so cute
N der names rather n monkey
Was alos cute
Love u keep smiling
Aww … sos weet bachpan meh bhi itna tashan just awesome …. Loved it 🙂
Grandparents na hote tho Twinj ka kya hota ?
Loved it … and I want to see more of their cute fights so don’t take a leep so soon 🙂
Love you 🙂 Post soon 🙂
tooo..good..cute
Sam this mini twinj are just so cute and adorable ???…I was smiling all d way down the epi rat nd monkey??….nd pls nxt epi mein bhi childhood….plsssss
Loads of love….continue asap
Wow sameera superb yrr… Loved twinj fight….. Show more twinj childhood fights dont take leap so soon……
Awesome sameera I missed you a lot yaar and sorry for the late comment continue soon
Haye?can’t stop laughing??TWINJ were so cute n adorable☺☺loved them❤❤n what cute name’s they gave eachother ??Rat n Monkey??uff abhi bhi hassi arahi hai??
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Post next one episode soon??
Awwwwwwwwww ssooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeee adorable Twinj as chotuu baachas…. Twinj scenes were amazing lovely Sam yrr….Twinj were looking soo cute and lovely fighting together KUNJ pulling tw cheeks and tw pulling KUNJ hair and calling each other rat and monkey…aking sorry from each other by insistence of their mothers….Tw offering KUNJ bandage and KUNJ refusing it… That swing Wala part was awsm…Plz show more Twinj cute childhood scenes at least 2 / 3 more episodes…I really loved it..Such an amazing superb Start….
Post next one soon whenever you get time….
If u don’t mind
Can you please tell me name of ur previous FF so that I can read it…I would really love reading it…
Loveee uuu????