Hello guys how are u all ??? Here i am back early this time right ??..
So thanks to all the members for their lovely comments …
Shall we begin ?????
And aamna ok I’ll add the track for u babes enjoy …
Recap : twinj fun and tanejas and sarnas decided to go for picnic
Episode 23 ..
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The episode starts with everyone packing their stuffs full on excited for the trip as after mibir wedding they hadn’t gone to any place …
Twinkle was in her room packing her necessary stuffs when kunj pings her …
K : don’t forget to pack shawl as there is cold there (i know guys summer me cold but Kya Karu ff hai ????)
Twinkle smiles reading the message and replies ok Mr sarna …
Kunj too smiles and packed his stuffed soon everyone’s packing done …
Kabir comes n tells everyone to come as everything is done now …And they are leaving at 4am as their farm house is far away so they need to left early …
(They are going by cars as bus was not arranged so early )
Everyone came out and was very excited
RT leela Manohar babee usha left in one car …Mibir mehbeer left in other and twinj n yuhi in one …
(Note : Mr n Mrs kapoor stays mostly abroad as their business was there and meher and mahi stays here to complete their studies)
Twinj smiles at each other and yuvi and kunj sat in the front and twihi at back ..
K (murmurs) : huh yuvi sat beside me huh ..
Y : Bhai u said something ????
K : no no …
Twinkle started enjoying while mahi was asleep and she rested …
Kunj was peeking through mirror what twinkle is doing …And notices that twinkle is looking at him too they both smiles …
Y(yawing) : i am too asleep ..
T : if i want u can exchange seat with me ???
Kunj smiles broadly while yuvi says no it’s fine his smile fades away …
T : ok fine …
(Piya o re piya in the BG ……..)
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After sometime they all stopped at near by dhaba to have their breakfast it was an awesome view sunrise with cool breeze all had their breakfast enjoying
Twinkle had her bf and was standing near car looking at the view kunj sees her n went near her he took his jacket from car and put it on twinkle shoulder while she looks at him and he looks back n gets mesmerised seeing her hairs flying …
T : thank u soo much kunj ..
K : welcome n smiles …
There were awkward silence they both didn’t knew how to continue their convo further …
T : it’s so cool view nah kunj ..
K : yess it is …
T : i always wanted like this weather standing in the arms of person I love she speaks not being in her senses …
K : what really ????
T : i mean no …Mean yes ..
K : oh come on don’t blush now ?..
T : yes i always wanted that ..
K(thinks) : Siyappa queen ek baar izhar e muhabbat to karde fir ek moment Kya poori romantic book bana dunga n says okay ..I’ll just come in a minute …
T : okay …
Kunj comes back with two cups in his hands …And have one to twinkle ..
K : coffee …
T : yeah …
They had their coffee again stealing glances of each other n then all left …
Now this time twinj sat beside each other and yuhi behind …
Kunj kabir bet each other that they will reach first …
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They are overtaking each other sometimes kunj sometimes abeer all were having fun to see them ..
Twinj and mibir car was beside eo …And abeer was driving it …
When twinkle says …
T : Bhai u will not win …
Ab : huh we will see that ..
T : kunj drive fast…
K : ok n he raises the speed …
After lot of racing finally twinj reached first them mehbeer and then elders ..
T : haha i said na we will reach first ..
Ab : huh twinki …I lost only for u thinking u will cry if i loose …
T : haahha u can say this only huh ..
K : hàhahah now will u both stop flighting …
Meh : yess …
Y : haha abeer Bhai Twinkle stop fighting ur to be life partners are getting irritated
All laughs and kunj and meher passed a death glare to yuvi ….
U : now stop all this everyone go n get freshen up …
They all went inside and saw it uncleaned…
Man: what the i told ramu Kaka to clean the house …
RT : now what to do …
They see all the dirt cutrains on sofas ..
T : we will clean it …
RT : but princess …
T :papa everyone is here and it will be fun too …
K ; yeah dad ..
Man : if u guys want then it’s okay …
All join their hands and took brooms and wiper for cleaning …
Yuvi was standing charging his phone when kunj comes to him ..
K : yuvi sun nah …
Y : ha Bhai ..
K : i wanna give u something ..
Y : what Bhai he forwards his hand ..
Kunj handover him broom and ask him to clean spider wed..
All laughs while yuvi pouts ….
Kab : maa papa u all go outside we will clean it ..
K : yess maa ..
L : but puttar ..
T : no but vut maa ..
Suddenly they heard song and look over the direction and saw yuvi and twinkle attaching speakers …
(Aye dil Laya hai bahar apno Ka pyaar plays in BG …..)
They again started working removing curtains from sofas cleaning all the mess and kunj sees his and twinkle gp pic and smiles …
Twinkle see that direction and gets teard eye it was on wall full pics with twinj childhood pics too she touches it and looks at kunj while he says ..
K : rat ..
T : huh hate u …
She started running behind kunj asking how dare he is calling her rat …
K : u are rat and u will be rat only ..
T : and u are monkey ..
Suddenly they got slipped and rolled in curtain and falls on the couch with twinkle on top of kunj ..
Yuvi sees them n coughs in order to gain their attention …
Ab : wow sooo nice ..
Meh : yeah cleaning is also romantic i didn’t knew …
Twinj gets embrassed and got up with much difficulty ..
After 2 hours of teasing eo and working finally the mess cleared …
All the elders came in and look at it ..
L : i must say u all had done it excellent
U : yeah i think we should fire our house servants ..
RT : yeah i think sooo too …
All together : nooo n they look at eo and laughs …
U : now u all go n get freshen up we will prepare lunch ..
T : ok and they all left …
After sometime all gets freshen up and came down while leela usha Misha meher was setting the table ..
Twinj came there and looks at eo …
They all are going to have their lunch when they heard a voice …
V : u all forgot me …
Their gaze shifts to that voice kunj eyes got shine seeing her while twinkle gets irritated …
She comes running and hugs Kunj tightly while twinkle fumes seeing them …
Screen freezes…
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So how was the episode guys ..
Hàhahah i know u all must be thinking who is she ???
Wait for it …
Next episode speed is directly proportional to the number of comments (bhtt din se nahi dhamkaya na??)
Ba byeeee love u all …
21 Comments
Haye Babes?
Thank u so much for full filling my wish???
Jealous Twinkle would be so much fun to watch??
Episode was lovely???
TWINJ ka Romance n Their Fun was just a Bliss to watch???
Just loved the Episode❤❤❤
Haye can’t wait for next episode ??
I am so Excited yaar??
Jealous Twinkle ???
Can’t wait Yaar???
Post soon☺☺love u?????
Hey samy..
I m the first one to comment…
Yaar it was so sweet…
Loved it…
Yuvi is a ??
Twinj were aww!??
Love u…???
It always great to read your ff and twinj moment was cute I like how kunj make uv do work ??? smart kunj now the real fun will began as jealous twinke ??? can’t wait to read next part donpost asap.
Awesome amazing Superb episode
Like srsly bechara kunj
Uv ne piche gaya hi naahi
N vo moment jab twinkle said I want to be in d hands of my loved one
N kuunj thought of romantic book
It was llike????????
Loved it alot
Amazing awesome superb
Love u keep smiling
Awesome
Loved it
Superb episode?????
Twinj romance was awesome
Loved it
dude you are fantastic how can you write so well
on going track is just awesome hope fully twinkle realizes her feelings
Yrrr it was awesome….❤❤?❤?❤❤
Sameera…
The epi was awesome..amazing…
Lovedd it soo much…???
Love u..post soon
Awesome episode Sam I loved it and sorry for not commenting on your previous episodes as I was busy and try posting soon ❤❤❤❤
Offo superb episode post soon plz I can’t wait ❤️❤️❤️???❤️
Hey di.This is my second comment on anyone’s ff and I love ur ff di.i am happy that I have given my first two comments on my most favourite writers that is you and aamna di.i love both ur ff’s so much.episode was lovely di.jealous twinkle.post soon di
Awesome???
it was too cute…
I loved it?….
Well i always wait for your ff….
Post next soon☺☺
Loved it awesome … Too good I loved the cleaning part the car part … I mean to say everything … I feel the new entry is a female … Twinkle is jealous …
Love you post soon 🙂
I really enjoyed it
I can’t wait to see a jealous Twinkle
post soon
Amazing awesome fabulous fantastic funny epi
Hey sam
Firstly am sry for not cmting was busy. Ok the epi was a blast just amazing awesome fab mindblowing.Loved it to the core.
Jealous twinkle god it’s fun to read
Hopefully twinkle realizes her feeling
Post soon
Can’t wait
Cute romantic funny epi…..Loved it
Continue asap
hhahahaaaaa……..☺
sam yeh kon aagyi hamari kunj ko hug kiya……..
or humari twinki ko jealous………..♥
uffff………..hahhahaaa cant wait……♥
well it was jst tooo cute….too adorable too sweet episode………♥♥♥♥♥
loved it……..d way dey cared d way kunj is….n twinkle n kunj n all cleaning d house………
hahahahaaa amazing speechless………..♥beautiful n cant wait………♥
plssssss post nxt asap n obvio mee………I want century……….n obvio u needa make a century…………♥♥♥♥♥
love u sooooooooooooo mch……♥
plssss plssss post nxt asap cant w8……♥
loved it…………♥♥
Awesome ! Post next soon darling ! Good luck for next episode! Plz post next episode soon
Hey.. please update soon … you really write awesome