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Kuch iss tarah 2 (Episode 4) (at fault)

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Kuch iss tarah 2

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Episode 3

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Recap : swara jump off running car… Sumi n shekhar left for Kolkata

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Swara’s pov

It was night.. Suddenly my sleep got disturbed.. Some noise was coming from ragini’s room.. I peep in her room.. For my shock she was crying holding our childhood pic… Probably our one n only pic… Tears welled in my eyes.. I just want to engulf her in a bone crushing hug… But no.. Why should I care for her… She never cared for me… So I left… I sat on bed n recall that incident cz of which she taunts me daily…

Ok I agree that was my plan to come back… But as I said I can’t help it when m in anger… 5 years back.. When mom n dad bought me back… Or rather I force them to take me back… But I am still paying for that one step…
Avni my best friend.. I met her when we both were 5…We both were only Indian in that hostel of Singapore… She was also staying with me n luckily she was my roommate… We both were in hostel but there was huge difference in our lives.. Avni’s parents n grand parents use to talk to her daily.. At least for couple of hours… We were not supposed to talk on phone after 8 but Avni’s papa took a special permission only to talk her at 9… Cz he came late from office he was an ias officer .. Ahh leave this..
Ya so.. After our 10th Exams Avni’s parents shifted to India..

Now I want to come back at any cost.. I can’t live without her… I pleaded mom n dad alot but all in vain.. They were not ready to take me back.. Then one day I had a heating argument with them.. N I took the drastic step…

I was very angry.. I was fuming with anger so I convert my feelings into literal action… I set fire to my room… Yes I did that.. But in the whole scenario I got stuck in the room…

Soon I felt like choaking.. Somehow the warden n security guard took me out n admitted me to hospital.. After that incident the skul resticates me… N specially mention on my certificate that I can’t get admitted to any other hostel.. Cz itz risky.. Lol.. I don’t care.. N bingo mom n dad hv to take me back.. But cz of that incident I got allergy from these smoke n all.. Basically co2 got filled in my lungs n made them week… But whatever I came back.. Is the only thing which matters to me…

After coming back as I was week.. Mom n dad started to pay attention to me.. N that ragini starts to get jealous of me…

Urrrghh my head.. I mean mere thinking about that girl my head starts to pain..

*** Swara’s pov end ***

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Poor swara!!!! Now itz time for ragini

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***ragini’s pov***

I cried… Cried n cried… It hurts to see my little sister like this.. But I can’t do anything.. She is uncontrollable… I still remember when we were young n mom n dad use to pay attention to her only.. They keep on scolding me..

“ragini she is younger to u.. U shld know how to behave”

This was their pen dialogue.. I use to listen this dialogue atleast twice every hour…

Ok I agree I am elder to her but only a year… If that time she was 4 I was 5… I wasn’t ‘big’ enough but no.. Cz of her I was categorized as big… Still I use to luv her alot.. Afterall she was my lill sissy…

I still remember that day when mom n dad decides to send her to hostel.. I was sad as well as happy.. Cz now I can hv their full attention but also sad cz swara was going away..

And yes It worked… Mom n dad starts to pay attention to me.. But that swara can’t tolerate my happiness… That was my first solo stage performance… I was in 11th standard…

Mom n dad were about to watch my performance for the first time… This wasn’t my first performance but mom n dad never had tym for that.. N this tym too they were coming to my skul as they were the chief guest…

Yes they were coming cz they were guest not for their own daughter… But still I was happy atlest they will see me performing.. But swara had done that fire scene n mom n dad left…

Then she came back n destroyed my life.. She snatched mom n dad’s attention from

From me she even snach my boyfriend… That girl made him her best friend… N laksh too care for her more than he care for me…

She says that I always spend my b’day with mom n dad…
Agreed! But she doesn’t even know that mom n dad use to wish me in late night… Sometimes they wish me next day.. If this is b’day Celebration then indeed I hv CELEBRATED my each n every b’day with them…

She can’t understand what it feels when ur parents are physically present here but not mentally… I still remember my 12th b’day
I was waiting for dad to come downstairs so that I can cut cake but dad didn’t come… Yes he didn’t…

My friends were making fun of me

“look ragini’s papa doesn’t come.. For cake cutting ”

” I think her dad doesn’t love her at all”

These were the piercing comments which I faced.. It was so embarrassing n humiliating for me… She can’t understand…

I don’t know when exactly I fall asleep thinking about that…

It was morning… I came downstairs and saw attention seeking playing her tactics…

“swara beta just one bite.. That’s it.. ” sujata aunty tried to feed her

” no aunty m full” she said..
Urrrghh bl**dy attention seeker… Soon aunty left… Swara n laksh alone..

I fetch a chair for myself for sitting beside laksh.. Swara was sitting on other side…. Basically he was sitting in between us…

As soon as i sat.. Swara stand up n was about to left… But lucky held her hand

“not today swara” he said
I was wondering what he wants to do.. He pull her n make her sit.. I thought I shld leave cz I can’t tolerate her…. So I was about to stand up but he said “not now ragini… Don’t go”

I quietly follow his order.. He sat infront of us n held our hand in his either hand.. N say”swara ragini.. U both are my life.. U both means alot to me.. Do u guys hv an idea how it feels to see u both fighting… No.. U both are selfish… Just tell me one thing… Do you guys ever think about me.. ”

I bow down my head as I know he was right…

” m giving you.. A month to patch up.. If u guys can’t patch up then… Get ready for worst consequences… “he said with determination

” what will you do”swara ask

“I will cut all my ties with you both”he said n he left..

Me n swara were shocked…

****ragini’s pov end ****

So guys now tell me.. Who is at fault… Swara!!!??? Ragini!!??? Or their parents???!!!

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  2. stoneheart on

    actually no one is at fault and also everyone is at fault …irony of the situation being that they have everything and still they have nothing… I guess that’s how life has become now…
    I can totally understand swara..
    u really struck a chord today meher .. really beautiful writing..
    loved it and love u..
    ( sorry got way too emotional )

    • Meher on

      I totally agree with you… That’s y I hv written that this tym itz all about harsh reality… In nuclear family… If both parents are working children suffers alot…

      Thnk god.. Inspite of living in nuclear family with working parents I hvnt faced such situations.. Bt I hv seen others facing this

    • stoneheart on

      you are really an awesome person meher.. and I would love ur views on humrahi..

  7. chaitali on

    Obviously their parents…both of the girls felt jealous of each other because of them…swara was spoilt but ragini should give attention to her as she was her sister..So it was kind of they both were at fault too..they always thought about themselves..not the other one.

  8. Sree on

    Obviously their parent. I cant see them like this . Its truly disgusting to see such parents di. Poor swaragini . Though being rich they r poor cuz they r badly in need of love. I very eager to see hoe this one month is going to patch them . Ok di thats all cuz agar iss mein hi comment kar thi rahi toh yeh dooriyan pad hi nahi paungi. Love u di 😉

    • Meher on

      Dear parents kbi Galt nhi hote.. U will soon get to know what I mean.. .

      Yup lets see path up hota hai ya nahi ??

      Na na I hv full confidence on ur chattering stills ?????

    • Sree on

      Its true di parents galat nahi hote. I think blaming anyone would be wrong cuz parents need children to be happy and children need parents love. Waiting to see ur nxt ep di. I am very happy that u have confidence in my chattering hehhe. Even my friends say this cuz i never stop 😉

  13. Dhara on

    Yup parents. Now u r scaring me as we both r working n we leave our daughter to day care as our parents can’t come here to take care of her. N in today’s world it is difficult to survive on 1 salary specially to meet kids n society’s requirements rather than ours.

    • Meher on

      It actually depends on parents.. Even I hv working parents n over that m only child but I never felt.. Alone… Cz i always hv some family time.. N my mum is super cool.. I can share everything from her…

      Yup itz difficult to survive on one salary… U must be a cool mum ?

  15. Serena on

    Obvio parents di sometimes some parents forget their children infront of their so called status and society.I feel pity for those parents who are gifted sweet children by god but never cared. Otherwise amazing chapter Di.

    • Serena on

      Yup that’s also true but m veryyyy happy coz I got most wonderful parents in the world…??? though they are busy but still whenever we get time no one can say that we r sane people because of our mad masti.????????

    • Meher on

      Me too got the best mom.. She is super duper cool.. She knows about my friends… My friends’s bfs their gfs…

      LOL.. Whenever my friends visit me they push me in kitchen for preparing snacks n they starts chatting with mumma… Poor me ??

  17. Eva on

    Mugdha 1? its definitely the parents fault…and we can’t say actually that swaragini had no fault in this..even its their fault too…jao katti..nehi baat karti tumse..Sanskar ko Abhi bhi nehi layi tum…Sabskar abhi bhi traffic jam meh phasa huya hai kya? India ke jams aise hai????

    • Meher on

      Jo Eva devi ne kaha sab satya ???

      Aa ra tha tyre puncher ho gya.. Bt pakka 6th episode m aa jayega…

      Pinky promise ????

    • Eva on

      Eva devi satya ke alaza kuch nehi kehti..i don’t believe this ki Sanskar eisi khatara gari aur khatara tyre ke saath chalta hai..u go and pick him up and bring him here asap…

    • Eva on

      6th? Samajgayi..tumhari gari ka bhi haal sanskar ki gari ki tarah hi hai..aur dosh traffic jam ko dehrahi ho..?

    • Eva on

      Haha…mein bhi talented hu..aur mein bhi ghamand nehi karti….tumhari 2 saal pehle liyi huyi nayi gari seh hii lao na Sanskar ko….

    • Eva on

      Gari hospital pohochgaya usmeh betha insan nehi pohocha? Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho phir? Tum and tumhari gari..get well soon and bring Sanskar warns bech doh ush gari ko jo hamare Sanskar ko laane mein unsuccessful rahi..??

  20. Neha on

    Sometimes I feel it’s the only fault of parents OK they earned for their children but money isn’t everything what will u do when you have lots of money but no one to spend on…. Swara and ragini I don’t know but siblings they are someone if parents are not with you. You can survive with eo love…. But here everything is just too messed I hope laksh ultimatum will do something….. N meher ? gandi ladki abhi tak snuku ko nahi layi… Tyre puncture kar diya I’ll puncture ur nose ??

    • Meher on

      I my case I don’t know about sibling or siblings bonding that’s the reason I never write about ‘swaragini’…

      Their lives are totally messed up…

      Sanku 6th episode m ayega pakka… N meri nose 1.5 year pehle puncher ho gai thi… M not interested in that agai… ???

    • Neha on

      U got punctured ur nose already!! Why?? Didn’t you like it? ?….meher let me tell you u won’t look good without ur nose ??

    • Neha on

      Aww but still you’re laughing mentioning it and I’m laughing imagining u lol……. U have activa I’ve Jupiter send me the address of sanky I’ll bring him… Wo meri back seat pe bethega… Lol ? what say ??

    • Meher on

      I was also laughing when that happened.. N nurse was like koi chup karo yr iss ladki ko ????

      No way sanky sirf mere peeche baithega… ?

  22. Nita on

    well i think their parents r at fault…. but there is miss understanding also….. swaragini both feel that the other the other is getting more attention….. yes their parents r earning for them but in this race they have gone too far n now the relations have been broken…..
    very well presented Meher….. very emotional episode…..

    • Meher on

      Yup they hv forgotten about their family…. Now their daughters are on the verge of break down… But still Swara’s condition is worse as she has no one.. Where as ragini has laksh.. N she has stayed away from her family for yes..

      M glad that you lyk it ???

  24. Anjali on

    All four of them are at fault…

    Heyy Meher! I just found time to read all four epis… Amazing… Superb!! The way you brought out the reality in everything <3 <3 <3
    I remember the first few wpis of kuch iss tarah 1 and when i see this now… You've improved sooo much <3 <3 LOVED IT!!

    Now coming to ur question…

    I personally feel that all 4 are at fault… But the maximum fault is of the parents.. then Swara and Ragini..
    I say this… because my cousins used to be like them too…. Whenever I visited.. I felt like Laksh.. 🙁 🙁
    Their parents were too busy… And these 2 hated each other.. It grew soo bad.. But then when the younger one turned 13 and the elder 15.. They opened up their true feelings and finally sorted them out.. Idk how.. Idk when.. But when i visited the next time.. They had such a great bonding… that I swear i thought the world had turned upside down.
    🙂
    Well… what i'm trying to say is… Instead of just thinking and thinking and expecting something from parents… They should have spoken to each other…. when they were young itself and sorted it out.. That's my opinion at least…

    LOL… Reading this makes me feel happy I'm an only child 😉 🙂

    • Meher on

      Yup I too feel that I hv improved… Kuch iss tarah 1 was a random decision to write… It was actually by mistake….

      Yup according to me every one has contributed some to this… Situation… Misunderstandings grow only cz of communication gap.. If u talk nothing will remain unsolved…

      Same pinch m also only child… ?????

  26. Abdul hafiz(uma). on

    In my point of view, all four.BTW superb chapter.You are one child of your parents, cool.I have two bro’s and a sister.I am younger, that’s why, vo meri sarr pe hamesha tandav macha te hein (It’s my. bad luck or good luck.nehi pata, lol).But yeah,they love me like hell.They are very protective about me.

    • Meher on

      Yup I too think all are at fault…

      Itz NYC that they are protective about u… Mai to cousin m b sabse badi hoon ???????

    • Abdul hafiz(uma). on

      Opps, so sad cutie pie.By the way, mein cousins me b sabse young hu, hehe.

  27. Ruhi on

    I think no one’s at fault..it’s all because of situations and circumstances. But still their parents should’ve bonded with them.
    I know how it feels when you’re neglected by your parents. As a child, me n my elder sister used to stay alone at home but thankfully we had each other, we know what we mean to each other. Well now my parents do have time for us bt thanks to them, I got to know how much my sister loves me.
    Okay, I got emotional. Sorry 😛
    I was supposed to praise you for the episode but got carried away. Anyways…episode was awesome and I do hope you clear the mu btwn both Swara and Ragini.
    Keep writing! 🙂

    • Meher on

      U know what.. That was a perfect answer… Yes everyone is at fault yet everyone is innocent….

      Itz osm that u n ur sister shares an osm bond… Bless you both…

      Yup I will..

  30. xxxxxx on

    Hey wow very nice can u give the link of ur previous ff other than kuch is tarah 1