Kuch iss tarah 2
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Recap : Swara’s hostel life… Reason for ragini’s taunts.. N laksh’s ultimatum to both
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Swara’s pov
Finally the day… I mean night has come.. Itz my b’day… Yipee… As soon as the clock hits 12.. I start to gaze my phone… In hope that mom n dad c
Will call me.. And yippee my phone rang as soon as i look at the screen my happiness faded away
*avni calling *
It was not the first time when I was expecting them to call n anyone else called me but still I want them to wish me.. Well itz ok.. M habitual of this.. I lift her call n her first sentence.. I mean first shouting was
“haaapppyyyyy bbiirrttthhddaayyyy sshhoonnaaaaaa”
“ok ok thnku.. I know today is my b’day but I don’t want hearing as a gift… ” I said while controlling my laughter
” u r sachhi so mean swara… I sacrifice my beauty sleep n u r saying like this… ” she said with a fake anger
” ok ok.. Stop ur drama.. N tell me when will u come.. To see me.. “I asked her
” can’t say yr… But I will try to come by nxt week” she said
“Ok bye… Good night ” I said
We hung up n yeah… I was on the verge of crying… As for the first time avni can’t be with me… But atlest my Bae is coming… N m satisfied with his coming..
Soon my phone again rang…
This tym it shows
*Bae calling*
” happy Birthday jaan” he said
“thank u.. N when will u Reach ” I asked with full excitement
” sorry jaan.. I can’t come.. Actually mum is bit ill n I can’t leave her” he said in sad tone..
Now this all thing was enough to break me down… Tears crossed the boundaries of my eyes n starts to flow…
I compose myself n said “ok… Bye” n I hung up
Only I know how much difficult those two words were for me to say… I was missing avni.. Sujata aunty. Lucky More than I miss my mom dad… Whole night I kept on crying… I don’t know when I fall asleep on bare floor…
Itz morning I woke up n first thing I did was to check my phone… I found some.. 248 whatsapp messages… 597 fb msgs… But I was craving for only one wish… Wish from my parents… I get ready.. N hide my dark circles N puffiness of eyes with makeup..
As soon as i open the door it was all dark.. N I was like.. What the hell.. Itz morning n not even a single ray of sun has entered the villa hwz this possible…
I came down n *boom*
**Happy Birthday shona**
Was written on Wall then sujata aunty…rp uncle Laksh…. N idiot ragini came.. N wish me…
I was shocked as well as happy
“happy Birthday Beta ” sujata aunty said
Followed by laksh n rp uncle
I hugged laksh tightly as after yesterday’s incident he was not talking to me… He cares my hair till I calm down… Then sujata aunty feed me with halwa prepared by her…
That halwa was even better than any expensive sweetdish… I think that’s what it called “mother’s Touch…
“happy Birthday “ragini said with a fake smile..
I too passed her a fake smile..
” aree ragu hug swara ” laksh said
” no way “we said in unison Chlo atlest here our choice is similar
” don’t forget my condition .. I won’t take even a second in doing that” laksh said with determination
“today is my b’day I don’t wanna spoil that” I said
“exactly m also not Interested in hugging this attention seeker ” she said
” I am not an attention seeker… Got this ” I said n pour the whole jug of water on her…
” swaraaa ” laksh shouts
” say sorry to ragini ” he said
” no I will not” I said with determination
“leave it lucky… This girl is illmannered” ragini taunts
“did I talk to you.. No… Then keep quiet ” laksh said to her
Yeahh m dancing in happiness.. But somewhere I was praying that they don’t break up… I don’t want laksh to suffer…
Then my gang… Nihal.. Rahul.. Arjun.. Ruhi.. Namisha.. Naman… Vikram.. Ria n all came..
” swara u got a new car n u didn’t even tell us… Very bad” ruhi said
“what new car…”I ask in shock
All nodded n took me out there I saw a brand new audi in black color… Ok I got it… Itz my b’day gift… But where is my b’day wish…
Ahh… Leave.. We all left to party hard..
We had our lunch n I pay the bill.. As it was my treat… We spent some 17k on food…
Then all present their gifts to me… After that nihal got a call probably from home n he immediately tries to leave “swara m going will see u soon” he said
“wait nihal… You looked tensed. What’s the matter ” I asked him in feeble voice
” nothing swara ” he wispers
” guys I forgot my phone in… So u All go ahead… I will join you soon.. N nihal can u accompany me ” I asked him
When everyone left I asked him” what happen tell me truth ”
” vo swara.. I hv to go to home.. My dadi is at hospital n I hv to pay bills so… ” he said hesitantly
” what ur dadi is in hospital “I was shocked
” but I don’t hv that much money to pay bills.. Now… “he said with a low voice
” so what I hv money tell me how much u want ” I offer help
” no swara I can’t ” he resist
” are tell me.. M your friend na.. ” I force him
” only 60k” he said
“just wait.. ” I called driver n asked him to give cash to nihal n I left..
In evening we went to a pub.. N I can’t stop myself when I saw those shots… I drink them upto my limit
Swara’s pov end
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Other’s pov
Swara was fully out… She was not even in her senses n her so called friends were taking advantage of that.. Cz this time avni wasn’t with swara…
“swara I want to buy that ring.. Can u lend me some money ” nimisha said
” yeahh… Take how much u want” she said n passed her purse to her…
After that all uses her credit card n spent some 5 lakh…
Swara was trembling badly then vikram held her from waist…
“ahh leave me.. ” swara resist.. She can feel that this touch was Not good
“m just helping you” he said while checking her out
She completely losses herself n vikram starts to take advantage of that..
They were going back.. Swara was in semi conscious state n vikram was driving…
“swara can I belt ur seat” he asked with a smirk
“hmmM” she replies in semi conscious state
Here he goes closer to her… He explore outline of her perfectly curved body with his hands.. Swara keeps on resisting in that state too but all in vain.. He was kissing her neck… He was about to kiss her on lips but Swara’s phone rang… It was laksh..
“shona when will you reach” laksh asked
“lucky vikram here.. Actually she is full out.. N m taking her home” vikram said n cut the call…
“today u were lucky… But baby m not gonna leave you “he thought
He takes swara in… His one hand was supporting her left hand n other was on her waist… Ragini senses something is not good in him … She immediately ran towards them n take swara in her embrace…
” now u can leave “she said straightly to vikram
” aree let me help her” vikram said..
Ragini gave him an angry glare n he left…
“are swara” laksh look at swaragini
“come n take this idiot in” ragini said
Laksh takes hold of swara n smiles..
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Phew done… So Sry guys for not posting tmrw…
N in next episode sanskar will come.. Puncture has been fixed now ????
106 Comments
awesome yaar!!! it was so good
Thnku so much arohi
blo*dy golddiggers… I hate ppl lyk dat..and bastard Vikram..
I have a small request.. Plz make a long chappy… And Expecting a grand entry 4 Sanskar… Mere yaar..yeh meri aakhri wish samjho..
Yup good diggers… Sanskar’s entry would be a shock to you…
Actually I thought I was writing long chappy.. That’s why.. But I will give u longggggg chappy tmrw…
nice,,,,,
Thnku
When will sanky come????? Damn excited for his entry…… Pls make his intro fast……
Hv patience dear he will come tmrw
awesome
Thnku
Oh! At last the waiting will be over…
Yup… Finally
Nyc episode meher di.and what Kind of frnds does she have.happy that ragini helped her.waiting fr sanskars entry.meher di ur a very nice writer. 🙂
That’s what it called fake friends..
. I hope sanskar’s entry will give you shock…
Tysm so much dear
Di did is soooooo bad aapke kehne pr I wrote my part that to big wala but aap sanskaar ko nhi laaye???? OK coming to part as always it was awesome. And Di just give me the address of that mechanic who can’t even fix a puncture I will rip his head off????
First post that part then I will give a shocking entry to sanskar
Haaaaw u r threatening this masum baccha???poor me????
Yup I HD threatened u n look it worked
Hello Meher!! Bhool to nahi gayi!! Tell ya something? I LOVED ThE EPI. Signs of Swaragini not Swara n Ragini were at the hints today. Shitty Vikram. I know Nihal also took advantage na?
And yeh! Answer to the last epi, none is at fault. The circumstances n today’s nuclear family system is at fault. Swaragini dunno that their parents do care for them. And their parents dunno how much their children crave for them. Its harsh reality too. Awesome job done girl. I wish they listen to the emotions hidden inside the deep chambers of their heart and tgey cn bcum a happy family once again. Even Ragini n Swara care ffor each other just they dont realize it. Laksh n his family is the crucial string of connecting them. Especially laksh. Do your job bro. 😉
A very beautifulchapter. Thank u so much for presenting the harsh realities. Keep it up. Love you sooo much♥♥♥♥
Omg meri itni himmat tujhe bhool jau…
Yup itz starting of swaragini…
Yeah everyone is responsible for the presentation situation… N laksh is only thread joining swara n ragini…
Dont worry dear they will soon realise this…
Thanks so much for reading dear ??
Sanskaar entry plzz. Who is bf of Swara?? I think not Sanskaar because u already said that he is in love wd kavitas
Yup in next chappy I will reveal who is Swara’s bf… Hv patience till then ???
awsm yr…..
thank god….. sanskar will come now….thank god ki puncture repair ho gya…
Yup finally
.. He is coming
awesome. it’s my first time reading ur ff it is too good. waiting for sanskar’s entry
Thnku so much dear…
M glad that you lyk it
Uff..this so called friends…enemies are better than them.
Yup such friends can cause more harm… Than an enemy
Thnk god nxt epi mein sanskar ki entry hogi…plzzz di now no more waiting plzzz…
Ha ha pakka jhatke ke sath ayega..
Awesome chapter Meher. I just loved the part when Ragini helped her. Waiting for Sanskar’s entry.
Thnku so much dear… N ragini is more mature than swara na.. She will help her then
Meher I’m surely gonna kill you now…. U r dead for sure…. This vikram bastard in the image of friend…. Really disgusting I hate those ppl who cheat in disguise ….but what’s this parents didn’t even wish her I felt bad for that but atleast laksh and his family treat her as lovable…. OK who’s his bf is it Raj as you have avni so there will be one Raj too…. Look how’s my logic
Chalo punctured repaired…. ?
Alag merko maar dia to sanskar ki entry kaise hogi… ??? no atlest there is no raj in my ff.. Sry to throw a stone on ur guess?????
Diiiii i an very angry on u. Where is this Sanskar di?????????????? I cant wait to see him. Ek puncture tick karne ke liye itnaaaaaaa time. Di bring him fast na. About the ep it was good (only good kyunki sanky nahi hai 🙁 ) and again i am very sad for my swara. She needs lot of love. U didnt even reveal her bf. Why di??? I hated her friends. Come on di hum dono usse dosti kar lete hai 😉 it will be good for her. 🙂 . Post nxt soooooooon di 🙂
Love u bolna bhul kayi. Love u a lotttttt di 🙂
Sanskar is on the way.. N I will reveal who is her bf 8n next.. . N u will be shocked to know that…
Aww my chhutki is so humble na.. Ha hum dono usse friendship kar lete hai.. . ???
Luv u loads
i got that who is swara’s boyfriend.. Adiraj hei na?
U hv to wait for that
blo*dy ppl…. taking money like that…
Meri sanskaar ki entry… ?????
Can’t wait…
?????????
Haww… itni excited hoon…?????
Love you bro…
Aur tumhari underage sautan kaisi h?? ??
Meh toh yahi hu..mujse puchlo..meh bohotiii acchi hu..hogi kyu na yeh sautan mere Sanskar ko jo larahi hai..?
Vo mera sanskar hai
????
Arre…. tum domo la sanskaar nhi… meri sanskaar…. ???
Mineeee
U mean mere sanskar ki entry anji ???
Ye dekh meri underage sautan chup to rah he nhi sakti… ????
Kyu rahu chuo mein? Woh serf aur serf mera Sanskar hai…
Oo underage sautan he is mine… No samjhota here ???
Bilkhul nhi…. I mean MY SANSKAAR….
ANJALI KI SANSKAAR ???? aap logon ko nhi milega…???
Anji bad manners don’t drool over my sansku
He is my Sanskar…first…..actually…no samjhota here….
Tum log lado aur hum usko leke bhag jayenge
Kyunki sanky mera h I’m your elder meher bado ki baat manni chahiye…. So man meri baat aur samajh lo sanky mera h
And anju how could you… Means you forgot u gifted vk #sanskar to me long back so now how can you call him as yours he is mine na…. And Eva darling bal vivah is a crime I’ll complain to police and then ?
Guys sorry for the interference but yahan baat snuku kiska h so how could I miss it and I’m just imagining one thing if ever vk read these comments bechare ki toh band baj jayegi bechara blush hi karta reh jayega ? ??
Neha aap bade ho to saas bano.. N wait ye only sautan vs sautan tha… Baki jo chahe uski bhn ban sakti hai ???
Yaha sab bechare Vk ki toh ma aur biwi bane bethe hai…
Are nahi yaar saas kuch jyada bade ho gaye… U know ab itna handsome munda ho toh saas kyun banna…. I’m his life long sweetheart u guys go away…..
Dekh lo jo sapne dekhne hi vk is ours…
Even friends are just stupid…..
Just hate them???
Pathetic condition but u r portraying the storyline perfectly….
Once again and awesome chappy???
Waiting for sanky ka dashing entry???
Aaj bada kam bola tune… Kya hogya ??
Dashing ni shocking hogi
Aaj mein pura din rorahi hoon….
Dunno y I was crying so much???
Now just hasna….laughing so much…????that too after reading ur ff specially ???….
Shocking entry?????
Yup shocking… Joke sunau!?
Arey….u just joking me by asking joke sunau????batao na aur what’s that M masoom
Super as always.Aww, poor sanky’s shona.And you, kaise chalriye’sautan vs sautan’game???
Aaj nhi khela sunday hai na…
Hello bahu…your sasuma here……accha episode likh leti ho tum….kitni talented bahuye mili hai mujhe…baas Sanskar ko la de…..apne jigar ke tikre ko dekne keliye iss ma ki aakh taras gayi hai…..
Mammiji..itni tarif maat karo..sharam arahi hai…☺ apka beta raha hai…chinta maat karo..
Mummy ji thanks so much..
Ab talented to m Bachchan se he hoon…
And sanskar kl aa jayenge ☺
awesome baby….. but u promised a long chappy….. ok no episode will be long enough for me….. n abt the episode…. really hate those frnds….. but atleast could witness Ragini’s concern for swara….. but sadly swara was full to talli to witness it….. n finally sanskar’s entry 2moro….. 2moro??? one minute u apologised for not updating yesterday right??!! cause it says 2moro in the note in the episode….. u r uploading 2mork right??
Next is bit longer than this… Ok ya galti se mistake ho gai… Kl post karungi with sanskar n Swara’s bf…
Yup apni talli Rani…
Awesome
Thnku
awesome……….
Thnku
Balle balle…sautan thank u so much Tu mere Sanku ki larahi hai….bohot miss kiya mene useh…..u know na..i love him sooooo much ? Teri tarah nehi…bechare Ko gari bhi nehi bheji tunne…?
O hello u mean humara sanskar…
Gari kaha se bhjti m to khud ghayal hoon.. But tujhe sry sanskar ki padi hai.. Sautan ki nhi na.. .
Oh god.. Ghoor kalyug ??????????
Mein ek adarsh patni hu..serf apne pati ki hi chinta karungi..teri kyu karu?
Tumhara sanskaar nhi…
Meri sanskaar….
I’m the oldest in the three OF Us… meri baat sunlo…
Sanskaar sirf aur sirf anjali ki h…???????
Underage Sautan… go to my ff chapter….riya ne mag kiya h…. go jaldiiii….. ???
She has a surprise for us…
Meher Anjali….meh tum dono seh choi hu haina?Tum dono ki choti si pyari si behen jesi hu….mere liye Sanskar ko chod do..please….meh useh bohot pyar karti hu….
Ahooo..meri bacchii…mere Sanskar ki kitni parva hai iseh..Meher bahu apni underage sautan seh kuch sikh…?
Mujhe mere bete ke character par shakh horaha hai….ek saath tin?Kya baat hai….Eva….sabse choti hai….par hai Sanskar ki first wife..(Bal vivah jo hai) Meher hai second wife….meri pyari bahu…abbb…meri tisri bahu..Anjali bahu…..welcome to my bahu community…..tum Sanskar ki tisri wife ho phir…meri hii kismat kharab hai…tum tino biwi bangayi…..aur meh?Mummyji…..ahhhhh
Kya kare mummy ji apna apna luck hai… ????
N underage sautan tu kisi cheez m km ni hai.. To ab chote hona ka rona mt ro… ????
Ha ha kalyugi patni ????
Kalyugi nehi adarsh patni….Oyee Meher fb id batah add karungi apni sautan ko…
Search “mugdha johri “
I did and i texted u too see that….I’m Janvi Bhattacharjee
Yr tum kise text kar re ho mere pass tak ni aa re.. Pehle bisha ka ni aya ab tera ???
Meri khud ki pic hai.. Some orange kurti me.. Kise msg kr dia tune????
Ha to aap humari saas ki behen ban jao… Anji maasi saasu ???
N saasu ma… Aap partial ho re ho.. Underage sautan k n mere sth m sanskar ko bolungi?
Meher..tu meri chugli karegi mere bete seh?Ja…aj seh meri bau serf Anjali aur Eva hai…..actually for me Eva is a kid so uska saath dedeti hu….akhir badi bahu jo hai woh meri….aur tu….tu meri bahu nehi hai….Anjali meri bahu bangayi…tu mere bete ko mujse dur kar rahi hai….
Mein saas…. hai…. I’m not so old also…????? sanskaar meri ?? h…
I’m not ur saas vaas .
Tum dono sanskaar aur meri behenein ho…. ???
Anji if hum dono teri n sanskar dono ki behen ban gayi to hum charo bhai bhn ho jayenge…
M happy as his wife ? with my underage sautan.. N I luv to be ur bhabhi ??
Nahiiiiiiii mummy ji.. . Esa mat karo… I will write a SwaLak one shot for u bt ese mat kro aap kro underage sautan ko support.. ?????????
Meher….Eva sikh apni sautan seh kuch….kitna samman karti hai woh mera…..fine Anjali…u be my sister and become their masi sasuma…..meri serf dohi bahuye hai mere Meher aur Eva…
Mammiji……mein Raglak pe likhungi sacchi…par plz mujhe support karna…Sanskar to haihi mere saath par app bhi saath dedena…..meh bohot acchi bahu banke dikhaungi..
Sorry to poke my comment in mid of ur saas bahu session??? but can u please tell me ki yaha saas h, bahu h, sautan h, par pati air beta kaun h…????
Mugdha 2…. me no sasu ma…????
Haay haay… anarth ho gaya…
Me sanskaar’s real wife…
U sautans go away…. ????
Meher ek sautan kaam huti..Anjali is now our nanand…(She herself agreed)
Hehehehe nanand ji.. Kaise ho…
N @serena good question.. Dulha kaha hai ???
oyeee meri meher plzz update nxt epi soon otherwise i will kick you…. bcoz i cant to stay awy from your ff bein lvd your episdoe…..
lotz of love
U can’t kick me yeyy ??
#virtual_world ???
Balle balle bach gayi
yaaaayy sanskar In tomorrow’s episode … yaaayyy
Yup finally
wahhh. wat a episode. enjoyed it. blo*dy gold diggers. frnds k naam p dhabba h
Yup that’s why I hv mentioned in intro that avni is her only true friend
Yaar awesome as usual…swara is soo gooood by heart n innocent also but all are taking her advantage…where is sanky to protect his princess…n really i hate swaras parents…
Agaya sansku