Kuch iss tarah 2
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Episode 8 (betrayal – part -1)
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Recap : ragini n avni tries to convince swara about Vikram’s bad intention
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Swara’s pov
Okay so sanskar has ditched me.. I lost my everything… I don’t think life makes me suffer more than this… But no.. I was wrong… It was time to repay my own deeds… I hv paid for Insulting sanskar n now itz turn to pay for not trusting my lovedd ones… Ragini… Laksh… Avni… N even mom tried to. Make me understand but I was so stubborn to understand…
After party… Or u can say after get insulted.. Me n avni were going back to home.. Though I was broken inside… I was determined from outside
“swara are you fine “avni asks
I nodded…
We both knew it was a stupid answer to an obvious question… Hw could I feel after getting insulted…
We were waiting for avni’s driver to come n pick us up… Then the second round of betrayal starts… Vikram stops his car infront of us.. N forcefully tried to pull me in… Avni n I were struggling to get rid of him.. But then that bastard nihal… Hitted avni with his car.. N I scream my heart out “avniiiiii”
In the fraction of seconds avni was Lying between the pool of blood n I was in the car… There were rahul… Karan… And an unknown person… Probably driver… Then nihal too get in the car…
Soon they tied my mouth.. I want to scream but i can’t…
As soon as that pervert vikram starts to unzip my dress.. My body got paralysed… I was cursing myself for not trusting my own sister… For not trusting my two best friends… For not trusting my own mother… Ragini was right I am good for nothing… Only cz of me… Avni’s lyf is in danger… Cz of my own stupidity my dignity has been brutally murdered that too by the Devils in the disguise of friends…
I heard them saying that now I can’t full fill their materialistic wants.. So they were filling their lust… I felt like to kill them right away… But I was helpless.. N my helplessness is flowing in the form of tears from my eyes…
After playing with my body… After killing my soul and dignity they left me on road somewhere near jungle area..
I was in my senses… Yes I WAS.. But my body stopped supporting me… I was unable to move my hand even.. Then a hand.. Comes forward to help me.. He removes his blazer n covers me.. He took me to his car that’s what I remember….
After that when I open my eyes i found myself on bed.. Probably in his house..
He came n told me everything that how I fainted… Hw He took me to his home.. N all.. “I want to make a call” that’s what I can say from my mouth… But tears speaks more..
I called laksh n ask him to pick me up… Laksh came n took me to his place as all were living there… Our concrete building has been sealed…. I didn’t react to his saying… He told me about avni.. She was in coma…
Tears starts to brimm from my eyes… I was cursing myself… Can life be more dreadful than this.. Just few hours… Just few hours has snatched everything from me… My love.. My respect… My dignity… My best friend… Everything…
We reached at home… N I went to my room… Neither I say something nor anyone has asked me..
I didn’t step out of my room for two days…I hv changed my dress style also… That incident affects me to the core… Now I was wearing full sleeve churidaar with a hop neck.. Only visible part of my body was my face… I was afraid.. I have plastered a normal face… But only I knew how much pieces were hided behind that one mask… I want to tell everything to someone but to whom… With whom I can share all this.. Is now struggling for life cz of me..
I can’t understand what to do… I tried to end my life.. But I can’t.. I hvnt that much courage.. May be I hv to suffer more…
Finally ragini enterd my room.. She wants to talk to me.. But she doesn’t know how to starts… She was about to leave and my heart starts to sink.. I gathered some courage n spoke “RAGINI DI”
Her steps immediately turned towards me n she engulfed me in a bone crushing hug
“m sry di.. I didn’t trust you… Itz all cz of me” I broke down
“shhhh don’t say like this.. U hv done nothing.. Whatever happened with avni was an accident “she said while wiping my tears
” no di.. U r not getting me… That was not an accident… Nihal has done that…. I… I.. Was raped” my voice cracked towards the end
I explained the whole incident to her.. About sanskar… About Vikram… About nihal hitting avni…
“di u were right m good for nothing… I.. I am.. Impure now… I don’t want to live di… Itz hurting to breathe even ” I cried my heart out
“don’t u dare to say like this.. U r divine n will always be…. Never think that u r Impure… Impure is that blo*dy vikram… N ur di is and will always be with you.. Come swara.. We will see sanskar afterwards firstly we hv to lodge Complaint against those jerks… M nt gonna leave them ” ragini di sounds determined
For the first time I felt like I never knew this ragini.. Who loves me like hell… May be I never notice her love for me..
We reached police station
There officer taunts me” huh.. She has been raped.. Oh plz who doesn’t know about swara gadodia.. Now u guys are no more rich then u want money from vikram… Everyone knows her character ”
” I don’t want any character certificate for my sister from you “she stamped her hands at tabel
” what u want then” the officer asks her
“FIR… Can u file fir.. “she said calmly
” what if I don’t “officer said while smirking
” di lets go… I don’t want to face more humiliation “I said
” shut up swara… “she scolded me
” u hv to file a complaint against those bastards… Do u get me… “ragini di shouts
” neither I get u nor m gonna file ur complaint “that officer said
” u hv file their complaint ” a voice came..
I looked back n found avni’s dad there… He came here to file complaint as now avni isfine.. N she told him about the incident….
That officer finally agrees to Lodge our complaints…
Then the round of humiliating hearings n investigation has started… Sometimes I feel that the hearings were more painful then that incident…
Vikram.. rahul.. Karan.. nihal.. N their driver were sentenced to 15 yr imprisonment…
Atlast me n avni got justice after the painful struggle of a year…
Those perverts were now at their best suitable place…
I can’t get over that incident… I lost my charm… I lost my faith… Faith in love.. Faith in friendship… But I still have faith in humanity cz of that one helping hand… I want to thank that man but couldn’t find him… I became only a living being… I was just breathing…
I got to know that ragini loves me lyk hell n so do I.. We were no more swara n ragini we are SWARAGINI now…
Swara’s pov end
So guys u must be thinking why she suffered alot.. My answer is lyf is not a bed of roses sometimes it has throwns… N this part was bit fast… Cz from next episode the main track will start..
I can show all this in flashback but I want to show this like proper episodes… Cz in flashbacks I can not connect with the change in Swara’s character in upcoming episodes …
160 Comments
Whenever i read about rape case in any ff its always remind me NIRBHAYA rape case by the way ur ff is awsome di
Nirbhaya case was inhuman.. I felt disgusted when the law was restricted cz of age..
Awesome meher!!!? This chappy was really emotional bcoz of the things tht happened with swara? but honestly somewhere this betrayal was necessary for a change. I’m veryyyyy sad right now??but I’m happy tht now they’re Swaragini??
Betrayal was not necessary… A small lesson was needed
it is awesome. .I feel bad for swara ..plz update soon
But who was the guy who helped swara……..
but ya swaragini ki bonding was nice ……..
and also I liked your family…….
U will soon get to know about that guy…
Thnku for liking our small family
oh my god…m literally in tears now ..
meher magic is back .. !
Thnku so much ji
Nyc episode loved it.feeling really bad fr swara.no words to express my feelings…I am still in a shock… Nice episode meher di asusual…….
Thnku so much for reading…
Awwww it was damn emotional???
But the best part was SWARAGINI!?
Swara’s life is screwed up in just one night?
Damn!!!??
Nothing can be more dreadful for a girl than this!!
She lost her almost everything!!???
But as u have already said that we ll hate Sanskar here but I can never!!!??
Sachhhi varunholic!!???
I know Sanskar is on wrong path toh kya hua!! He ll change soon!!??
My Sanskar!!! Ooppss Our!! Or else uh ll kill me????
Yup just one night has changed everything…
Yes our sanskar.. Mere samne mere pati pe dore daale ja rhe h
Kya karun tumhara paati hai hi itna hot!!
Cannot take off my eyes from him???
Very painful.. please make adhiraj as swara’s saviour.. and i don’t want swasan in this.. but it is your choice.. but in your ff , i will ship my Adhira ( Adhiraj and swara= Adhira) i want Adhira .. please give some scenes atleast.. and sanskar let him be happy with his so called gf kavita..
Thnku so much for your point…
But at the end itz swasan
Haha sabko pata hai ki tu Swasan hii likti hai..
Sasuma RagSan b likha????
literally my eyes were moist after reading swara’s pov
Waiting 2 knw who s d helping hand of swara
Thnku n u will soon get to know about that guy
Meher …u r always making all cry…what is this….u know tomorrow I have my exam …I thought…. I will tell u that I will read it on Monday …but when I opened it …I was not able to scroll down to comment box…..swara is suffering a lot….now I hate sanskar to the core….now u have to make him suffer also….now I wanna see how u will justify his character….I can’t see swara in so much pain….
N now I will talk to u on monday
Aree kis cheez ka exam.. Btw all the best…
Don’t worry I willingness try my level best to justify his character..
Emotional and amazing
Thnku so much
mehru…. baby…. it was too gud….. so emotional….. but a bit rushed…. the way u convey everything, every emotion n every other titbit, in that this was just too fast….. but yeah very well written…..i think this betrayal n tragedy was necessary for swara…. to change her for good…. n finally its swaragini…. n ya who was the one that helped swara???? were was laksh for an year??? her parents???
I rushed it cz i wanna start my main track now… N nopes this wasn’t at all necessary for her.. A small lesson would be enough for her…
U will soon get to know about that guy n all… Hv patience
Hehe, so sad lucky bro.At last ap bi Eva babhi se darr hi gaye.You became ‘BIWI KA GULAM’ lol.Lage raho bro, mummy or daddy ki blessings hein aapke saath.
Don’t worry nanandji apke liye bhi aisa pati dhundugi jo biwi ka gulan hi ho…
Devrani ji.. Nanand ji ko jaldi nikalo ghar se damad je le laao
What an epi…plzz tell who helped swara…love it..
U will come to know in next update
nice episode
awesome episode
Thnku so much
Pls dont make sanky as hero for swara . But i am big of swara and i knew it is a swasan ff but concept is vvery good.
At the end it will be swasan only…
Awesome
Who helped swara???
U will come to know soon
Very nice did u see a comment on 27th May…a gal called Ana is saying bad about Sanskaar…just see it..
its really amazing mehr. and it’s really painful rape is the worst thing that can happen to a girl it kills that person altogether. i am really excited now how story will progress from now onwords how will swara be able to trust someone again how will she love again that to sanskar it seems next to impossble. in your first part it was sanskar who was broken and in this part it is swara. in first part it was easy to mend him because it was just a betrayal of love but this time it looks like impossible because its too deep this time
Yup first part was more or less like a fairy tale… But it isn’t…
Well everyone commits mistakes does he
ya allah what an episode…… fully emotional??? betrayl??? sistrly bond…??? humanity..??? i dont know wht to say……. just above thn words u do it outsatndng………
meher first i think y u alwys write tragedies but aftr reading the whole episode i am speechless……..
n thnkx to give justice to swara n avni….. hope thier frndhp has no prblm…. dobt make thm separate n thnkx for SWARAGINI….
luv u lotz……. ????
No nothing like that.. I write cute love also ??
Thnku so much…
Keep reading
Luv u loads
ya dear i know u write cute love storis too…. bcoz i was a regular readr of ur ff a smile tht has stolen my heart… whtn supr cute epilogue was it hve….
Hey!… Meyer….dis was an too emotional part yaar…was it adhiraj who helped her?.I HV dis doubt….eagerly waiting for ur next part…..pls…update it fast…
Thnku so much
U will soon get to know about that guy
Wow, at last sanky bro ki darshan mil gayi.Jya da kuch nuhi baas apke chand ke tukre, apple of eyes jese dono wives ko kahiye meri shadi ke bare me na soche.Mein abhi choti hu.And lucky bro thanks for the support.
aa gayi sabse sadi bahu…
Sautan ji…. Bhaag lo…..
My devar and devrani are in my side 🙂 😀 😀
Nanad ji… Am soo sorry…. 🙁 🙁 Katti mat ho!!! Plssss *kaan pakadkar sorry*
PATIDEV!!! <3 <3 <3 Kaise ho aap??? Missed me??? USs sautan ke paas mat jaao….
Mummyji, Papaji!!! Pranaam… 🙂 🙂
Kal chuttttiiiiii h….. So I will be ol mostly 😀 😀 😀
PS : I still havent started reading the chapter meher… Just wanted to talk to u all 🙂 🙂 🙂
Ohoo.Anjali jethani ji..i’m not in your side…jo pehle meri nanand Uma ko ghar seh nikalega mein useh hi support karungi….aur ha Meher jethani ji app bhi sunnlo..agar meri sautan lanee ki baat bhi ki toh sacchi kehrahi hu Anjali jethani ji ke saath agaungi…and tujhe ghar seh tata bye bye kar dungi…
I didn’t ignore her…. I didn’t see the comments properly… Sorry bol rahi hoon!!!
Koi sautan vautan nhi aayegi tumhare liye… I will make sure that no one comes between u and devar ji…..
MAaf kar do mujhe!!!
NANAD JI!!!! Aap bhi mujhe maaf kar dijiye!! 🙁
Aww, mein apse katti nehi hu.After all, you are my badi babhi.Aur badi babhi maa ki saman hoti hein.And Eva babhi meri pehle riya di hein, unki shadi ke bare mein socho.Vo badi hein, mein choti hu.So,elders first’.
Eva m with u nanand ji ko vida karne I will help you…
Sautan ji. M sabse badi bahu.. Sanskar’s first wife…
Devar ji isn’t my side my chhutki I mean chhutka
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Guys, I hope u haven’t forgotten me.. If u have then pls rewind ur memory… ???.. Ny1 online… Badi mushkil se phone mila hai.. Thank god all slept,,. I hope or pray that SHANAYA doesn’t read the message warna toh I am gone.. Waise how are u all??? Missed me…. I missed u all so much.. Meher I didn’t read ur chappy just commenting in hurry.. Can’t tell how much I was missing u all.. Koi hai .. Tell fast ok.. Because if someone sees me with phone then I’ll be stabbed to death
Sabko mera ashirwad!
Main Umako kyun nikalu? Meri pyari si bitiya rani hai. Uma tum ji bhar k jee lo apni zindagi. Time ane par sab kuch hoga. Agar phir bhi bola nanikalne ko to mai dunga sab k kan k niche ek ek chanta!! Aur meri dono bade bahuyein! Lado mat. Tum dono bohut achhi dil ki sachhi ho. Aur merabeta dono ko equally pyar karta hai.
Choti bahurani, teri janamdin haina aj? Pehle HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Aur gift rat ko. Agar date galat hui hai to bata dena.
Mere Sanskar aur Laksh ko apne papa k taraf se bahuuut sara pyaar aur ashirwad. Apni patnion ka theek se khayal rakhna.
Aur Patni ji…!! Love you!♥♥ 😉 😀
@Riya bitiya! Friendship bana pati uske pehle hi in logon to tumhe mera beti bana di! 😀 .
Kaisi ho? Aur phone se abhi dur raho! Nahi to mar padegi. Rest lo.
O Riya ki Mammi (to Mugdha not her actual mom), thik se khayal rakho apni beti ka. Phone abhi phenk do. Use thik ho jane par m use ek bada walamehnga waka phone dunga! Ab rest lo bitiya.
Now being actual Bisha, hello Riya! U should actually stay away from phone now. Take rest and comw back in ur full form. Till then, wanna b my friend? Okay If not friend, then sissy or di? Taje care. Bye
@riya nanand ji u better stay away from phone… ?
N I hope u met ur new sister n other family members as oye family is now a big one?
No I didn’t meet anyone meher.. I just wanted to message happy birthday to kiddo.. Eva if u have seen this message then lots of good wishes from u … And See I am taking such a big risk so forgive me for the mess that had been created.. Meher convey my message to kiddo.. Ok then I need to leave.. Buhbye
Feel very bad for swara & I think she will come with some boom & some Master plan.
She will fight back
Superb amazing and emotional
Thnku dear
when you will update the next chapter…???waiting despratly to read it…
omg…this is amzing..first time i read it but it is so good
Thnku so much
Mar dala
Allahhhhhhh
Mar dala
Hehe sorry for late comment….
Actually yesterday I was not able to read so sorry….and jaldi se aaj ka part update karo….n ya its not request..
SAMJHE Ya SAMJHAYE..????
Are yr tu post he ni kr raha
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Hey! That wwas really a superb chapter. It pained to see Swara in such a condition. But she fought and now she is understanding everything. She n Ragini are Swaragini now. Hapoy for them. And happy for you too bitiya. Meri bahurani to bahut talented hai. Jiti raho bitiya!♥♥