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Kuch Khatti Kuch Meethi: RiVanya RaIna SS Part 11

JasminerahulBy 17 Comments4 Mins Read

Kuch Khatti Kuch Meethi: A Little Sour, A Little Sweet Part 11

Again Raghav called:Nainaaa
Naina:Raghav…
She looked out through the window and saw Raghav.
NAINA:Raghav…
She ran out in rain.
She saw Raghav standing there in rain.

His umbrella had flown away in the cool wind.

NAINA:Raghav!
He looked at her.
RAGHAV:Naina…
Naina cupped his face in her hands.
Raghav:Are you still angry with me Naina?

Naina embraced him tightly shedding tears.
She wept:Raghav…I am sorry for misunderstanding you.Sorry…very sorry…

Tum ho gham ko chupaye, mai hu sar ko jhukaye
Tum bhee chup ho, mai bho chup hu, kaun kise samjhaye

Raghav wept cupping her face:Naina,don’t cry.I can’t bear your tears.I love you.

Abb duriya itanee hain toh, milna yaha kal ho naa ho – (2)

NAINA:Raghav…I love you too.

They shared an emotional eye lock.

Uss bat ko jane bhee do, jiska nishan kal ho naa ho
Har pal yaha je bhar jiyo, jo hai sama kal ho naa ho…

(Kal ho na ho).

NAINA:Your trip?
RAGHAV:I cancelled it.Because I can’t stay away from you.
She became emotional.
Naina:How much pain did I give you?But you are keeping on loving me.

RAGHAV:Forget our fight.Otherwise our baby will be sad.
He wiped her tears.
NAINA:Raghav…there is a surprise.Ritik-Shivanya are in love.I witnessed their love.
He smiled.
Raghav:Naina…you you got angry thinking that your sister’s life got spoiled,But actually Shivanya is very happy with Ritik.I knew that they love each other.Ritik had almost confessed to me that he loves Shivanya.
Naina smiled happily.
Raghav asked her naughtily:Shall we also romance?Because of the stupid fight we romance had an unnecessary delay.So I am more hungry for you.
She became shy.
He held her closer and caressed her face romantically.She blushed.

She embraced him passionately.

After a week…

Raghav,Ritik,Naina and Shivanya were sitting together.
Raghav:Today evening we have a party to attend and there is a dress code.
Ritik:We should be dressed in red.
Naina:That’s cool.I can’t wait to dress up for the party.
Shivanya:But I have no grand red dress.
Naina:Don’t worry Shivanya…I will sort out your problem.
Shivanya smiled.

Evening…

Ritik and Raghav came wearing black.
Raghav:Biwi…Naina…are you not ready yet?We need to leave for the party now.
My wife takes too much of time to dress up.
Ritik:My Shivanya does’nt even dress up properly.But why is she taking so much of time now?
Raghav raised his voice:Nainaaa
Suddenly he heard Naina’s voice:Coming darling…
Ritik:Shivanyaiii!
Shivanya’s voice:Don’t shout.I am also coming.
Shivanya and Naina came out wearing a red suit.
Ritik and Raghav could’nt believe their eyes.
Ritik was stunned seeing Shivanya so stylish.
Ritik:My Shivanya like a Bollywood diva?Am I dreaming?

Raghav could’nt take off his eyes from Naina.
Raghav:My Naina is always a beauty queen.
Shivanya asked Ritik:You must have definitely made fun of my dressing sense to Raghav.Now how do I look now?

Ritik smiled:I must say that you look gorgeous.
Shivanya blushed.
Raghav:Naina…I never get fed up of praising your beauty.Because you are that beautiful.

Naina blushed.

Ritik: You look so beautiful and nothing can snatch your beauty.
Shivanya blushed.
Raghav and Ritik held their respective partner’s hand and left for the party.
They enjoyed the party a lot by dancing with their respective partners.

Dil khud-garz hai,
Phisla hai ye, phir haath se
Kal uska raha,
Abb hai tera, iss raat se

Dil khud-garz hai,
Phisla hai ye, phir haath se
Kal uska raha,
Abb hai tera, iss raat se

O meri jaan, o meri jaan
O meri jaan(Life In A Metro).

After some days…

Raghav came back from office.Naina who was resting in her room got excited.
N:Raghav has come.
She rushed to see him.She was walking downstairs.
Indumati:Be careful Naina.Naina forgets everything seeing Raghav.
Raghav smiled.
Suddenly Naina slipped and rolled down screaming.
Everyone screamed.
Raghav ran towards her holding her.
Naina wept:Raghav..our baby.

Raghav cried:Nothing will happen to our baby.
Indumati:Yes Naina.Be strong.You and your baby will be perfectly alright.

Raghav carried her in his arms to the car.
Ritik was driving the car.
Shivanya :Ritik drive fast.We need to be in the hospital now.

Rit:Yes Shivanya.I am driving fast.

Naina was bleeding.Raghav got tensed.
They reached the hospital.
Naina was taken to the theatre.
The doctor came back after some time.
Ragh:Dr..how is my Naina and our child?

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17 Comments

  2. Sindhuja on

    Wow amazing thanks for the good work I loved the way naina and raghav have compromised band their deep affection for each other u have portrayed the characters very beautifully can’t wait to see what happens to the baby nice twist totally loved it:)

  3. varshini on

    omg naina fell down , so sad , cant imagine baby dying , the first part with raina romance was cute . shivanya is getting dressed for ritik , first she was shown as a girl who did not care abt her looks now she is doing all this for ritik , so sweet , eagerly waiting for next part .

  5. Riana on

    Episode was excellent…but last scene really shocking…naina’s baby abortion…its very painful stage of life…updt soon…

  6. Geeta on

    Awesome but yr where was u till now u take a big gap yr .I daily used to see for your update but I get disappointment every day ?
    But now m happy and please. Don’t take again this much of gap.

    • Jasminerahul on

      thanks a lot.sorry for not being regular in updating.it’s due to lack of time that I am not able to update regularly

  7. Sindhuja on

    I’m loving this so much naina and raghav reconcile is so sweet and amazing can’t wait for the next update love naina’s simplicity and raghavs innocence can’t wait for the next update keep up the good work.:)