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Naina saw Raghav taking a shirt to wear.With a smile he helped him to wear it.He smiled.
RAGHAV:Naina…you seem to be so romantic.What happened?
NAINA:Why not?You are my husband and I have the right to be romantic with you.
RAGHAV:Really?Then let us have a full swing romance.
He pulled her closer.
NAINA:Come…Dadi must be waiting.
He smiled:Should we go now itself?Can’t we go after romancing for some time.
She blushed.
She pushed him lightly:Come…we need to go now.
He smiled.
Indumati saw Raghav-Naina coming with a blush on their face.She smiled.
Naina and Shivanya went to the kitchen.
Naina:We must make something really nice today.First impression is the best impression.
Shivanya smiled.
Naina and Shivanya started cooking.
Naina:Nice smell is coming.Raghav and Dadi will be impressed.
Shivanya was making chapathi.
Shivanya thought:I don’t need to impress anyone as my relationship with my husband and his house is fake.
But Still I will cook with sincerity.
Naina’s phone rang.
NAINA:Maa…
Shivanya was very happy.
Naina attended the call.
NAINA:Maa…
Yamini:How are you both?
Naina:Don’t worry Maa.We both are fine.
NAINA:I will give the phone to Shivanya.
Shivanya talked to her.
SHIVANYA:Maa…I miss you.
Shivanya’s tears rolled down her cheeks.
YAMINI:Shivanya…what happened?You are not well there?Ritik is nice.Right?
Shivanya wiped her tears.
SHIVANYA:I am fine.But I miss you Maa.
Yamini smiled:We will meet soon Shivanya.Don’t be childish.Now onwards your husband’s house is your house.And cook good food for your husband.
Shivanya thought:If I have not considered my so called husband as my husband how can I consider this house as mine?
Naina:Shivanya…are you alright?I don’t know..I find you dull.
Shi:Nothing like that Naina.I am fine.It’s just that I am missing maa.
Naina:I am also missing Maa very badly.
But I am forgetting my pain seeing Raghav’s love.Ritik’s love will give you relief for sure.
Shivanya thought:When Ritik does’nt love me how is it possible?
After talking Yamini went to the puja room:God…thank you for blessing my Naina and Shivanya with loving husbands.I just want my daughters to be happy and not to have my fate.Please let them be happy in their married life always.
After cooking,Naina and Shivanya brought food to the dining room.
They served break fast.
Naina served specially for Raghav.
Naina:Raghav..I made this dish specially for you.
He smiled.
Indumati smiled seeing their love.
Indumati was impressed with the food.
Indumati:It’s hard to say who the better cook is.Both Naina and Shivanya are so good at cooking.My grand sons are lucky.
Raghav-Naina smiled at each other.
Indumati:The way to the husband’s heart is through the stomach.
Raghav looked at Naina smiling:True.Naina has established her position in my heart successfully through this tasty food.I loved your food Naina.
Naina smiled at him.
Indumati:I am sure Shivanya has entered Ritik’s heart through his stomach.
Ritik-Shivanya looked at each other silently.
Ritik gave her a pale smile:Shivanya’s food is good.
Indumati smiled.
Ritik moved closer to Shivanya’s ears and whispered:The first time I said a truth about you.You are a good cook Shivanya.
Shivanya became happy and she smiled.
Shivanya got ready to go to work.
All were shocked.
Indumati:Yesterday you got married and now itself you are going to work?
Shivanya smiled with an embarrassment:It’s urgent.That’s why.
Naina:Dadi is correct.Why are you in a hurry to go to work Shivanya?
Shivanya stammered.
Ritik thought:If Dadi doubts on our relationship…Oh no…
Ritik:Shivanya has some urgent work to do.Let her go dadi
Indumati:Ok.
Shivanya left with relief.
Naina went inside.Ritik left the room.
Indumati:Raghav…you and Naina look like a real newly wed couple.But Raju and Shivanya do not look happy like a newly married couple.
Raghav:Dadi…ours was love marriage.But Ritik Shivanya’s is an arranged marriage.They couldn’t even mingle much before marriage.They need to be given some time.
Indumati:You may be right.But in our generation marriage and love meant the same.So I can’t digest that easily.
Raghav laughed:Dadi..you and your old fashioned thought.
Indumati smiled:Shut up.
Ritik over heard this and thought:Dadi is really having doubt.I have to do something to remove doubt from her mind.
In the evening Shivanya was surprised to see Ritik waiting outside her office.
SHIVANYA:Ritik…
Ritik:I thought I will pick you up.Get inside the car.
Shivanya got inside the car.
Ritik:Dadi is having doubts about our relationship.
SHIVANYA:What?
Ritik:We need to prove it wrong.
SHIVANYA:How?
Ritik:Do you have lipstick?
SHIVANYA:No.I don’t use make up.
Ritik:Oh!This is the problem with studious girls.Only studies and career.
Ritik stopped the car and went to a ladies store.
SHIVANYA:What is this Ritik upto?
He bought lipstick from the store.
SHIVANYA:Lipstick?
Ritik:Put this lipstick on your lips.
SHIVANYA:Why?I don’t put lipstick.
Ritik:But today you have to.
SHIVANYA:But why?
Ritik put lipstick on her lips forcefully.
SHIVANYA:What are you doing?
Ritik put lipstick marks on his neck and cheek.
SHIVANYA:Yuck!What is this?
Ritik:Wait and watch.
They reached the compound.He held her hand.
Shivanya:Why are you holding my hand?
Ritik:I am not interested in holding your hand.But as a newly wed couple if we don’t do it others will find it fishy.
Shivanya didn’t resist it.
Ritik thought:Shivanya’s hand is so soft.
Ritik-Shivanya entered the house together.
Naina noticed Shivanya’s lipstick.
NAINA:Shivanya,you put lipstick?How?
Shivanya stammered:I..I…
Ritik:I convinced her to apply lipstick as I like her with make up.
Naina smiled:That’s good.I also wanted to see Shivanya with a make over.
Everyone noticed lipstick marks on Ritik.They smiled.
Raghav looked at the lipstick marls:Ritik…you are really a badmash…
Naina:Shivanya…I did’nt expect you to be so wild.
Shivanya was embarrassed.
Indumati thought:Thank God!I simply got worried for them.Ritik Shivanya love each other.
In the room…
Shivanya was irritated.
SHIVANYA:What the hell did you do?Everybody was teasing us.You made me look like a clown in front of others.
Ritik got irritated:Don’t blame me.Since I did so Dadi thinks that we are madly in love with each other.Otherwise she would have understood the truth and made a big fuss about it.You don’t know how the older generation reacts to such things.They can’t even digest a boy girl friendship.They just want only a romantic relationship between a married couple.
Shivanya didn’t reply.She was sad.
She thought:How much should I suffer God?
Yamini got a phone call.
Ya:Hello..who is this?
She got a shock while talking to that person.
She rang up Naina.
N:Maa..
Shivanya was near her.
Naina put the phone on speaker.
Yamini:Naina…Shivanya…I need to meet both of you now.
Shivanya:What happened Maa?Is everything alright?
Y:I will tell you when we meet directly.
N:Ok maa.We will come now.
Yamini cut the call.
Shi:Naina…I feel tensed.I feel something is wrong.
N:Even I feel the same Shivanya.
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Amazing episode
Post soon
thank you very much.you are reading it for rivanya or raina?
For both because both couple are beautiful
amazing could be too small to describe ur work. loved it and last time i said i missed rivanya , that was because i missed them onscreen. and ur work is pure bliss.
and please update as soon as possible. atleast one per day(LOL).
i thought u would write an rivanya os in off air serial os contest. if u can write a os in free time
thank you very much.I am quite busy now.so I am struggling hard to update.I don’t take part in os contests as I don’t get ideas easily
Amazing???….Raina is a loving couple…Whereas Rivanya is a growing up couple…First cooking scene was good…Lipstick scene was sooo funnyyy….??????….Hope everything iz okay with Yamini…Awsome SS
Thanks for your lovely comment. If you get time please read my raina FS hum dil de
Wow! Its amazing! I must say you’re a talented writer! Naina helping Raghav in wearing shirt was damn sensual romantic scene! Raghav pulling naina for romancing shows raghav is very naughty..Haha…Arjun is a talented actor..he brings smile on my face always… Even if she is in -ve role!! NaiVanya cooking food was well written! YaVanya talk and shivanya getting teary eyes was emotional. I feel bad for shivanya.. This marriage didn’t happened by her agreement but I’m still happy. ” in our generation marriage and love meant the same” dialogue written by you, can I know who told you this? I didn’t know this fact before..I must say you are unexpected (mean you give over expected episodes and dialogues). And that’s your quality of writing which attracts me to your writing! Rivanya lipstick scene was funny and romantic! What happened to yamini? Did her husband come back? Suspense at climax! Waiting for next part….
And from starting..
It was treat to get RaIna-RiVanya SS..though its a SS can you make it a FF? It would get more interesting part by part..I hope yamini don’t forgive her hubby for betraying her! He deserves.. This..RaIna confessing their love and Rivanya sacrificing their wishes for them was emotional and romantic….All Marriage functions was also so good…RaIna Consummation scene was also so romantic and sensual and well-written…Expecting more RaIna and Raghav…And I like the fact that yamini is positive here! Keep writing more and more!
* Riana dil will write Saturday OS on every Saturday on IB and DBO! She will update a OS tomorrow..if you get time then try to read! On 8 July, she will write a OS on TejKara Son father relationship… As on always accuses Tej on the show.
thanks a lot.earlier in India only arranged marriages happened though very rarely love marriages happened.the girl used to see the boy only at the time of wedding.girls used to accept them as their husband’s easily without any fuss.because for them husband is the person to be loved and they used to love their husband.same with boys.they used to love their wives just because they were wedded to them. but now a days girls and boys
can’t accept anyone as their husband or wife easily and love.time has changed.