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Hi all. Fatarajo here. Thank you so so so much for supporting me in my previous episodes. Happy you all liked my fan fiction a lot and keep supporting me like this via your lovely comments. It really means a lot a lot to me. And finally managed some time to publish the episode I hope you all will love it. Thank you
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Here is episode 15.
Which scene(s) is for which shows:
Scene 1, 4, 6: KRPKAB part only
Scene 2, 5, 7: EDKV part only
Scene 3, 8: Both
Scene 1: Devakshi’s room
(KRPKAB part only)
Dev comes near Sonakshi making Sonakshi feeling uneasy.
Sona: You are here so soon?
Dev: Yes, I am here so soon. Should I go back?
Dev is about to go back
Sona: No, no I was just asking.
Dev: Is it?
Sonakshi and Dev becomes silent. And they look at each other. Sonakshi tries to show Dev that she wore the different saree for him.
Dev: By the way you are looking very beautiful.
Sonakshi smiles. Dev comes to Sonakshi and goes near her.
Sona: (in her mind) What is this Dev doing? I don’t get it.
Dev whispers in her ear.
Dev: But you look like Aunty.
This makes Sonakshi stunned.
Sona: Look Dev you,
Dev gets surprised this time.
Dev: Dev! Woah! Finally you called me by my name.
Sona: How dare you call me fat?
Dev: Right I shouldn’t have call you Aunty, I should have called you grandma.
Sonakshi gets shocked.
Sona: How mean!
Sonakshi chases Dev.
Dev: Why are you behind me?
Sona: You!
Dev: You called me Dev that’s why if I called you grandma you would have called me Baby, Honey and so on.
Sonakshi opens her mouth in shock.
Dev: Close your mouth if not bees will go in your mouth to find honey in your mouth.
Sona: I am not in mood to fight with you, I called you Dev that’s enough for you.
Sonakshi does her work.
Dev looks at Sonakshi.
Dev: (in his mind) Sonakshi you look very beautiful in everything, no matter what you wear, as true beauty lies in one’s heart. And your heart is so clean and innocent.
Sonakshi looks at Dev,
Sona: (in her mind) I thought you will like me in this saree. I don’t know how to impress you. Sona what to do?
Dev: (in his mind) How to say I love you to?
Dev comes to Sonakshi,
Sona: What do you want?
Dev: I…..I….I
Sona: What I?
Dev: I need to go washroom.
Dev runs to the washroom.
Sona: Dev, sometimes you are so weird and funny.
Sonakshi smiles.
Scene 2: Shraman’s residence
(EDKV part only)
Here is Suman is looking at the moon, and stares at the star at the terrace. Shravan looks at Suman,
Shravan: (in his mind) I feel I am responsible for snatching all happiness of yours. I am sorry Sumo, I couldn’t fulfil the promise to always keep you happy.
As Shravan was about to go, he sees Suman is feeling cold and is shivering. Shravan comes to Suman, and drapes his coat on Suman. Suman looks at Shravan. Ek Duje ke Vaaste Plays. They share an eyelock.
Sumo: Shravan?
Shravan: You were feeling cold that’s why?
As Shravan was about to go, Suman holds his hand. Shravan looks on.
Sumo: Come and sit beside me.
Shravan sits down and bows his head.
Sumo: Are you angry with me?
Shravan: How can I be angry with you, Sumo?
Sumo: Then why are you not looking at me? Are you that much angry with me?
Shravan: No Sumo, who said.
Sumo: Then?
Shravan: Thing is I don’t have guts to face you. I am the one responsible for all this. I promised that I will keep you happy but instead I made you sad. I am a very bad friend and husband.
Shravan becomes emotional and Suman hugs him. Music plays.
Sumo: It was the mistake of both of us. That’s why we had to suffer.
Shravan: No, Sumo. It was my fault only. Please forgive me.
Sumo: I will but in one condition.
Shravan: What is it?
Sumo: Let’s don’t be husband and wife.
Shravan is shocked.
Shravan: But Sumo?
Sumo: Can we start all this from friendship again?
Shravan smiles.
Sumo: Don’t you remember what you told me before we got married that we will be friends first and then husband-wife.
Shravan smiles.
Shravan: Of course we will be friends first Sumo.
Sumo: Now very good, do something for me.
Shravan: What is it?
Sumo: Bring me a nice cup of coffee.
Shravan: You will never change.
Sumo: Quick.
Shravan leaves.
Scene 3: Conversation
(Both)
Here Dev is thinking what to do, and he is in the washroom and walking here and there.
Dev: (in his mind) How to confess love to Sona? It seems so easy, but in actual it is so difficult. Oh I am so confused right now.
Dev is super confused, and then he walks around and he smiles as he gets an idea.
Dev: Great, I will call Shravan. He will help me. Yes.
Dev calls Shravan.
Shravan brings a cup of coffee for Suman and one for him and they sit down and just then Shravan’s phone rings.
Shravan: Dev’s call.
Sumo: Jiju’s call?
Shravan picks up the phone.
Sumo: Shravan keep the phone in loudspeaker.
Shravan: Sumo?
Sumo: Shravan, I am ordering you.
Shravan: Once someone gets married, she will always control you even if it’s your best friend.
Sumo: Shravan?
Shravan: Okay fine.
Shravan does so.
Dev: Great, you picked the phone up, yaar?
Shravan: Why what happened?
Dev: Yaar, I am in such a situation that I had to hide from wife in the washroom.
Shravan: Washroom?
Suman tries to laugh, Shravan gestures her to stay silent.
Dev: Is anyone else around you?
Shravan: No, no one else.
Shravan is gesturing Suman to keep quiet again who is enjoying all this.
Shravan: Now what is it?
Dev: How do I confess I love you to Sona?
Sumo: OMG!
Suman puts her hands on her mouth, Shravan gestures her why she spoke.
Dev: Shravan, is anyone beside you?
Shravan: No Dev.
Dev: Are you speaking the truth?
Before Shravan gestures Suman again, Suman gestures she will keep quiet,
Dev: How do I confess love to Sona? I am so confused yaar.
Shravan starts laughing.
Dev: Why are you laughing?
Shravan: Yaar, you are so funny.
Dev: What is so funny about it? Anyways say how do I say I love you to Sona.
Shravan: You are really strange. You are the one who helped me in saying I love you to Sumo and now you?
Dev: My situation is tight.
Shravan: Say just the way you told me that time.
Dev: It is not so easy.
Shravan: That time, you were scolding me for not being able to confess my love to Sumo easily, see now how it feels.
Dev: Yaar, it’s because you and Sumo are best friends since childhood,
Shravan and Suman look at each other. Music plays.
Dev: Please help me. I don’t know how to say to Sona, I love you.
Shravan: Said it just the way you told me?
Dev: What I love you?
Shravan: Stupid not to me, to Sona dii.
Dev: Okay, but how? I do one thing I don’t say.
Sumo: Areh Jiju just say I love you to Sona.
Dev: Sumo?
Shravan hits his forehead with his hand. Suman gestures sorry by holding his ears.
Dev: What is Sumo doing there? You liar.
Later, Sonakshi knocks the door,
Sona: You ok?
Dev: I will see you later.
Dev: I am fine Sona.
Sona: Sure?
Dev: Yes
Suman starts laughing.
Dev: Sumo?
Sumo: Sorry Jiju, but you have to say I love you to Sona, if not I and Shravan won’t speak to you.
Suman cuts the call.
Dev: Listen?
Dev: (in his mind) Now how do I say I love you to Sona.
Scene 4: Devakshi’s room
(KRPKAB part only)
Dev comes out of the washroom.
Sona: Are you okay?
Dev: Yes I am.
Sona: Then why you took so long?
Dev: Just like that.
Sona: Okay go to sleep now.
Dev goes to sleep.
Dev: Won’t you go to sleep?
Sona: Maa is coming tomorrow.
Dev: Really!
Sona: Yes. That’s why I have to make preparations.
Dev: Okay but do finish.
Sonakshi goes. Dev waits for Sonakshi and later he falls asleep. Sonakshi comes back.
Sona: He fell asleep? He must be tired.
Sonakshi also falls asleep, and Dev holds her hand in sleep. Sonakshi looks on. Music plays. Sonakshi tries to separate. Dev won’t let go. Sonakshi looks at Dev and falls asleep.
Next day morning,
Dev hugs Sonakshi in the sleep.
Dev: Please don’t leave me dear.
Sonakshi comes and sees this and is shocked as Dev hugs his pillow.
Sona: Eita Ki? (What is this?)
Dev: You sound so sweet even in sleep also Bengali?
Dev is stunned to see Sonakshi standing and then he falls down on from the bed.
Dev: Sona you?
Sonakshi starts laughing.
Sona: Dev, sometimes you are so funny.
Sonakshi is about to go
Dev: Sona, I love you.
Sonakshi is shocked and she looks at Dev surprised. Dev is also surprised at what he just did.
Scene 5: Kitchen
(EDKV part only)
Here Shravan comes home from jogging and he sees Suman in the kitchen.
Shravan: Sumo, you and in kitchen at this time?
Sumo: Yes, I didn’t go to the kitchen many days that’s why decided to look something for you.
Shravan: Where is mom?
Sumo: She went out. She had some work.
Shravan: Oh is it? I see.
Suman is cutting vegetables and Shravan sees this.
Shravan: So what are you making?
Sumo: Salad and it is a very healthy choice.
Shravan: I know.
Suman is cutting vegetables and just then someone calls her.
Sumo: Oh Preeta I will join work again tomorrow and if I see any problem, I won’t spare you.
Shravan: Cool down Sumo.
Sumo: How can I?
Shravan smiles.
Shravan: (in his mind) Finally things are getting back to normal soon.
Sumo: What! Oh god, I have so much work.
Shravan listens to this, and he decides to help Suman. He cuts the vegetable and while cutting the vegetable he cut his finger.
Shravan: Ouch!
Sumo: Shravan!
Suman cares for Shravan and sucks his finger.
Sumo: Who told you to cut the vegetables?
Shravan: I decided to help you that’s why.
Sumo: Shravan! You won’t be able to do so.
Shravan: Okay fine, then what to do?
Sumo: Keep quiet!
Suman does the work and Shravan lovingly stares at Suman smiling.
Scene 6: Devakshi’s residence
(KRPKAB part only)
Sonakshi is stunned at Dev’s confession.
Sona: What did you just say?
Dev: I love you. Yes, I love you Sonakshi Bose, I mean Sonakshi Dixit.
Sonakshi is super confused and having mixed feelings.
Sonakshi touches Dev.
Dev: Sona?
Sona: You really said?
Dev: Yes, I love you Sona. How many times will I say?
Sona: Huh?
Dev: Now what should I do? Should I convince you like sitting like this in Devdas position. Get me up.
Dev offers her hand. Sonakshi is still in shock.
Dev: Sona?
Sonakshi gets Dev up. Dev hugs Sonakshi.
Dev: I was waiting for this. Finally I feel so relieved.
Sona: I am coming.
Sonakshi leaves from there.
Dev: Looks like I scared her.
Scene 7: Shraman’s residence
(EDKV part only)
Shravan is looking at Suman.
Sumo: Now what are you looking at me like this?
Shravan: Hot.
Suman gets angry.
Sumo: Go from here.
Shravan: No darling.
Suman shows the knife.
Sumo: Oh really?
Shravan gets scared.
Shravan: Okay going going.
Shravan leaves.
Later, Suman comes into the room.
Shravan: Oh God, I am getting late.
Sumo: Who told you to come in kitchen then?
Shravan: Oh Sumo, please stop complaining and help me. I have a fight to case.
Sumo: Fight to case? You mean flight to chase? Where are you going?
Shravan: To the court. I mean by case to fight. I am getting late. Now can you please help me.
Suman makes Shravan wear the coat and helps him get ready.
Scene 8: Conversation
(Both)
Shravan gets a call from Dev,
Shravan: Dev?
Shravan: Hello.
Dev: I am done.
Shravan: Why what happened?
Dev: I said I love you to Sona.
Shravan and Suman gets happy.
Shravan: Finally!
Sumo: I knew you can do it Jiju.
Dev: But?
Shravan: But what?
Dev: I scared her.
Sumo: Huh?
Dev says how he confessed love. Suman starts laughing.
Shravan: Dev, not only Sona dii, if you say this to any other girl they will run away as they will get scared.
Dev: You didn’t help me, I ask you so many times.
Shravan: Great. You can tell me to tell Sumo I love you but you can’t. For the first time a student did better than guru. Wow what a love guru.
Dev: Nothing will happen about you.
Dev keeps the phone.
Sumo: By the way, Shravan who is the Guru and who is the Student?
Shravan looks at Suman weirdly and Suman laughs.
Sona on the other hand is walking,
Sona: What just happened? I still can’t believe. Dev and I love you.
On the other hand,
Sumo: Good luck for your case love guru.
Shravan looks at Suman weirdly,
Sumo: I mean student.
Shravan leaves and Suman laughs, and later she smiles.
Sumo: (in her mind) Always keep everyone happy like this.
The episode ends.
Precap: Dev tells Sonakshi to agree and Sonakshi is silent. Dev says please agree. And then Sonakshi looks and Dev is shocked. Later, Ishwari comes and says Dev? Dev hides the flower. Sonakshi also diverts her focus to something else. On the other hand, Suman and Shravan are helping Dev and they both collide from the back and Shravan holds Suman in his arms and they both share an eyelock.
Hey all, sorry for the short update, actually I am studying also, so whenever I take a short break, I write a little and like that I finished writing one episode.
By the way, many asked what is my actual name. Well most of you know me as Joyee. Joyee is my nickname, and all my loved ones called me that. Well, I will reveal my formal name this time, its Farin. Some call me Farin, some call me Joyee. You can call me whatever you like, be it Farin or Joyee or Jo or Fatarajo or whatever haha.
Next episode I will publish after 24th August, I know that’s quite late but I have exams on 22 and 24 that’s why.
And please do feel free to express your opinions and drop your comments. Criticism is open. Thank you
70 Comments
Such a funny proposal… Loved it .. Awesome epi… ???… Gr8 work.. ??
Hey varsha thanks for commenting haha happy u liked the proposal XD and thanks for the compliment 🙂
Hi Jo,
I’m so sorry for not commenting in previous episodes.. I was busy with guests that’s why couldn’t commentcomment.. Pls forgive me! So all the episodes were superb! Specially today’s episode! Haha?? Sona was scared!! But why is sona not accepting his love yaar!! Jaldi karo pls…
Hey maria thanks for commenting yaar and nah its okay I understand at least u commented 🙂 and I understand no worries and happy u liked the epi and today’s one and hahah sona 😛 is just that sona is nervous and she is confused what to do next one will update only after 24 aug as that day my exam will end
Really nice
hey anushika thanks for commenting happy u liked it 🙂
Jo it was cool
Really amazing epi
My Switzerland girl u rocked
Farin ji it was too good
Everything was superb
Loved it
Post next one soon
Love u
Byeee
Hey pretty preeti thanks for commenting yaar happy u liked the epi and switzerland? hahah anyways i really wanna go switzerland haha and haha ji 😛 and the next one i will post after 24 aug as my exam will end that day and love u too 🙂
hello Jo di, hw ar u I’m fine (pehlehi bata dia…)
itna funny and romantic tha that I don’t know if I should laugh or I should blush
hihihahahaha pillow pakar kar Sona samaj raha tha..use pata nahi he ki har white chiz apni Sona nai hoto hahaha….itna funny luv confession tha pr Sona dr gayi
Shravan bechara Sumo se jit nai paye ga..hehehe
love you my Jodi- Neeti
Hey neeti haha mein think hoon and hahah lol laugh also blush also 😛 yeah stupid dev 😛 ahaha white chiz 😛 lol and hahah poor sona ikr 😛 and hahha sumo dominating over shravan uska galti hain usne sumo ko zyaada sar pe charake rakha 😛 and haha jo di 😛 love u too dear
Super duper hit??❤️?and nice name Farin??
Hey ayushi thanks for commenting yaar happy u liked it and happy u liked my name and yeah day b4 yesterday krishnadasi epi was too good aara they r so cute but unfortunately i missed yesterday epi 🙁
Hey far in di! All the best for ur exams dear. Lots of love. Glad that story is coming back to track. Love u. Keep writing. I have neither heard nor seen this type of confession ever. U were too good.
hey nandini/nandu thanks for commenting dear happy u liked it and thanks for the wishes and i hope u will like the upcoming epis too and well actually the love confession right i was inspired from a hindi show where the guy just got up and told his wife i love you which stunned his wife and he was like now u say i love u too me 😛 that was so hilarious dev one i got inspire from that drama but the falling from bed is my idea only 😛 haha thanks
Jo Jo jo Jo Jo!!! I was rolling on the floor laughing after reading this episode! Damn…it was hilarious! I love uuuuuuu….and ur writings…….muuuaaahhh?
My whole day was so badddd…..and m soooo happy now…m in sucha jolly goood mooood…love uh??
Laddoo do read my ff The Love We Have For Eachother Will Never Change-Kuch Rang Pyaar Ke Ek Duje Ke Vaaste and pls comment
Hey laddoo thanks for commenting and haha rolling on the floor khud ko ganda toh nahi kiya 😛 jking jking and love u too happy u liked my writings and well yesterday the day when i post this was good but today not really 😛 because studying is so hard sometimes and haha love u too 🙂
So funny and nice one.
Hey princess thanks for commenting happy u liked it and glad to know u found it funny XD
nic n funny
Hey deeptanu thanks for commenting happy u liked it and found it funny XD
Hehe ??… Dumb Dev ……
Superb episode and funny too?…
All the best for upcoming exams ….
Finish it and come back soon ?
hey bhoomi thanks for commenting dear yeah dumb dev 😛 and happy u liked the epi and found it funny XD and thanks for the wishes dear and yeah will comeback with next epi after 24 aug
Hy farin di….!!!
Hahah finally got to knw ur real name !! n its very nice di….!!!
Now cm to ep…!! omg so great…!! awesome….amazing….fantastic..n all d other best compliments……i loved every bit of it u cause u write so amazingilyyyyyyyy…..!!
Plz plz plz post asap haha after 24 well 24 is my birthdate….n u have a exam that day also…..chalo koi nai all d best fr ur exams i will pray fr ur best result….!!
Love u di….!!
Studyyy hard n take care…..!!
Hey marie thanks for commenting dear haha yeah farin is my formal name and joyee is my nickname and happy u liked the epi a lot and thanks for the compliment is because u all inspire me 🙂 and well 22nd august is my birthday but unfortunately i have maths exam that day that’s why I wont be able to publish 🙁 and i m so disappointed wiith 🙁 well 21st is my cousin birthday 22nd another cousin same as mine 23rd uncle and bro in law 25th another cousin was trying to find someone birthday 24th aug finally found 😛 and haha thanks for the wishes and love u too 🙂
Hey awesome episode dear
Hey awesome episode dear love it it was big update
Hey siddhi thanks for commenting dear and big? really actually it is but today’s epi update was shorter than other epi because usually i write 4000 this epi i wrote 2500 words only and loved ur dp i miss tanshi so much
Okay and Naagin (Rivanya forever) season-2
Will read it soon dear 🙂
Wow………. awesome update…..really…nice…. I enjoyed reading it…. post soon….. eagerly waiting for the next update……
Hey kaya thanks for commenting happy u liked the update 🙂 and glad u enjoyed reading it 🙂 well next update i will post after 24th aug 🙂
Finally, Dev said I luv u to Sona..???? Yippppieeeeeee..oh, I’m so so so so ssssssssooooooo happy..Ty Fatarajo..mmmuuuuaaahhhh..luv u..but, hey! U didn’t comment on my OS’s promo..y??
Yippie..finally Dev ne I luv u bol hi diya..????????luv u Fatarajo.. mmmuuuuaaahhhh..oh..I’m so happy..
But, you didn’t read or comment on my OS’s promo.. ANNIVERSARY GIFT. Y??
Hey aaru thanks for commenting and happy u liked it and i read ur os anniversary its amazing but for some reason i couldnt comment in it not only urs i couldnt comment on the other ffs i read too and love u too 🙂
finally dev you did it
Hey pinky thanks for commenting happy u liked it and yeah dev did it 😛
This was such a cute episode..
ShraMan scenes were so amazing. And krpkab scenes were fun while reading them.
Your ff is amazing ?
Best of luck for your exams. Take care
xoxo
Hey zainab thanks for commenting happy u liked it and happy u liked shraman and devakshi scenes and thanks happy u liked my ff and thanks for ur wishes 🙂 and same 2 u take care 🙂
Abh Teri ff ki is part ko koi kya kahey..
Like hilarious..???
Lovely…?????
Cute..????
Sweet..????
And all the rest..of things..which I forget to mention and the others readers did in their comment???
Hey sona thanks for commenting happy u liked it yaar haha happy u liked it and well lol hahah u commented thats a lot for me 😛
Very nice epi. Mr. Dev Dixit confess his love for Sona that was shovking news.. Teasing sona be dev is so sweet. no doubt sona looks beautiful in saree.. Sona is too shocked to hear that. I am waiting the day when sona will confess love for Dev. Sumo shravan are best friends. They both should leave their ego. I am happy to read both are on right track now. Holding pillow by dev was funny secne. Thanks for the lovely epi. Hey ur name says spread happiness thats why u r here…?
waiting for next episode. Happy birthday dear Farin (Joyee) in advance ???????????????????.
Hey pk thanks for commenting and haha yeah Mr.Dixit did itand haha teasing yeah she looks really beautiful in saree especially in the epi when she dance with dev when they were alone at dev’s house, but the saree she wore in the puja she didnt look that good due to wrong makeup or hairstyle and yeah shraman are best friends first spouses later and yeah they suffered a lot due to an ego and they both understood this very well and yeah both r on right track for now and haha dev 😛 and happy u liked the epi and wow how u know my name meaning i dont even know my name meaning 😛 and joyee means winner and aww thanks for the wishes and i m so disappointed I cant publish the epi in my birthday 🙁
Hi farin really nice name just like ur epi ….ur epi is so awesome that i never get bored of it i really enjoy it and today’s epi was really cute i can never imagine that dev can do such stupid things
Hey naina thanks for commenting happy u liked my name and aww i m really happy to know id didnt bore u and happy u liked the episode and haha anything can happen in love even a smart person can do stupid things 😛
Jo di’,hahahah itna funny hai hai khudda??I was literally rolling on the floor.
Hey nishi thanks for commenting and haha lol rolling on the floor i hope u nvr dirty urself no worry singapore floor very clean jking jking 😛
Gud epi
Hey laxmi thanks for commenting happy u liked the epi 🙂
Hey joyyeee di!
I know your real name, yet I like. Thi one.
The episode was amazing !!
Leave Sonakshi, anyone can get sscared with such proposal..
ShrraMan scenes were <3 <3
Post soon
-nikita
Hey nikita thanks for commenting and yeah even i like my nickname more than my actual name:P and happy u liked the episode and yes true as shravan said anyone would have been scared with this kind of proposal and haha and loved ur dp btw and yeah will post it after 24 aug as my exams will end that day
Di the episode was good. But according to ur writing skills it could have been a little better… Sorry for this comment I wanted to share this so I told u……..
Hey saasha thanks for commenting happy u liked the epi and yeah i did a lot of mistakes in this episode actually i was writing whenever i take breaks in between and i scared i forget to post thats why i post as soon as i finish writing and after exams i hopefully can write better as my entire focus will be writing on ff that time as i will be bored during holidays 😛 till september though and I m so happy that u have expressed honest opinions and I never mind though infact makes me happier and please do comment whenever i read so that i can know how it is and even if is bad do comment is bad so that i know what mistakes i have made thank u and love u dear
Ur welcome… Btw when will u post the next epi…..
L
I will post the next episode on 25th august most likely
supppprrbb dear
Hey ibtesam thanks for commenting happy u liked the epi 🙂
Hi Fattu! Firstly sorrh for being late actually my grandfather passed away today ??? Well I liked today’s episode! Well I may sound a bit light but you know 🙁 Well leave it! Dev was sweet today 🙂 Loved his funny antics ! Good job!
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
-Zuha
Hey zuha thanks for commenting and may ur grandfather’s soul rest in peace and may allah grant jannat for him and it’s okay I understand ur situation family comes first and take care of yourself
Thanks for understanding and may his soul RIP. Ameen!
Happy bday Jo… May God bless you dear☺??????????
Hey asmita thanks for the wishes but today is not my birthday my birthday is 22 august
Ok i will wish u 22nd too ?
haha dont forget