Thankyou so much dears ..you are making me more happy with ur lovable comments..so writing every episode with joy..i feel some of u are tensed..so here is a cool epi 14..read it soon dears..
Continued in palace..
Dev went ..
(Ishwari thinks dev enjoy as much as you can today because tomorow you cant)
dev comes to sona’s house..
Ash – hai dev..come
dev – hai aunty..where is sona..
Ash – ha she waiting for you from morning dev..now she was lying in her room.u go and see dev
(sona was lying in cot with eyes closed.. dev comes inside and sits near her )
dev tells himself o my dear sona u must be realy tired of waiting for me..
U are sleeping like a baby i shouldnt wake u..
He went near her legs and touches it..suddenly sona gets up..
Son – dev..
Dev – sorry sona..i wake up u..i was seeing the wounds
son – (smiles)no dev.i was just lying..i am alright now.it is only a smal wound
dev – sorry i made u wait long
son – its ok dev..and what is that..
dev – its for u dear..please accept my smal gift
son – what is in tis dev
dev – i bought a beautiful short gown for you dear to wear for neha’s engagement..
Son – what?(shocks)
dev – why sona u wont wear it..i bought it with so much happiness..
Son – dev..i havent weard such type of dress
dev – ok now u wear it for me dear..u wil be looking very hot in this..
Son – please dev..i dont want to
dev – ok sona..then u wont even satisfy my small wish also.
Son – dev(her eyes are pleasing)
dev – ok dear..u see it if u like u wear it..else no need.(smiles)
Son – hmm.ok dev.
Dev – ok sona..tmrw i wil be waiting for you..(he gets up)
Son – (holds his hand)dev., i wil do anything for you ..so i wil wear tis and come..
Dev – realy..thanku sona..
Son – ok dev..nw u go.
Dev – hmm ok sona.take care..love you
son – love you dev..
(he went)
After sometime sona opend the box hesitantly..and surprisd..it has a beautiful lehenga in it..and in the top was her anklets with a note, ‘this is for my beautiful sona with our symbol of love ur anklets’..
She smiles and calls dev..
Son – dev..
Dev – hai sona
son – its beautiful..
Dev – o thanku dear..how u know i am in towel..did u kept any camera in my room.
Son – u naughty..i am talking about the lehanga and not you and dont you have any other dress other than that towel..
Dev – actualy i wont wear this towel also dear after marriage..(laughs)
Son – go dev..i am keeping the phone
dev – wait wait sona..did you realy like the dress
son – (smiles)s dev..but i dont know it wil suit me or not
dev – sona..you even dont know ur beauty..everything wil suit u..even bikini also that i see in my dreams..
Son – o my god..when r u going to leave this bad dreams.
Dev – its when u come in real like that but it was so good
son – (smiles)ha.k k.let us see..
and dev thanks for repairing the anklets too..i am so happy that i got it back..i am keeping it for long time..my dad bought it for me with so much love ..but y u added golden beads in it
Dev – because now my love also added in it..so that u have to keep it wit more love
son – ha ha.ok dev..
Dev – love you sona
son – love you dev..bye
dev – gud nyt
(both smiled and slept)
next day..
Day of neha’s engagement..
Guests are coming and ish family is busy in inviting them..
Dev gets ready in a beautiful sherwani matching sona..
His dress link..
http://www.galstyles.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/11/Manish-Malhotra-Top-Indian-Sherwani-Designers-Best-Collection-for-Weddings-and-Parties-2.jpg
he thinks ‘o my sona when u wil come very excited to see you’..
Sona comes to palace..she was so so pretty in the lehenga..she was just covering the forehead with the veil..
Her dress link.
http://worldfashioncorner.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/08/Latest-design-Bridal-Lehenga-Collection-2015-4.jpg
She thinks ‘god what everyone wil think about me..i havent weared this like costly dress’..
She came through backdoor..
and went near the stairs..
She thinks ‘whether i should go to dev’s room’..she hesitantly moves upstairs.
There dev coming downstairs.
Both see each other..
Dev was mesmerizd,stunned,dont take his eyes..moves towards her..
here our sona too seeing him without eyes closd..moves upwards..
When They came near..sona slips..and dev holds her..both r looking into each other eyes without noticing anyone..they also didnt notice them as al r busy in chating..
Now dev holding sona her in hip and brings his face near her..sona comes to senses ,slightly pushes him and runs upstairs..
Now dev came into senses and runs behind her..
He catches her in hand near his room and pulls her inside towards him and holds her..they again look into each other’s eyes..sona closes dev’s eyes with her hand..
dev – y sona
son – dev dont at me like this..
Dev – y cant i look at you
son – ur look is very diferent today
(he removes her hand from his eyes)
dev – whether it is hot
(sona smiles)
son – i am losing myself in ur look..
Dev – i also want to get lost in you sona..u r very very beautiful today..
Son – u r too handsome dev..
Dev – realy..tis is first time u r telling me
son – i thought of telling u everyday dev..but
Dev – but..u r shy..thats it
(she smiles and leaves herself)
she went near the window and looks out..gentle breeze falls on her face..dev came back of her near window..
Dev removes her veil in forehead..sona’s hair flies smoothly in wind..dev removes the hair from her neck and kissd in her neck.
(sona turns)
Son – dev..u r very romantic today..
Dev – sona..i am always romantic when seeing you..
Son – (smiles)ok ur romance is enough i am going..
(she moves)
Dev – aah
son – what dev
dev – something falls in my eyes..(closing his eye with hand..)
son – dev..dont act..u cant cheat me again
dev – no sona..realy believe me..its paining..blow it please
Son – dev..i am sorry..show me..
(she brings her lips near to his eyes and opened his eyes lids with her finger..)
son – s something is there
(suddenly she licks it with her tongue)
dev didnt expectd this and gets shockd and surprisd..
Son – (smiles)now is it paining dev
dev – s now here in my lips..
(he cups her face quickly and kissd in her lips very deeply..sona too..they left after they cant breathe)
dev again pulls her and hugs her..both smiles.
Dev – love you sona.. what magic you are doing..you r removing fear,pain everything easily.
Son – love you dev
Suddenly ria and nikki come in shockd to see them..
Ria – bro
(dev and sona left each other in shock..sona shies and covers her head with veil)
nikki – sona bhabhi..you too..
(sona surprisd to hear her calling bhabhi)
ria – what r u surprisd..we know everything as bro said us.
(sona smiles)
nikki – bhabhi..we know our brother dont have brain..but u can tel him no to do romance by closing the door..
Dev – ha ok dears.what u r doing here.go and help neha in getting reading..
Ria – ok ok bro..we wil go..we wont disturb u..
Dev – u have already disturbed us dears
nikki – hmm bro..mom called u so finish ur romance and go quick.
(they laughd and went)
son – i am also going dev..
Dev – sona please.(holds her hand)
Son – i know what u wil do if i am here for some more time..u come down soon.
(she left his hand and went smiling)
dev too stands smiling..he thinks sona today i wil tel about us to mom after that u wont run like this..
to be continued..
Precap – neha’s engagement continuatn,isw talks wit natasha
Thankyou for reading dears..hope you like it..please send your views in comments dears..love to read it.
46 Comments
Nyc one…bt I cnt see d dresses..
Thanku yashfeen..realy y i dont know i wil post again for you.
http://worldfashioncorner.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/08/Latest-design-Bridal-Lehenga-Collection-2015-4.jpg
http://www.galstyles.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/11/Manish-Malhotra-Top-Indian-Sherwani-Designers-Best-Collection-for-Weddings-and-Parties-2.jpg
Thanx yr….u r really sweet..
U are also sweet dear.
Awesome episode
Thanku so much sgatik
Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee Sakthi ❣??❤️????????❤️???????❣????❤️??post soon
Thanku so much manya.
Awesome episode!! Eagerly waiting for next one. I guess Ishwari wants Natasha to marry Dev. Maybe that’s why she is going to talk to her. Superb! Post soon dear??????? Eagerly waiting…………
Thanku so much maria..your guess i somewhat correct dear..wil post tmrw
‘Hope you like it!’
No I didn’t like it at all! I am sorry to say but really.. How can you write like this! I mean how?!
Such an amazing, beautiful episode! Forget about liking it! I loved it to the core! Their hot romance is killing me nos yaar!! Don’t kill me my exams are going on, I have to study??
I’m really speechless! No words to describe this! You are so talented my di!??
You know I love.. Love stories because of serials and believed it too! And after coming to this site I get to read so many wonderful love stories.. I’m so glad☺☺
Sorry for writing this above part.. Just wanted to express my feelings 😉
So coming back to your ff!!
Actually I will have to search adjectives next time on google so that I get words to write… Seriously yaar! Keep it up di??
Love you❤
And thank you so much for this ff!?
thankyou so much maria dear..first i got afraid reading the comment…but i understood how much you love my ff…..i am very happy to read ur comment..and dont search for words dear ur love for my ff is enough for me..love you too..
All the best for your exams dear
Haha?? I scared my di… Sorry!
Thank you so much di! I’ll surely do well!
Ha ha..its k dr..take care.
Awesome. Again a great episode. Love the devakshi moments.love to read ur ff and its increasing my interest towards ur ff more and more. Thanks for a wonderful ff.
Thankyou so much ali..actually i thought of improving more after reading ur comments..when you love to read i love to write this…
Adorable romantic amazing awesome sizzling episode ?????
What to say I love you and your ff
thank you for ff
pleasure is all ours
Lots of love
Thankyou so much dhira…love you too dear with loads of love..
Hi hi.. This vimala.. Am reading ur episodes from the very beginning.. I felt like this story is close to my heart than any other… Ur updates are awesome.. Its not like that u r a new writer here(which u told in the first epi.. Tat u too a fan here..) .. Really u stole my heart from ur writing dear…
All the very best for ur upcoming epis..don’t end the story So soon..
Waiting eagerly for the next update… Rock itttt…
Thankyou so much vimala for your first comment…s dear this is my very first writing and started to write it based on some of my dreams and thanks that u like this much…
i will try my best dear..
Hey sakthi i don’t liked it i just loved it from my core of heart. Its to awesome…… Nhi nhi yeh to awesome se v jyada tha its amazing, commendable, lovely, cuteee, mind blowing, amazing aur kya kahu… Shayad mai speech less ho gy hu. Today i have seen new shade of urs nd i’m happy as well as shocked but kch v ho pr my love for u is increasing day by day ??????????????. So accept ur badai vali jabara fan ???????
With love
@erina /rosho /rosh
Tumhe jo pasand ho vhi parmana ????????
thankyou so much rosho…ur comment is also very cuteee like ur name…i wrote this epi with much thought but i am happy that all my friens like it..no fan u r my friend dear…
love you too…..
Ok my lovely frnd. I love to be in ur frnd book nd i’m happy ki krpkab ki vajah se mjhe tm aur baki sb mile. Ab to maine bht rich ho gyi hu… No no no not like rich in terms of money like bill gets ?????but in frnds ??????. So thankque….. Nhi nhi sirf thankque nhi balki bada vala thankque for coming in my life as a frnd dear vse tmhra koi short name ho to batana dear.
love you so much rosho dear..i am a very friendly girl who loves to have friends..those who like me are al my friends..happy if i am in ur friend book too..i cant understand ur few words in hindi dr as i am from TN..
Take care..
awesome ??? ff best as always ?????
thankyou so much rithika……….
Awesome episode..luvd d dresses..
Thnkyou so much aaru..i have searched for that more..
Nice one as always. And u have a great choice for dresses. Loved the dress of sona.
Thankyou so much sharica..i am happy that u loved it..
srrry dear I was not able to cmmnt since 2 days….
well epi was damn cute n lovly ..
hope evrythng goes well plz sakthi no sad moments in furthr epis.=its request…
loads of love !!!!!
thankyou so much ibtesam..and no need for sorry loved ur comment…dont worry i will make fine everything as soon as…
Very cute nice and romantic episode. I loved it???
Thanku so much dolly…
Superb…?????☺️???????….masa agaya…..ishwari ? Kabhi nhi sudre gi..Aab Natasha say biyah na kar day Dev ka ??….waise as usual episode was fantastic ?????
Thanku so much maleeha.
Thankssssss alot dear for such a nice ff.
Thanku so much for the compliment dear.
Awesome epi? agn u did a great job.
Too nze to read devakshi moments ?. I ish too accept it.such a fantastic ff.?
Thanku nikki for the lovely comments.
Amazing episode as usual!!!!??
Thanku so much niki
Woww Amazing and awesome episode….I’m reading ur ff from the beginning it was awesomeee… I love ur ff very much dr thankq for writing such a great love story … eagerly waiting for next episode post soon dear…
Thanku so much for the first comment anitha and love for my ff..i wil post it today dr..
Wow, what an epic, dhasu, romantic, awesome, tremendous episode. I don’t know that how many adjectives should I use to describe ur ff. I just love it and the hot romance is just killing me. Although, u r very punctual in updating but still update soon. Waiting for some more romantic and sizzling hot scenes amongst the two !!!!
Thankyou so much devakshian..i have updated it for you…but i am sorry dear the next few episodes wont be like that of your expections..but trust me i will make everything good soon