story part:-
next morning:-
ritik-how you came to know he isn’t rocky
shivanya-actually
FB shows
ravi-shivu
shivanyas phone rings but it was in silent mode so it wasn’t heard by anyone and shivanya was wearing ear mic
other side of the phone:-
shesha-hi di do you remember rocky raheja he is in the same collage of mine
rocky-hi di
other side of phone:-
shivanya whispered-hi talk to you later
then i tried to take him near fire and could see the mask of rocky
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ritik-wow you knew it i think if you got its prove then of love
shivanya -what
just then sanskar goes out
sanskar-why you called me
the person is showed to be david , kyatis father
david-so to kill them or them i mean mom
sanskar-or love
david-correct so please tell fast
sanskar-you are a cheater
david-ha ha little poor man. dont you remember how i killed khayati by burning her or how easily transfered all girls here so that my daughter two best friend give their property
or now
showing box where moms and kushi are their
david-think fast tic tok
shivanya-now no need of it
david-sorry but prof
ritik-the whole is looking at you
david-but you all these
shivanya-she is your daughter i mean step daughter khayati
nania-and we are not helpless
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chakor-guys listen someone is following sanskar we will talk at phone just now imlu you shout
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he is taken by police
karan-yes
at night:-
nania-finally everything is sort out
karan-true and now dil ki bat zoba pe
nania-means
karan-n..n..nothing
nania-okay
in karans room:-
karan-KARAN IS IN LOVE
phone rings
voice-karu time has come now i will come soon okay bye baby
karan-what,no
at lawn:-
khyati-okay then i am going bye
nania-please say whats the surprise
kushi-di i dont know this surprise but i know another surprise
karan-what
sharada-bacho..lets go but first i will say that we ladies are going to prepare for the marriage of parth shorvari teni aman
all-KYA
all jumped and hugged each other
khyai-auntie you opend all surprise
kushi-but their is one more surprise
nania-wow
next morning:-
karan-oh no she is coming but will this be a disaster for me and nania? willwe be part or apart? oh god help me
nania-karan what are you doing here and crying
precap:-the girl had come
girl-karu who is she
rishi-tanuja
tanuja-stop
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yesterday i say 2 dislike can you please tell why you didnt like it i will make sure to correct it
with love
spriha
8 Comments
Interesting update. It was little confusing
thanks but what was the confusion
The sanskar matter,not to able to understand properly
okay then in next part i will clarify
U are not writing thahaan part
i will write
read 8 parts.this is my comment
So all jodies have kids n they r reading their own love story to the kids.Why tanu is upset n guilty?What pain was Shivanya Tanuja were sharing?Suraj Chakor had a fight over d ph n hearing her voice itself suraj is impressed.Thapki bihaan scene was funny.Rivanya scene with ore piya as bgm was so romantic.Chakor Suraj met.But she is not letting him c her face.interesting luv story.Tanshi love is blossoming over the ph.loved their scene.mask dance was nice.loved tanshi dance the most.the conversation btw all couples was cute. All songs were too good.wow..my fav tanshi n rivanya won the game.it was interesting when they saw each other after removing masks.shivanya pretending to be falling n ritik taking care of her..when shivanya accepted him as a friend n said that she believes him more ritik getting emotional was lovely.oh here parth loves tenu n tenu luvs aman.to make her jealous parth was with shorvari.wonder who will end up with him in their story.still confused what pain shivanya n tanuja r having.oh ragini got hurt when laksh was attacked.loved laksh taking her to hospital.shivanya tanuja exposing ravi n ravi getting arrested was thrilling.loved ritik saving shivanya n rivanya raglak conversation.
surprised to c shesha as shivanya’s friend.but i’m quite confused.who was wearing Rocky’s mask?Khayati’s step father was threatening n blackmailing sanskar?What exactly was he doing with sanskar?good that he got exposed n arrested.good that along with Aman Teni Parth Shorvari r getting married.But Parth was in luv with Teni.Right?then how did he fall in love with Shorvari?plz explain.
I’ve commented from pt9 till pt12 in those pages.plz check out