~~?Sacrifices?~~
Kavita’s POV
It’s been a week to that incident. I still remember that night!!.. The worst night of my life!!..
**Flashback starts**
Third person’s POV
The rain and storm blowed heavily. In a corner remained Kavita! Heart throbbing, tears flowing out…. She had realized a bitter truth!!.. The truth that she wasn’t loved whom she had loved!!.. She was left alone once again on those empty roads!!.. She was selfish! She agreed but she didn’t want to ruin anyone’s life! Was it her fault? Or was it destiny that was so cruel with her? She had cried that entire night and thought about her life. She had destroyed everything, every single thing!!..
She has pointed out such a person for her and she couldn’t blame anyone, neither did she want to!!… She just wanted his embrace till she’s alive and what was wrong with that??.. She had loved him selflessly and had expected nothing! Nothing in return!!.. Just a piece of his heart!!.. That’s it!
She kept crying the entire night thinking about her faults, if she has done anything, till everything went black.
The next time she awoke was in Hospital! She wondered who brought her here??.. She never thought that Sanskar would do something like this! That was unexpected! Obviously, after a fight who would ever expect him to come to her! She thought the same, he would never return, that wasn’t impossible but wasn’t expected!!…
With him stood Rohan too. Rohan was a good brother, he had never left her, a good example of ‘Blood Relations Don’t Matter’. Sanskar sat next to her and gave her a bear hug. That was what she was in need!!.. The warmth of his body made her stable! She had been hospitalized because of cold she caught sitting there on the terrace. Rohan feared seeing her at the terrace and brought her here. Doctors warned her of complete bed rest for a month. She had a hole in her heart and that made her health even worse.
Sanskar arrived the moment he got alerted. His anger grew!!.. Kavita was after all a human and a good friend!!.. When he was depressed she had given him support, pleasure and a friendly talk. Just like Swara!!.. She would do anything possible to make him calm! And now he had her responsibility as well!!.. To return that…. He didn’t like debts!
**Flashback ends**
Kavita’s POV
He knew what I wanted! Love and care but he wasn’t ready to make up his mind. I wanted to make him mine I want to I love him so much!!..
“Sanskar, I still love you” I kissed him.
Sanskar’s POV
“Sanskar, I still love you” and she kissed me.
I want to push her apart but I was worried as well!!… She wasn’t well enough! She withdrew when she found no response!!..
“You don’t love me anymore!” she said with a faint smile.
That wasn’t her. I hate that horrible smile. It just kept her thoughts aside and revealed a bold one. Which she wasn’t!!..
“Baby! You sleep please! You are still not okay!!…”
“I’m more than okay! You go” the tone to which she spoke was something which I knew!!.. I had got her hint!
“I am here. I don’t need to go. You stay calm and sleep!” I said as I made her lay down again.
“I asked you to go Sanskar!!.. It’s good for you. I love you and will keep loving you! But I don’t want you to loose someone whom you love! Go I said” she ordered.
“But you??.. I can’t leave you alone and..”
“And what?? Go I said and bring Swara with you! I’m here waiting for you to return. We won’t have the same relation although but does that mean we’ll no more be friends??..”
“No. Will be friends always!” I smiled.
“And I am fine what happened to me??.. Nothing! But I have a condition!” she spoke waking up from the bed and playing with my shirt buttons.
“What??..” I choked. I didn’t know what will she ask. I hope she doesn’t asks what I fear for.
“A kiss. Just one, a lovely one, a last one too” she said coming close to me.
I was shocked.
“Please! Only one…” she looked into my eyes and placed her mouth upon mine.
“I want you to join too” she whispered while kissing.
I participated. It was a last one and I didn’t bugged on. I didn’t want to!!.. She wasn’t well!!.. Arguing wouldn’t give profit.
“I love you” she said and slept hugging me. I made her lay on the bed and closed the door behind her.
Kavita’s POV
He shut the door and I got up crying. This wasn’t easy. Letting your love move out of your life isn’t easy! Especially, the person you love the most!!.. I lost him. My love, my life but I’m happy because he’ll be happy with not me but someone else!!.. I kept my hand on my belly, this was new!
I let him go off but I had him inside me now. He is inside me, his blood is inside me!!.. Our symbol of love or MY symbol!!… Whatever is it I don’t care. I’m a month pregnant!!..
Yes! Yes! Yes! I’m going to be a mother but for that I don’t have the support beside me! But I won’t force you Sanskar. I will never!!.. But will never stop loving you!!..
“I love you both” I kept my hands on my belly feeling blissful feeling that something is growing inside me!!.. But tears didn’t stop….
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How was the part?
I know its short and not up-to the mark…
But sorry…
130 Comments
Nice
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Woooow anisha… thnx for chappy… m shocked n surprised to see Kativa like this.. its so new to me.. n i like this.. superb dr.. olz next paet soon.
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Next part after a month…
Awesome…. Kavita pregnant…..its sad for her
Ha! I know! ??
awesome.. hela kavita i spregnant now.. what will happen? is sanskar realised his love for swara or not..
update next part soon
He realised his love!!..
Next part next month
why next part after a month.. no please update it dear…. dont do this
hey anisha it was an awesome chappy….. hope everything will be fine soon…. n thanks for posting it so early….
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Next part next month..
Whaterver Kavitha Doing Now Isn’t Sacrifice. Its Her Punishment. All The Things Are Messed Up. Life Of Three Of Them Lost Its Charm. Kavita Is Feelng Hurt Bcz He Love Isn’t Her. Bt Wht Abt Swara’s Love? Where Did Her So Called Good Heart Go When She Was Betrayng Swara?? I Wish No One Shud Get A Life Like Both Swara And Kavitha. No One Shud Get A Husbend Like Sankar Who Is Behind Another Girl In The Absen Of Her Wife.
Hmm.. Totally agreed!!
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Awesome but srsly pregnant … i waa shockes after reading it ….bt pls dont make dis kavita n her child trouvle in swasan’s life …
Hmm.. Ok
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nice..
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After reading this chap
Definitely I don’t want swasan
Plz don’t do injustice to that unborn child
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Anisha why are u giving heart attacks to us.first swara sacrifice and now kavitha , sanskar is that good to sacrifice everyone for his happiness and what this pregnancy at least he has a right to know about his child and is kavitha going to die swara takes the child as like mahan don’t show it pls and kavitha also needs love yar wat about her is she going to be single mother no pls
You will know in the upcoming episodes
it was emotional her character is too gud yr
Hmm.. I know
Pls yaar I don’t want this……. I want swasan to meet and want swara to punish sanskar…….
Will surely she that!! Let’s wait for the next part!!..
Omg
Its complicated more now…
Sanskars character is the worst
Swara should not forgive
Wait for the upcoming episodes
No I don’t want kavita to be nice yaar…. If she will sacrifice her love toh kabhi na kabhi sanskar will feel pity for her & she has his child toh vo vapas toh aayega hi iske pass….. Yaar bt nice update
You will get your answer in the next part…
Hey don’t get feel bad iam going to write long comment I don’t want swara to forgive sanskar as he is playing with two girls as he is thinking they are toys first get bored with swara he wants kavitha and he said clearly to kavitha he choose her instead of swara and said he loves her only and today after satisfaction of lust he again wants swara and now not bothered about kavitha how can any women trust him pls think out of characters I know it is swasan .but think out if it and frankly saying I don’t like pregnancy track yar sorry if I hurt u
listen shilpa i understand your feelings but see sanky was and is in love with swara only yes he was only attracted with kavitas body sometimes it happens with boys i know sanky is at fault but now he is guilt he should suffer but he loves swara only we cant deny it
I know this story is gud happens real life also that’s why iam saying not to think about characters think about reality no ex wife can forgive ex husband those who have extra marital affair and more wat about child why we always think about swasan, love is different but sanskar has responsibility to wards his child and if he again attracted to other women wat swara will do how can she trust him,this is just my comment story will be the choice of writer
Shilpa!!.. You’re correct as well!!
But it’s a SwaSan fan fiction doesn’t mean they’ll unite does it?
Ur and mine thoughts are similar shilpa. U can see my comment on facebook. I also want the same.
I feel bad for kavitha yaar
Me too
I hate this fiction.I can’t understand it was swasan fiction ya kavsan.some episode mujhe laga ki yeh reality type fiction. nw this is too.pregnant this is too much.kavita mahan ban raha hai.I don’t think so.o mahan type uska character hai.jo ladki ek unknown insaan ke sath s*x.then same ladke se pyaar.99% percent man r dog.bt wife ke liye another place hota hai……….I don’t knw kiya bolo main nw I hate this story
So please don’t read!!…
I don’t need your comments please!!..
When Swara is mahan you can accept that then why not Kavita??..
Really!!.. Thank You so much for reading..
I don’t want to speak or will sound rude!!..
listen ayonti its not like that but sometimes we get attracted physicalkya nd we end up in love i dont think kavita is wrong in her place i really loved her character
Awe! Thank Kayu! I’m glad you liked it! ???
Thank u for the tym u read this fiction….
Bt really sorry to hurt u she tried to write smething realsitic….every story is nt a fairy tale…..that has to be completed…. in todays world this is the story of evrry 3rd house…..
i know we cant see swasan like this….nd every kavita is nt bad….she wass devoid of love from start….. she wass attracted nd becme selfish wen she get love…. i m sry if i hurt u… bt this fiction is reality of many woman in todays century…..
ergggghhhhhh…..
literally dont know wat to say….
bt if u dont feel good then dont read…????
ayonti if you don’t like it dont read it 🙂
we love this ff 🙂
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Shruti!!. ❤❤❤
I never knew you read my ff…
It’s my pleasure!
The one who writes my favorite ff Humsafar
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crap fiction. kavita pregnant. jo ladki kisi ki ghar ujar ta o kiya kisi ko pyaar karega.shagun apne comment kiya bola injustice with unborn child lyk seriously. 1st of all o sanky se pyaar nahe karta.then kaha se child aaya.clap clap clap what a fiction some people said that reality base fiction. lol lol lol.2min silent 4r those people. mera time khrp kardiye.mode off ho gaya yeh fiction par kar.
Then please don’t waste your time mou!!…
21st century me you have loads of work to do …
No need to make your mood off
lol lol lol.kavita pregnant. lol.lol.jo ladki kisi ka ghar ujar ne main 2min nahe socha.nw mahan lol again lol.writer kiya prove karna chahata hai.are yaar yeh fiction swasan ka hai /na kavsan ka.some people said that feel bad 4r swara.lol lol lol
KavSan ka hai ye FANFICTION because I’m a die hard fan of KavSan….
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hahah u seems frustrated in this comment I can understand ur situation its really frustrating whene nobody understand ur work its feels like sar fod do
Awesome
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I don’t think this type of concept is emerged now. A guy is already divorced his wife so there is no chance left that after doing all this wife will accept her husband. If let us assume in India if it happens then it only possible if he haven’t divorced his wife. And coming to Kavita good character let us assume that she had done a terrible mistake but the moment she came to know that sanskar is married mam then only that time she should left him. After that it was swasan decision whether they want this marriage or not.
And now coming to pregnancy that is really baseless thing as u have already shown they were always under protection. So don’t find it u need to make major changes in your ff
I never showed protection between KavSan.. It was between swasan..
This is what makes the difference you don’t read the story properly and put the blame on others….
I don’t need a law lecture PLs!!
I said its a Swasan ff…
Did I say Swara will accept him?
Kavita pregnant??!!! One more shock…!!! awesome dude…!! loved it…!! waiting for next part…!!
Chandu!!…
I love you ??
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Will post after a month!!
What??!!! Why??!!! I will miss it…!! 🙁
Is this one more shock for me??!!! Don’t do that…!! It’s on full swing now…!! I wan’t to see swasan’s reactions…!!
But I thought to post it after a month…
Let’s see…
Ha ha ha. Too good. You made it all complicated ???? . I just want to know where you take this story. SwaSan KavSan chodo. This is reality. People don’t know the crime rate increasing in India due to the extra material affairs. I am so glad that you bought this story boldly. Don’t think about others. Let bashers bash. They can’t stop you from writing. If you have bashers that. You have supports also.
Thank You Dhara!!!.. Darling!!.. ???
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oh my god anisha dii its awesome yr and love to see kavitas this part i am really feeling bad for her hope she gets support from swara too and swasan gets united and swara understand kavita
Ha!!.. Will see.. What happens…
Kayu!!.. Love ya
kavita mahan kaise ho sakta hai.aapne uski character aisa hai.jo ladki ka father uski maa ke sath yeh kiye.o kabhi dusre ke sath same thing nahe karsakta.Rohan character lol.o kavita liye sanskar ko question kar raha.jab sanky yeh sab kar raha.o tu janta tha sanky married hai.kisi bhi bhai apni behen ke sath aisa hote hoye nahe dhek sakta. when there r intimate it is only lust…….
Thank u for the tym u read this fiction….
Bt really sorry to hurt u she tried to write smething realsitic….every story is nt a fairy tale…..that has to be completed…. in todays world this is the story of evrry 3rd house…..
i know we cant see swasan like this….nd every kavita is nt bad….she wass devoid of love from start….. she wass attracted nd becme selfish wen she get love…. i m sry if i hurt u… bt this fiction is reality of many woman in todays century…..
ergggghhhhhh…..
literally dont know wat to say….
bt if u dont feel good then dont read…????
I can’t describe what type fiction is that.kavita ne aab tak swara ke liye nahe socha.suddenly mahan I don’t knw wht to say.extra material affair tak thik tha…….nw baby
Niti!!. Dear!! You won’t understand!!…
You all are suitable for cartoons like Doraemon and all!!…
If Swara becomes mahan you have no problem but Kavita can’t become mahan? Because she is a villain In the serial??
Do hell with you ??
this was so sweet of kavita to let go sanskar
Yes! ??
Don’t unite swasan or kavsan as sanskar doesn’t deserve anyone
Hmm.. Ok
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I don’t like it.In above 95% has extra material affair hote.bt its true.wife ka place kisi ko nahe deta koi.kavita father ne uske maa ke sath same thing kiya jo usne swara ke sath.bt yr yeh baby kaha se aaya.I can’t understand what r trying to prove
What? Kavita ke mom ne KYa kiya?
She did nothing!!..
Two different things merging up!!..
Read the story properly then comment such things!!..
Don’t give lame replies…