—SCENE STARTS WITH MAHA AARTI—-
After doing the aarti Obros went near Avika and the young gang started random chit chatting… suddenly Avika’s phone rings….
“Hello!…WHAT!!!!! NO…NO!!!…..” Avika screamed in horror…as phone slips from her hands in terror….tears brimmed her eyes…by then shivaay shook her…
“Avika…kya hua (Avika…what happened)….” he asked worriedly…
“Bhaiya…Wo…wo…wo…acc..accident…..” she said in her trembling voice but couldint complete and started sobbing… “I….I…need to go….” saying so she ran towards her car….
“I think we should follow her…she seems to be worried…”Shivaay said
“I think you are right shivaay… come lets go…” Omkara said… “ I can’t leave her like that”
Obros followed her…she was driving rash…tears continuously crawling down her cheeks…
“NO…NOTHING WILL HAPPEN…NOTHING…NOTHING WILL HAPPEN…” She was continuously repeating this…wiping her tears…
The car stopped with a sudden brake…Avika rushed out of the car….Oberois stopped behind her car… Avika entered the hospital Obros followed her
“Mr. and Mrs. Rathore….!!!” she asked receptionist…
“Sorry we can’t give patient’s information like that…” receptionist said blankly
“I AM THEIR DAUGHTER GOD DAMMIT…!!!! JUST TELL ME WERE THEY ARE….!!!…” Avika nearly screamed at her with blood shot eyes…
“ ICU…Straight and first right…” receptionist said in the scared voice…
She was running in the corridors like a mad…she saw Pratap (PA of Mr. Kashyap)
“ Pratap…!!!” she pulled him her eyes were questioning him…
“ Sir and mam met with the accident while they were coming from the airport…..(sobbing)…” he said
By the time ShivOmRu were by her side…Omkara held her shoulder…she hugged him and cried holding his collar… “ Kuch nahi hoga na Om…Mom Dad thik honge na…” ( Nothing will happen na om…Mom and Dad will be alright na)
Om caressing her head…” Shhh…Nothing will go wrong Avi…(he broke the hug cupped her face with one hand and held her shoulder from the other) just stay strong…” he consoled
This was disturbed by the arrival of doctor of out the ICU…
“Doc hows mom & dad…??” she fired the questions as soon as the doctor appeared….
“you ??”
“i m their daughter…Avika…Avika singh Rathore”
“Miss Rathore…their situation is very critical…there is very less time…I m sorry…please excuse me..” doc left them…
Avika stood numb… “ Very less time….” she repeated and collapsed on the ground…
“Avika…” Shivaay sat beside her tears were rolling from his eyes he cannot see her sister in this state…
“ Bhaiya…what the doctor said they have very less time…what does that mean??” she held him and cried bitterly…
Nurse came to them… “ Miss Avika patients wants to meet you..the have gained consciousness”
Avika rushed inside the ICU…her parets were lying like two lifeless bodies…
“Maa…Papa…she came close to them…obors followed her inside supporting her…
They slowly opened their eyes…and saw ShivOmRuVika in teary eyes…
“Dont cry Avu..iwe don’t want you to say us last goodbye in these teary eyes…” Mr Rathore said in broken voice…
“Dont say like this Papa…you can’t leave me like that…” she uttered sobbingly…
“ Shivaay beta…(Shivaay came forward and held his shaking hand ) we have always considered you three as our own sons… you have always considered Avika as your younger sister…you have never differentiated between Omru and Avika….She is a bit stubborn and will never show her pain…even if she is breaking from inside…promise me shivaay you will take care of her like her own brother…promise mee…”(his breath started shaking) “ i promise you uncle i will always be by her side” Shivaay assured him ..seeing this Avika rushed to call the doctor… Doctor came and stood silently looking at the state of Mr.Rathore…(Mrs. Rathore’s bearth also started haking and she started breathing heavily) Avika rushed to her side… “ Maa…maa…doctor plzzdo somthing” she begged the doc…she held her hand.. “ you cant leave me like this maa…” “don’t cry Avu…and take care….” saying so her grip loses its grip from avika’s hand fall on the bed lifeless…same happened with Mr. Rathore…
“Sorry we couldn’t save them…i m sorry…” doc uttered and left…
“NOOOO……!!!!!” Avika Screamed and collapsed on the floor unconscious
Rudra rushed to her… “ Avika di…get up…doctor…doctor!!!..” Rudra’s scream attracted ShivOm’s Attention…Rudra lifted her laid her on the stretcher…
“Doc…dekhiye na kya hogaya hai Avika di ko …..( look na wat has happened to Avika di)” Rudra pleaed in crying voice..
“ quickly take her to the observation room…” doctor instructed his team
Obros standing outside the room thinking how in just 15 mins there lives turned topsy-turvy…breaking their chain of thoughts shivaays phone rings Dadi was calling…
He picks up the phone “hello”
D-“Billu puttar tu omkara rudy aur avika kahan ho yun achanak puja chod ke kaha chale gaye..”
S-“Dadi vo….( he narrates the whole incident to her )
D-“hye wahe guruji…Beta Avika kaisi hai…”
S-“ I don’t know dadi she is still in the observation room”
D- tu firak mat kar hum abhi hospital aate hain *cuts the call* ( don’t worry we are coming right now)
Doc comes out “ she is under severe trauma and stress you have to be very careful…a slight carelessness can cost her life…she is in acute case of depression…”
“doc when can we take her home” om questioned
“ now only” doc said “ plzz excuse me”
(Dadi and family reaches hospital and controls all the situation…avika is discharged…Mr.and Mrs. Rathore’s last rites were preformed by ShivOmRu…four days have passed their death Avika has slowy started to turn normal…)
One fine day…The whole family was sitting on the dinning table …
Dadi- i have an inportant announce to share with you all…i have decided that from now onwards Avika will permanently be stying in Oberoi Mansion…not as a guest but as the DAUGHTER OF THE HOUSE….
Every body stunned by dadi’s decision…
Avika- but dadi how can i…i mean..its not at all required i’ll go back to London..i don’t want to trouble u guys with my presence…
Shivaay- how can you even think that you are troubling us with your presence… you are also a part of our family and it is final you are staying with us…and its not a request rather an order of an elder brother…
Dadi –Shivaay is right…you call me dadi… cant u listen a small order…
Avika- No dadi its nothing like that…your wish my command…(smiles faintly)
Shakti , Jhanvi, ShivOmRu Dadi were all happy with this except tej and Pinky (they were annoyed with avika’s presence in OM )
Pinky (thinking) it seems we have opened a orphanage here..i just cannot tolerate this girl in this house…
Few days passed like this obros tries to cheer up Avika and she was also responding positively
One day om took avika to his art gallery to divert her mind…where just to cheer her up he plays her favourite song and asks herto dance with him…she agrees they dances on a song (Matargashti from tamasha )
While they wee dancing someone is shown talking there pictures (hugging each other and all which can be easily misinterpreted) and Omvika who were engrossed in their fun dance were unaware of the upcoming storm…
In the evening
Shivaays phone beeped with a mms…it was a news clip where Omvika’s pic was show with the caption oberois ki raasleela…(oberoi’s raasleela) girlfriend or just friend???
Shivaay stood in shock… “ Oh my mata!! Shivaay come down stairs fast” pinki screamed gathering every one….
Everyone stunned looking at the television all the news channels were showing the news of om and avika’s relationship….and defaming oberois…Avika stood with teary eyes…
“oh my mata Did you see this girl mummy ji…abhi iske maa baap ko guzre ek mahina bhi nahi hua hai aur isne aapne rang dikhane shuru kardiye…(its not even a month her parents have passed away and she had started showing her true colours) see how shameless she is…because of her every news papers are just defaming oberois like any thing…” pinky taunted avika’s charater
She stood stunned listening to pinki’s words as if those were not words but some arrows that pierced her heart “how these people defamed my friendship…no i cant become the reason of oberois humiliation…” she thought and silently ran to her room…
Suddenly Rudra felt tha avika was missing…
R-“ O where is Avika di ?”
Om looked around and couldint find her…he panicked as he could sense something wrong….
ShivOmRu searching avika in the whle house..when Rudra found that her room was locke from inside..
R- Bhaiya…O…(he called them) the room is locked from inside
O- Avi…open the door dammit..(no response)
S- avi plzz open the door…plzz open it (he banged)
Om and shivaay looked eo and pushed the door hard and broke into the room
The sight inside the room left the three in shock….
Avika was lying in the pool of blood oozing from her slit wrist…
“ Avikaaa…./avikaa diii” ShivOmRu screamed
“Avika get up…” shivaay shook her vigorously
“Call the doc Rudra fast” omkara instructed
precape; angry om…
11 Comments
Fabulous…..
Thank you dear
It is awesome
Where is anika and gauri
Why avika
I am honestly say that I don’t like it
Plz do some thing plz
Ruchi…I really sorry PLZZ do not misunderstand AVIKA as Omkara love interest….and Anika and Gauri will soon be comming….please be patient…and please don’t hate me for this….stay tuned with the next update
It’s ok i never hate you don’t say sorry I will only asked my one request plz do aniri entry take care
It is nice one dear
interesting.. pls post next part soon..
It’s ok i never hate you don’t say sorry I will only asked my one request plz do aniri entry take care
Awesome ?
Fabulous update