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So,let’s start part 20/Last part.
Recap: Pragya and Tanu’s confrontation, Neel’s entry,Kunj’s entry,Kunj have a plan,Neel shoots Kunj,Aaliya prays for Kunj,Aaliya and Kunj love each other,Rabul and Kunj and Aaliya’s marriage.
Scene:1
Location: Abhi’s residence
Next day,
Aaliya is seen in red lehnga. Pragya comes and says wow! aaliya you’re looking gorgeous. Aaliya says Thanks Bhabi! She smiles.
Pragya says let’s go! you pati dev/husband is waiting for you. Aaliya says OK! they leave. They come downstairs. Kunj is seen in Bridal dress in Mandap. Marriage starts. Abhi do Kanyadan. They take pheras. Kunj makes aaliya wear mangalsutra and then puts sindoor in Aaliya’s hairline. Marriage completes. They take elders’ blessings.
Rabul marriage starts. Someone is seen taking Abhi’s phone. He is none other then Neel. Neel smirks. He goes to a room.
Scene:2
Location: Abhi’s residence
Aaliya is seen. Kunj hugs her from back and says we’re one.
Aaliya says yes and leaves shying.
Neel messages aaliya. Aaliya sees and says why bhai is calling me???? Let’s see. She leaves.
Tanu says Pragya,have you see Aaliya???? Pragya says No,Tanu! Can you please come taking her???? Tanu says OK! and leaves.
Rabul marriage completes. They too take elders’ blessings.
Aaliya comes in Abhi’s room. Neel is seen hiding behind door. He closes door. Aaliya turns back and is shocked.
Neel comes to her and strangulates her. Aaliya pushes him. Tanu opens door and is shocked. Tanu says you!
Scene:3
Location: Abhi’s residence
Pragya says its too much late, I see them. Where they can be? Yes might be in my room. Let’s see. She leaves.
Pragya walks by her room.
Aaliya says How dare you to come here???? Pragya says Aaliya’s voice. She comes in her room and is shocked to see Neel. Neel shows Aaliya gun and says goodbye, aaliya Mehra.
He shoots. Tanu takes aaliya away.
Scree shifts to Hall. Abhi says bullet’s voice. and rushes to his room. All follows him.
Screen shifts to Pragya’s room. Tanu says Aaliya are you OK? Aaliya says yes,I’m fine.
Pragya pushes Neel form back. Neel falls. Neel stands and points gun to Tanu and says good bye Tanushree Mehta. He shoots.
Purab try to push Neel but Neel Holds her hand and says Stop your pushing drama and pushes Pragya. Pray falls on bed. Neel throws gun near tanu and Lay on Pragya. Tanu gets shoot. Aaliya sits near tanu. Tanu says aaliya save Pragya. Aaliya says OK!
Aaliya rushes to Pragya. She try to save Pragya but Neel pushes her. Aaliya falls. Neel try to kiss Pragya. Tanu stands and shouts Neel. Neel turns back. Tanu says you’re trying to make good loss but it will not happen, however I’m too dying but can’t let you for this. She shoots. Neel gets shoot by gun. Tanu falls. All comes. Abhi comes and shouts Pragya. Neel falls and dies. tanu says abhi please forgave me by heart. Abhi says you’ve do a big favour on me. I forgave you by heart. Tanu says thanks abhi and dies. Aaliya stands. Kunj comes and hugs Aaliya. Aaliya says kunj. Kunj says Aaliya. Tei Tanu tune plays.
Pragya stands. Abhi comes to her. Both see in each other eyes.
pal bhar thair jao
Dil ye sambhal jae
kaise tumhe roka karoo
mere taraf aata
har gam phisal jae
aankhon me tum ko bharoo
bin bole bate tum se karo
agar tum saath ho
agar tum saath ho
rah be rah be
nahair nagia se tere duniya me
mere duniya ha there cahaton mai
mai dhal jatee hoon there aadton me
agar tum saath ho
Both hug.
tere nazron me hai tere sapne
tere sapno me hai narazi
mujhe lagta ha kai batain dil ke
hote lafzon ke dhokebaazi
tum saath ho ya na ho kya farq ha
bedard thi zindagi bedard ha
agar tum saath ho
agar tum saath ho
Pragya says That Neel …. Tanu save me,she give sacrifice.
Palke jhapakte hoon
din ye nikal jai
bhaite bhaite bhage phiroon
mere taraf aata
har gam phisal jae
aankhon me tum ko bharoo
bin bole bate tum se karo
agar tum saath ho
agar tum saath ho
Abhi says Ya! she give sacrifice. Are you OK?
tere nazron me hai tere sapne
tere sapno me hai narazi
mujhe lagta ha kai batain dil ke
hote lafzon ke dhokebaazi
tum saath ho ya na ho kya farq ha
bedard thi zindagi bedard ha
agar tum saath ho
Pragya says yes!
dil ye sambhal jae
agar tum saath ho
har gam phisal jae
agar tum saath ho
din ye nikal jae
agar tum saath ho
har gam phisal jae
Scene:4
Location: City Hospital
1 year later,
Kunj comes taking Aaliya on wheel chair. Kunj calls Dr. Dr comes. Kunj says she get labor pain. Please save her and my baby. Please start operation, and don’t worry for money. Dr says OK! Operation starts.
Some time after….
Dr comes and says congratulations. You’ve daughter.
At Abhi’s Residence,
Kunj and Aaliya come with baby. Pragya and all sees. Pragya says you! All congratulates them. Bulbul says soon, we’ll also have a third member in our life. Pragya says you’re pregnant.Purab says yes,she is pregnant. Kunj says yes,where are our Payal? Abhi comes with a baby in his lap and says here. Arora family comes. Aaliya says after so much time,our family is one,a family Pic is must.
Purvi says why not???? A family pic is of course must.
* Story ends on family pic*
16 Comments
Wonderful dear….l loved it till the core…u ended it very beautifully…
and ur ff was awsome….u rocked it today di…must say u r a wonderful writer too…..pls keep writing more ffs or os…take care….love u loads…
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With love
Ashika
Thanks ashika.
wonderful climax. but I am go in to miss u & ur ff dr…. come back with another ff. miss u so much.
Thanks.
Soon,I’ll come back.
superb…come up with more dear. the ending was very nice. it was cute.
bye and take care. remember write more dear
Thanks a lot B_Ani.
Awesome episode n nice end…
Thanks duga.
Thanks durga.
Never expected it to end.thanx 4 the dedication. Neil is so cheap.gladly before death tanu did a good seed by saving Pragya from him by killing Neil.abhigya moments were very emotional. Kunjaliya parents n rabul going to be parents.so sweet. Glad to see abhigya’a child here.on d show we didn’t get that chance yet.Nice ending
Superb!
Superb story and awesome ending yaar going to miss it come with another rocking ff
And thanks for dedication it my pleasure to comment such a wonderful ff of yours
Superb ending ! Sorry i did read all your parts together , couldn’t comment ! U hav done a very good part ! I liked the story ! Come up with many more !
nice story