hey , i hope you guys liked the previous ones please do comment and tell me what you think of my fiction and don’t hesitate to give me a suggestions
so let’s start episode 2
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its Tuesday evening
IN MUMBAI
the luthras reach the arora mansion
mahesh dad: wow they have a nice house
kareena bua : rishabh said that there is only a mother and her son here what’s the need of such a big house if there is no girls lol
rishabh : kareena bua i told you her daughter is in australia for her studies
kareena bua : yeah whatever now will they invite us in or will we keep standing outside like this ugh (she makes some faces)
bani dadi : kareen you just keep quite you are always negative , we came here with a request so behave yourself
(arjun comes out )
arjun : hey everyone , why you all standing outside please come in
(everyone comes in )
sarla: namaste , please come in
(bani dadi, mahesh dad, karan,rishabh , rakhi , kareena , sameer, kritika all come in and great and sit down)
sarla calls one of the workers and tells them to bring refreshments and something to eat to the guest
IN THE VILLAGE
preeta: shrishti come we need to clean the house and decorate it as its dad’s birthday soon
shrishti : ha di i’m doing it
(they did everything and cleaned the house and turned off the lights )
then their dad came from work and saw the lights off
preeta’s dad : why are the lights off preeta? shrishti? where are you
preeta and shrishti : HAPPY BIRTHDAY PAPA !
their dad: omg what is all this in a cute voice
preeta and shrishti : your birthday papa
their dad : awww thank you so much you didn’t have to do all this , thank you so much my two precious girls , papa loves you two the most .
(they celebrated their dad’s birthday and all over sudden he got a heart attack ) shrishti noticed it
shrishti : PAPA! PAPA!
preeta : PAPA KYA HUA !
then he fall down
shrishti : di i’ll call the ambulance please give him water
preeta: ha shrishti hurry up , papa don’t worry we won’t let anything happen to you
their dad in a death tone : preeta listen to me if anything happens to me promise me you will take your sister to mumbai and look for your mother and your other siblings if you don’t find them then go to delhi and look for them promise me ?
preeta : papa nothing will happen to you stop saying that
( the ambulance comes and takes them to the hospital )
they reach the hospital their dad is taken to the OT room (operation room) preeta and shrishti they keep crying and looking in the ot window
after a while …
the doctor comes out and tells them
doctor : im sorry but his condition is very critical his blood is dropping you can meet him he keeps taking your name please make it quick we need to look for blood
they go inside the OT room crying
their dad : shrishti, preeta i can leave anytime soon preeta promise me you will look for your mother and siblings
shrishti ( crying ): dad you won’t leave us , we dont want people who left us
their dad : you guys will know that your mother was right and i was wrong , preeta promise me please
preeta : promise papa , but dont worry nothing will happen to you
then their dad’s heartbeat goes fast and gets difficult in breathing
preeta and shrishti worried : papa what happen , DOCTOR! DOCTOR! PLEASE HURRY UP WHAT HAPPEN TO MY DAD!
the doctor comes in asks them to go outside and let us do our work , preeta and shrishti go out crying
screen shifts to mumbai arora mansion
kareena bua : where is your children and husband is your husand dead?
everyone is shocked and looks at kareena bua
bani dadi : kareena what are saying keep quite
sarla looks down with a sad face and wishes that he is alive
bani dadi : sarla child dont worry she just says anything
rakhi : by the way how is your daughter who is studying is she going to stay there or come back
arjun: no rakhi aunty she will come back on thursday as friday is mum’s birthday
rakhi and mahesh : omg congratulations sarlaji
sarla : thank you so much , now that our kids are business partners i would love it if you guys come to my birthday as a family
rakhi , bani dadi , mahesh and everyone else except kareena bua : yes ofc we will
(then everyone has a talk and enjoy )
IN THE VILLAGE
preeta in the temple of the hospital : God why do you always have to test me please don’t take my dad
( the doctor comes out looking very tensed)
shrishti : doctor my dad ? is he okay doctor please say something
preeta : kya hua doctor is everything okay ? is my papa okay ?
doctor in a very sad voice : i’m sorry kids butwe tried our best to save him but he is no more
shocked preeta faints , shrishti starts crying and screams dad!
the doctors and nurse come and take preeta and treat her
shrishti: di are you okay
preeta : shrishti papa?
shrishti crying nodes her head
after few hours …..
preeta : shrishti we have to stay strong and fulfil dad’s wish we have to look for maa
shrishti : that lady who broke relationship with us we don’t need her
(they start crying)
IN MUMBAI
the luthras are leaving arora mansion sarla and arjun set them of
IT’S WEDNESDAY MORNING
IN THE TRAIN
shrishti and preeta are in the train station leaving for mumbai
shrishti : di i don’t want that woman we are going to earn for ourselves my manager transfered me to mumbai as a event organizer so i will earn and you are a physiotherapist i’m sure you will find a job in some hospital then we will live peacefully , neither do i want the mother who left us nor do i need anyone’s help except yours
preeta : shrishti didn’t you hear what papa said last we have to find maa and the rest of the siblings , and whatever happened between them years ago shouldn’t affect us and who knows how everyone will be shattered hearing papa is no more
shrishti : if they cared about dad then they should have looked for us
preeta : okay now stop we are in mumbai now shall we get off
PRECAP: preeta and shrishti meet rishabh luthra and rishabh is mesmarized by preeta’s innocent face
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4 Comments
That’s nice….I alwayz want preetam to be with rishabh……keep updating….we will alwayz support you
Can u make long episode pls, and ur story is superb yaar
Very nice keep updating you asked about your FF no fault super
i uploaded the third part please read it and let me know what you think , thank you