Hey Guys…..
Sorry for not updating last week… was working even on weekends..
And for the comments what I received.. I seriously love u guys… Riya, Sandhya, Alisha, Kavinda,Naymaz, Vinlora, Shanaya… I cant thank u enough for supporting me… I hope dint miss anyone’s names… if missed.. m sorry but this credit goes to them as well…
Seeing ur comments have started becoming greedy these days… nd if there are any silent readers … big shout out to u as well n hoping that my writing turns better with coming weeks so that I can earn comments from u ppl as well… Fingers Crossed…
I know that there are less Preetan (Karan +Preeta) scenes… and if u have any thoughts that I’m giving more importance to Rishti( Rishabh+Shrishti) scenes or vice versa or any of the ignorance by me (which is unintentional)… please do not hesitate to point it out… coz as I say always.. Constructive criticisms help me out to improve n make u guys happy n satisfied… Enough of acknowledgments and preface… lets continue….
At Luthra Mansion next day –
As usual Preeta comes for her job… Karan notices how sweetly she makes Dadi do her exercises and engage her in useless banters… he feels happy n there is an unusual feeling growing in him.. which he is unable to identify… Rashi comes to Preeta and asks her to convince Rishabh to get married…
P- Aunty, but main kaise unhe bolun…
Rashi (RL)- Beta… Rishabh tujhe bahaut manta hai… even he will need someone… please baat kr lo use
P- OK aunty I will try…
K pops in b/w – Mom… kya aap physio ko extra kaam de rhe ho.. main hun na aapka honhaar beta.. m karunga woh.. bhai ko convince.. Sammy bhi to hai…. We ll manage
RL- Chup kar khotiya… nalayak….pata chal rha hai kya manage karega tu… itne saalon se nhi kr paya.. ab kya karega… aur Sameer ko to rehne de… Rishabh aur woh dono k bas chale to apne kaam se hi shaadi kr le… meri mati maari gyi thi ki Rishabh ko bola k Sameer ko apne saath office le jaaye.. dono Robot ban gye hai…. Files laptop aur meetings k alawa kuch nhi hota unse…
RL to P – Betaji aapko pata hai… mujhe laga teeno se koi to sensible niklega grahasti basayega… but teeno k teeno bewakoof nikle…
P(controls her laugh)- Aunty…. Aapko nhi lagta k aap kuch zyada achchai bol rhi hai… teeno k baare mein…
D- Kisi teesre insan ke saamne to nhi bol rhi…. Tum bhi to ek member ke jaisi ho.. achcha Raashi… mujhe Kritika ke engagement outfits ke baare mein discuss krna hai… chalo mere saath… they both goes….
K- So…. Madam ready ho jao bhai ko manane…. It will be tough fr u doc….. he turns n tries to go
P- Karan…
K (Smiles and turns around) – Yes….
P- If don’t mind… can I ask u something…. Mujhe nhi pata tha k Sameer is ur own brother….as I saw with ur brother… I thought k he wrks fr u…
K- Woh meri maasi ka beta hai…uske parents is duniya mein nhi hai… so maa usse yahan le aayi thi… u knw doc… who jab aaya tha… Bhai was almost 10… aur main 9 ka… aur Sameer bhi almost my age.itna rota tha because use mom dad k paas jaana tha…Bhai story sunate the use to make him calm…thodi der mein so jaata tha… aur phir aadhi raat mein uthkar rona shuru… jitna bhai ne use sambhala utna to mom ne bhi kiya hoga… kabhi kabhi lagta tha… k I was his cousin aur Sameer unka khud ka bhai….but still bhai to bhai hai… he treated us equally…. N sammer.. pucho mat… Bhai k saath unki tarah rehta… aur mere saath mere tarah… M just so proud of them…. I can’t live without them… n aage se Sammer ko hum dono se alag mat samajhna…
Preeta was so flabbergasted for all the three of them…She thought that its only her and Shrishti who have so closer bond of siblings… but here she was astonished and was thinking that she is very lucky to knw that she was wrong all these years… these three share a bond which is beyond explanations… n Karan … he is so defensive abt his brothers… all of a sudden from a flirt he turned to be so protective for his brother who is his cousin… and on other side Rishabh… she knew that he is way too sensible, smart and mature for age of 29… but never in her dreams she thought.. that he would be so selfless that he would be ready to share his love with his cousin that was meant only for Karan… which she was not able to do with her own sisters Pragya and Bulbul… she realized that her world starts with Shrishti and ends with Shrishti only… wherein again she was proved wrong of she being very loving n caring sister…. Again on third side… at last Sameer…. How can he be so calm, sweet and respectful towards a family which is not his own…. Wherein She n Shrishti are still unable to digest the fact that Sarla is their mother… though he did not undergo any of the pains that she n shrishti went through… but again they are with their mother afterall… but he.. he lost both his parents to an accident n entered into an alien world without anyone who can back him up as there is a saying… relatives can be sweet only for a while… but can tur into poison when we are dependent solely on the. … n ofcourse he is so lucky to have Rishabh n Karan to back him up now… a maasi who doesnot differenciate him n her own sons… a Dadi who loves him as she loves her other three grandchildren… though he is not her own.
That Day… Preeta walked out of Mansion.. with new prospects about life n its teachings… truly… there are hundreds and thousands kind of ppl and same number of problems… nobody can walk in other person’s shoes… they will feel their problems are far better the ones tha compared to others…
She started adoring all the people living there in that big mansion for the good what they have done… be it Rishabh Karan, Rashi aunty, Dadi or Sameer… all are very distinctive in their own ways and are very good too…
So this is it… u guys must be thinking… the precap was different… but as in my FF Sameer is also one of leads… I wanted to have an insight abt his character too…n also his better half arriving soon… I think he too deserves this importance… and most importantly… Preeta’s POV on each of the brothers will help her out in building a bond with them…
Trust me Shrishti and Riya (Sameer’s pair) will also get a chance of exploring the Luthra brother’s bonding and feelings… and u ppl will end up having a similar boring chappies for that too…
Drop a comment if u liked this one and constructive criticisms are always welcome
Meet u guys… next Friday night
Love ya all a loads :*
Leher