Hey everyone… Here another episode…
N tq soooooo much all for ur response..
I love u guys..
Let’s start..
Episode 1-
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1/12/14
A beautiful collage named space academy is shown.
(Space academy is a collage which has magnificent architecture.. This collage is a medical collage which includes music.. It gives a lil extra preference to music. It is a very renounced collage.. It is Mumbai’ no. 1 collage)
There is a huge gate. N a big crowd in front of the gate..
People are shouting”fab5..fab 5 fab5 fab5…
Then suddenly an Audi Q5 comes n stops at the gate..
Five people get down from the car…
Yes they r non other than.. Druv,Alya,manik,mukhti,cabir…
They all in a line walking in between the crowd…
Ppl shouting…
All the girls crying… “Manik I love u”
Fab 5 smiles hearing that…
Cabir-” sale we r also here only lekin larkiyan sari Isi ko like karti hai…”
Mukhti n Alya laughs..
Druv makes a puppy face..
Druv-“correction.. Not Like… They love him..”
They laugh even louder..
Cabir” y don’t u marry all of them”?
Manik-” shut up u.. Till now I didn’t get my type.. Sooo I’m not interested in love..”
Alya-” pure shayar wali words..”
Mukhti-” mmmm.. Manik.. we never asked u about all this coz u would get angry on us but now as u r in good mood.. Can I ask u a question??”
Manik-” yeah y nt”
Mukhti-” what ur ur type?? I mean what should ur girl be lyk ?”
Manik-” mukhti!!”
Alya-” manik yaar plzzzz”
Manik-” ok then.. Well my type is nothing.. I just want my love to be innocent as a kid,pure as water, smile which makes me forget all my worries,eyes which are sparkling like stars so that I can read all inside her.. Hairs which should be free to show how free she is like a bird in the sky..n..”
When cabir interrupts..
“Beta you want so many things n saying there is no type…. This type of girl is only an angel…
On this earth there is no one like this”
Druv-” bhai so many specification.. Pata chala.. U died unmarried..”
All Laugh.. Manik first makes a puppy face(imagine how cute he must be luking)
Then he joins everyone laughing…. They reach canteen..
All eat food.. Chill..
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Scene2
Two girls walking in the corridor..
Girl1- yaar I stood there for total 20mins n still couldn’t see them..” ” fab 5.. I mean THE FAB5..”
girl2-” yeah n the worst part is even I had to accompany u.. We were standing there for 20mins n still what we got to see was there back.. Stupid crowd..”
I” I don’t understand y were ppl so mad for the five of then..” “N specially that mann..i.. What is his name…”
Girl1-” manik”
Girl2-” yeah manik.. Whatever.. Who r they..??”
Girl1-” u don’t know.. They r space academy’s or I should say mumbai ‘s best band.. The song they make are the best.. The whole Mumbai is there fan.. U idiot where have u come from… U don’t know them…”
Girl2-” yeah I don’t know them.. N I don’t even wanna know them… N now I hate them even more.. Wasted my 20mins.. I could have studied something in the library..”
Girl-1″ aeee u r hurting me..”
Girl2-” stop it.. Well.. tell me y were they so much mad for fab5.. I mean do they do all this everyday or somethin new..?”
Girl1-” no.. Fab 5 had gone to Banglore for a band competition n they won there..”
Girl2-” ohh… I see.. They have too many fans right in
the collage..”
Girl1-” I m there big fan.. I want to be in there band..”
Girl2-” u can’t be so get out of that dream.. Just look a them they didn’t even once look at there fans.”
Girl1″ coz it’s not possible for them.. If they see then fans ll get more mad..”
Girl2-” hmm… Point! Ok now.. I ll leave.. Have to go to the library.. Bye see u soon.. Navya..”
Girl1(navya)-” bye book worm.”
Girl2 rolled her eyes n went..
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Scene1-
Manik-” guys u all chill here I gtg..”
Cabir (pulling his leg)-” to find ur TRUE LOVE ?”
Manik-” uff.. Come on.. Seriously shut up ur pjs… Going to library.. To take my book.. Exams r coming.. U guys again have to cheat na toh u all chill here.. I’m going to do imp work”
Druv-” bye book worm”
Manik rollers his eyes n goes..
Precap- girl2 is carrying many books n is getting dis- balanced.. When she suddenly bumps into a hard n strong body…
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So guys done with this update.. Hope u ll like it.. Plzz if u liked it.. Plzzzzzz comment coz it my first one so I need ur support… N tq all for the first response.. I m very glad that u guys commented..
Now guys.. Guess who girl2 is… I think u all got small hints..
Love all of u..
Plz support..
Criticism accepted, any opinion plz give.. Ignore typos.. Comments are needed..
Tq..
20 Comments
girl2 is our swt nandu…nice update loving it all the best fr ur work n update asap…
Thankq nee.. Keep commenting lyk this… ll never disappoint u
Nice one keep going
Tq piya
Small hint………
Mujhe too full confidence h…..woo nandu hi h……
nandu did balance hoo….or manik bachane naa puhoche……
Hoo hi nhi sakta na…
GOOD GOING DEAR….
it’s really entertaining…..
Plz update next part soon….
Tq soo much kavya… Felt so good reading ur comment.. Nxt part till night..
Awesome
Tq vaishali..?
The 2nd girl is none other then our sweet Nandu 😀 The update is amazing. U r not only good in commenting on ff but also good at writing them 😉 Can’t wait for Manan 1st meet. Update soon 🙂
Tq sooo much mahi…means a lot… Yeah next ll be manam first meet…
Tash I never knew u had wonderful writing skills ? Seriously ur update is awesome nd sry for not updating my story as I am fasting nd I could not resist from comenting ur story ??
Thanku soooooooooo much sindhu… Love u… It is very big thing for me that writers like u r commenting on my ff… I ll not disappoint u… Ll try my best to write even more good…
No problem sindhu complete ur fast n then u can continue with ur ff…. N after writing my ff.. Now I understand it’s nt so easy as I thought to write n ff… We both r doing a gr8 job????
Tash welcome to Kyy writers blog ? Nd plz ur story is awesome nd ur writing are far more better than mine ?
tash its ur ff……………I didn’t notice…………its good to see that u started writing…….. wherever I comment I can see ur comment also that’s y am familiar with u…….. good going……… keep updating…………good luck for ur ff……….as a manan fan how busy I am, I will read all the ffs on manan…….
Thanku sooo much Priya… Ya u too r familiar to me as I have seen ur comments in other Ffs… After reading such good ffs tq for reading my ff too n commenting on that…ll nt disappoint u…
It’s really awesome . Keep going loving it
Tq…..???
M just loving it ?
Tq…?????