hey sisters i thought i will write a fan fiction about lakshman and urmilla.Comments and criticism is allowed.sorry if i made any mistake while writing since it is my first time.
Location-Ayodhya
Lakshman is back from the exile. He goes in search of urmilla. Urmilla sees lakshman and runs towards his direction.They both see each other.Urmilla hugs him.
Urmilla-“you came back”
Lakshman-“during this exile i missed you so much .i couldnt live without my urmu”
Urmilla-“i missed you even more”
They smile
Urmilla goes to her sisters.
Mandavi-“yaay!!! sita didi is back .Peace and happiness has returned back in ayodhya
Sita enters the scene
All the sisters hug sita
Shruthakirti-“We all missed you a lot didi.
Urmilla-” we wanted u and jija to come back to ayodhya
Sita-” I missed mu 3 younger sisters so much.
Mandavi-“Now there is only one thing left”
Sita -What?
Urmilla-“when u and jija become the king and queen of ayodhya”
Sita smiles
Precap-Urmilla is sleeping.Lakshman enters their room and sees urmilla
32 Comments
Wow preethi chellam it is superb… i loved it..
thank you akka
wow super ff . make it a lil long . waiting for the next one
thanks varshini. and will make it longer next time
lovely dialogues… hope u include rams bros in next epi
ya anushya i will include ram s bros in the next episode and thank u very much
Its awesome Preethi akka
thanks jayani dear
I want the bonding and love story of lakshmila … Keep going …nalla iruku …
thank u ridhima akka
amazing ff yr…as well as ur dp is cute..my yukti looking superb..
thank u very much priya di for commentingon my ff and my dp.And i agree with u yukti is looking amazing
Very beautiful ff after such a long time
ur dp is also nice
thank u very much anjali and love your dp too
Ur welcum akka n ur dp is awesome Preethi akka
thank u jayani cutie !!! very sweet of u and your dp is awesome too.
Thank u Preethi akka
Thank u Preethi akka n best of luck for ur xam (if u hav ?)
jayani i do have my xams !!! and if u dont mind me asking u told that u are from dubai right??? which school r u from .sorry if it is personal. then u dont need to tell me
I’m from ihs
Which skul r u from Preethi di
jayani, even i am in ihs are u in the oud metha branch and if yes can u tell me in which class are u from because we can meet each other .reply soon jayani cutie
Now for d xam time, I’m in 8D but I’m in 7H
Which class r u from Preethi di? Reply soon please.
Shall v try meeting during d regular days coz d invigilator won’t allow us 2 come out of d class during d xam days r8? Maybe on wednesday or thursday, I guess? Waiting for ur reply di.
Jai Siya Ram
jayani no prob lets meet on wednesday during the recess.i will come to your class and i cant believe that u are in my school and your class is opposite my class.i am in 8-j .yayaya!! i am so happy .we shall definitly meet on wednesday
definitely
oh sorry we r not in opposite classes .sorry i got confused but i will definitely meet u on wednesday
dont forget and reply soon
jayani i have one doubt both grade 7 and grade 8 are in the same level right ?? and is your class past the staff room next to the washroom and jayani i am in 8 h classrom for the exam. dont worry i will figure it out tomorrow and will surely visit u on wednesday
an jayani is your real name jayani becaue suppose i go and ask your classmates for u then they tell me that there is no girl whose name is jayani in this class i dont want that to happen.plz dont take it in a wrong way