Hi guys. First to everyone who supported me- love you all . XOXO
Now to those who are not liking this story- I know everyone is entitled to their opinions and i do respect your views. I just want to say that maybe you are not liking the plot or the way i have etched out Surbhi’s character. But in this ff, she is good, she is bad and some may feel that she is very bad. She is rude, harsh and short tempered but she does have a softness in her heart. About KVB, you will know as the story progress. So, in short if you are not liking it now then you would not like it in the future episodes and you’ll be disappointed only.
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(Himanshoo’s pov)
I had just returned from office when I joined her on the sofa. I opened my laptop as I decided to complete some pending work. She kept her head on my shoulder as she said, ‘Bhai, let’s go to watch a movie today.’ I just nodded my head as she excitedly hugged me and kissed me on the cheeks. ‘Thank you Bhai. You are the best,’ she almost screamed excitedly.
‘Yes Mr Khurana.’ I turned to see my father on the phone, speaking to Mr. Khurana. She nudged me as she heard “Mr. Khurana” from my dad’s mouth.
‘There’s definitely something fishy,’ she whispered into my ears with her one eyebrow raised.
Dad came to us after finishing his talk as he looked at her and said, ‘Today there is a party thrown by Mr. Khurana’s nephew and I want you to attend that party.’
‘But dad…’ She had tried resisting to this.
‘I have already said that you would attend the party’. This thing from dad was enough to ignite her anger as she said, ‘Then why do you take decisions on my behalf. I’m not like bhai who would listen to everything you say. You never wanted bhai to get involved in your business and so he started his own business. Bhai always do what you say but I won’t. So stop taking decisions of my life.’
Dad was enraged after hearing her and he lifted his hand… the first time ever that he did this. But I stopped dad’s hand by holding his wrist. I lowered my gaze as he looked into my eyes. I saw Sweety running away from there as I let go off dad’s hand.
‘Your love has spoiled her. Knock some sense into her.’
I assured him and he left the place. I dropped myself on the sofa as I rested my head on my hands.
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i don’t know how was it. Hope you all liked it.
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64 Comments
Wow saya u r rocking. … I love the way u r writing. … hats off 🙂 …. waiting for the next episode friend 🙂
Thanks dear. By the way, where are you from?
I’m staying in Chennai tamil Nadu 🙂
Awesome epi saya i am really enjoying your epi i mean the way u write is really good.IF u don’t mind can I ask how old are u?
Hi Angel. Thanks dear and I’m 21. By the way, are you also a student?
Hi Roma. If you don’t mind then how old are you? And electrical and computer engineering… that’s interesting 🙂
No saya I finished school
Saya u must be finished with school right? Are u working?
Hi Angel. yes I have finished school. I’m currently doing Bsc (H) in biomedical science… my final semester. and you?
hi saya… it was an amazing update dear… the plot is really nic n realastic….thanks a lot… keep writing… luv u loads…. n dear where r u from..
Hi janvi. Thanks a lot. Love you too and I basically belong to Harayana and you?
i live in dehradun… bt actually i’m frm bihar..
Saya I am only 16 but I finish school like 2 grades in one year so I am done basically till grade 11.So this year just chilling and next year I will be starting my matric through a montessori and getting a level 4 and 5 for teaching.
Whooa!!! Where do you stay? I am listening this for the first time
woow angel… it sounds so diffrent.. never heard of it.
Hey saya there is a lot of people who do home schooling. I live in benoni and my mum started with me home schooling from grade 1 to grade 11 my smaller sister is 14 and we at the same grade…Janvi are u in school still or are u finished?
Ohh got it dear. Benoni? South Africa, right?
Yea.Hey can we be friends saya?
sure dear. FRIENDS. 🙂 🙂
hi angel… yup i am in school… class ninth science…can we be friends too..
Of course we are friends Janvi.U and Saya is my first 2 online friends.
Of course we can be friends Janvi.U and Saya is my first 2 online friends.How old are u Janvi?
Sorry guys my comment before added twice.
You don’t need to be sorry fire such petty things 🙂 🙂
Tnx Saya.Do u have watsapp or bbm that we can talk on?I am often getting blocked from tellyupdates saying I can’t enter without a password…any idea why?
yup… u r rght saya.. i am thirteen years old…
ya angle… saya u nd sunheri r my first online frnds….
That’s so sweet of u 🙂 … u , kalai , yamuna, saya and angel are my first online friends 🙂
Really wow Janvi…I thought I was the only one…how about u do u have watsapp or bbm?Do u often get blocked by tellyupdates for a password?
ya dear i am on whatsapp… nope i hav never been blocked by tellyupdates…
Hi Angel. my comment has not yet been posted so I’m writing it again. Yes dear I’m on whatsapp but I don’t want to divulge contact details here. Regarding your second query, related to password, I don’t have any idea.
@Roma @Angel @Janvi @Sunehri You can suggest some other ideas to get in contact or I’ll tell my ideas after a few episodes. 🙂
Hey Janvi
Angel, you should not share your contact details like this dear. Sorry if you felt bad but take this as an advice. Don’t do this again.
I am so sorry guys my cousin stayed over last night and I told her to type my message she read the above and she put down my number…saya is there any way to take of my comment because my number is on it?
Yes I think there is a way …. go to contact us page and leave them a message that you want to remove this comment. ..
ya i agree wid u saya….n ya thanks for d number…
Hey janvi and saya I am really sorry about it.My cousin is only 11 she does not understand not to give details but she finds it fun because she knows my number by heart.I told her what to comment but she wrote my number.I only seen it in the morning and i shouted at her … I am really sorry but is there any way we can delete a comment or something because my number is there?
hi angle… actually the number is incomplete though…. coz i was nt able to find u on whatsapp…
Write it to telly updates. Mail them your problem and request them to remove your comment. Do it through “contact us”.
no need to be sorry dear coz it happens wid evryone….
Of course janvi is right my friend angel so no worries 🙂 🙂