Naren:I could not complete saying about the girl in the photographs.
Nandini thought:I don’t feel like hearing about the girl Naren loves.She is my enemy.
Naren:She is Maitree.
Nandini:Naren,why did you hide this secret from me?
Naren:I wanted to surprise you.
Nandini thought:This was not a surprise,it was a terror.
Nandini:You could have told me about loving Maitree long ago.Then I would not have made myself a fool by loving you.
O…
Tere mere darmiyaan hain baatein ankahi
Tu wahaan hai main yahaan
Kyun saath hum nahin (x2)
Naren was stunned:What?
Nandini:Yes Naren.I love you.But you love Maitree.
Kyun saath hum nahin (x2)
Faisley jo kiye
Faasley hi mile
Raahein judaa kyun ho gayi
Na tu ghalat, na main sahi
Naren was shocked.
They stared at each other emotionally.
Le ja mujhe saath tere
Mujhko na rehna saath mere (x2)
Le ja mujhe… (x2)
Nandini turned back to walk away.He held her hand.
Naren:First you listen to a love story.
Nandini:Yours and Maitree’s love story?I don’t want to hear it.
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Naren:You have to listen.After that you decide whether to get depressed or not.
Nandini was silent.
Naren started narrating a love story.
In another house…
A girl named Maitree was seen talking to her friend Malini.
Malini:Maitree,you are going to get married.How was your love story?
Maitree:The beginning of our love story was very cute.
Flash back…
Maitree was walking on the road.She bumped into a boy.
Maitree got angry and asked him:Can’t you see me coming this way?
He:No.Because I cannot see.
Maitree:What?
Suddenly Maitree noticed him wear sun glasses.
Maitree thought:He is wearing black specs.Is he blind?
He removed his glasses.
He:Sorry for the disturbance.But I am blind.So I could not see you.
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Maitree felt guilty and apologized:I am sorry.I did not know it.
He:It’s okay.Everyone misunderstands me.
Maitree:That’s sad.What’s your name?
He:I am Saransh.
Maitree:I am Maitree.
He:If possible please help me to cross the road.
Maitree:Sure.
She held his hand and crossed the road.
Saransh:Thank you so much Maitree.I will never forget your kindness.
Maitree:No need of any ‘thanks’.
Suddenly he burst into laughter.Maitree was confused.
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Maitree:Why are you laughing?
Saransh:I am sorry.I am not blind.I was just pretending to be blind.
Maitree was shocked:What?You cheater!Why did you fool me?
Saransh:You are misunderstanding me.I am the host of the TV show ‘Golmal’.Guess you have not watched the show or me.That’s why you got fooled easily.Our job is to fool people and give them gifts.
See the cameras behind.
Maitree was surprised.She turned back and got surprised to see some people shooting them.
Saransh:We are really sorry.
Maitree was embarrassed.
Saransh took the gift and gave it to her:This is a gift from our Golmaal team.
She smiled.
Saransh:Bye!I have to go and fool others.
They both giggled.
Saransh:I am glad to see you laugh.That means you are not angry with me.
Maitree smiled.
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Saransh bid her ‘good-bye’ again and left.
Present…
Malini:That’s so funny.
Maitree:Yes…it was.After that I started watching Saransh’s TV show.I started liking his humour sense.
I met him accidentally at a mall as his fan.After that we kept in touch with each other.Surprisingly his family approached my family with a marriage proposal.I had no reason to say ‘no’.Thus we got engaged.
Malini:How come his family met your family with the proposal?
Maitree smiled.
Flash back….
Saransh-Maitree exchanged rings at the engagement function.
Maitree:Can I ask you something Saransh?Is it purely an arranged marriage?
He smiled.
Saransh:I know what you mean.You want to know whether I decided to marry you only because my parents asked me to do so.Right?Actually no.I liked you at our meeting itself.Usually I forget the people I fool.But surprisingly I did’nt forget you.So when we met again at the mall I became happy.My parents understood that I like you very much.That’s why they proceeded with the marriage proposal.
Maitree smiled shyly.
Saransh:What about you Maitree?
Maitree:I started liking you after watching your show.My crush on you turned into love during our interactions.
Saransh smiled cheerfully.
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Present…
Malini:Very simple and sweet love story.
Maitree smiled.
Malini:I am so happy for you Maitree.
Malini hugged Maitree cheerfully.
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Naren finished narrating Saransh-Maitree’s love story.
Nandini was confused.
Nandini:Saransh and Maitree’s love story?How is it possible?You and Maitree love each other.
Naren:The surprise which I wanted to give you was not to introduce my lover.Because I don’t have any lover.
Nandini was stunned:Then Maitree?
Naren:Maitree loves Saransh.The surprise was to introduce my twin brother Saransh to you.
Nandini could not believe her ears.
Nandini:What?Twin brother?You have a twin brother?
Naren:Yes.Saransh is my twin.Like Maitree even you have not watched ‘Golmal’,so you have not seen Saransh.I wanted to surprise you by revealing that to you.But you misinterpreted it without listening to the whole thing.
Nandini was embarrassed.
Nandini:I am sorry.
Naren:I think you went back home because of your unnecessary thoughts and not because of any stomach pain.
Nandini looked down in shame.
Naren:What did you tell me?You love me?
Nandini became shy.
Thodi si dooriyan hain
Thodi majbooriyan hain
Lekin hai jaanta mera dil
Nandini:I just lied to make you spill out the truth.Because I thought you were going to fool me with your fake love story.
Naren:Oh really?
Nandini gave him an embarrassing smile.
Naren:There are some crazy girls who are trying to woo me.I am thinking of choosing one among them as I need to settle down.
Nandini became dull.
Nandini:But what if somebody loves you silently since a long time?
Naren:Who can love me silently?
Naren pretended to think.
Naren:I can’t make out who can love me silently.
Nandini became dull.
Suddenly Naren looked at her and asked her:Is that girl you?
Nandini was stunned by his question.
Ho.. Ik din toh aayega
Jab tu laut aayega
Tab phir muskuraayega mera dil
Naren:I know that you love me Nandini.You yourself blurted out that.Then why are you denying it?
Sochta hoon yahin
Baithe baithe yunhi
Raahein judaa kyun ho gayi
Na tu ghalat, na main sahi
Nandini was silent,but she was surprised to know that Naren was already aware of her feelings for her.
Nandini:Yes,I love you Naren.
Naren smiled.
Naren:I also love you Nandini.
Le ja mujhe saath tere
Mujhko na rehna saath mere (x2)
Le ja mujhe… (x2)
She smiled cheerfully.They shared a romantic eye lock.
Yaadon se lad raha hoon
Khud se jhaghad raha hoon
Aankhon mein neend hi nahi hai
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Naren:I will tell my parents that we also want to get married along with Saransh and Maitree.
Nandini was very happy.
Naren knelt down before Nandini and asked her:Nandini,will you marry me?
She became emotional.
Ho.. tujhse juda hue toh
Lagta aisa hai mujhko
Duniya meri bikhar gayi hai
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She held his hand and said:Yes Naren.I want to marry you.Take me with you Naren.I am waiting for that moment.
Naren:I will surely take you with me Nandini after marrying you.
Dono ka tha safar
Manzilon pe aakar
Raahein judaa kyun ho gayi
Na tu ghalat, na main sahi
They smiled at each other.
Le ja mujhe saath tere
Mujhko na rehna saath mere (x2)
Le ja mujhe… (x2)
Naren-Nandini’s marriage got fixed.
Naren-Nandini and Saransh-Maitree danced romantically at the Sangeet function.
O…
Tere mere darmiyaan hain baatein ankahi
Tu wahaan hai main yahaan
Kyun saath hum nahin (x2)
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Faisley jo kiye
Faasley hi mile
Raahein judaa kyun ho gayi
Na tu ghalat, na main sahi
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Le ja mujhe saath tere
Mujhko na rehna saath mere (x2)
Le ja mujhe… (x2)
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Thodi si dooriyan hain
Thodi majbooriyan hain
Lekin hai jaanta mera dil
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Ho.. Ik din toh aayega
Jab tu laut aayega
Tab phir muskuraayega mera dil
Both the couples had haldi function.
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Naren caressed Nandini’s face romantically and said:You are looking gorgeous Nandini.
She blushed.
Sochta hoon yahin
Baithe baithe yunhi
Raahein judaa kyun ho gayi
Na tu ghalat, na main sahi
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Nandini put turmeric paste on Naren’s face with her hand romantically.
Le ja mujhe saath tere
Mujhko na rehna saath mere (x2)
Le ja mujhe… (x2)
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He pasted turmeric paste on Nandini’s cheek by rubbing his cheek with hers.
Yaadon se lad raha hoon
Khud se jhaghad raha hoon
Aankhon mein neend hi nahi hai
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Naren-Nandini and Saransh-Maitree got married on the same mandap.
Ho.. tujhse juda hue toh
Lagta aisa hai mujhko
Duniya meri bikhar gayi hai
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Dono ka tha safar
Manzilon pe aakar
Raahein judaa kyun ho gayi
Na tu ghalat, na main sahi
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Le ja mujhe saath tere
Mujhko na rehna saath mere (x2)
Le ja mujhe… (x2)
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Naren and Nandini romanced and made their life beautiful.
Sunn mere Khuda bas itni si meri duaa
Lauta de humsafar mera
Jaayega kuch nahi tera
Tere hi dar pe hoon khada
Jaaun toh main jaaun main kahan
Taqdeer ko badal meri
Mujhpe hoga karam tera…
(Chef).
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The end
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2 Comments
Wow very sweet love story and thanks a lot for writing it as so beautiful at my request. I never expected the twist of Saransh with Maitree here. I thought in last episode Maitree must be his past lover or may be they had a break up. So I was worried is it a triangular love story so how it will end up ….. But glad that Saransh is twin brother of Naren only. My favorite scene in this story is when Nandini tell Naren what if a girl loves him silently and Naren pretending thinking who might be that girl and telling he can’t find any such girl and Nandini feeling sad . But soon he asking her whether that girl is Nandini only and telling Nandini you yourself told you loves me and telling he also loves her.. That scene was written so beautiful. The proposal of Naren was so cute. In parallel the way Saransh Maitree story was also shown as so beautiful, I am surprised as part of golmaal programme Saransh was just acting as blind. First I thought he is really blind. But happy he told truth soon and Maitree Saransh becoming friendly was sweet. Their conversations were so lovely. My favourite pair is Naren and Nandini as their story emotionally connected me a lot. Especially the way Nandini admired and loved Naren. Favourite character is Naren as he is very understanding person and he was aware of Nandini’s feelings. Just that to surprise her he hold the story later but poor Nandini misunderstood it initially. Naren being the calm and composed person understanding everything is so nice and that’s why he is my favourite character in this whole story. Glad that both couples got married and the moments were so romantic. I loved specially the Haldi moment of Naren and Nandini. The title justified with the scene when Nandini said Take me with you and Naren replying I will surely take you with me… Wonderful story and I loved it very much.
Thank u very much.