Hi guys I am back with the os . This start from when Vansh & Riddhima left VR Mansoin . Handover all property to Angre.HappyBirthday Rrahul πππππ¬
Let’s start
Riddhima: Vansh we will go to apartment in which me & Sejal uesd to live before
Vansh: ok Riddhima
They reach apartment
They came freshn up Vansh was lying on bed & Riddhima was cooking food in kitchen
Riddhima was kneeding floor & someone came & start nuzzling his nose in her neck
Riddhima: Vansh stop now I have too cook food you go
Vansh: Sweetheart
Riddhima: Vansh go
He goes
After dinner
They slept
After one month
Vansh was talking on phone
In call
Person: boss we have to do this deal
Vansh: yes Angre I know meet me in office
Riddhima came
Riddhima: Vansh what happen why are you tensed .
Vansh: nothing Riddhima I am going office
Riddhima:ok take care
Riddhima goes to take water in kitchen .
In room
Vansh was taking out gun . Unknown to Vansh that two eyes is saw him that is none other then Riddhima .
Riddhima stays silent
Vansh goes
Riddhima: (crying) why Vansh why you didn’t leave your so called business i only said this for happy family but you didn’t . She slept
Next morning
Vansh came Riddhima was still sleeping dry tears stain on her face . By mistakenly his foot hit bed. By voice Riddhima woke up.
Vansh: Riddhima you are crying last night
Riddhima:( rude voice ) yes
Vansh:( cupping her face) why kya hua Riddhima ?
Riddhima: maine kya manga tha tumse sirf ek chiz ki tum apna ye risky business chod do par nahi
Vansh:what are you saying Riddhima ? I had left it
Riddhima: you are lieing to me
Vansh: Riddhima trust me
Riddhima: trust on you
Riddhima shows video which shows that Vansh is talking with Angre on mobile & taking gun from cupboard
Vansh: I … I ..I ..am….am s…orr…y … Ridd.. Riddhima …I am….. Sorry
Riddhima: Vansh pls leave your risky business pls pls
Vansh: sorry I can’t
Riddhima: pls Vansh pls for me
Vansh: Riddhima I can’t
Riddhima: pls
Vansh:( shouting) I said can’t means I can’t
Riddhima:(shouting) ok then choose your so called business or me & baby
Riddhima goes to another
In Riddhima’s room
Riddhima was sitting on bed hugging her knees she is crying bitterly . She was she shouted on Vansh she was in guilt . How she shouted on her Vansh on her love.
In Vansh’s room
Vansh was very angry on Riddhima
Vansh: Riddhima you said na choose your so called business or you & baby than I chose my business .
he goes to Riddhima’s room .
Vansh: Riddhima you said that choose between business or you & baby I chose my business . You can leave me with your baby.
He goes
Riddhima was in tears
Next day
In Vansh’s room
Vansh woke up
Vansh: Riddhima pls make breakfast
( Than he remember what happen last night) oh shit !
He goes to Riddhima’s room
He didn’t find Riddhima he thought that she in washroom
Vansh: Riddhima you are in washroom
No response
Vansh: Riddhima
No response
He opens door
Vansh: Riddhima is not in washroom
He finds letter
In letter
Vansh you are not able to leave your so called business na you said leave me . Ok I left from your life for ever I won’t came back to you good bye for ever .
Letter ends
Vansh was in tears
Vansh : Riddhima you know I am not in sense when I am in anger why you left me Riddhima I love you so much pls come back I will not speak anything but pls come back .
After 7 years ( I have time skipping power π)
In Goa Goa
RV Mansoin ( Riddhima & Vanya’s Mansoin )
Riddhima: it has been 7 since I left you Vansh I missing you so much .
Girl: Mumma , Mumma
Riddhima: Yes Vanu
Vanya: I am ready let’s go school
Riddhima: yes Vanu
After dropping Vanya to her school she goes to hospital
In school
Teacher:Good morning students
Students: Good morning ma’am ( missing school days because of stupid corona school are still off π)
Teacher: students this is new student in our class Shreya Raisinghania ( Ishani & Angre’s daughter)
Teacher: beta introduce yourself
Shreya: my name is Shreya Raisinghania daughter of Ishani Raisinghania & Angre
In Goa
xyz hotel
Vansh : Angre deal is done
Angre: no boss some formalities are left
Vansh: make sure Angre that is deal not illegal ( ladka sudhar gyaπ)
Angre:ok boss, boss I will come to hotel
Vansh : no Angre
Angre: ok boss then where ?
Vansh: when you will came to pick up Shreya ( don’t be think how Vansh know about Shreya he Meet them once in a week )
Angre: ok boss
In hospital
Riddhima: Avika ( other doctor In hospital )
Avika: speak Riddhima
Riddhima: don’t make any appointments after 2:00 pm
Avika: I know Riddhima
At 2:00 pm
At school
Angre & Vansh came to pick Shreya & also talk about business
Riddhima also reached school
Vanya: bye Shreya
Shreya: bye Vanya
Vanya came to Riddhima
Vanya: Mumma I made new friends her name is Shreya
Riddhima: oh great bacha
On other side of school
Shreya: mamu & papa you know I made new friend
Vansh: oh so my princess made new friends
Shreya: yes
Vansh: girl or boy
Shreya: girl
Vansh: where is she ?
Shreya: she goes to her mother
Vansh: ok
Shreya: she is there with her mother
( As Riddhima was face another side Vansh is not able to see her )
Vansh: let’s go to your , come Angre
Shreya: hi Vanya
Vanya : hi Shreya
Shreya: mamu she is my new friend
Riddhima stand up & shocked by faces . Vansh & Angre was also shocked
Mumma, Vanya shouted . All of three came in sense .
Riddhima: hmm
Vanya: she is my new friend Shreya ( to Shreya) Shreya this is my mumma
Shreya: hi aunty
Riddhima: hi beta
Shreya: he is Papa ( fingers towards Angre) & he is my mamu ( fingers towards Vansh)
Vanya: hi uncle
Angre/Vansh: hi beta
Vanya: Mumma let’s go home I am tired
Riddhima: ok Vanu
They goes
Vansh: Angre I will drop Shreya to home . You have to find Riddhima’s phone number & address
Angre: ok boss
They goes
After 2 hours
Angre calls to Vansh
In call
Angre: boss address is RV Mansoin & phone number 987*******.
Vansh: thanks Angre
Angre: boss may I come with you
Vansh: no need Angre .
Call ended
RV Mansoin
Riddhima is in kitchen making food for her & Vanya but her phone started ringing . Caller is shown unknown number .
She picks the call
In call
Riddhima: hlo
No response
Riddhima:hlo
Person: Dr Sharma .
Riddhima: I am not Dr Sharma I am Riddhima you dialed wrong
number
Person: oh sorry
Riddhima: it’s ok
Call ended
Xyz hotel
Vansh: Riddhima you didn’t completed your name Riddhima Vansh Raisinghania .
Yes that person is none other than Vansh who called Riddhima
Vansh goes to RV Mansoin
Vansh click a door bell
Riddhima opens door
Riddhima: you ?
Vansh give a bone crushing hug Riddhima back hugged her
Riddhima: why you came here ?
Vansh: may I come inside
Vansh sit on sofa
Riddhima also sit
Riddhima phone start ringing
Caller ID is Shown Dr Avika
She picks up
In call
Riddhima: yes Avika
Avika: Riddhima we have very important appointment tomorrow at 11:00 am .
Riddhima: ok Avika
Avika: it is not with me it isΒ new Dr Ishika
Riddhima: who is Dr Ishika ?
Avika: she is new Dr. I also don’t know
Riddhima: ok bye
Call ended
Vansh: Riddhima you are Dr
Riddhima: yes
Vansh: where is Vanya ?
Riddhima: she is in room
Vansh: Riddhima I know I did mistake but I am in anger that time when I said leave me you know I can’t live without you . I know how these 7 passed for me . I am sorry pls come with me.Β I love you . I also left risky business . Pls come with me
Riddhima: Vansh it is not easy for meΒ also manage to everything I equally suffer even more than u . You have business . But I didn’t have anything
Before she complete
Vanya came down
Vanya: uncle you here
Riddhima: Vanya he is not your uncle heΒ your father
Vansh was happy now
Vanya: what?
Riddhima: yes beta
Vanya hugged Vansh , Vansh also back hugged her .
Vanya: papa come with me I want show you something .
Vansh was very happy when Vanya said papa to him
Vansh: you go I am coming
Vanya goes
Vansh: so you are not coming with me
Riddhima: when I said
Vansh: what
Riddhima: yes I am coming
Papa, Vanya shouted from room
They goes to room
In room
Vanya show picture made by her
Vanya: this family picture by me
Vansh/Riddhima: beautiful.
Vansh hugged both of them
They start living happy life
Hope you like it .
Mine most longest OS
Take care
Your Author
Japjot Kaur
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