Hello guys….this is abhilasha ….though I have wrote swasan and raglak ff earlier but this is my debut in kanchi story so here we go!!!!!
Plz forgive for errors and do cmnt!!
Character sketch
Sanchi mishra – a bubbly naughty girl….prankster …..for her life’s definition is only to enjoy !!….she is free minded and don’t care about anyone.
Kabir rathore- most wanted doctor cum bachelor of sdch…… strict and his job is his foremost priority…..loves his mother and jaya aunt.
Jaya mishra- half shareholder of sdch along with anand malhotra .wants her daughter to take responsibility of hospital but tensed due to her nature. Bestie of kusum.
Rest characters are same.
Scene 1
At jaya’s cabin-
A lady in silk saree with golden frame specs is holding her phone and waiting for someone.she is jaya .
A man is shown in black suit walking towards jaya’s cabin …he bumps with someone.
He- don’t u have eyes….
person- sorry sir.
He- get lost
He proceeds to cabin-
He- mam u called me?
Jaya- kabie beta come …I was waiting for u.
Kabir- I know u wabt to get assure that I m sure or not…. I promise u Aunty….i wont disappoint u.
Jaya- I know abt u but sanchi…..r u sure that u will train her without any prblm…actually she is other name of tsunami….she is already upset of leaving us and joining sdch ….u knw very well that sunil had only one wish to maintain purity of sdch but that devil anand wont happen that ….i m old now …..and u alone cannot maintain this as he don’t leave a single chance to feel u like u r under his favours….only sanchi can teach him a lesson but I want that she became a perfect doctor that she is but I want her to be disciplined ….to learn the strict rules of life.
Kabir- I know aunty and I assure u that I will make her a disciplined doctor …. She is a bright student but her way of dealing wont run infront of mr malhotra ….so will make her like u want ….we have 1 month.
Jaya- ya before she come as a doctor and took over my responsibilities I want her to be mature. Ok so mission sanchi makeover starts. she is coming …..her flight is in 1 hr ……go and receive her.
Scene shifted-
A girl comes out from plane in a blue gown looking like a model …….2 other girls join her one in red jumpsuit amd other in white midi .
These are our sanprasha.
Sanchi- o god so we are back to this boring country .
Isha- yaa yr sanchi …now after 1 month our life as doctors will start but thank god its ur mom’s hospital.
Sanchi- of mr malhotra too….i don’t wnt to see him ….what he did with my father and my mother …..she still let mercy on him and let him continue his practice even as 50%holder …I hate them all except my kusum aunty.
Pragya- abe o madam ho gya tumhara …yr kbi to apni mum k bare me achcha bola kro.(are u done madam atleast sometime speak some good about ur mom).
Sanchi- whatever…who is here to pick me up….and know what guys my mom has given my training responsibility to some dr kabir …..o god he would be a khadus old man I think ….he willl bore me but I am also sanchi mishra ……he would regret of his decision .
Isha- lets see …..and ofcourse u r damn smart…..god save that man..
Trio laughs
Dr kabir who was listening them with much patience proceed to them.
Kabir- sanchi mishra…..come lets go to ur house.
Sanchi- wait how u knw me who r u?
Bytheway u r hot so if u r flirting with me then its ok mr hottie …..sanchi ka dil bahut bada hai(sanchis heart is quite big)
Kabir- r u done with ur foolishness…..i m kabir ..dr kabir rathore.
Sanchi in mind – o teri lag gyi lanka ……..u r gone
Sanchi- oh so u r kabir …..hye how unfair mom give u my pic but didn’t give it to me.ok lets go come my swethearts .
Prasha- sanchi he is damn hot yr
Sanchi – and khadoos at same time .
Kabir in his mind- u havnt seen my level of khadusness yet
Both smirks…..
Guys as friendshipday is coming so it’s a little gift from my side hope you all like it. Cmnt plzz!!!
42 Comments
Awesome ff abhilasha…. Pls continue and post your next ff as soon as possible…. ?
Thank you richa… I will try my best to post asap! ?
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee storyline update the next part asap
Thank u Erika….. I will try to update soon!!
It’s amazing yaar.
Thank u dear!!
Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee superrrrrrrrrrr?????
Thank u dear!
AWWwwwww that was toooo cuuutteee abhilasha ….you gave the story a completely different tract and I lived that would love to see future story …?
Thank you very much trishu…. I hope I meet with u all expectations!!
Hey its awesome and I am also like kanchi pic in the cover go ahead …
Thank u very much!!
Nice story.continue this story.we are eagerly waiting for next part of this story.keep it up
Thank you dear…. Will try to best to update soon!!
really interesting.
waiting for next
Thank u dear!!
Nice story would love to see how kabir trains saanchi and how their love story begins
Thank you so much dear!!
It was amazing
Thank u so much
The story is really nice. Keep writing dear ?????
Thank u so much
Hello abhilasha dear….episode’s osm & so is the portrayal of the characters…..keep writing dear…eagerly waiting for ur next update asap ???
Thank u very much Rita……. Glad u liked it…. I have posted next part
Loved it….it will be interesting to see characters in different way…,.eagerly waiting for next episode…
Thank u very much????
nice yaar maja aayega ye dekhne m ki ek jiddi bold frank student ko strict kaise train karega n kaise unki lov story bnegi luv it continue yaar update nxt soon as possible
Thank u very much dear…. Glad u liked it and I have posts te next part!!
It’s very interesting to see different sanchi. loved today story it will be very interesting to see how kabir and sanchi will fall for each other.
Thank u so much dear!!!
Lovely cover photo????
Thank you
Abhilasha its very intesting story keep writing dear.
Thank you so much dear.
its totally different story line and interesting
waiting for next
Thank you very much sundari dear!!
Plzz updare the next part soon it is an amazing story
Thank u dear.. I have posted next part
Awesome.Keep writing dear.
Thank u dear
Abhilasha…. Wooooow.. Congrats on starting ur first ff on kaanchi. Now u are pure genius.. Saanchi’s new character is worth to watch and the plot arc with Takkar is going to be interesting and loved how kabir is loving and arrogant at the same time and how saanchi is bold and modern.. Plus Anand being half holder part.. This story is making me want to make u the script writer of SDCH.. Can’t wait anymore.. A big confetti throwing party and lots of hugs and love from my side in ur new and amazing ff..
Ur cmnt bring a wide smile on my face Annie…..a big wala thank you to u for this and lots of love and hugs from me to you…. Ur appreciation means a lot….. And seriously I was fed up of present story line on show so I make my own….. Thank you once again and I m really glad that u like it!