Surprise…Surprise…Surprise!!
So how was the surprise? Actually I am also surprised that why on earth I am writing when I didn’t plan, but I was hell bored so just thought of writing! Thanks for your valuable comments! And finally the 8 years leap is here, sorry for making you wait, and leaving you confused! Well as I said that this love angle will be slightly different but in my way! I hope I don’t lose the track and disappoint you all! This is Zuha, here to express my fictional stories to you all so you guys can pass your time out 😉 !
If you have missed the previous update so here is the link for you;
http://www.tellyupdates.com/life-gives-u-100-reasons-cry_show-life-u-1000-reasons-smile-chapter-1/
I hope you will catch up with the previous chappy!
Now let’s move on to the story and let’s see the story after 8 years!
Kahani 8 Saal Baad!! (Story after 8 years!!)
The scene focuses the great city of India, Mumbai! The busy roads…The pollution…The hot and stinky weather…The running time, amidst it a big mansion in carved on it “Sid’s” but wait a second there is something else written but what, well leave it let’s go inside! (What else is written is a mystery and I am not revealing it for sure, for that you have to wait as the story proceeds )
A boy aged around 28 is seen sitting in the in-house bar, drinking alcohol! The clock struck 8 (Seriously does someone drinks at 8 but after all it is my FF everything is possible here 😛 ) All servants line up and stands in front of the man, bowing down their heads, the man looks up and is none other than the dashing, Sid!
Sid: Aren’t you guys forgetting to wish me?
Servants: Sorry sir! Happy birthday!
Sid clenches the glass in which he was drinking the alcohol and re-minces the incident happened 8 years back, his eyes turn as red as blood, a tear escapes his eyes, he throws the glass angrily shouting, “SHUT UP!! JUST SHUT UP!” frightening the servants!
Sid: Today is not my birthday (Pointing his index finger to the servants!) Today is my death day!
He says clenching his fist!
Servants: Sorry sir! Good morning!
Sid: Good morning! (Still his eyes are red) Now leave! I SAID LEAVE!!!!
The servants leave without uttering a single word!
Siddhant is still furious and gulps down a bottle of alcohol! And swipes his finger across his nose! He starts moving yet he stumbles!
He reaches the stairs, and he stumbles and was about to fall, when someone holds him! Yes the one who hold him was none other than Archana (The girl with whom Jasmin found Sid with, I decided to give the casting of this character to the girl playing Doctor Pallavi in the actual serial, I hope you all are okay with it! And don’t worry the ultimate pair will be Sidmin/Twinj!)
Archana: Sambhal ke Siddhant! (Be careful!)
Sid pushes her away from him!
Sid: I can manage myself; I don’t need your support or someone else’s! Just stay away from me!
Archana: I will leave you till your room!
Sid: I SAID JUST LEAVE ME ALONE! YOU MAD WOMAN!
Archana: Siddhant! I am your wife!!!!!! (Laga na shock! Mujhe bhi! I don’t know from where this idea came in my mind but please don’t be mad on me, but still TRUE LOVE is always TRUE LOVE!)
Sid: Wife? My foot! Just remember one thing I HATE YOU!!! UNDERSTAND! You are just a piece of trash in my life which I have to tolerate just because I am a star! And remember one thing! By your bl**dy conspiracies you can marry me but can never make me fall in love with you! Understood! ( Not able to gain control over himself but still moves up wards!)
Archana thinks, “Siddhant you were mine, you are mine and you will remain mine! Jasmin is gone! And I am here! I will make you mine once and for all! You are my madness and I will win you at any cost!” Ans she smirks! (Evil tune plays)
Other side…the peaceful city of Amritsar is shown…The famous places like the Golden Temple…Summer Palace of Maharaja Ranjit Singh…and ends at Amrit Sarovar lake! Near the lake is shown a small house, not that small but enough for a family to fit in!
A room is focused, many alarm clocks are ringing, although no one is in the room (Strange though but you will get to know what’s the scene!) A woman enters in a Punjabi attire, and shouts, “Twinkle Puttar!”
A girl comes out of the washroom, she has tied her hair in a towel and wearing a pink knee length sleeve-less kurti, and under it blue denim, the absolute beauty is none other than Jasmin, but the question here is why the woman called her TWINKLE! (That is also a mystery and I will tell you later 😉 )
Jasmin (I am mentioning her Jasmin but everyone here call her Twinkle so plz don’t be confused) : Good morning Leela ma! (Switching of the alarm clock!)
Leela (Yes the woman was Leela!): Good morning Twinkle puttar!
Once again a voice of alarm is heard but not from Jasmin’s room but from another room! Leela and Jasmin smile!
Leela: This girl!
Jasmin: Wait Leela Ma I will wake her up!
Leela: Thank you puttar!
Jasmin: Ma! Come on! When you say thanks to me I feel stranger feeling so never say thanks to me! It seems very much formal!
Leela: What can I do my daughter is so sweet! (Pulling her cheeks!)
Jasmin: Acha I will wake her up or else! (She leaves from there smiling!)
Leela (self-talk) : Kitni soni bachi hai! Ajnabi ho kar bhi Apnon se bhar kar lagti hai! (Such s nice girl! Yet she is stranger but more than loved-ones)
Another room…A girl is sleeping…The girl switches off the alarm and sleeps back…Jasmin enters the room and smiles looking the girl’s silly antics!
Jasmin: Madam wake up! You have to leave for college!
Girl: Twinkle di please let me sleep! 5 minutes more!
Jasmin: Oh god! Wake up yaar!
Girl: What’s the time?
Jasmin: Just look by yourself!
The girl sits up rubbing her eyes, and is seeing a blur image, she puts on her glasses and she is none other than Mahi!
Mahi: Oh my god! It is 8:30! 9 o’clock is me seminar! By the way what’s the date today!
Jasmin: 23rd…pause…sadness on face…July! 23rd July! (She turns around and heads to leave)
Tears escape her eyes!
Jasmin thinks, “The day which brought doom in my life! This day broke Jasmin! This day ended Jasmin! Why, Baba ji? Why did you do that to me! Why I fell in love? Why everything ended! Why this day even comes I hate this day!”
She hears a voice, “Twinkle Puttar!”
Jasmin wipes her tears and smiles and continues, “But this day also gave me a new life! Brought a happiness of what is family! After 18 years living as an orphan I finally got the family love which is much more than that Love! That love ended but this love will never end as my Leela Ma, Bade Papa, and Mahi love me more than my real parents would have loved me! This day I get my new identity! The identity of TWINKLE TANEJA!!”
She smiles, happily!
CHAPPY ENDS ON HER SMILING FACE!!!!!
Precap: Mahi’s convocation day! Jasmin sees Siddhant! Tears roll down her eyes!! She leaves and suddenly…….
Shock…Shock…Shock! So many shocks! I know the precap is a bit scary, SUDDENLY….WHAT?? For that you have to wait for the next episode of this Fan fiction “When Life Gives U 100 Reasons to Cry_Show Life that U have 1000 Reasons to Smile!”
As I have told you all before that I am writing 6 FFs and it is quite tough to be regular, and also schools are opening so burden is increasing as I need to complete my holiday assignments which I always leave for the last day (:P) Well this is my bad habit to leave holiday assignments for the last 2 days after enjoying the whole vacations 😉
Well if there is a delay so I am sorry, hope you guys will understand my situation, and I am pretty sure you will 🙂
Thanks for reading this boring FF! And please if you have take time out to read so please take time out to drop your views also!
If you wanna read my other Fan Fictions so here are the links for you;
My Asya(Asad and Zoya) and Huyaan (Humeira and Ayaan) FF under Qubool Hai
“Asya and Huyaan : A delicate relation”
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=Asya+and+Huyaan+%3A+A+delicate-relation
My Swaragini FF based on Swasan (Swara and Sanskaar) and Raglak (Ragini and Laksh)
“Once Upon a Love Story…A Swasan and Raglak Fan Fiction”
http://www.tellyupdates,com/?s=Once+Upon+a+Love+Story…+A+Swasan+and+Raglak+Fan+Fiction
My Swaragini FF based on Raglak (Ragini and Laksh)
“Ria:Ma and Pa just tell me your Love Story!”
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=Ris%3A+Ma+and+Pa+just+tell+me+your+Love+Story
My Swaragini FF based on Ragsan (Ragini and Sanskaar)
“Objection My Lord! Ragsan”
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=Objection+My+Lord+%21+Ragsan+%28Few+shots%29
So will meet you soon with a new update! Till then Bye! Stay Blessed! Take Care! Keep smiling like always 🙂
Love you all!
Zuha Fatima
34 Comments
Wow just awesome????loved it plz post soon whenever u get tym
Thanks Sameera darling! I will try to post soon!
Keep smiling like always 🙂
-Zuha
Amazing zuha no words
You’re very creative yaar
By the way itna sare free time?….how’d you manage??
Just curious
Or Han will siddhant be called Kunj??
Well itna sar free time toh nahi hota but I try to post one FF in a day and if I get time I post 2 or promos!
Well I am scolded by my family for the extra usage of devices when I am actually enjoying writing my FFs!
Well Siddhant will not be knows as Kunj he is Sid only 😛
Thanks yaar for the lovely comment!
Keep smiling like always 🙂
-Zuha
Awsm,…. Jzz luvd it… Waitung eagerly fr mny more surprises ,Esp sidmins meet;)
Thanks Maggi didi!
Will try to post soon!
Sidmin will not meet easily and will meet after many conflicts 😉
Stay tuned for more updates!
Keep smiling like always 🙂
-Zuha
hey zuha amazing n dare u 2 say it as boring luvd it it ws amazing
Thanks baby for the lovely comment!
And sorry sorry for stating it boring!
Ghalti se mistake ho gayi 😛
Well keep smiling like always!
-Zuha
Zuhuuuu…..m calling u Zuhuu don’t mind….masha allah…subhanallah….kya likhti ho…ufff….itta achha koi kaise likh skta hai….I mean what was this? Uve left me speechless! Aaj kal main lambe comments de hi nhi paa rhi hu…kyuki har koi meri bolti band karwa de rha hai….aur tum ne to jaise fevikwik laga diya ho…bas one thing I can say…..stay blessed, keep writing and love u loads??
Laddoooooooooo!!! Finally my Laddoo commented on my FF and made it more beautiful for me!!!
Thanks for the lovely comment!
But that’s not fair yaar 🙁 Dosti mein no formalities!
And thanks for the love you guys have showered upon me!
To be honest this is my first experience on TEI but you guys are so loving that you force me to say I LOVE U !!!!!!!
Anyways keep smiling like always! 🙂
-Zuha
awesome epi…Amazing…feeling sad for sidmin….itte saare Secrets…..eagerly waiting for next part…..
Thanks Purnima for your lovely comments!
Yup itne saare secrets??
Will try to post ASAP?
Well keep smiling like always 🙂
-Zuha
Waoow just enjoyed today’s episode ??? and waah gr8 introduction of them both too good ? can’t wait on next epi …
Thanks Romaisha dear!
I am happy you enjoyed!
Will try to post ASAP?
Well keep smiling like always 🙂
-Zuha
Nice epi n sry fr not comntng on pre epi
Thanks for commenting dear!
Nah! That’s perfectly fine!
I am happy u commented this time?
Well keep smiling like always 🙂
-Zuha
Zuhuuuuuuuu…….,.,this was just awwwwweeeeesome loved it
Thanks kruti di!
I am happy u are enjoying this FF!
Well keep smiling like always 🙂
-Zuha
Zuhoooo …..my darling u write so well ….soo good that I can’t express myself that how much I love ur ff ..
I’m waiting nd praying Allah that my family take me for a visit to Pakosatb Pakistan as I’m dying to meet u nd take ur autograph …I want to be the first one taking ur signs ….
Loved the episode to the upshot …
love u
Awwwwww!!! Sayoooo Api?????
I am really happy to entertain great writers like you?
Well it will be a pleasure meeting you darling??
Will be awaiting….Well I will take your autograph 1st?
Anyways keep smiling like always 🙂
Love u 2❤❤
-Zuha
Amazing Apia! Something very much different in your collection, well Mobo told me about it and I started reading it…Now I exactly know what are you planning…When I will come to your place do tell me 🙂 😉
Your Mamu ki beti ♡♡♡♡
Oh so my Mamu ki beti finally commented?
Well thanks Kachoo darling for your lovely comment!
Why Mobo is not commenting then?
Well keep smiling like always!
Your Apia❤❤
how many twists none part ? on top of that the precap is full of suspense! i am dying to read the next part ! please post soon 🙂 love you x
Hmmmmmmm…Abhi toh bas shuruwat hai aage aage dekhiye hota hai kya???
Well thanks Mona (May I call u likr that?) for such a lovely comment!
Will be posting soon!
Anyways keep smiling 🙂
Love u 2❤❤
-Zuha
You can call me anything you like ?
Thanks dear?
Wiw…..lovely episode….
Thanks dear!
Keep smiling 🙂
-Zuha
Amazing episode…. loving diz ff…. eagerly waiting for nxt part…. post soon…
Thanks Shoooonnaaaaaaa didi? for such a lovely and sweet comment??
Will try to post soon?
Keep smiling?
-Zuha
Zuha darlo a big big sorry for not commenting but couldn’t help it…wonderful. ..its unique one yaar..post asap
Thanks Arundhati for your comment!
No need to be sorry, I understand dear!
I am happy that you are enjoying this FF?
Will try to post ASAP?
Well keep smiling like always 🙂
-Zuha
Wow Zuha…u write so well… loved it… ur story is unique..
this time a bit late…
Thanks Jisha di!
It is an immense pleasure to be appreciated by amazing writers like u?
Nah!U are not that late?
Well keep smiling like always 🙂
-Zuha