So I am back! Firstly tons of apologies as I know it has been a long time since I updated and also I failed to post on my birthday ?
But seriously guys…Thank you so much for showering your wishes over me ๐ I feel blessed to have friends like you all ???
Happy Birthday Kruti di! And belated happy birthday to Angita!
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I turned to find Jasmine standing with a box in her hand. Only 2 minutes were left before my birthday would get over and I will turn to 20 years and 1 day. God…she looks so damn amazing in that peach dress and golden churidar with a golden dupatta pinned to her shoulder, leaving her silky hair open, with the smoky eye make up (if anyone watches Ishqbaaz here so you can see Anika’s [Surbhi Chandna] dress up in yesterday’s episode) making her look simple yet elegant! She smiled and said, “Happy Birthday!!” I also passed a smile. She proceeded towards me but as fate wanted, she slipped due to her heels, falling in my arms as she tugged tight to me due to fear. As the clock struck 12, the fan (nearby) made the rose petals blew over us…We were lost in each other! But……a cough…..broke the serenity of the environment. Zain coughed, which made us to come back to the reality. We composed.
She gave the box to me wishing me once again.
Zain walked to her and said, “Excuse me! Now it is my birthday!”
She looked towards him and with a mischevious smile said, “So….”
Zain’s face turned pale and said, “So you were ought to bring a gift for me!”
She grinned and said, “Really?”
Zain was fed up and said, “Jasmine stop your acting and give me my gift!”
She laughed and said, “Acha baba..Go to your room! Awaits for you…..your Video games!!!”
Zain’s face lit up as he said, “Really Jasmine ! I love u for this!”
And he rushed to his room like a small kid. We smiled at his childishness.
There was a minute of silence between us which I broke by saying, “Thanks for the gift ๐ !”
She smiled at me and said, “You did not open yet!”
I was embarrassed.
I opened the box and a small curve appeared on my face to find a beautiful cube with my pictures in each of its side ๐ I looked up to her with a million dollar smile and wanted to hug her tight for such a beautiful and the best gift for me ๐ But all I can do was to pay a token of gratitude which I did so!
She looked at me saying, “Zain always says ‘Dosti mein NO SORRY NO THANK U’ so no need to thank and also this is not only the surprise something is there for you!”
She held my hand as she proceeded towards the terrace.
I was ammused but somewhere I was happy.
I kept on adoring her all the while till we reached terrace.
She asked me to close my eyes for a while and I did so. It was around 5 minutes when she asked me to open them and I was left surprised to find the whole terrace lit up with small colorful lights, and in the middle an innocent glory was putting the candle on the cake, which had my picture over it.
[Mera bichra yaar…
Kho gaya woh
Jo chura ke
Meri aankhon se nindia
Le gaya the
Door ek gaoon has
Wahan thandi chaoon has
Behti Nadia hai
Jana has Nadia ke paar
(Siddharth proceeds towards her)
Mil gaya woh
Jo chura ke
Meri aankhon se nindia
La gaya the
Kar mera intezaar…Mera bichra yaar
Meta bichra yaar…..]
(He reaches to Jasmine and sits on his knee near Jasmine as they share an eye lock while the candle blows between the 2 souls)
Mera bichra yaar……Mera bichra yaar]
As her phone rang, we got back to the world. I don’t know why I feel connected to her….She stood up as she received the phone call. She hanged up saying, “I will reach soon Chinki! Bye!”
She turned and looked at me and said, “Sorry! Woh…it was my friend cum sister!” I just replied, “No problem! And you just said ‘Dosti mein NO SORRY NO THANK U!’ So you forgot that rule ๐ But what is all this?”
She smiled and said, “Happy birthday to you.. Happy Birthday to you… (she held my hand and picked the knife)Happy birthday dear Siddharth (we bend towards the cake as we got more closer to each other) Happy birthday to you!”
And we finally cut the cake as she clapped.
I was adoring het as she smiled……..
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Precap:Chinki and Jasmine fight…Siddharth plans an unintentional date for him and Jasmine. Jasmine vents her anger over Sid!!!
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So I hope it was not boring. Well I guess it was ?? moreover I have noticed a drastic downfall in the comments and not only on MY FFs also on others. Well comments don’t matter as of writing is the best part and recreating the magic of Simon aka Twinj so if you don’t comment on my FF so it will not hurt but after taking out time from my hectic schedule I guess expecting a word of appreciation or criticism is not unfair ๐
Anyways keep smiling ๐ Always ๐
Love u all โคโค
(Ignore mistakes!)
37 Comments
Zuha di…..pahle sorryyyyyyyyy…..Arre for not wishing u…
BELATED HPY BDAY ….
Di ….superb epi…..it was awesome amazing cuttttteeeee…nd plssssss post soon….
Love u
Thanks so much Adya for wishes and appreciation ๐ Love u 2!
Keep smiling ๐ Always ๐
Hey Zuha,
This was just amazing! The precap seems exciting ? so post soon! Moreover, you actually are saying the truth. I mean yes the comments have fallen plus it really isn’t wrong to expect a comment after the time we’ve spent on writing ff’s. Just don’t get disheartened and continue to write. (I know you are tho ??)
Love you ?
Hey Monica,
Glad that you liked ๐ I will try to post soon ๐ Actually my laptop is not working so posting from mobile is a bit tough ๐ But you know I can’t stay away from you guys so I will be back ๐ Also comments never matter to me but still there are some expectations … Anyways don’t you dare think that I will stop writing so soon .. I will eat your brains as much as possible ๐ Chalo koi nahi…I will be posting soon ๐ Love ya!!
Keep smiling ๐ Always ๐
Mashallah zuha the episode was good and adorable precap made me more eager for the next update do continue and ya belated happy birthday
Thanks sohi ๐ Glad that you liked ๐ Also thanks for the wishes ๐ I will be posting soon ๐
Keep smiling ๐ Always ๐
Awesome zuha loved it n belated happy bday dear
Thanks Ramya for your appreciation and wishes also thanks for the OS!!
Keep smiling ๐ Always ๐
Zuha have u read my os dear sry bt I dnt know
Yeah i did read it ๐ But was not able to comment due to net issues ๐ but that was simply amazing ๐ Thanks once again ๐
It means alot tqq so much dear
Hey Zuha,
I am so sorry for not commenting on ur ff…maaf kardo dost samagh kar…The epi was not at all boring…u just rocked it… loved it…awesome plus amazing plus fab epi…post soon.
Lots of luv,
Twinj/aakriti
Hey aaku, (Hope you don’t mind if I call you so)
U liked it?? That is great ๐ Chalo you commented now that is the best part and no need to be sorry ๐
Love ya!
Keep smiling ๐ Always ๐
Awesome epi zuhu..
But very bad mera epi khas tere or amu ke liye post kiya tha..
Tumdono ko wish bhi kiya tumahre liye kuch likha bhi Lenin I think u didn’t read I think that was just a waste of time ..
Now ur epi was fab
Hey bubul!
Arey meri chidia mujh se naraz ho gayi ๐ Acha sorry please maaf kardo : – ( Lo mein tumhare liye kaan bhi pakar leti hoon ๐ ab toh maaf kardo! ๐ !
Maaf kar dia? ๐ ๐ chalo good….I know meri chidia mujh se ziada der tal naraz nahi reh sakti ๐
And also I commented on your post ๐ And thanksssssssssssssszzzzzzzzzzzxxxxxxxxxx
So much for the wonderful gift โกโกโกโก
And also thanks for appreciation ๐
Love u โกโกโกโกโก
Keep smiling ๐ Always ๐
Nice episode zuha post asap and plz don’t feel disheartened I love ur ff
Thanks shushmita ๐ Glad that u liked ๐ And dear I am not disheartened just that there are some expectations of the writer as well ๐ Anyways Keep smiling ๐
Soooooo sorry ? i didn’t commented before…. but really you all ff writers deserve an appreciations….THANK YOU sooo much for your precious time for us
The episode was AWESOME
Post soon please
Loads of love โค๏ธ
Thanks Saira ๐ And no need to be sorry I can understand ๐ Thanks for appreciation ๐
Loads of Love โกโกโกโกโก
Keep smiling ๐ Always ๐
awesome amazing fabulous epi
Thanks Purnima ๐
Keep smiling ๐ Always ๐
Awesome epi.. loved all SidMin’s scenes?? they were indeed beautiful ?? and you ff writes deserve a token of appreciation for all the time n efforts you rake for writing ffs???? thank you for that and hats off to you guys???
Thanks Sidvee ๐ Glad that you liked it ๐ Thanks for appreciation ๐
Loads of Love โคโคโคโคโค
Keep smiling ๐ Always ๐
Wow zuha…
Awsm epi yaar
Luvd it โคโคโค
Thanks Maggi di ๐ Glad that you liked it ๐
Loads of Love โคโคโคโคโค
Keep smiling ๐ Always ๐
Wow Zuha! it was awesome amazing mindblowing superb epi….. loved sid’s emotions n sidmin scene….. precap seems intresting……. waiting for there date…. pls post next asap….
N ya ur ff is not boring n I’ve already told u that u r one of the great writer in TU n ur ff is one of my favourite ff… so pls dont be disheartened….. n I’m really very sorry for not cmnting ur pre epi…. actually busy sedule u know but I promise I’ll try to cmnt on ur ff regular… pakka wala promise…. but pls forgive me….pls pls pls pls maaf kar do apni is Neha appi ko pls…..
Well come soon with next epi… is bar jyada der mat karna…
N belated โฅHAPPY BIRTH DAYโฅ
Loads of love
“Shalini/Neha”
Hey Neha di,
Glad that you liked it ๐ Thanks for the appreciation and no need to be sorry ๐ and thanks for the wishes ๐ and I will be posting soon and my other Ffs are posted do check them ๐
Loads of Love โคโคโคโคโค
Keep smiling ๐ Always ๐
Hey zuha api epi was amazingggg and luvd it plzzzz try to post nxt asap
Thanks Anyaali ๐ Glad that you enjoyed ๐ I will be posting the next one soon ๐
Loads of Love โคโคโค
Keep smiling ๐ Always ๐
Zuhuuuu it’s awesome ???
Lobely yaar. Itna cute episode hai yeh. Loved it
Zuhu if u r free upload my fav ff also a long one. Actually ur all ff are my fav but thats the most fav?????
Love u
Thanks Kuku ???? And mera bacha I have updated 3 articles of your favourite FFs go and catch them ??
loads of love โคโคโคโคโค
Keep smiling ๐ Always ๐
Zuhuuuu…as always.. This was fab!!?????
A msg for all d writers..
Hai all crazy here with something interesting
All u need to do is nominate urself
But for what and all i ll tell you all later but i need 2more people help in it
So who wanna help me ? Just let me know
N now here it cms
This section z for awards on the ff os ss written on TEI?
ALL U need to do is register urself for the award ceremony
Now question comes how will u do it hai na?
Well v shall do it for you
But but u shd all do is
Either msg me r mail me your name and ur ff os ss name
Last date for registering yourself is the Wednesday
And by Thursday r Friday ll post d final nominees
Categories are given below
?FANFRICTIONS -FF ?
1)Emotional
2)Horror
3)Comedy
4)Action
5)Romance
6)Family Drama
7)Friendship
8)Revenge
?SHORT STORIES -SS?
2)Romantic
3)Friendship
4)General
?ONE SHOT -OS?
1)Inspiring Stories
2)Friendship
3)Emotional
D best of all category z
?ALL ROUNDER ?
SO GUYS HERE ARE D CATEGORY
No bashing
Stay positive
And these are for both Twinj n Twiraj Fans
#CrazyNTeam
Hey dear,
Firstly thanks for appreciation ๐ Well I would love my FF to atleast be nominated ๐ so here it is
FF – TWINJ ki TASHAN-E-SHAADI ~By Zuha (Genre : Emotional, Romance, Revenge)
SS – When Life Gives U 100 Reasons to Cry _ Show Life that U have 1000 Reasons to Smile!! (Genre : Romantic , Friendship)
OS – 1) The Unknown Fan!! When a celebrity falls for a random girl let’s see what happens!
2) Not everyone is lucky to spend there life with their love .. a girl’s journey (Twinj and Twiraj)
send me your id and I will give u the links
Aww..zuha u needed to message crazy di..Writer of ‘a devil that owned an angel and Vamp diaries’..not me darlo
Ohhh…Silly me ?? K I will message her ๐ Thanks ๐
Loved it too sweet ๐
Thanks…