Guys… I have decided… Thanks for the suggestions… ????but i don’t know how it will be… Sorry if you don’t like it… ????
So let’s start…
Next day… Swara wakes up… She looks here and there…
‘uth gayi meri shona ‘…
She looks at the door… Ragini was standing… She comes and kiss swara’s forehead…
Swara (slowly) : Teddy ???
Ragini (frowns) : Teddy?? Which teddy… Oh oh so you want your Teddy bear… Let me bring…
Ragini brings a big Teddy… Swara looks at it and gets sad ???
Ragini : shona take na…
Swara nodes in no…
Ragini shook her head… Sanskar was watching her from window and smiles shipishly…
Swara was sitting beside the window and watching flowers in the garden… Sanskar has to go to office for urgent work…
Ragini and laksh
also goes there respective offices… Dolly is there as usual for taking care of swara… But the things has changed… Now they are in mm…
In kitchen…
Ap and sujata are preparing lunch when dolly comes there… In this days ragini was there… As today swara is quite well Ragini can’t neglect her office…
Dolly : mam… Please can you give me 30 minutes and let me use the gas… I have to make shona’s lunch…
Ap and sujata looks at each other…
Sujata: after finishing our work you can use it…
Dolly : mam it’s already 12:30… If she eat lunch lately then she may be get ill…
Sujata: now for this girl each person will starve . ..
Dolly : mam just 30 min…
Ap was about to Leave..
Sujata: don’t argue… Go from here…
Dolly nodes… She is very kind hearted self sufficient woman… She can’t bear this much insult… She is with swara from last 10 years… Mr shekhar gadodia sent her… And she starts love swara and Ragini like own sister… But today it’s enough…
Dolly goes to swara… Who is looking at Sky blankly…
Swara sees dolly…. But said nothing…
Dolly: shona bachcha… Are you hungry…
Swara said nothing…
Dolly wait for another 1 hour… It’s 1:30… Dolly again goes to kitchen… She sees sujata and ap still is there…
Dolly: mam can i make it now…
Sujata : 15 mins…
Dolly goes to swara…
Swara (slowly) : dolly didi… Meko bhukh lagi h… (dolly didi… I am hungry)…
Just then sanraglak and other came for lunch…
Ragini comes to the room where sanlak goes to dining area…
Ragini (while enter) : my shona had her lunch???
Dolly (hesitantly) : no Ragini wo…
Ragini (1st she is worried for swara and 2nd pregnant so mood swing effect): what the hell… What do you mean by no?? Did you see the clock…
Sanlak and all listen this from downstairs…
Sujata : lo bhai… This mad again creates a new drama…
Sanlak (top of his voice) : mom/ chachi…
Both runs upstairs…
Sanskar wait in the outside and laksh was about to entered… Just then ragini storms out of the room…
Laksh follows her : ragu… What happened…
Sanskar all numb… He peeps in the room… Swara is scared like hell…And hugging Dolly tightly… She is very scared… Dolly is trying to consoling her but her face seems to be like she will cry anytime…
Sanskar goes downstairs…
Ragini : ma… Chachi… What is this…
Sujata : what…
Sanskar : bhabi what happened…
Ragini : swara didn’t eat anything till now… Cz ma and chachi didn’t let dolly didi to make her lunch…
Sanskar and laksh in utter shock…
Sanskar : mom…
Laksh just looks at ap… Said nothing…
Ragini : ma… She just wanted 30 mins… Why are you all doing this…
Sujata : han toh we also have work… We also need to make lunch…
Sanskar : mom.. You make 5 dishes… If you make one dish less then nothing will happen…
Sujata : why??? Why will make…
Laksh : ma… You also support chachi…
Ap : i was just…
Laksh : what’s wrong with you ma…
Laksh : Ragini… I think we should leave this house…
Ap looks at him with jerk…
Dp : ap… Did you really support sujata??
Ap: ji wo…
Dp : that day you told me to seat with kavita’s parent… I agreed… But today… What did she do… Nothing… We can’t even understand that she is here… She never trouble us… You become so heartless that you didn’t give 30 mins to make her lunch…
Laksh : mom… Is this you?? Really??
Suddenly dolly comes running…
Dolly : Ragini… Swara gets unconscious…
Sanskar runs to upstairs…
Ragini goes to kitchen…
Laksh : ragu…
Ragini : dolly didi already gave her the medicine which she use to eat 1hr before lunch … It’s a high dose tablet… If she doesn’t eat lunch then obviously she will feel weak and gets unconscious…
Here sanskar sees swara unconscious in the bed…
Sanskar : shona… Get up…
Sanskar sprinkles water… He close his fist… And kisses her forehead tightly…
Ragini comes there with soup…
Ragini : sanskar… Open her mouth…
Sanskar Open her mouth and Ragini pour the soup…
Laksh comes with doctor…
Doctor : she is still in trauma… You should take care of her…
Sanraglak nodes…
Swara was sleeping… Trio come out…
Laksh : papa… Tell me what should i do… Ma… You tell…
Ragini : leave it laksh… Ma… Papaji… I never want to separate laksh from you all… I don’t know why you all are doing this what’s your problem with my shona… She never trouble you… So why you all are troubling her…
Leave it…
Sanskar : mom… I will leave this house with my shona… So you better stop your this tricks…
Sujata : han han… Now you will leave us for that mad girl…
Sanskar : mom… (shouts)
Ragini : one day you will love to call her as your dil and one day you yourself will die to bring her as your dil…
Saying this she left…
At evening…
Sanskar again sings a song… But swara didn’t came… He looks at her… Sitting with sad face…
Next 3 days passed…
Sanskar is walking here and there… Swara again became silent… Tomorrow is music compitition… Ragini is also very tensed…
Trio comes at home in lunch time…
Ragini feed her… Just then music competition organizer called her for submitting some audio clips of her singing and also some other works… Raglak left… Sanskar has also some works in office… He also left with dp and rp… And here sujata and ap goes to some neighbor… Swara is alone with dolly… As usual swara was sitting… And dolly was trying to make her speak…
Suddenly her phone ringed… Her old mother is being hospitalized…
She immediately call Ragini…
Ragini asked her to leave… She was leaving the center only…
Dolly leaves…
But here Ragini stuck in traffic… Swara is all alone in the house… Sanskar being restless coming home only just then laksh call him and tells the situation… Sanskar hurriedly goes to home…
Here…
Swara feels thrusty… She takes the water full of glass jug… But it’s slipped from her hand and breaks it with huge sound… Just then sanskar enter in the house… He listen this… And runs upstairs… Throwing his bag..
Sanskar runs in the room: shona…
Swara Immediately looks at him and gets scared…
Swara nodes in no and steps back… And glass piece prick in her feet… She wince in pain…
Swara : aaaaah…
She starts crying… Sanskar Immediately comes forward…
Swara again moves back and fall down and glass prick in her palm… She cries more…
Sanskar : shona no…
Swara stands up… And : no… No… Nei…
Sanskar : no no… Shona.. Don’t go backward… Come to me…
He comes forward…
Swara about to move: no no… Don’t come… Don’t take me… Diii… She cries more…
Sanskar : look i am not going there shona… (he steps back) look i am stepping back… Don’t steps backward you will get hurt… Please…
He pleades… He was sweating due to tension… Swara stands there blenched in fear crying miserably ..
Swara : diiii….
Sanskar : shona… Come sit here on bed… Please…
Swara nodes in no and about to steps backward more… Sanskar in a fraction of second runs to her and pulls her towards him… Embracing her tightly… While swara struggled…
Swara : leave me don’t take me… Nei nei…. Bohot dard dete h wo…
Sanskar carries in arms and goes to another room…
He place her on bed… He was about to take fast aid box… But swara tries to escape while crying… Sanskar nick time hold her hand and pulls her… He hold her tightly by waist in his embrace sitting beside her and cups her face…
Sanskar : shona believe me… I will not do anything… Look how much it bleeding… Let me dress it i will leave you…
Swara nodes Vigorously in no while crying very badly : nei nei… Leave me…
Sanskar holds her tightly wrapping one hand behind her and by that hold her palm… While swara struggled…
Sanskar takes out cotton and medicine… 1st he slowly takes out the glass piece… Swara was still struggling… She shouts in pain…
Sanskar : bas bas… Ho gya… Itna nei rote… Look its out… Shona… Stop stop..
Sanskar was doing His work patiencely.. No irritation was there while swara was struggling and crying… Sanskar was blowing air and consoling her… Sanskar dressed her hand… Sanskar kiss her cheek… And smiles…
Sanskar : look it done…
Swara was still crying : don’t take me there… Leave me..
Sanskar (teary eyes) : i will not… Mera cry baby… Let me dress your leg i will leave you… Sanskar sits on floor… Swara slightly stops and sits there shrunked in fear… Not looking at him… Sanskar takes her leg… His eyes fill with tears… He slowly takes out the piece… Swara shouts in pain…
Sanskar pats her cheek: ssshhh ssshh… Ho gya… Sorry sorry…
He carefully cleared it and bandaged it… He looks at swara… And sits beside her and smiles in tear…
Sanskar : look… It’s done…
He tries to cups her face.. She turns while crying…
Sanskar (now cries) : please shona… Please forgive me… How much you will punish me… I am sorry na please… I will never do this thing… Please…
He again sits on knees on floor
Sanskar : shona… That was a beast… You know an idiot witch came and made me beast that day… That’s why your prince left you there… Now he recognized how much he loves his princess… Please forgive me… Give me one last chance please… Please…
Sanskar dug his face in her lap while crying… Swara look at him fearful teary face… Still crying…
Sanskar looks up : please shona… Please… One chance…
He looks at her with hope… She Will accept… She will hug him and will cry… But no… She just go backward being feared… Just then ragini comes…
Ragini : shona…
Swara looks up : dii (while crying)
Ragini goes to her and hugs her… Looks confusedly at sanskar… Sanskar was looking at her… Then looks down…
Sanskar : bhabi she hurt herself… I… I… I dressed it… You… Jus… Just check that if…
He can’t say further… His voice chocked… He runs out of the room…
Swara sees him with fearful eyes…
Here sanskar comes in balcony and cries… Laksh comes there…
Sanskar hugs him tightly… And cries his heart out…
Sanskar : why she hate me this much bhai… Tell her… Tell her na… Tell her to forgive me… It’s paining bhai… So much…. I can’t handle anymore… Bohot dard ho raha h… Bhai… Bohot… I can’t bear it…
Sanskar cries… Laksh looks up and sees Ragini standing there … He looks at her helplessly tearful eyes…
Sanskar cries a lot… After sometime he stops… And silently goes to his room… Swara was in another room… He cares swara’s photo…
Ragini comes there …
Sanskar (looks at her and gives a fake smile and avoid eye contact to hide his tears) : bhabi… Come na… Wo you went to organization… Tell everything fine na… Did you tell them about swara…
Ragini stops him…
Ragini : sanskar…
Sanskar looks down…
Ragini : swara will surely come to you… Soon…
Sanskar close his eyes… Tears makes their own way…
Ragini : and i Have talked… I just hope swara will sing…
Sanskar : she has to bhabi… I will not let her ruin her life for my sin…
Ragini smiles…
Sanskar : bhabi is swara sleeping??
Ragini : han…
Sanskar goes out and bring swara in room carrying in arms…
Ragini : sanskar…
Sanskar : bhabi… I get her only when she sleeps… I don’t want to waste a single minute…
Laksh comes there… And stands beside Ragini…
He wraps her side wise…. Ragini grins widely…
Laksh : hmm.. If devar bhabi talks are finished… Can we go room… Papa’s Princess needs rest…
Ragini : no it will be a boy…
Sanskar : han… It will be chachu’s champ… I will play cricket with him…
Laksh twitched his nose : han han ok… Wait for our second baby… That will definitely be a boy but now it’s my princess…
He then looks at ragini who is giving him a glare : it’s a boy… Get that??
Laksh nodes in fear vigorously… Sanskar laughs… Ragini smiles and pats his cheek… Then gives a tight smile…
Ragini : laksh… Please go and bring chocolate ice cream for me…
Laksh falls in ground fully lying… Spreading hands and legs widely…
Ragini : laksh… Kya hua… (worriedly)
Laksh : please spare me… I can’t go now… I am tired… (with puppy face)
Sanskar (angrily) : bhai bhabi… Go to your room and do your romance… Let me spend some time with her…
Looks at sleeping swara lovingly…
Raglak smiles… And left…
Sanskar shut the door and lie down beside her taking Her in arms…
Sanskar (teary eyes) : i will wait shona… Till my last breath… I hurt you a lot na?? So this punishment is justified… I am not complaining… See… I am bearing it… But shona tomorrow is a very important day for you… You have to sing… For me… For your prince… Cause if tomorrow you will not sing na then i have to kill my self… Cz i can’t face myself… I am hating myself… I can’t bear more guilt… I will surely kill myself…
Next day…
Ragini is making swara ready… She is scared for yesterday’s incident… She is all silent… And looking down… Ragini sits in front of her…
Ragini : shona… You were only 10 yrs old when you 1st sing song in front of me listening a prayer song of church… From that day your di dreamed only one thing to see you as a singer… The society who tell that you are imperfect… You have difficulties… You have no quality… You have to show them that you have the thing which they don’t have… Those people who called you… You are not normal you are a special child… Tell them yes you are special… But not the way they think…you are special with your quality… Today you have to sing… You will na??
Swara said nothing… Ragini looks at her helplessly…
Ragini takes her down… Sanlak already waiting there…
Sanskar : bhai you go with bhabi and shona… I will come with another car…
Sanskar left… Swaraglak was about to leave… Ap comes with cud and sweet…
Ap : Ragini… Feed her…
Ragini smiles and feed her a little… Ap and dp cares her head where swara hugs tightly Ragini…
Trio left…
At music ceremony…
Swaraglak was there… Sanskar is looking at them from distance…
10 competitors… 1st 2nd 3rd will go for state level and then from there national…
Swara is still silent… Her number is last… As judge there is kumar shanu monali thakur and shantonu maitra…
9 singers sings…
Host : now… A special child will come… God gives her brain of only 5 years old kid though she is now 19 yrs old… But gifted her most beautiful voice… So i will glad to introduce miss swara gadodia… Puts your hand together for her…
Swara holds ragini tightly as she was leading her to stage… She hide herself in her…
Ragini : shona… Please sing… (teary eyes)…
Swara just standing there blankly and somewhat scary…
Ragini : for your di… Please…
Swara still not listening…
Judges : arey sing na… Why are you afraid… Sing…
(they said very politely)…
Swara still looking at down…
Ragini : please shona…
10 mins left… Viewers are getting impatient…
Host : sorry mam… We can’t give you much time anymore…
Ragini (almost cries) : shona… Please…
Viewers: take her down… She will not sing…
Ragini looks at them… While Crying…
Ragini : shona… Please… Don’t do this…
Swara looking at Mike stand…
Suddenly a guitar sound came… All looks at the direction…
Sanskar was holding a guitar…
Sanskar comes in front of the stage while singing…
Sanskar :
Main tenu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee
Main tenu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee
Tu ki jaane pyaar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri
Main tenu samjhava ki
Na tere bina lagda jee
Tu ki jaane pyaar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui yon jaan meri
Main tenu samjhawa ki
Na tere bina lagda jee…
Sanskar look at her still playing the guitar hoping she will react… But no… She still in same position…
Sanskar : Mere dil ne chun laiyaa ne
Tere dil diyaan raahan
Tu jo mere naal tu rehta
Turpe meriyaan saaha
Jeena mera.. hoye
Hun hai tera, ki main karaan
Tu kar aitbaar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri
Main tenu samjhawan kee
Na tere bina lagda jee….
Sanskar stops… Look at her… The whole hall is pin drop silent…
Ragini (whispers) : please sing…
Sanskar bows his head… And steps back ward but stops…
Swara : Ve changa nahion keeta beeba
Ve changa nahion keeta beeba
Dil mera tod ke
Ve bada pachhtaiyaan akhaan
Ve bada pachhtaiyaan akhaan
Naal tere jod ke
Tenu chadd ke kitthe jawan
Tu mera parchhanvaa
Tere mukhde vich hi main taan
Rab nu apne pawaan
Meri duaa.. haaye
Sajda tera kardi sadaa
Tu sun iqraar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri
Main tainu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee…
Sanskar and Ragini is smiling in tears… All people are just numb listening her voice… She sings the whole song looking at ground.
Judge : oh my god… You are just amazing… Please can you sing one more song…
Swara hugs ragini tightly and nodes in no…
Ragini : please shona…
Sanskar goes to them… And stands in front of her… Swara hides her face….
Sanskar : shona… Please…
Swara looks at him with fearful eyes… Sanskar steps back with smiling face… Ragini takes the Mike and holds in front of her mouth…
Swara starts to sing tere bin nahi lage jiya from lila movie…
She sings the whole song looking at ground playing with Ragini’s dupatta…
She ends the song… A big round of applause echos in the whole hall… She gets standing ovation from judge and audience… But she was not at all affected… Her full concentration was to making a knot of her di’s dupatta around her finger…
Ragini sanskar and laksh are smiling looking at them…
Jugdes came and bless her… Seeing them she hugs ragini and hide herself in her…
She gets 1st position….
Judge : her voice is really beautiful… She is special child that’s why we didn’t give her 1st prize… She actually deserves it. .
End…
Precap : swara sings… Is this indication of ending of sanskar’s punishment or he have to suffer more???
Thank you so much… Sorry if you feel bored… I am sleepy… I don’t what i write… Please forgive me… Thanks for comments…