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Precap: swara alive… Sanskar’s pain… Naughty swaranshi… Swara returns… Swara’s unexpectedly tude behavior towards sanskar…
Sanskar stands there whole numb… Something came in his mind…
Flashbacks…
Before 2 years…
Sanskar comes from office… And looks at swara’s pic… He smiles…
Sanskar : i am so tired shona…
He sits on bed removing his socks… : you know what happened today… That mr sing… He is such a funny person…
He starts to narrate the funny incident… Then at the end laughs loudly… Suddenly kavita comes there…
Kavita: have you gone mad??
Sanskar rolls his eyes… And was taking clothes from cupboard…
Kavita : you know sanskar you are such a fool… When swara will come… She will be changed… She will not that old swara… She is living in foreign… Do you think she will accept you… Huh… I am sure she will leave you and go to some other man…
Sanskar smiles : i trust my shona… She is mine… And will always be mine…
Kavita : let’s see..
Fb ends…
Sanskar press his lips to stop himself from breaking down… He looks up and watch his family… Laksh was about to come near him… He walks away from there…
He search everywhere… At last he sees her in garden… Watering the plants… He slowly goes to her…
Sanskar : sho… Shonaaa…
Swara stops watering for a while then again starts….
Sanskar : shona… I… Just…
Swara Turns : what mr maheshwary… I told you na… I don’t wanna talk to you…
Sanskar with choked voice : i just want to know… You really don’t want me… You tell if something wrong… I will not come to you shona… Just once you say… You don’t want me… You don’t need…
Swara shouts at him : han i don’t want you… Just go away from me… I just… Just… Hate you…
Saying this she turns away… Sanskar is so shocked.. He steps back…
Sanskar slowly : you… You… Hate… Hate me… My shona hates me…
He smiles pain fully : ok… Ok shona… I deserve this… You be happy in life… I am sorry… I will never come to u… Never ever…
He was stepping back… Suddenly he runs to her and literally jump on her… Hugs her from back tightly… Crying : i love you shona… I love you princess… Love… Love you a lot…
He leaves her run from there…
At sanskar’s room…
He was crying and calling someone… : you get that?? Ok send me…
He takes his bag… And moves to door… But stops seeing Ragini…
Ragini : where are you going??
Sanskar : back to Kolkata bhabi…
Ragini : no devar ji… I will talk to swara… I will make her un…
Sanskar : no bhabi it’s ok… I want her to be happy… That’s all… If she can’t be happy with me then i will not put any kind of pressure on her… And trust me bhabi… That 1 year… Which i spent with her is enough for my whole life… That’s enough…
Ragini : devar ji…
Sanskar goes out…
Sujata sees all this and shouts at ragini : now you and your sister happy na?? You both just ruin his life…
Ragini close her eyes… Tears drop…
After one hour…
Sanskar is sitting on a chair in airport… His eyes are red and nose also… He is remembering swara’s recent behavior… He just can’t digest the fact that actually his shona is hating him…
Suddenly flight name announced.. He stands up wiping his tears and goes towards gate…
Security : sir its only passport… Where’s the ticket…
Sanskar : oj sorry…
He forwards the ticket… But for his surprise someone snatch the ticket… Sanskar looks at his side being shocked… And gets more shocked… Seeing swara standing there bending her face… And is tearing the tickets with full force…
Sanskar : shona…
He almost whispers… Swara was senselessly tearing the tickets… It gets too small to tear more… She throws it on sanskar’s… He sees swara is crying vigorously… He drops his bag… Tries to hold her face…
Sanskar : shona… Princess… What happened…
Swara jerks his hand and runs away… Sanskar is still standing their shockingly…
Sanskar comes in sense after few minutes… He takes his bag… And runs out… He looks here and there… There is no sign of her… He decides to go back…
He comes in hall and sees ragini is shouting on her father and also crying…
Shekhar : Ragini beta… I just wanted to spend some time with my daughter… She is my daughter… I have that rite…
Ragini : rite?? Which rites… Where had your rites gone when shomi ma hand over a 3hrs old baby to a 10 years old girl… Where were your rites… When that 10 years old girl spent sleepless nights just for her baby sister… Then you were so sad that you just forgot your 2 daughters… That time i need you most… Shona needed you… But you just left and sent money… That’s all was your duty right…
Shekhar : but Ragini.. I thought about you also… You just gave birth to swaranshi… You…
Ragini shouts : when 10 years old Ragini can take care of a baby then a 30 year old Ragini also can take care of her both daughters… I am not like you papa… And moreover sanskar was there to take care of her… I don’t need to do anything… You should tell us papa… That swara is not well there… She is craving for sanskar… She wants sanskar… But you don’t .. And for that noe both devarji and shona is suffering…
Sanskar : whattt…
All look at him…
Ragini : devar ji… You here…
She smiles whole heartedly…
Sanskar : what were you saying… Shona… Where is she…
Shekhar comes to him folding his hand : i am sorry sanskar… I became selfish… After operation… Swara wanted you only… She even cries a lot… For that again her condition got bad… But somehow saved… I became so selfish i didn’t tell you … I thought i can manage… After that i told i send you here… She got angry on me and you… You know sanskar she doesn’t like me at all… She never ever call me papa… But she never stopped to love you… You were here life and still now… She is just angry on you… As you left her… And never call her in this years… I know i stopped you… But she didn’t listen…
He cries… Sanskar don’t whether he should be happy or sad… She is still him but she is angry… And that too very much…
Sanskar : where is she bhabi…
Ragini : sometimes before only… She run upstairs… I don’t know what happened… She run up…
Suddenly anshi comes there crying… : mamma….
Ragini : han baby…
She comes and hugs her : shona masi is not opening door… I called her so many times… But she didn’t open… She doesn’t like me…
Hiccups started… Just like swara…
Sanskar : na anshi… Actually shona masi is sad… She is angry on your chachu… You play with mamma… I will bring her to you…
She nodes…
Sanskar : where is she bachcha…
Anshi between hiccups : that room…
Sanskar looks up…
Shekhar : go sanskar… You will come to know how much she loves you …
Sanskar looks at him then that room… He goes there… Try to open the door… But no use… So he decides go by pipe…
Sanskar reaches her balcony… Balcony door was open… He comes in and wide his eyes to see the room is full of his photo… A big painting of his… Hanging upon bed… Every wall… Upon table dressing table… Every where is his photo… His eyes fill with tears… He scan the whole room… No sign of her… Then he heard hiccups sound… He again scan the whole room… Then his fixes on a table… He sighs and walks to it… He bends down… And there he found his loving crying vigorously sitting under it… He chuckles and shook his head…
Sanskar : shona.. Princess… Come out…
Swara goes to wards the wall more… Crying…
Sanskar tries to touch her but she just turn her face…
Sanskar : Princess come out please… Please… He hold her upper arm in order to drag her… But she jerks while crying…
Sanskar holds his ear : shona look i am holding ears… Now come out… Please…
Swara looks at him once then turns…
Sanskar : please shona… Come out… Please… Don’t you listen your prince’s word?? You are my good princess na… Come Please…
He extend his hand… Swara looks at his hand then him… Sanskar gives a pleading look…
She doesn’t hold his hand but comes out… But for that she hit her head with table..
Swara : aaaaah…
She rubs her head… Sanskar gets worried… He hurriedly cups her face and search her head whether she gets any wound or not… Swara try to protest…
Sanskar eyes her : stay quiet… Let me check… (while checking) i told you to hold my hand… Look you hurt yourself…. (then looks at her… Rubbing her head) is it paining…
She looks at him with crying face…. And with sad pout and sniffing… Then push him… Sanskar had enough of her tantrums… He just scoops her in arms and walks towards bed… Swara was struggling… But all waste…
Swara (with hiccups) : leave me…
Sanskar Place her on bed… Then sits beside her dragging her in his embrace by one hand… By other hand he takes the water glass… Swara was still struggling… Sanskar push the glass in her mouth in order to makes her drink that…
Swara was not drinking though water fill glass’s edge was there in her mouth… Sanskar knows her very well.. She used to do it then also… He shook his head thinking she didn’t even changed a bit… Only become slight mature… She is still his that shona…
Sanskar : drink it shona…
She looks at him then drinks slowly… Sanskar puts the glass on side table… Swara was about to go away… Sanskar drags her near him again…
Sanskar : where are you going han… (cares his face… Stops her struggling, holding her near his chest wrapping her by both hands) itna gussa han… Itna gussa (this much anger)…
He rubs his nose with her… Then pecks her cheek… : my cry baby… U doesn’t change a bit… On anger has come on your nose tip (pecks her nose tip)..
Swara turns her face and slowly says: leave me…
Sanskar pulls her more:no i won’t… Why will i leave my shona han…
Swara looks down and cries… Sanskar hugs her tightly : i am sorry shona please…
Swara cries more but doesn’t hug her back…
Sanskar departs and looks at her sadly… Then look at something and smile… Sanskar slide her hair which was covering her forehead and noticed vermillion there… He kiss her forehead there…
Sanskar : i knew it shona… You can’t forget me…
Swara is still sobbing looking and playing with his shirt button… Sanskar smiles and nuzzle his nose on her cheek…
Sanskar : thank you shona…
She looks at him then turns her face away…
Sanskar chuckles… Suddenly they hear…
‘ devar ji… Shona baby… Come have dinner’…
Sanskar : chalo shona…
Swara jerks him…
Sanskar : shona… You are angry on me na then why are skipping your food .. chalo have it…
Swara just goes to a drawer and takes out a big chocolate box… Sanskar wides his eyes…
Sanskar goes to her… And snatch the chocolate box…
Sanskar eyes her : you haven’t changed a bit… Is this the time to eat this stupid chocolate…
Swara looks at him with a angry frown and ragefull eyes… Then snatch the box again…
Sanskar : shona no… I said na no… (snatch the box and keep it in drawer) chalo… We will have dinner…
He holds her hand… But swara jerk it…
Swara : i said na leave me… Suddenly you starts to care about my eating… Where were you in this 4 years… Did you want to know what i am eating… No na?? Then… I will eat whatever i want… That’s it…
Sanskar close his eyes… And sighs… : shona Please… Please chalo… If ypu eat them… I swear of you… I will not eat anything… Whole night…
Swara who was unwrapping the box stops… Then throw the box… And runs out pushing him… He sighs and shook his head… Then goes down… At down…
He sees swara and anshi playing around Ragini irritating her a lot…
Ragini with angry face : stop you both .. Now seat and eat silently…
Swara : di… Please feed me na… Please…
All smiles…. Anshi looks at sanskar…
Anshi : prince chachu…
She runs to him… Sanskar picks her up…
Anshi : she is sooo cute… Shona masi is best…
Sanskar : hmm toh you said you will fight with her…
Anshi : no… We are frnds now…
She jumps from sanskar’s lap and stand on chair…
Anshi : mamma… Aaaaa
She open her mouth widely… Ragini put bites in her mouth too… She is sooo happy today…. Her both daughter is near her only…
Sanskar also eat…
At room…
Swara is sleeping… Sanskar comes and lies beside her… He tries to pull swara… But she jerks him…
After sometime… Swara turns and looks at him sleeping… She places the sanskar’s photo which was she hugging on table… And comes close to him… Then hugs him putting her head on his chest… Sanskar smiles… And wraps her… Kiss her head…
Sanskar : i am sorry Princess…
Swara didn’t say anything stay like that only…
Next day…
Sanskar wakes up… And smiles seeing his love in his embrace… Sleeping like small kitten… He kisses her forehead… Swara opens her sleepy eyes…
Sanskar : good morning princess…
And pecks her lips… Swara clutch his t-shirt… And looks down… Her cheeks grew red… Just then sanskar realize… Her mind is now adult… His touch will edfect her… He smiles… Swara gets up without saying anything and runs to washroom.. While sanskar scratches his head with a stupid wide smile….
End……
Life partner is at the edge of end… It’s part a… And part b… I will post soon… Then just 2 chapters… If you all want something special then tell me… I will try to fulfill it in next chappy… Because Next 2 chappy will different…that i can’t change… So you all tell in this chappy only… Thank you to my silent readers and who ever drop their valuable comments….
Thanks for reading….
51 Comments
awesome dear…
Awesome….. loved it a lot dear.
Wonderful……
Awesome???
lovely epi…. you are too good pikachuuuuuuuuu
Amazing! But no sad ending plzzzz
Loved it ….. Need some raglak scenes
Its an awesome epi…do u know how much a good writer you are…i dont know how to express it using words…when i was reading this epi i was going with the flow of story like flowing in river…this is one of my favourite story…u r really blessed from God…thats why ur getting such an ability to write like this.And we are also blessed to get the chance to read the stories written by u..i am also a fan of ur story…married to drunkard…its such a nice one…and am also asking to pardon me for not commenting in previous episodes…
I love uuuuuuu
Feel soooo happy reading it
Sanskar u can manao ur princess very nicely
So all the best
As per wishes i dont have anything specific
Just want them to share some sweet moments
loved it dear
Loved it dear.. I want swasan and anshi scenes, troubling sanskar..
Awesome dear
AWWWWWWWWWW………… super cute update……….
Awesome
I don’t want anything u u made mee happy last time I said name I hate u but now I love u dear ??????
I am soooo happy but why u ending so soon it’s sad ???…
It’s awesome dear loved it❤❤❤❤❤
Nice
Awesome
awesome loved it .please add a scene where swara teaches a good lesson to kavvita and makes sujata realise her mistake..
Loved it
your story really tells us how one should handle such sensitive topics. at one point I was really worried if Swara forgets him but thank god our cute shona is there only. I love Swara so much in this ff. in previous part when she behaved tht way o was on the verge of tears as it reminded me of Sadma movie which I watched as a child and cried hell lot. I never wished for that kind of ending.
awesome part
so cute yaar!!! loved it.
loved it..tc..
Pikachhu i want to pull ur cheek. So cute swara n anshi. Story, chara., dial. All r just awesome. Amazing epi.
Awesome dear??
Can u plz add Swasan nok jhok..
Yrr u r too good… This angry Swara???? kitni cute h… Aur Sanskar to hai he cutiepie… I love it… Next time please write big part… Dying to read next chappy???????
Such a cute story…swasan r so cute
Just awesome and excellent dear
Loved it sooo much…
Jus want swasan scenes…
No bhena pyaar plz…. only swasan swasan n swasan ??
Dere cute scenes
Wow loved it plz come back with season 2