Hi guys… I came again… To disturb you all… Guys Please read the note after reading the story…
All are shocked including sanskar and whole maheshwary family…
Ragini (smirks) : you all were saying something….
All looks at each other… Don’t know what to say…
Ragini Turns to swara…
Ragini : shona baby… You sing sooo well… ?
Swara : sachchi ?????
Ragini kiss her forehead… Swara kiss her cheeks…
Laksh comes forward…
Laksh : ragu… Doll… I am sorry… On behalf of my family…
He foldd his hand… Swara looks at him confused…
Swara thinks he is just doing namaste… And remids… Ragini told her if anyone say hallo or hi or folds hand… Then you also do same…
Swara also folds her hand… And comes in front of laksh while jumping…
Swara : namaste jiju ??
Laksh and Ragini laughs at this… Swara looks at them with a pout…
Both hugs her side wise and both kiss her either sides of temple… Swara giggles… All adore their bonding… Later raglak left along with swara…
Sanskar helplessly looks at them…
3 weeks passed all was going good… Sanskar often comes to raglak and tried many times to do friendship with swara… But swara… The cry baby always starts crying whenever he comes near her…
Sanskar really feel very sad for his brother… He often tried a lot to keep swara away from them by keeping her busy… But she always starts her famous cry…mean time ragini brings a copy of singing competition for swara…
Swara always starts listen songs in headset… She never learn music… She always listen music and sing them…
One fineday…
Raglak was going to office…
Ragini : dolly didi… Make sure swara should practice the song only ok…
Dolly nodes…
Laksh : ragu… Chalo na we are already late…
Swara was also present their…
Swara : jiju… Jiju… Choco… ??
Laksh smiles and pats her cheek…
Laksh : han doll… I will bring… ?
Ragini : ?no choco… Swara… Concentrate on music… And how much will you eat choco… Laksh you are also too much… You pamper her a lot…
Swara starts crying???…. As ragini scold her… Ragini shocked…
Ragini : ???swara baby dont cry… I will bring many choco…
Swara : sachchi??? ??
Ragini : ??han… Please don’t cry…
Swara : ???yaaay…
She starts jumping… Ragini understands she was doing drama…
Ragini : haawww..
Swara… You did drama…
Swara laughs… Raglak smiles…
Ragini (cares her cheek) : dhyan rakhio apna…
And kiss her cheeks… Swara also kissed back…
Both left for office…
In road… Raglak were chitchating on random things… FM was on… They were listening news also… Suddenly they hard a famous politician from the ruling party died so… All School college office will be closed…
Both looks at each other… Ragini calls his boss… And laksh calls his dad… The office will be closed .. Both sighs…
Ragini : let’s go back laksh…
Laksh : ummm… Wo ragu…
Ragini Give him a what look…
Laksh : wo rago… Today is holiday and we are already out from the house… Sooo…
Ragini: so??
Laksh : so… Can we spend sometime please…
Ragini looks at him… While laksh makes a puppy face…
Ragini (hesitate) : but swara…
Laksh : umm… Dolly didi is there na…
Ragini thinks for sometime and then smiles and nodes… Laksh jumps in happiness and hugs her tightly… Ragini smiles…
Ragini : so mr patidev is taking me for a date… ???
Laksh : hmm… Quite that only.. ?
Ragini : ok toh chalo… But 1st will go for shopping… I will not go in this formal dress…
Laksh : jo hukum mere aka… ?
Both laughs…
Laksh and Ragini goes to shopping…
Here…
Dolly : shona baby… Be quiet and listen the song… If you do so then… I.. I…
Swara (excitedly) : then you will take me to the park… ???
Dolly smiles…
Dolly: a66a ok… At evening… We both along with ragini will go park…
Swara : yaay yaaay ???
She claps…
Suddenly door bell ring…
Dolly : who came now?? Shona baby… U stay here i will just come…
Swara nodes and and starts to listen music…
Dolly open the door and ????widen her eyes…
Here…
Laksh select super cut wrstern dress for ragini…
Laksh (forward this to ragini) : ???ragini wear this…
Ragini looks at the dress then at laksh…
Ragini : ???what is this…
Laksh : it’s our 1st date… You should look super hot and sec…
Ragini : stop… Ok i understood… But laksh
There is a problem… ???
Laksh : what… ???
Ragini : if i wear this all will look at me like… You know… I have no problem… I can wear this… Give me ??????
Laksh snatch the dress and gives her a full sleeve shalwar suit…
Laksh : wear this… ???
Ragini : uff… Stop choosing my dress i will do it on my own…
Ragini select a frock… Below knee length floral… Makes a high pony on back and looking so cute and beautiful just like a barbie…
Laksh forgets to take breath… Ragini smiles…
Both goes to car… Laksh open the hood of the car by switch… Now its a cabriolet…
Ragini : laksh just a min… I wanna call dolly didi…
Laksh smiles and nodes…
Ragini calls…
Ragini : hallo… Dolly didi…
Os (somewhat shivering voice) : ji.. ji… Ji ragini…
Ragini : wo dolly… Today we will be bit late… You can handle swara na…
Os: hmmm…
Ragini (feels something wrong) : dolly didi… Everything ok na… Where is swara…
Os: yes… Yes everything ok… Swa… Swara baby… Swara baby is sleeping…
Ragini : ok… Take care han…
Os : hmm…
Ragini : we will come before 6… Bye…
Os : Bye…
Ragini looks at the phone with a serious face…
Laksh Place his hand on her shoulder…
Laksh : chalein..
Ragini just nodes…
Here…
After opening the door dolly gets shocked seeing 3 men with guns and knifes… Standing there… She was about… To close the door again but one goon push her… And comes in… And locks the door… Dolly gets afraid…
Dolly : who… Who are you… What do you want… Just leave from here please…
Goon 1(angrily) : just shut up… Stop your nonsense…
Suddenly ‘dolly didi… Dolly didi.. Where are you’…
Trio goons looks at each other… Two of the rush to her… Whle 1 hold dolly and drags her…
Swara gets scared seeing them. .
Swara : ???who are you… Dolly didi… ???
Dolly: please leave her… She is kid… I is not well… Please leave her…
Goon 2: you just shut up (roars)…
Swara gets more scared and close her eyes tightly and hugs her knees…
Goon 2: hey hey… Look up…
Swara looks at him with fearful eyes… While sobbing…
Goon : come with us…
Swara: no no… You are looking like gorila… I will not come ???
Goon : what…
He holds her hand forcefully…
Suddenly Phone rings… Ragini ‘s phone… Dolly bites goon’ s hand… And runs to phone…
She picks up the call and about to say something… She stops seeing goons are holding swara.. Placing one knife near her throat and her mouth is closed by them… She is struggling…
Dolly answers her… Her heart screamed when ragini said they will come late…
She cries while speaking… But ragini can’t understood… Ragini cuts the call…
Dolly : now leave her… She is weak… Please…
Goons leaves her… Swara falls in semiconscious state… Dolly rush to her and hugs her…
Goons calls his boss…
In that time dolly sees they are looking another side… She pats Swara’s cheek and tries to run with her… But one goon sees this… He holds dolly and slaps her… Swara gets scared…
Goon : boss they were trying to elope…
Os….
Goon : ok boss…
Suddenly they hold swara…
Goons : hey ladki… Let’s go with us…
Dolly : no no… Please leave her…
Goon : hey you just shut the hell up…
Dolly cries seeing swara… Swara bite their hand and runs whole the room… But for running the whole house messed up and but they catch her soon and takes her… Before going they tied dolly with chair…
Here…
Laksh and ragini is doing full masti… They 1st go for long drive…
Both are so happy… They stops near a lake…
Bg… Sooraj dooba h yaaro…
Takes out champaign and glass… Both sits under a tree… Laksh was back hugging her…
Ragini : you happy laksh???
Laksh : yes… I am sooooooooooooooooooooo happy today…
He kissed her cheek and she kissed him back… And join their forehead…
Here swara is taken to godown…
Goons push swara and she falls in someone’s arm…
She looks up and shocked…
Here…
Ragini and laksh play with waters… Both chase each other… Laughs together…
Suddenly laksh holds her… Ragini falls on his chest… Ragini was still laughing… And laksh was admiring her… He slowly comes close and… Put his lips on hers… Ragini become shocked at 1st… It’s a sweet slow kiss… Soon ragini also comes in sense… And starts responding… The sweet slow kiss turns in to hungry Passionate kiss…
Here…
Swara widen her eyes seeing the person… And hugs him tightly…
Swara : please save me…
Person smiles… And pats her head…
Person: i will my wifey… Oops sorry my would be wifey… I will save you… And save my brother from you also…
Yes the guy is none other than sanskar…
Sanskar makes her sit on chair…
Sanskar : you just sit here… I will come…
He hand over her a doll…
Swara: ???no i want di… Please take me to di…
Sanskar gritted his teeth… But gives a fake smile…
Sanskar : yes… We will go na… We will go… But… Wo kya h na… This men r devil… They bring me here… Like they did with you… So if we listen their words they will leave us… So now you play with it… We will leave from here soon…
Swara : sachchi?? ???
Sanskar : han…
Sanskar comes outside and talks with goon and gives them money…
Sanskar smirks…
After some time a lawyer comes there…
Sanskar : mr. Maheta… Everything ready???
He nodes…
Sanskar calls the goons…
Sanskar : make her afraid if she denied to sign…
Goons nodes …
Sanskar : comes with merriage registration paper to swara…
Sanskar : shona sign it…
Swara looks at him confusingly…
Sanskar shows her the place..
Sanskar : write your name here…
Swara : i wont… Bring di 1st ??
Sanskar pulls his own hair… And then to swara…
Sanskar : swara… What i told… Do whatever they say… Or they will not let us go…
Swara : ok ??
She writes her name… Sanskar also signs…
It’s almost 4… Raglak is out of city… So they decide to go back… Here sanskar starts preparation from merriage…
Sanskar : swara… Now i will see how can you come between my bhai’s happiness… Bhabi now you can’t avoid my bhai…
He looks angrily at swara… Who is unaware of the upcoming storm which will mess her life like hell..
At about 6… Raglak comes home… Both headed towards door hand in hand… Ragini rings the bell… But none opened… Suddenly laksh notice something…
Laksh : rago door is open…
Ragini frowns…
Ragini : oh god… Dolly didi become so careless…
Then open the door fully and comes in… The hall is dark…
Ragini : why the hell the lights are off…
Saying this she switch on the light… Both shocked to see the hall’s condition…
Ragini steps a back… A unknown fear surrounds her…
Ragini : la… La.. Laksh… Ye. Ye kya h…
Laksh (also shocked) : i… I.. I don’t know..
Ragini (shouts) : dolly didi… Dolly didi…
Laksh : Ragini… You go upstairs.. Look where is doll…
Ragini nodes and runs upstairs… Laksh search hall and kitchen…in kitchen he finds unconscious dolly… He gets more shocked…
Ragini search whole mansion but can’t find swara…
Ragini goes to laksh…
Ragini : laksh… Shona is no there…
Suddenly she notices laksh is looking at something… She follows his gaze… She steps back to see dolly’s condition ….
Both looks at each other…
After one hour…
It’s almost 7… Ragini is continuously crying and just waiting for dolly to gain her conscious… Laksh informs his family… Including sanskar…
Here in a mandir…
Swara is continuously crying… Sanskar is sitting beside him… A priest is chanting mantra… Sanskar is pouring ghee in fair… And smiling evily…
Sanskar (irritated) : stop crying swara… We will go to ragini di soon…
Swara keeps on crying…
Here
Dolly tells everything… How they take swara… Ragini feels guilty for going with laksh… Laksh also feeling guilty… Ragini curse herself…
Ragini : shona.. I am so bad… Your di is very bad… I am sorry… She has become so selfish… Pata nei kahan h… Kaisi h… If those goons did something wrong with her… Oh my god…
She cries miserably… Laksh has no courage to console her… He is so guilty… But he goes…
Ragini : laksh please bring her… Please…
Laksh : i will ragini.. Nothing will happen… I promise…
Here sanskar takes pheras and makes her wear vermillion and mangalsutra… Goons were doing vedio…
Priest : merriage is over… Now you both are husband wife… Swara was not understanding anything… She was just holding sanskar’s hand… And is crying for going to ragini…
Sanskar : shona… Chalo.. Let’s go to your di…
Swara’s eyes shines…
Swara: sachchi??
Sanskar nodes with smirks…
He calls laksh… Who was about to go to police station…
Sanskar : bhai… I am bringing swara… You And bhabi pls reach mm… As it’s nearer to my location… And swara is crying for bhabi… I can’t handle her for long way…
Saying this in one breath with letting him to speak he cuts call…
Laksh 1st confuse then happily said it Ragini… Raglak rushes to mm…
Ragini enters in the mm… And shouts… : shona… Baby… Come… Look i came… Shona…
Laksh : Ragini please… They have not yet came… So have patience… Ragini nodes. . Suddenly shd hard ‘di’…
Ragini gets happy and turns to main door.. . Swara runs to ragini… And literally jumps on her… Ragini hugs her back… Both cries… After long Ragini stopped…
Ragini departs and kiss all over her face…
Ragini : shona… Bachcha… You okay na…
Ragini looks at her hands… Which is still red due to grip of goons…
Ragini wipes her tears… : shona let’s go… We will go to home… Chalo… Laksh takes out the car…
Sanskar comes forward : wait wait bhabi… Why so hurry… You wanna go then go… But leave my wife here…
Ragini : wife???
Sanskar pulls swara to him : swara… Swara sanskar maheshwary…
Just then everyone noticed vermillion mangalsutra and garlands…
Ragini steps back…
End of this part…
Precap : ????
Now to raglak fans… I am sorry… But from now i can’t give equal importance to both pair… Today’s episode is last epi for raglak scene… May be i can’t give them importance as it’s a ss… So sorry… I am really… I don’t wanna make angry you all… So.
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Woww nyc
Pickachu i have a request can u fulfill it plz
Can u write an epilogue for bramhachari walla ff ( i didn’t remember the full name correctly )
Can u plz do it for me i really love that ff …
Plz fulfill my wish
so today last episode I am reading it so all raglak fan stop reading that sit
It ws damnnn amaznggggg…..aww!!d way u said rags lookng lyk a barbie..ws reallly sweet..yeah shez not less den ny barbie..my beautiful rapunzel 😉 ..update ws damnnn amaznggg dear…raglak date ws superbb…totallly loved it..keeep rockng n stay blesssed..;) 😀
Ahhhhhhh pikachu thank god I have found u dear u dont know how much I loved Ur 1st ff…
And now I got to know that bramchari ts was ur u dont know how much I missed u…
Finally I found u dear sooo n awesome epiii woooow loved it dear ?????sanskar is awesome wooow he married her Amazing yaar
Wow loved it❤️ I’m a swasan and a raglak fan so I know it’s sad that today it’s the last scene of raglak but yeah I siding understand why it’s the last part and I won’t stop reading it cause I like this ss a lot so plz can you also give some swasan scene and mere sanku ko evil mat banao?????❤️? And nikky I don’t want to have a problem but I just wanna say that if you’re a raglak fan so I Respekt it and if you feel sad or angry that they are no more raglak fan that i also understand cause I’m also a raglak fan but more swasan so if you’re angry on her than it’s okay but don’t call this ss a shit cause it will hurt her cause she is writing it for us so think maybe someday you will also write a story like this and you will say today is the last scene of swasan so the swasan fan including me will also feel bad and maybe someone will call you’re story a shit than how will you feel when someone will call you’re story a shit ?? Apko bhi acha nahi Lage ga?kyu ke ap bhi mehnet se ek story likh ho gee so plz don’t call someone’s mehnet a shit I’m sorry if I have hurted you cause I don’t want to have a problem with someone of you cause I know many here are elder than me so I’m sorry if I have hurted you but that’s my opinion ??
I’m reading only for raglak, this is my last comment, I thought this is both couple ff
Anyways bye
Awesome dear…loved it…post next one soon
awesome dr
Awesome dr….
Nxt one soon….
Nice but will miss raglak xx
awesome…stupid sanskar. Upload soon
Wow amazing episode I waited for ur ff u r doing really a good…and don’t feel abt tat nonsense talk of so called fans bcz reading there own wish….but y they r commenting like thy won’t read hereafter this is last….I support u picku.
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Awesome…?
God awesome ?
Nice……..But hope sanskar not behave bad with swara
Awesome ?and post next part soon
Raglak scenes are awesome. Bye bye
awesome update next part soon
awesome loved it.continue soon waiting.and don’t bother about negative comments .for us plzz post next one
waaa…….. my swasan journey started…uuugghhh it will kinda awesome
Pikuuuuu???????
Soooooooo amazing episode ????????????
Was waiting for this onlyyy??????
Yaar its just soop splendid!!
Kritika where were u??
Wen r goin to post ur ff?? Was missing it
awesome..continue soon..tc..
Yeyyyyy???? swasan journey started..
Was w8ng for it…
Continue soon
so swasan suru… superb epi.. bt d way sanskaar did it.. its wrong.
They are married now???
Hope sanky not behave with her badly..
Loved the chappy dear..Aww,my cry baby,look cho cute*pulling your cheeks..Keep it up dear.. Waiting for nxt..
Take care
Keep smiling?
Awesome
Awesome update soon
Superb…loved it
awesome and hope sanskar not behave bad with swara.