You know what guys….
Aaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnn ????????
I am crying now sitting on footpath after seeing your comments… Seriously guys… I wanted suggestions not confusions…. Kya karu main aab…
Let me answer 1st…
1st of all nikki ji… In 3rd chappy i told you that it will be swasan story right?? I don’t wanna waste your time… If you are thinking that your time is wasting then i can tell don’t read… Thanks for comments…
Tejashwi… Thank you so much for supporting me… I am so happy you read this story… Thank you so much…
And now… To my swasan readers ???????some are saying make her normal some are saying not… And i wanted to finish it in 2 chappy… It’s a ss… But after seeing your suggestions i am feeling like it will take minimum 10 chappy more… ???… I thought to end it in my Christmas holiday but due to some reasons i can’t…
Ok shan di… How can she become pregnant… She is a kid… I mean at least her mind… So how can swasan consumate their marriage… And sanskar is not beast that he will force her… I can’t even imagine that type of things…
Mica i am not biology student but as much as i remember i read in class 10 that down syndrome is mainly happen cause chromosomal defect and the person who is suffering from this his eyes will be small and have some other defects too… But her problem is not that… Did you see koi mil gaya of rithwik roshan and pritizinta… The same Problem is her’s… She got hurt when she was 9 months in her mamma’s tummy… And she born like this…in that movie alien came and make him normal but here is no alien… So i really don’t know if there is any treatment of this kind of people or not… So if anyone knows then tell…
Next who are asking to make swara perfect and then make her give punishment to sanskar and all but is this not enough for sanskar that swara is hating him this much…
Guys i am again asking…
Look if you all are thinking that if swara does not become normal then ending will be not good Then believe me i will try my level best that it will be beyond your expectations…
And who are wanting not to make swara normal then they also think is this really possible for a man to except a girl like swara where he is perfectly fit and fine… Will he not feel disappoint after seeing happily married normal couple… As i don’t wanna write unrealistic…
I am in same confusion… I have plan for both…
So just answer in number…
1)Swara normal
2)Swara as she is now…
Look guys i am not mentioning name that doesn’t mean i didn’t read your comments… I just give them answers cause i wanna clear their confusion ..
Above all who suggested me to make her understand besics things of life by Ragini and sanskar… I really like their suggestions… Thank you…
And thanks to all…
So let’s start….
‘and the prince and princess starts to live in their big mansion happily ever after’…
Ragini looks at swara who is sleeping peacefully in her lap… She feels pain in her leg and waist…she never felt this type of pain may be due to pregnancy… She slowly places her head on pillow and stretch her waist and legs… Just then door open… She looks… She smiles seeing laksh holding a water glass and a trey on which her medicine were placed… Behind him sanskar…
Both headed towards their respective wives… Sanskar sits beside swara… A whole day passed… Swara who used to jump and play in the whole room… Whose laughing sounds used to echo in the whole room… Now she all silent and sad… Maximum time spends time looking at her own lap… Whenever looks at anyone…her scared fill eyes reflect that how much she is afraid now also…
Sanskar didn’t come in front of her only watches from distance… After the whole day now at about 11 :30 pm he gets opertunity to come near his wife… Sanskar Cares her face lovingly a tear drops from her eyes… He takes her hand softly and looks at her…
Laksh sees ragini’s slightly frowned face…
Laksh smiles and takes the bowl of oil and starts massage her fit… Ragini protests but seeing his satisfactory smile on his face she stops… She then looks at swasan…
Ragini : you know what sanskar…
(She looks at swara…) i used to say… ‘and the Princess makes her own castle… And then starts to live There all alone… Happily ever and ever after… ‘my shona will get married… I never thought this things in my most best dreams also… And now…
Sanskar : bhabi… I am getting scared…
He says looking deeply at swara… Raglak looks at him…
Sanskar : she became so silent… There is only 8 days left for her compitition… (looks at Ragini) will she able to sing??
Just then Ragini realize this… Her face became pale… The day she discovered the one and only talent that god gifted her innocent sister… She dreamed only to see her as a singer… This compitition is the 1st step…
Sanskar is still looking at her… : bhabi…??
Ragini : she has to sing…
Laksh : but how… Look at her… She is not touching anything… She is so scared…
Ragini : i… I… I don’t know laksh but she has to…
Sanskar looks at swara… The guilt which is already gnawing him is became deep… If swara can’t sing… The only ray of hope which will prevent her from all insult of this society is becoming flimsy…
Sanskar : bhabi you go sleep…
Ragini : no sanskar i will sleep here… If swara wakes up then she will create a mess…
Sanskar : no bhabi… I will call you if this happens… And swara is under medicine effects… So i don’t think she will wake up…
Laksh : ragu… You need rest… Please… Doll will be fine…
Ragini nodes worriedly… Laksh takes her in his arms… Sanskar smiles…
Ragini : sanskar please take care…
Sanskar nodes..
Laksh left with Ragini…
Sanskar lay down beside swara… Taking her in embrace… Sanskar kiss her forehead… Swara in sleep feels familiar warm touch… She nuzzle herself in him more…
Sanskar : shona… I will not let you ruin your career for my sin… You have to sing that day… And i will make sure of it…
He kiss his forehead and thinks something and smile…
Sanskar dozes off while Caressing her hair…
Next day…
Sanskar comes out from washroom… Got ready… And comes down… Raglak also…
Ragini : sanskar… Shona???
Sanskar : she is sleeping…
Trio comes to dining area for breakfast…
Ap: laksh look i made your favorite dish… Come…
Laksh sees alu paratha…
Laksh : ragu.. I am going office…
Ragini : laksh break fast…
Laksh : i am not hungry…
Ap feels bad… She looks at dp…
Dp sighs: laksh…
Laksh stops but didn’t responds…
Dp: literally you are insulting your mother…
Laksh chuckles: and i am shocked… Shocked to know how heartless my parents are…
Ap shades tears…
Ragini : please laksh… Eat something… If you dont eat then i also will not eat…
Laksh sighs and sits on chair… Ap smiles… And tanks Ragini through eyes… Ragini just look down…
Suddenly… ‘look jiji… Who came…’
All looks… And sees… Sujata and kavita… Sanskar sits beside Ragini without any expression…
Kavita seats beside sanskar…
Sanskar : bhabi… Dolly didi didn’t came till now??
Ragini : don’t know sanskar… I will call her…
Kavita (rolls her eyes… Sujata sign her) : hi sanskar…
Sanskar : hmm.. Hi ..
Sanskar was thinking about swara… He smiles…
Sujata : sanskar you are in casuals till now… Aren’t you going to office??
Sanskar : no mom…
Kavita (excited) : oh wow… Can we go for shopping sanskar??
Ragini’s hands stops…
Sanskar looks at kavita being annoyed : look kavita you came with mom so be with mom… I have not so much time that i will waste on you…
Kavita : you are my friend sanskar… Don’t talk like this…
Sanskar (narrowed eyes) : friends?? Wo kab hua?? When did it happen…
Sujata: sanskar… You are not going office then take her na… And what will you do in home… I know you deserve a good friend in your life… And you also need a good friend at least now…
That’s it for sanskar… He bangs the spoon on plate and stands up…
Sanskar : look mom… I am already very much tensed… So please don’t talk round and round… Here presented every person knows about your intentions… Listen mom… Swara is my life… I love her… None can separate me from her… And i don’t want this girl here… And if she come tell her keep 5 feet distance from her… Or tell her not to come…
Sanskar left the place… He goes to his room… He was sooo angry but as soon as he see his angel… He calm down… Swara is still sleeping… He goes to her and pecks her cheek and smiles… Suddenly he sees swara is moving… He gets tensed… He immediately stands up… And Steps backwards… Swara open her eyes and gets up… Sanskar becomes more tensed…
‘no no… Shona don’t look at here.. ‘ sanskar was stepping backwards… But suddenly swara turns… But nick time raglak comes in front of sanskar… Sanskar turns Immediately… Realizing a big sigh…
Ragini : shona… You didn’t sing a song from so many days… Chalo sing a song for your di..
Ragini says while combing her hair… But swara is no mood… She was still silent…
Ragini cups her face: shona please for your di…
Swara just nodes in no… And hugs her…
Ragini knows this types of reactions… At childhood also she behaved like same… She took 3 months to become normal again… The pain which she got is fresh… Recovering from that in this much less time is impossible… But she has to… It’s very important to make her sing…
Suddenly they heard a guitar sound…
Swara departs and looks here and there…
‘ tere bin na jia kabhi
Tere bin na ji sakunga
Tere bin na raha kabhi
Tere bin na rahe sakunga
Tute dil ki awaj ko sun
Tu sun to sahi
Shikwa nehi kisise
Kisise gila nehi
Naseeb mein nehi tha jo
Humko mila nehi ‘
Swara gets up from chair and starts to walk towards door… She slowly follow the sound and comes to garden… There sanskar was playing guitar… Swara gets scared and hide her face in palm… Here sanskar is still singing… When swara feels she is protected… She sat beside a tree…
Sanskar looks this from corner of his eyes…
Sanskar (while playing guitar think in the mind) : i know shona… In this whole world only songs can attract you… U will starts to sing soon…
Ragini gets happy…
After finishing song… Sanskar looks at swara who is now scared like hell… What if that devil watches her… Swara closed her eyes tightly… Sanskar smiles and turns his face immediately… Swara slightly open her eyes and watches him not looking at her… She slowly gets up… And turns… And runs inside… Where she sees Ragini talking in phone… She goes to her and wraps her…
Like this 3 days passed… Sanskar sings song and swara being attracted comes to listen… But still nither she humming any songs or nothing…
After 3 days…
Dolly can’t come due to some reason… Ragini after making swara sleep goes to hospital with laksh for daily check up… Here sanskar was sitting in his room in the couch doing some office work… And swara is sleeping only…
Suddenly sanskar’s phone rings…
Sanskar : han bhai when will you both come… Look na it’s already 8.. Come soon…
Laksh : open the tv…
Sanskar : why…
Laksh : arey open na…
Sanskar opened : a famous politician got arrested… So people started striking fighting in the streets…
Sanskar : you both are fine na bhai…
Laksh : hmm… We are in hospital… But Ragini is worried about doll…
Sanskar looks at swara… He also gets worried… But still…
Sanskar : bhai… Don’t take tension… I will do something…
Sanskar thinks Something…
Here after sometime… Swara gets up rubbing her eyes… She looks here and there…
Swara : diii…
She calls in a low voice… Suddenly she sees the small plants near the curtains is moving… She gets scared…
Swara : diii (almost cries)…
It’s again moves…
Swara slowly steps down from the bed and move towards it… When she reaches she stops… She slowly peeps… A big teadies head also peeps from other side of the cartain… Both Immediately hide again… Again peeps again hide… Swara gets confused… And slowly steps forward… Here the Teddy also steps forward… Both sees each other…
Swara Immediately close her eyes ??
The teddy also close eyes… ??
Swara slightly remove her palm and sees… Teddy also did same..
She looks at her with cute pouty scary face… And again close eyes… She steps back and sits on sofa… Teddy also sits… Swara looks at him… Teddy gets scared and immediately sits on the corner… Swara slowly sits beside him and pokes his big nose… Teddy also pokes her nose… A smile appears in her lips… Teddy takes her hand and keeps another palm on her palm and then takes off… Swara sees candys in her palm… She grins… Teddy pulls her both cheek… Swara hugs him…
Teddy sterled… He slowly hugs her back and tighten the grip…
Then departs… Swara smiles looking at him… Teddy stands up and brings food trolley…
Then again sits beside her… Sanskar forward food plate towards swara and gesture Her ‘wanna eat??’…
Swara nodes in yes… Teddy makes her seat on his lap…
Teddy hold the plate and takes the spoon… And makes her eat slowly… All the time swara poking teddy’s nose… Ear… His bow on throat…
Then wipes her face by tissue and makes her drink water… Swara smiles and hugs the teddy tightly…
Teddy makes her stand and sits on bed… He starts to tickle her… Swara laughs…
Swara : will you play with me teddy??
Teddy nodes in yes vigorously…
Swara smiles…
Swara : ok fold your hand… ??
Teddy folds…
Swara: zip zap zup
Kabhi upar kabhi niche (give hifi✋ at up then down)
Kabhi dayen (at right)
Kabhi bayen (at left)
Kabhi sida (???)
Kabhi ulta(oppsite sides of palm)
Kabhi khana (acts to eat )
Kabhi pina (acts to drink)
Kabhi sona (acts to sleep?)
Kabhi rona (acts to cry ?)
Kabhi hasna (acts to smile ??)
Kabhi ????…
Swara close her eyes… And again ?
Teddy close his eyes but can’t do ?
Swara laughs ???and claps…
Swara makes him close his eyes by holding his hands… And makes him stand in the middle of the room…
Swara : i will hide… Ok
Teddy nodes while still closing eyes… Swara hides behind the teddy… As the teddy is very big… Teddy open her eyes and scratches his head… Then turns round… Swara also turn… Teddy starts to search in the whole room but can’t find… Then acts to think putting his fingers on his cheek…
He starts to move round and round… Swara also… After 5 rounds Teddy stops being tired… Swara was giggling behind him… Teddy holds her hand and drags her in front and starts to tickle her… Swara laughs whole heartedly after so many days… Suddenly
Swara : aaaaah…
Both stops… Swara wince in pain as Teddy mistakenly hurt her burn marks…
Swara’s eyes fills with tears ??
Teddy makes her seat on bed and wipes her tears… Then takes a ointment and makes her apply that on burn mark…
Sanskar then makes her lie and pulls the comforter… He was about to go… But stops…
Swara : Teddy….
He turns and sees swara is extending her hand…
Swara : make me sleep…
Teddy Nodes and sleeps beside her… Takes her in his warm embrace…
Swara (poking his nose) : you can’t speak??
Teddy nodes in no…
Swara : ???then who will tell me story…
Teddy again place his palm on face and acts to think…
Then ??
He takes out a recorder and plays it… He starts to cares her face…
Recorder…
‘once upon a time there was a big palace… One prince and his princess used to live there happily… But one day… A witch came and curse the prince and prince turns in to beast and scold princess very much ‘
Swara remember sanskar and hugs the teddy tightly…. Hiding her face in his soft furry chest…
‘ but then prince realizes his mistake and tries to convince princess… But princess didn’t forgive him… Now what will prince do?? ‘
Teddy offs the recorder as he saw swara is in deep sleep…
Teddy makes her lie properly…
And looks at the watch… 11 pm…
He goes to washroom and stands in front of mirror… He takes out his head and its sanskar (i know u all guessed it)
He drenched in sweat… But he is smiling in tears…
Sanskar : after so many days… Thank you so much shona…
He takes out the costume… And takes bath… Then again comes out… He sees sleeping swara…
He goes and kissed her forehead lovingly… And rubs his nose on her cheek… Swara turns her head in sleep… Sanskar sees her small petal like rosy lips… He can’t control and pecks her lips…
Sanskar smiles : love you…. Love you soooo much…
He cares her face… He heard the ring of his room… He sees swara and kiss her cheeks… Then goes to open the door…
Raglak was standing there… Ragini comes and amused to see swara sleeping peacefully… And empty plates of food…
Ragini (amused) : ye kaise hua…
Sanskar (smiles mischievously) :magic… ???
Ragini smiles and shook her head… Then goes to swara and kiss her head…
Ragini : laksh i am feeling hungry…
Laksh : what… We just did dinner…
Ragini pouts: 1.5hrs ago…
Sanskar : koi nei bhabi… Come i will accompany you… I didn’t eat…
Laksh slaps his forehead… Trio headed towards dinning area…
End…
Precap music compitition… Will swara sing???
GUYS… Thanks for those comments… And i don’t know what i wrote… I wrote what came in my mind… Sorry if you feel bore… Please comment… Thank you