Hello ikrs family, sorry for not replying u guys…i am super busy now a days….That’s why i am not getting time for coming in Tu….Sujiee, i will read ur ff’s updates soon…..Thanks a lot guys for all the support….Ok, i got a short break and suddenly a weird idea popped up my mind and i am just trying it…Hope u guys will like it….Pls read and drop ur views…..
Dhaani is a traditional homely girl who believes in love…….While viplav is a strict police officer who always behaves in his typical rough and tough mannerism and he doesn’t had any special like for ishq-vishq……Still vidha ties the knot as both families share a friendly bond which resulted in an arranged marriage…..
@ Wedding night, Vidha room
Viplav gently arrived and locked the room……Dhaani’s face was covered with ghungat and she was sitting shyly on the bed……
Viplav : U will be feeling tired, won’t u ?
Dhaani didn’t replies……
Viplav : There is no need 2 cover ur face….I don’t like these things……..Pls…..
Dhaani still didn’t answers….She was feeling strange on viplav’s behavior…..
Viplav : This wedding , rituals, customs, dresses and all…….Uff……I am going 2 change it…… If u want u can also change….[ viplav moved near the cupboard and opens it] Shit!!! My towel…… Every thing is misplaced here…….My pants, t-shirts everything is missing……[viplav throws all dresses in much anger]
Dhaani slowly took off her ghungat and stared viplav’s angry redish face…….Viplav’s act made dhaani actually 2 laugh, but she controlled herself and slowly rise from the bed……..She finds her salwars, sarees along with some shirts fallen in the floor…..Dhaani sat in the floor and picked viplav’s t-shirt, pants and towel …….She moved near viplav and decided 2 handover it……As soon as she extended her hand, viplav looked @ her smiling face…
Viplav : Keep them in the table……
Dhaani nodded her head and kept them in the table…….Viplav took the dresses and moved 2 wash room….. After a while he came out and finds that dhaani was missing……..Viplav opened the door of the bed room and he finds dhaani pressing clothes with iron box……..
Viplav : Dhaani!!
Dhaani : Shhh!!! Every one will wake up…….I have 2 finish it quickly…….
Viplav watched dhaani without uttering a single word…….As soon as the work was over, dhaani picked a bundle and tried 2 pick another one also, but it was about 2 fall….Viplav rushed quickly and helps dhaani by holding another one in his hand…….
Scene shifts 2 room….
Vidha places dresses in cup board…..
Dhaani : Ji, wooh dresses……..
Viplav : Yeah, that’s urs….
Dhaani : I will keep them in suit case……
Viplav : Why ?
Dhaani : Ji….Wooh……If I will keep my dresses with ur dresses , u will feel bad…..
Viplav : And if I say, if u will keep it separate then I will feel bad…..
Dhaani : Ji!!! [surprised]
Viplav : Keep it there….
Dhaani : Ji!!!
Viplav : I said u 2 keep it there…..U don’t know that I am inspector viplav tripathy …..It’s my order…… [ viplav stares dhaani]
Dhaani : Ji!!!! [ dhaani looks viplav’s eyes and slowly placed them in the cupboard]
Viplav : I am sorry…….
Dhaani : Why ??
Viplav : The way I behaved was not right…….But…..U know what , I don’t know some times how 2 talk…especially when I find a girl and…….and….and…..I don’t know how to deal with these kind of things…..[Dhaani stares viplav for a while] Why are u staring me ???? Come on …..Say smthng…..Shit!!!! Inspector Viplav Tripathi……U are done…..[viplav takes a deepbreath]
Seeing viplav’s gestures, dhaani started laughing…..
Viplav : Why are u laughing ?? [ dhaani didn’t stops, viplav repeats the same thing bit louder] Why are u laughing ??
Dhaani : U are so cute, Mr. Khadoos…….[ dhaani pinches viplav’s cheeks ]
Viplav gets stunned with dhaani’s reaction…..Dhaani continues laughing……At a moment viplav quickly holds dhaani’s hand and stares her ….Dhaani gets surprised……..
PRECAP : SOME TIMES TIME WILL TEACH U TO MOVE …..IT’S NOT NECESSARY THAT ALWAYS WE GET THE THINGS THE WAY WE WANT……
6 Comments
Excellent shot on ViDhani.
Love it. Waiting for the next one.
Thanks a lot fenu bhai
Hi Reni,
What a superb story. Just loved the episode..
It is filled with humour. It just kept me smiling through out the story..
Waiting for the next update… Please post soon.
Take care… Love to you
Thank you for the fresh new plot on Viplav and Dhaani….
FABULOUS…. 🙂
Keep going dear
Thanq thanq thanq so much reni for the new story on vidha…
Sry for late comment yaar…
Wooow lovely episode dear…imagining dhaanis reaction when viplav is asking her…it is too funny yaar..u know what i also have that bad habit of laughing in serious moments..??….plz update nexp part soon renii…
Take care…
Byee..
Keep writing….
Hi Reni,
Hope you are well. How is your eye now?
I guess you are tied up with your work schedule and unable to update the episode.
Eagerly awaiting the update. So curious to know what happens next.
Do revert quickly. Awaiting your episode.
Even Sujie is not able to update.
There is a long silence from her end.
Hope all is well with her.
otherwise, by now she would definitely post another episode.
Take care … dear