Hi frndz…am new here ND it’s my 1st ff…hope u lyk it…plz do cmnt ND let me knw whthr I can cont r NT…lets strt…
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INTRO:
1.Ragini Sharma (female lead)who s d 1ly daughter of Lakshmi Sharma ND she lost her father whn she was 4yrs old ND has been brought up by her mother Lakshmi
2.Laksh Maheshwari (Male lead) 1ly son of Mr nd Mrs.Maheshwari
3.Akshitha Maheshwari -Sister of laksh nd 1ly daughter of Mr nd Mrs.Maheshwari
4.Krishna Sharma-cousin of Ragini
Let’s mve on 2 d stry line
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The story strts wid d intro of Ragini who s getting ready for her 1st dy n clg…ragu calls her mom”Maa cme fst na..u can do ur office stuffs lter..there s 1ly few mre minutes left 4r inauguration fnc”
Wait Ragu am cmng aftr ur inauguration fnc I hav an imp meeting so I hav 2 prepare 4r dat too na
Ok kachu(Ragini Cals her mom wid dis nick nme) let’s go bcz dadaji s waiting outside 4r us…
Ragu tkes her dadaji’s blessings ND they finally get into d car..
On othr side,laksh s stil sleepng…Akshi cmes 2 laksh’s room 2 wake him up…laksh woke up…hey 5 mins da laksh rplied..oops 5 mins uh alrdy u r getting lte..paapaji s waiting for u n downstairs…get up…fst fst..
He din rply her…she suddenly pours d water ovr his fce…he shouts nd pulld her hair…how dare u 2 do dis wid ur bhaaii…hey leav me da orelse I wil cmplain 2 paapaji ND ur 1st dy of ur clg wil b such a worse…oh no laksh screams am lte…datz wat I say paapa s waiting for u…cme fst da..akshi goes out ND murmurs”laksh u wil get wat u hav dne 2 me..bt nt nw…i wil ctch u n d eve”
Laksh cmes dwn ND sees paapaji waiting for him…he apologies him ND they get into their car…
Both Ragu ND laksh reaches d clg wid their resp fmly members ND they were super excited…
Inauguration fnc strtd…
All d dignitaries of d institution delivers their speech…
Evry1 feels lil bit sleepy…finally they honoured d students who topped n d boards it’s none othr than our Ragu..she s d topper of d board xams ND she was honoured by d dignitaries..she feels d hpiest person n d wrld..her mom feels really grt n she s n air while seeing her daughter’s hpiness…laksh was irritated wid dis act ND he murmurs wat s dis…topper uh…dis ND all won’t suit for me..i jst cme here 2 njy wid frndzz..nd 2 spent my dad’s money…not 4r studies…huh…
To b continued….
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So wat s ur opinion guyz whthr I shld cont r NT..
~Darshu
28 Comments
Whst is nd
And its nice
Tq?
superbb
interesting. Waiting for the meet of raglak
Superb
Hey its nyc…………but plzz don’t write in short form and plzz indicate when the dialogues begin and end……..
Nice continue
awesome
keep continuing
superb
nice
awesome loved it
plZzzzzzzz yaar it’s so awesome amazing excellent superb mind blowing plzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz be regular bcoz now days raglak ff is very less and raglak fan missing them so only ff are there plzz
Supppppprrrbbb amzng egrily wtng fr nxt prt
Tq drz 4r ur responses…wil try 2 b regular…nd by nxt time wil indicate d dialogues frndzz…
Superb…..
nice
Interesting
Wow…..
It’s amazing nd interesting one
Please do continue soon
Eagerly waiting to read more
Tq frndzz? wil continue regularly
awesome dear….
Tq dr
awesome didi
interesting
Tq so mch drz?
amazing and can u plz write in sep lines as it’s easier to read xx
Nice work buddy..Keep writing..Lets rock..
Sure da sangi
interesting da.. Nice starting