Hey everyone, Again I got late in posting because of my never ending assignments. So, I am not adding pictures today except for the two that I added. I hope you all don’t get upset!!👉🏻👈🏻👉🏻👈🏻👉🏻👈🏻
Chapter 29: “The House of Mysteries!!”
The episode starts with Riddhima being shocked while reading the message. She was not in her senses. She was thinking deeply about something,
R(herself): He is back? What does this mean? Who sent me this message? Its a private number. Is someone just trying to mislead me or is it…..(trembled thoughts) has he really returned?
She was lost when she felt a hand on her shoulder. She jerked the hand in shock but then realized it to be Kabir!
Kabir: What did I do?
R: N…Nothing! What do you want?
K: Were you even listening? Riddhima! For God sake! Unlock the car! Everyone is suffocated enough with your crazy drive.
R(serious): Yeah sure!
She unlocked the car but didn’t come out herself. She was again lost.
Meanwhile, All other youngsters except Vansh also came out of the car. First Aryan came down trying to walk,
Aryan: I am really feeling like a squeezed cloth! Thank God! We are at home. He was about to fall down when Ishani supported him.
Ishani: You are useless Aryan! Even you can’t walk properly.
Aryan: If I am useless, then find someone else to squeeze next time!
Then, Kabir and Sia came out together.
K: Sia! I am still feeling like someone is shouting in my ear. I lost my hearing!
Sia: Oh Sorry Kabir! Ishani is sometimes like this. She shouts alot. I am sorry on her behalf.
K(murmurs): I was talking about you! Who would say sorry on your behalf!
After them, Sejal jumped out of the car excitedly,
Sejal(Excited): Yay!!!! We are in Delhi! I am so excited!! (Taking a long breath) I am feeling so light right now! Is’nt it Angre?
And then, finally Angre came out with the worst face he could possibly make. Their was beautiful stain of love on his coat. He looked at it and felt disgusted. It was a stain of “Sejal’s vomit”. Listening to Sejal’s words, Angre glared her saying,
Angre: Yeah! You would definitely feel light after vomiting on me.
Riddhima was still sitting at the driving seat totally unaware of the fact that someone who has not yet got off the car, was staring her. She caught sight of Vansh who was staring her suspiciously. She stole glances from her looking outside the window and thought,
R(herself): I have to remain calm. Vansh can sense danger easily. He will doubt my behaviour.
Saying so, she faked a smile and came out of the car.
Vansh who was staring her doubtfully, thought,
V(himself): Since the time we have started our journey, Riddhima is behaving odd. She seemed worried and scared. Is it normal or is she hiding something? Something is really bothering her.
He also got down the car. Riddhima gave the car keys to the guard that was standing there to park the car. Riddhima trying to cheer up all,
R: So, How was the drive?
Ishani: Really Riddhima?
R: Yeah! I mean I had fun. So, I think you also had it. I was driving so didn’t look back whether you all enjoyed or not.
V: What made you think that we enjoyed?
R: I think you all love madness. I just wanted to try myself a LITTLE too.
She focused on the word “little” looking at Vansh as if it was a threat that “never try to mess with her again”. Vansh narrowed his eyes and glared her. She winked and guided everyone towards the main door. It was a big mansion. Everyone was just in awe. They all were surprised. Riddhima pressed the door bell.
Sia: Why are you ringing the door bell in your own house?
Kabir: Actually, Mrs. D’Souza always stays in the mansion. So, she will open the door.
Sejal: Mrs. D’Souza?
Aryan: She is the caretaker of this house. But more like a guardian to all of us. She loves Riddhima alot.
Riddhima: She loves both of you too.
At the same moment, Mrs. D’Souza opened the door and hugged Riddhima. Riddhima reciprocated too. They had a small sweet moment. After that, Riddhima guided everyone inside with her.
When they all entered the mansion, someone is seen outside the boundaries of the mansion keeping an eye on her. He called someone and spoke,
Voice 1: Yes Sir! She has reached in Delhi!
Voice 2: I told you to kill her at sight! (Angry) What were you waiting for?
Voice 1: Sir! There are some other people with her too. That’s why, I didn’t shoot.
Voice 2(loud): I don’t care! I want Riddhima dead! Do it even if you have to kill a hundred people for this. You got it?
Voice 1: Ye….Yes Sir!
Voice 2: Don’t be a coward! I hate cowards like you. If Riddhima didn’t die within 24 hours then you would not see the next morning I swear!
Voice 1: Ok….ok Boss!
Saying so, he cut the call and ran away from there before anyone could catch him.
Meanwhile,
Mrs. D’Souza served evening snacks to everyone. All of them were chitchatting together and enjoying. They were gossiping with MD(I will write MD for Mrs. D’Souza for my convenience). MD knew them all from before as Riddhima used to share everything with her. MD had immediately recognized all of them and was excited to talk with them. They were all having a fun time but Riddhima was missing from there. She was in her room walking hurriedly and tensed from one corner to the other.
R(tensed): Why had he not called or texted yet? He is not realizing the intensity of this matter. If he has really returned then each and every moment is really important for me.
Not taking it anymore, she texted him,
R: Where are you?
After 5 minutes, he replied,
Text: We will not meet today!
R: What? I had warned you not to betray me.
Text: He is following you everywhere! He had known somehow about our meeting. That’s why, I postponed it.
R: How do you know?
Text: That’s not important! I am warning you! Be aware! Otherwise, you will not see the next morning!
Riddhima was about to reply him when she found Vansh standing at the door of her room. She immediately put her phone in her pocket.
R(posing to be normal): What are you doing here?
V: Finding you!
R: You need something?
V: Yeah!…You! My sweetheart!!!
Ishq mein Marjawan plays.
Saying this, he started coming close to her. She started moving back. She was slowly walking back when she felt wall behind her and she stopped. Vansh came close to her and placed his both hands on the wall blocking her way out. She was looking directly in his eyes. He came closer to her face slowly. She closed her eyes feeling his closeness. He was about to kiss her but then, he moved towards her ear and whispered,
V(husky voice): Being the host, Don’t you think you should give us a house tour, Sweetheart!!!
Riddhima opened her eyes and looked at him. He moved back with a smirk.
R: I will ask MD to give you all a house tour.
V: Is MD the house owner or you? Won’t you join?
Riddhima’s phone started vibrating in her pocket. She became nervous.
R(nervous): I am living here for the past 5 years. I know each and every corner of this house. I have some work. She will give you the house tour. She is no less than an owner.
Saying this, She gently passed beside him and moved out of the room.
Vansh was standing at his place being suspicious,
V(himself): In the car, she told that she was in Kashmir for 2 years. Now, She is saying that she has been living here for 5 years! What’s all this?
He came downstairs where Riddhima was talking with other Raisinghanias. He joined them.
Sejal: Riddhima! You have not even gave us all a treat for becoming Chief! We want a party.
Ishani: Yes Riddhima! We want a lavish dinner in a restaurant. Nothing more nothing less.
They all started insisting her so, Riddhima agreed.
R: Ok fine! Do whatever you want. I will take you all for the dinner but right now, I have to complete some work. You all go with MD as you wanted the house tour.
Riddhima walked towards MD saying,
R: MD! Kindly, Show them each and every corner of the mansion (whisper) But not that room. You know well!
MD nodded. Riddhima went towards her study room. MD guided them all with her. Everyone explored Riddhima’s mansion that was no less in competition with the VR Mansion. They saw, Riddhima’s room, some guest rooms, kitchen, dinning room, theatre room and much more. When they went towards the study room, Riddhima was not there.
V(confused): She was here! Where did she go?
Then, they moved out of the study and showed them all the beautiful poolside area. All the youngsters started having some fun there. But Vansh was lost in Riddhima’s thoughts only. So, he came out in the hall finding her. He went upstairs in Riddhima’s room but she was not there too. He was standing there besides reeling watching downstairs when he saw a space in between the kitchen and study.
He came downstairs towards that area. It was a long corridor. He went in and reached at its end. There was a closed door there. He knocked once on the door but no one responded. So, he was about to open it when,
“It’s Locked!!!”
He heard a voice behind him. It was of MD. She came to him.
MD: It remains locked!
V: But why? What’s inside it?
MD(nervous): Its…Its a store room.
V(stern): I want to see it too.
MD(making excuses): I don’t have the keys.
V(doubtful): You are caretaker here. Right?
MD(stern): But Riddhima has not permitted anyone to go inside this room. Not even me.
V: Why?
MD(nervous): Because…..because….
“Mrs. D’Souza!”
Both of them turned back. It was the youngsters.
Ishani(excited): Where are you both roaming? Come on! We want to explore the terrace too.
MD(relieved): Yeah Yeah! Lets go. Come Vansh beta!
MD taking long steps hurriedly. She guided everyone towards the terrace.
While going upstairs, Vansh found Riddhima coming out of her room.
V(confused): Riddhima! You here?
R: What’s so confusing about it? Its my room.
V: I mean I checked you in your room just a while ago. You were not there.
R(hiding her stress): I was here since the time you all went for house tour. Maybe I would be in the washroom when you came.
V: I checked the washroom too.
Angre: Oho Vansh! Its her house. She can be anywhere. Come on.
Vansh was not convinced but ignored it thinking he might be overthinking.
When they left, Riddhima came back to her room and thought,
Flashback starts,
A room filled with extreme darkness was shown. Nothing was visible. It was all dark and dusty. There was no source of illuminations or ventilation in it. Then, someone turned on the flashlight of the mobile. It was Riddhima. She pointed the flashlight towards a small box and opened it. From the box, she took out two phote frames. She put both of them on the table and started caressing them. She had tears in her eyes. In one picture, there was Ajay RaiSinghania, Riddhima, Mrs. D’Souza and two men of Vansh’s age standing beside Riddhima. She started crying.
Then, she looked at the second picture. It contained one of the two men from previous picture smiling and hugging another boy nearly of 12 years. She took the picture in her hands and placing it close to her heart, she sobbed alot. She sat down on the floor and cried alot.
R(crying): I miss you!…I really miss you alot!….I am falling weak!…..But I don’t want to……I need strength!…..I really need alot of strength to face him!….You know well how close you both were to me!!!!..You!!! And him!!!…How….I can’t even tell it to Dad or Vansh…I can’t tell this to anyone…I don’t want anyone to suffer like you….How am I going to face him!!!…he cheated you!! He cheated me!!!! He cheated all of us!!!!….
She was crying holding the picture when she heard a knock on the door. She freaked out. Then, she listened Vansh and MD’s conversation, got up and left the place from back door.
Flashback ends.
R(fierce): Vansh should never know about the secrets of that room. I can’t put his life in danger. I am not sure if he is back but Its high time that I take some action against him. Its time to call “The Tripple M”!!!
(One more thing guys! I am a very frank person and I really appreciate honest opinions whether they are in my favour or not. So, I was having a feeling that I am losing the charm of my story. I don’t know why I am feeling like this but these days, I am really not that much satisfied with my own writing as I was before. I always feel that something is missing! Well, I was never perfect before too, I could find many flaws in my all my updates but still I was satisfied but these days, I am not. I am feeling like I am not giving my best. So, I really want you all to give your honest opinion in this regard and believe me Even if its a negative one, I don’t mind at all unless its an honest one. I have really shared my true feelings with you all and expect this from you all too in return.)
90 Comments
Great episode…
Thank you!
No yaar story is very interesting. No need to end .
ok dear! Thanx
Yes your such a good writer I like all your update .
oh! Thank you!☺☺
Awesome episode 🥰❤… Loved it❤🥰…
Story is amazing❤
thank you!
thanx for the opinion!
It’s really amazing.
Thank you!
Awesome episode…☺☺☺☺☺…
waiting for next episode..
Thank you!
Updates are really nice but pls don’t confuse us so much and solve all the mysteries as son as possible and make riansh together…
ohk Dear! I won’t confuse you all. don’t worry! you will love the story. now i got my confidence!
Amazing episode
thanx
Its awesome don’t doubt yourself
OK dear! Thanx
No doubt your story is really awesome please continue.
thanx dear! Its really encouraging me!
Awesome! It’s really good and reveal the mystery soon!
done! and Thanx dear!!
Well this episode was awesome and talking abt author note so for me It is same I think more interesting as now it’s ridhima past which is more interesting than previous one and now it has humour also so for me this story is not losing its charm but getting more and I seriously say and even I want to tell more thing actually am liking this mystery more than the previous one ya so that’s my views abt ur story. Take care💕
thanks alot dear! it really means alot to me that u gave ur opinion and for the appreciation too. now, I am really confident and motivated. Thank alot once again!!!glad you liking it more🥰🥰
No it’s one of the best story of riansh that I have read till date so please continue 🙂
Thank you so much dear!
Hey nice episode POST ASAP❤️
Thanx dear!
No.. what made you think this way? No..not at all.. look previous episodes were full of mysteries and suspence. So we all were very curious about it.. but now you had wrote hilarious episodes so that’s why you must be feeling like this.
But now you again switched to suspence mode!! And I am very much curious again!
Don’t feel low yaar!! I always find your episodes perfect and wonderful!
yeah maybe your are right!! But now I am really motivated with your comment. 😍😍😍😍😍Thanks alot dear!!
Well as a reader, I didn’t find out any loopholes, neither at the initial time more now, but as a friend, I wanna tell u that try to make more suspense out of it.. although it’s enough bcoz the suspense u give us, I can’t untangle that too… But u know, something is missing and even I don’t know that.. is it the way u write or what.. although it is fabulous even now, but if we read ur initial episodes, then we can found out the difference easily… So as a friend, I recommend u if u have time then read all ur previous episodes for once so that u can be used to it.. okay??.
Vaise ye isliye bhi ho skta hai bcoz pehle Riddhima aur vansh dono truth nhi jaante the, so they both were at loggerheads.. and now vansh knows the truth, of her mission and now Riddhu also have a soft corner for him, so the intensity of their
fights and arguments have lessen then before.. I mean I too don’t know..now I have told u my opinion so u decide what actually it is!! Take care yaar..pls post soon
Lots of love💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
– Aarushi
Ok Done! I will try to come up to your expectations and will definitely try to fill up the space of X factor that is missing in my update. But I really didn’t get the point when u said that read the previous updates u will find difference. Till here I understood but u can be used to it? I didn’t understand this. Yeah thats a difference k ab wo dono hate ni krte ek dosre se..and even I don’t want them to hate now. I am trying to gradually develop the same love feelings again. But the fierceness and anger and arguments thoughnot for Vansh but they will be definitely included as for the new entry. And Aarushi!! Dear!! Thanx alot that you gave an honest opinion..as i said before, mere liye yeh matter ni krta k koi mujhe mere weak points bta rha hai ya strong. Matter yeh krta hai k wo mujhe jo bhi keh rha hai dil se or truly kuch regard krta hai to keh rha hai..so I am really glad that u gave an honest opinion…Thanx alot dear❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
It was mh duty to tell my friend yaar.. and soory actually it got autocorrected.. I had written the same lines to somebody so that’s why it got posted.. extremely sorry for that!! I meant that o recommend u to read the initial episode so that u will be able to find out that X factor.. as there was a lot of suspense in those episodes.. so that I was saying.. again sorry for that if u thought something else.. and by the way sorry if u feel I am offending u or something like that.. but bcoz u asked the honest opinion, I wrote it.. I didn’t meant to hurt ur feelings at any cost.. lots of love❤️❤️❤️❤️
Arey what made u feel that i was offended. Infact i was delighted yar!!! Bcoz men yehi expect krrhi thi koi mujhe shi guide kre and u did that…no need for sorry. Never say sorry to me. And i just asked k mujhe smjh ni ai thi us bat ki mene usse koi ghlt mtlb ni nikala na kisi bat ka bura lga mujhe..i am chill person yar..mujhe boht k. Hi kisi bat ka bura lgta hai🤗🤗🤗🤗❤️❤️❤️❤️😉😉😉😉😊😊😊
Oh my dear nothing like that u r doing best trust me..i m loving it..the suspense ufff!! Keep going plz
Thanx dear!! You all are really my motivation!!!!❤️❤️❤️❤️Luv u alot
The story has the same charm as before
And we are loving it
Post soon
Thanx alot dear!! Glad to know this❤️❤️❤️
This is story is perfect and dare u say something next time to my fav riansh1212 she always giver her best and always keep us happy and curious and craved for her ff she writes so perfectly she always find a way to occupy our minds most of the time we just think of the mystery and upcoming episode and then now days our minds is occupied by her hillarous scenes we just think and start laughing at any moment of the day DEAR plz don’t think like that ur story line has charm as it was before see these episodes are funny more then the thrill and earlier episodes were more thrilling but it’s OK ik thrill will be back soon and ridhhima’s past is more interesting than the earlier episodes so plz keep going and rocking never ever feel so low we all love u all lot and I’m really really excited for upcoming episode just suggestion Ek aiesa scene daalo na jaha fierce riddhima Ho wo sab se Lad le aur Aur sabko bacha le like jo log Delhi aaye h Aur phirr boommmmm wo Aditya Uske smane aaye Aur usse 😂 panic attack aajaye phir vansh usse sambhale aur Ajay ko call Kare sab Phir wo bhi Delhi aajaye turant phir riddhima rone lage bahut 😂 goddd mai kya kar rahi see agr tum story Mai aiese Nahi bhi Dalo gi then also I’ll be as happy as before perhaps more because ye bahut ganda suggestion tha 😂 plz don’t mind just ignore Meko Aadat h theory bana ne ki chalo Aaj bahut likha maine I think love u Bbye Tata n plz post the next episode soon
Ok Ok I am sorry I won’t say anything now to your Riansh1212. Hahahha Phr to din bhr ek dum hnsti hongi to parents zyada shak krte honge🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣yeah I am trying to bring back the thriller slowly. I am glad you all are developing interest in this track too. Hahahahah i must salute your imaginations yar🤣🤣Ajaega kuch esa bhi..as a spolier, I am telling u kuch hai mere mind men esa🤫🤫🤫🤫itna bura suggestion ni hai but riddhu ko rulane ka irada ni hai ab mera koi khas. I really never mind yar!! Your comment is one of those for which i really wait to read❤️❤️❤️
And yes one more thing, I know I sound stupid but in the first picture, Ajay, Riddhima, Ms. D’Souza, two other men of vansh’s age. Okay got it..
Then in the second one, one of two men along with a 12 years boy.. she said looking at the picture he cheated us, that’s means the man in the first picture whose pic is not in the second one has cheated them??? And is it related to Aditya Randhawa?? Is he one of those man!! I am not asking you.. don’t anser me otherwise it will be the last episode I now that😁😁😁.. and one more question, this u have to answer, yar do insaan hai kya?? Mtlb ek do Ridhima ko maarna chahta hai aur doosra jo use kuch btana.. mtlb vo text wala.. confusion hi confusion hai solution kuch pta nhi 😁😁😁😁
Post soon and clear my CONFUSION
🤦🏼♀️🤦🏼♀️🤦🏼♀️Koi haal ni hai Aarushi. Aho!! Yehi mtlb hai. But guess yeh krna hai k wo dono or wo 12 years ka boy. Yeh teen log hain kon?? If it is related to Aditya then unmen se Aditya kon hai?? Hahhaha I am not answering at all. Khud dhondna tum….but I am sure u all cant guess it easily. Baki koi kr bhi le to pta ni…hmmmmmmmm Do insaan?????? Ho bhi skte hain?? Ek bhi hoskta hai!!! Or do se zyada bhi hoskte hain🤣🤣🤣🤣lgi rho…shi ja rhi ho…krti hun kuch tumhari confusion ka👍🏻
Thanks yaar kuch to kro😂😂😂😂
Hahahha men to krrhi hun tum kro na🤫😉
Di its amazing….and it’s not like that,in previous episodes there was lots of suspense and confusion only but now in these Episodes confusion are there but the previous one is solved and you are also giving light Episodes (I mean funny ones),so that can be the reason you are finding it not good as previous episodes..but it’s fantastic..and pls reveal the suspense .I am not able take it in my little heart..😥..will be waiting tomorrow for your next episode..😊
THanx alot yar!! Its really such a relief..I have really revived my inner confidence and motivation. Its really encourages me alot!! Thanx alot dear for this honest opinion❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️U will get to know everything slowly!!!❤️❤️❤️
Your story Is really good
THanx yar!
It is just ultimate!
The way you write is awesome!! So you needn’t have to worry about the storyline as we are loving it!! Also, the comments say them all! 😉 That everyone’s thoroughly enjoying it!!
Eagerly waiting to read the next one 🤗❤
THanx alot yar!! ITs reall so miotivating!!! I am glad i am able to come up your expectations.❤️❤️❤️❤️
Di I think your update are perfect. Sure I see grammar mistakes in every one but I honestly don’t care. As long as I understand what you are trying to say it doesn’t matter to me. I never found loopholes and I don’t mind if there aren’t any pictures. There is a lot of suspense so please don’t stop.
The episode is very interesting. It has lots of suspense and for a moment I thought that Van was actually going to kiss Rid. Who are the boys with a 12 year old boy?? Di if you think that you don’t have suspense then that’s very strange. That picture itself is causing a lot of suspense.
Di I don’t want you to feel dissatisfied or discouraged. I think you write in a brilliant way that neither I can or never will. Please don’t stop.
Post tomorrow!!
THAnx alot dear for these lovely words of Appreciation. It really means alot to me…you made my day😊😊❤️❤️🤗🤗And everything will be cleared out gradually.❤️❤️❤️❤️I know i have suspense. i was just not sure if i am able to portray it the way it should be portrayed.😊
U r amazing writer .ur ff is unique .fabulous and funny .but dont mind me but lacks something may b passion .mayb a team work is needed may not romantic but riansh working as a team becoz it happens every time one is bearing all the pain the other in detective mode .always guessing hiding catching lies .questions arise with no answres .so take it slow take a break .write at ur pace .its ur creation it cant b perfect until u r satified with what u write .its a beautiful love story .many love it. May u wont agree with me but lots of love .its missing nothing but if u think something is missing then it does miss a spot .update next soon .try a different approach to fresh ur mind .unveail the secrets soon .ur r fabulous .dont stop writing.
All the points have been noted!! Actually, What u have mentioned, I had really thought about adding it, I was just waiting for the right moment to do so… I can’t tell more than that About what I have kept in store for all of you😉😉😉thanx dear for this❤️❤️❤️
Love ur suspences and riansh sence write more
DONE!❤️
For me you still good as before you don’t need to doubt yourself trust me the story still holds it charm at least that’s according to me.
And I really don’t want Riddhima to fall weak, bow down her head, hold herself back or fall prey of anyone no matter who the person is, or how strong he may be. I want to see her holding herself high, that fierce, strong and determined Riddhima I want see and Riansh reconciliation. Atleast I want to see them(Riansh) together against all the odds.
RIdhima will not fall weak. Maybe she is just feeling like me right now. totaLLy overthinking😉😉STrong and fierce Riddhima is the base of this story so dont worry. And riansh are going to be together too❤️❤️
Marvelous episode dhi.
As always and usual you are rocking so much and you are doing a very great job dhi.
You are an awesome writer and your ff is so amazing.
God bless you dhi you and your ff.
Super excited for the upcoming episode.
Please post the next one soon.
THANK YOU so much Mennu!❤️
Fantastic episode di!!
Please don’t feel low, your episodes are always up to the mark! I love all your episodes and always look forward in reading them❤❤ Please continue the FF and don’t stop, you’re doing amazing!! Your writing knows how to attract people into reading it- it’s not losing it’s charm at all. You’re like the suspense master, always putting us into suspense😂 but it’s great.
Please post soon, and reveal something, i can’t wait 😂❤❤
Thanx alot dear!! Really I get all my strengths and confidence back with all these words!! You dont know how special these are for me❤️❤️❤️❤️
Your story is awesome . I really like it very much. Waiting for your next episode
Thanx alot dear❤️