hello guys, hope everyone is fine and your eid went well, so here is my another os, hope you enjoy it, do comment if you like it.
A beautiful mansion is shown which is beautifully decorated , many guests were present there, all are busy in different chores, a group of three girls are shown descending stairs , all are beautifully dresses in different colours of lehnga cholis , they are talking and laughing among themselves,
Swara : uff ragini and sia , aaj kitna maza aa raha hai
Ragini : yeah right, we have met after five years on this churail sia’s wedding
Sia playfully slapped raginis head while swara and rag chuckled
Swara : but seriously yaar sia , tu phir se shaddi karlein , so that we can come together and enjoy like this, waise toh we always remain busy
Sia : are you mad or what why would i marry again, i love rohan alot and i cannot think of anyone else except him
Swara said aww so sweat, saying this she side hugged sia and ragini also joined the hug , but swara pulled away from hug quickly and said dont worry we will make ragini remarry, laksh jiju ko choro, woh puranay ho gay, will will find our new jiju
Ragini : acha ji you are planning for mine and sia second marriage , why dont you plan your first marriage
Swara ( laughed ) me and marriage, iss ke toh dor dor tak chances nahi hain
Ragini and sia also laughed
Sia : but swara seriously you two besties have found their love when will you find your love
Swara : array will i find love?
Sia and ragini give puzzled look
Swara : he has already found HIM for me (said while pointing towards sky) and god will only made me meet him, i dont know when and how but i know i will meet my love one day
Ragini : hope that day come soon,
Sia : yeah
Swara : why tum logon ko bohut jaldi hai mujhe dor bhegne ki
Ragini and sia hugged swara and said no, we love you alot
Swara hugged them also and said i love you both too
But their hug was broken by laksh’s voice
Can i join you too ?
No , said ria and swara together and pushed ragini towards hima nd said you can only join her .
Laksh caught ragini in his hands and brushed her hairs which were covering her face , while ragini bend her head in shyness, laksh was about to kiss ragini but swara shouted, jiju have some shame i am still un married and you are going to show us after marriage show
Laksh and got embarrased and left ragini aside while she smiled , swara and sia laughed aloud
Laksh : achha leave it i have come to say sangeet is gonna start come quickly, waise rohan is dying to see you sia, , listening this sia blushes, but laksh further murmured little did he know that you are devil
Sia looked towards laksh with narrow eyes and asked have you said something my lovely jiju
Laksh gulped in fear and replied no not at all, i have said nothing my dear sister in law
Before sia came in her devil mood swara interrupted them and said
Swara : laksh sangeet and now, wasn’t it planned after two days
Laksh : yeah sangeet is after two days , but we were getting bored so thought of singing songs
Swara : wow what a great idea , chalo intezaar kis bat ka lets go
Laksh and sia ran before, swara was about to go behind them but ragini caught her hand and stopped her to talk
swara:kiya hua ragini
ragini : you are still waiting for him
swara :about whom you are talking
ragini: swara meri taraf dekh ke bat kar, you very well know about whom i am talking
swara got teary eyes : ragini what do you wanna know, say it clearly
ragini : till when you will wait for him, you even dont know whether he loves you or not, after graduation i understand you both were inseparable besties but has he ever told you that he loves you, no naa and have he ever contacted you , nahi then why , why are you still waiting for him
swara smiled sadly and said BECAUSE I LOVE HIM.
Ragini smiled sadly and said you will never change, i just wish your love gets fulfilled and you dont have to face heartbreak
Swara : chaleen ya aur kuch
Ragini nodded in noo , then they both went towards hall where all are preparing for singing competition
Laksh : so ladies and gentle man , boys and girls lets start the singing competition, so one by one all of us will sing song of their choice but according to theme which is of ROMANTIC SONGS ok guys lets start
First ragini sarted singing, muskuranay ki wajah tum he ho, she sang whole song while lloking towards laksh, she was telling her feelings towards laksh
Muskurane ki wajah tum ho
Gungunane ki wajah tum ho
Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye na..
O re piya re..
Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye na..
O re piya re..
Everyone clapped while ragini shies and laksh brushed his hair with his hands and stand beside ragni and side hugged her, swara and sia shoutes awwwwwwwww sho sweet
Then laksh turn came he went on stage and turned in style and sing following song dancing on its step
O…
Gulabi aankhen jo teri dekhi
Sharabi ye dil ho gaya
Sambhalo mujhko o mere yaaron
Sambhalna mushqil ho gaya
Gulabi aankhen jo teri dekhi
Sharabi ye dil ho gaya
Dil mein mere khwaab tere
Tasveer jaise ho deewar pe
Tujhpe fidaa main kyun hua
Aata hai gussa mujhe pyar pe
Main lut gaya
Maan ke dil ka kaha
Main kahin ka na raha
Kya kahu main dilruba
Bura ye jaadu
Teri aankhon ka
Ye mera qaatil ho gaya
Gulabi aankhen jo teri dekhi
Sharabi ye dil ho gaya
Everyone hooted at the end and clapped for this beautiful couple
Laksh : so now turn turn is of bride and groom , saying this all clapped
Sia came on stage and sing following song
Nahi jeena tere baaju
Nahi jeena, nahi jeena
Nahi jeena tere baaju
Nahi jeena, nahi jeena (x2)
Main tenu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee
Main tenu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee
Tu ki jaane pyaar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri
then rohan continued
Main tenu samjhava ki
Na tere bina lagda jee
Tu ki jaane pyaar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui yon jaan meri
Main tenu samjhawa ki
Na tere bina lagda jee
mere dil vich re ke mere
dil da haal na jaane
tere baajo kaleyan be ke
ronde nain numane
jeena mera Haaye
marna mera naal tere si
kar aetibar mera
mein karaan intezar tera
tu dil tu yun jaan meri
mein tenu samjhawan ki
na tera baajo lagda ji
Everyone clapped , swara got teary eyes, she went towards sia and bring her near rohan holding her hand and give her hand in rohan’s hand
Swara to rohan : you know what everyone is not lucky to get their love, love toh har koi kar leta hai , par har koi pa nahi pata , par tumne pa lia, bas abb iss kii qadar karna and isse nabhana
Rohan nodded and hugged both swara and sia
Laksh: kiya yar swara sara mood kharab kardiya,kabhi studies mein itna serious hoi nahi har waqt TERA IDIOT teray pechaay para rehta tha keh tu parh lay
Suddenly laksh stopped realizing something , swara got tears in her eyes but composed herself and said
Swara : chalo chora now its my turn, so tell me which song
Laksh : which you like
Ragini : or your idiot like
Laksh, swara , sia and rohan looked towards ragini then each other, suddenly whole hall become silent
Swara started singing song closing her eyes
Mann yeh saahib ji
Jaane hai sab ji
Phir bhi banaye bahaane
Naina nawaabi ji
Dekhe hain sab ji
Phir bhi na samjhe ishaare
Mann yeh saahib ji haan karta bahaane
Naina nawaabi ji na samjhe ishaare
(na samjhe ishaare)
Dheere dheere, nainon ko dheere dheere
Jiya ko dheere dheere, bhaayo re Saibo
Dheere dheere, begaana dheere dheere
Apna sa dheere dheere, laage re Saibo
Surkhhiyaan hain hawaaon mein
Do dilon ke milne ki
Ho.. arziyaan hain nazaaron mein
Lamha yeh tham jaane ki
O kaisi huzoori ji yeh lab dikhlaaye
Chuppi laga ke bhi ghazab hai yeh dhaaye
Dheere dheere, nainon ko dheere dheere
Jiya ko dheere dheere, bhaayo re Saibo
Dheere dheere, begaana dheere dheere
Apna sa dheere dheere, laage re Saibo
Saibo… Saibo…
Dheere Dheere… Dheere Dheere…
everyone clapped at end, while swara went from there to her room making excuse
and started crying bitterly
swara : where are you, i miss you , please come back naa, please please your swara misses u
saying this she started crying more loudly
downstairs,laksh asked ragini what was the need to tell her that
ragini : you know what laksh she is still in love with him
laksh : what, i thought she might have forget loving him
suddenly light got dim and voice of guitar playing started coming from him
and someone started singing
Khwaab hai tu, neend hoon main, dono milehe, raat banein
Roz yahi, maangu dua, teri meri, baat banein, baat banein
Swara quickly ran downstairs and shouted IDIOT
While everyone was in shock and looked towards swara
While laksh smiled with tears and said KAMINEY TU NAHI BADLAY GA
While that person remain singing,
Rang sharbaton ka, tu meethe ghaat ka paani
Main rang sharbaton ka, tu meethe ghaat ka paani
Mujhe khud mein ghol de toh, mere yaar baat ban jaani
Rang sharbaton ka, tu meethe ghaat ka paani
Main rang sharbaton ka, tu meethe ghaat ka paani
Maine toh dheere se, neendon ke dhaage se,
Bandha hai khwaab ko tere, main na jahaan chahoon,
Na aasmaan chahoon, aaja hisse mein tu mere
Tu dhang chahaton ka, main jaise koi naadani
Tu dhang chahaton ka, main jaise koi naadani
Mujhe khud se jod de toh, mere yaar baat ban jaani
Rang sharbaton ka, tu meethe ghaat ka paani
Main rang sharbaton ka, tu meethe ghaat ka paani
that person then come on stage and put guitar down and looked towards his friends
laksh run towards him and everyone smiled thinking now their bromance will start but to everyone shock laksh slapped hard to sanskar, swara gapsed and shouted laksh what are you doing
laksh stopped swara from coming and said swara dont come in between, aaj ya yeh hai ya mein hoon
laksh then turned towards sanskar and gave him a tight slap again and holded his collar
and said saale, kaminay, dhoke baaz, swara tujhe sahi kehti hai idiot, tu idiot hai, eik number ka idiot hai, tu tu boht bara idiot hai
at end laksh broke down and started crying and said koi apne doston ko aise chor ke jata hai, mana keh tu hurt tha, hurt tha keh teray parents teray real parents nahi but tune socha keh tu yun abroad hag jaye ga toh sab theek ho jaye ga haan bta you did not think about us even once haan
sanskar too got teary eyes and said maaf karde na yaar
laksh shouted kaminay and was about to slap him but insted he hugged sanskar tightly and both smiled in tears
both pulled away from hug while laksh gestured him to meet others
sanskar came towards sia and rohan and hugged them who were also in tears and congratulated them on their wedding and to lighten their mood he said, oye sia itna mat ro, nahi toh tera sara make up kharab ho jaye ga and you become chudail in real
siya and rohan smiled and again hugged sanskar
sanskar them came towards ragini and was about to hug her, but she stopped him and said, why sis you came now, haan, phir jaane kay liye, if it is so then dont need to show your fake love
sanskar holded his ears and said maaf karde, i got very upset at that time and i was unable to think anything, uss waqt jo sahi laga woh kiya, please i am sorry
ragini melted a little but said par itnay salon mein contact kyuun nahi kiya
sanskar : mujhe laga pata nahi tum log mujhe se baat karo gay ya nahi, aur guilt mein mainay call he nahi kia
ragini : dil toh chah raha kay eik thappar lagayoon par saying this she hugged him and said never ever leave us never understood
sanskar said pakka ab kabhi nahi jaounga, kabhi nahi saying this he looked towards swara while swara looked towards other side to hide her tears
then sanskar slowly came towards swara and stand in front of her, while swara looked towards him with teary eyes while following background song plays
Ajj din chadheya
Tere rang varga
Ajj din chadheya
Tere rang varga
Phul sa hai khila aaj din
Rabba mere din yeh na dhale
Woh jo mujhe khwab mein mile
Use tu lagade ab gale
Tenu dil da vaasta
Swara and sanskar keep looking each other while other were waiting that how will swara react
Sanskar after some time with much hesitation said: swara before you react or slap me, i wanna say that i am really sorry ,i know i shoul not have run away like this should have come to you guys, especially to you , i also did not contacted you, but i under stand one thing staying away from you saying this sanskar got quiet and looked downwards
Rabba aaya dar digaar ke
Sara jahan chod chaad ke
Mere sapne sawar de
Tenu dil da vasta
Swara lost her patience and shouted , now will you continue or should i slap you like laksh
Baksha gunaho ko
Sun ke duwao ko
Rabba pyaar hai
Tune sab ko hi de diya
Meri bhi aahon ko
Sun le duwao ko
Mujhko woh dila maine jisko hai dil diya
Sanskar looked towards her and said I CANNOT LIVE WITHOU YOU
Swara : you understand only this , tum waqayi mein gadhaay ho, idiot kahnin kaa
Sanskar nooded in no
Swara : kya nahin, speak up
Sanskar: khuch aur bhi sekha hai
Swara : kiya
Aasmaan pe aasmaan uske de itna bata
Woh jo mujhko dekh ke hase
Pana chahun raat din jise
Rabba mere naam kar use
Tenu dil da vasta
Sanskar : I LOVE YOU
Chahiye jo mujhe
Kar de tu mujhko ata
Jeeti rahe saltanat teri
Jeeti rahe ashiqui meri
Dede mujhe zindagi meri
Tenu dil da vasta
Swara got teary eyes and said i love you too
Rabba mere din yeh na dhale
Woh jo mujhe khwab mein mile
Use tu lagade ab gale
Tenu dil da vasta
Rabba aaya dar digaar ke
Sara jahan chod chad ke
Mere sapne sawar de
Tenu dil da vasta
Swara said, you took five years to realise your love ab hug karney mein bhi panch saal lagayo gay
Sanskar said huh in confused voice
Swara smiled and said idiot and hugged her idiot her sanskar tightly while sanskar also wrapped his arms around her tightly while everyone clapped and hooted
Sanskar then break the hug and kissed her forehead
Swara : promise me you will never leave now
Sanskar : never i will never leave you
Salee pyar ko pa kay, yaar ko bhul gaye shouted laksh from back, swasan smiled then all six sia , rohan , laksh , ragini, swara and sanskar group hugged
Sanskar: so lets recreate magic of our DOSTI and all sstarted singing remembering their friendship moments
Sab Say Mehangi Hai
Chalti Rehti Hai Rut Nahi
Dosti Dosti
Teri Meri Aisi Dosti
Hi Teray Liyay
Meray Liyay
Sab Kay Liyay
Dosti Dosti
Ho Har Jagah Aesi Dosti
Dosti Dosti
Teri Meri Aesi Dosti
Dukh Sukh Sehti Hai
Pal Pal Behti Hai Dekhoooo Dosti Dosti
Teri Meri Aesi Dosti…
Jab Hum Dum Milay Sab Kuch Milay
Karna Nahi Phir Tum Shikway Gilay
Ho Ho…….
Kuch Day Kay Jati Hai
Kuch Lay Kay Chalti Hai Hameshaaa Dosti Dosti
Teri Meri Aesi Dosti
Dukh Sukh Sehti Hai
Pal Pal Behti Hai Dekhoooo Dosti Dosti
Teri Meri Aesi Dosti…
Yadain Bhi Hain
Sapnay Bhi Hain
Gairon Main Kuch Yahan Apnay Bhi Hain
Ho Ho………
Sab Say Mehangi Hai
Chalti Rehti Hai Rut Nahee Dosti Dosti
Hi Tere Liyay
Mere Liyay
Sab Kay Liyay
Dosti Dosti
Sab Say Mehangi Hai
Chalti Rehti Hai Rut Nahee Dosti Dosti
Hi Tere Liyay
Mere Liyay
Sab Kay Liyay
Dosti Dosti
Teri Meri Aesi Dosti
Ho Har Jagah Aesi Dosti
Teri Meri Aesi Dosti
Ho Har Jagah Aesi Dosti
Then they all cheered then sanskar , laksh and rohan took their respective partners in their embrace and laksh started singing
Tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitaara
laksh hugged ragini while rohan sarted singind with sia in his hands
O karam Khudaya hai
Tujhe mujhse milaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai
at end both smiled each other , then sanskar started singing
Kahin kisi bhi gali me jaaun main
Teri khushboo se takraaun main
Har raat jo aata hai mujhe
Woh khwaab tu…
Sanskar then kissed swara on her forehead
Tera mera milna dastoor hai
Tere hone se mujhme noor hai
Main hoon soona sa ek aasmaan
Mehtaab tu…
Swara smiled looking towards him and kissed on his cheeks
O karam Khudaya hai
Tujhe maine jo paaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai
O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitaara
At end swasan hugged each other tightly promising to never leave eachother’s hand.
And then screen freezes on all three couples happy faces.
here ends my os, please comment if you liked it .
24 Comments
nice raglak are to cute
thanks
thank you everyone who liked and commented on this os, sorry for not replying individually but still alot of thanks to all of you, it means alot.
MissKhan! i liked it.. but i can’t understand hindi part…
sorry dear but thought that emotions can only be conveyed that way
Awesome….
Awesome
Awesome ……
Its lovely dear
Wow yaar sooo cuteee?????loved it plzzz write more
cute os
lv it
keep writing
be hpy always
i loved it it was so emotional and lovely
Nice
Amazingggg!!!!
Yaar milte hai pyar milte hai ,humko yaro naasib se, ek duje ki aadatein bante dil ko chute kaarib se,, har haasi pe aasuon pain dete jo pehra,ek din kyo chalee hau jaate choor ke tanha ,, ye dosti milti naasib sai…((soo pleasurable song naa, defines pure relation of friendship)) after reading ur story i heard d song… i loved d story Miss khan… above friendship there is no any relation… thnk u…
Loved it
nice
superb
Superrrr os dear…. Really, sanky is a no.
1 idiot…..Song is very nice… Keep writing like this.
Take care
Keep smiling?
Miss Khan superb os. Wow really love it specially the songs. And all pairs scene was fabulous. Really enjoyed it
Oh god very nice dear….thank you so much for adding my two favourite songs. .TERE SANG YAARA and MAIN RANG SHARBATON KA…muaaah love you. .
Keep writing
I knew it is u
glad you rememered me dear
Sooooo cute …