Hey guys ……. I m so happy with the response I m getting for my ff….u all r so sweet… Bas yahi dar lagta hai ki kahin mujhe diabetes na ho jaaye???
Now jokes apart…. Bas aise hi just keep loving me and my ff…..and I will try my best to make all parts funny…..
Now as sona said that I have not mentioned the details…. I will tell it now…
Shravan and sumo are in 12th class in arts stream….both Shravan and sumo wants to become lawyers….but destiny has something else stored for sumo…..that u will come to know later…. before shravan was in other branch of same school but now he got shifted to this branch….
Shravan was the only son of his parents….but he loved pushkar like his own brother only…..pushkar is the son of his chachi and lalaji….
Shravan’s dad i.e Ramnath is a drunkard….he comes home after drinking and beats his mother….. before Shravan used to get afraid of him but now he stands for his mother and saves her from beating….. Ramnath did not do any work….. Business is done by shravan’s Nirmala…..she is a beautiful lady with brain….but was very afraid from Ramnath….. Always did what he tells her to do….but always stands for her son…..she is a lovely lady…
Shravan’s chachi… Had died suspiciously so after that Nirmala took care of pushkar like her own son…
Pushkar is in 11th…..but in difft school…. Shravan means alot to him….he consider shravan as his godfather…..
Lalaji…was shravan’s Chachu…..he was a lively person…… Always tries to bring smile on everybody’s face….he always stood against Ramnath….. And was saviour of all the family members
Varun and vandy are husband and wife…. Varun in pushkar’s real brother….. He became silent and little arrogant after the death of his mother but he was good at heart…..he is the eldest son and helps nirmala in business… He is very hard-working…
Vandy…is a total comic character she is a little stupid and cute…she is the constant charm of the house…. She helped in household work and also was a interior decorator….
Now coming to the family of Suman….
Her father died when she was just born….bcoz of this she had to listen taunts of the Society that she is unlucky and all…..but she is very determined and shows that she don’t care….but feels bad at heart but don’t show it to anybody….
Her mother…Priya is a motivation for her…..her mother is a little weak but is very nice and sweet….she is famous in whole Delhi for her boutique….. Yes she is the best fashion designer in Delhi….
Both sumo and shravan are very rich….and have there roots connected with each other….. How that u will come to know later…..abhi sab bta dungi toh aap read kya karoge…..suspense nhi zarrori hai???
Now other members… Sumo also have chachi and Chachu….who are very supportive….. And loves her like their own child….they have a son dabbu who is in class 2nd and a daughter Preeti who is also in class 11….Preeti is very bold and is not afraid of anybody….is very straight forward and a tomboy types…..that means full opposite from the show….she is trained in self defence also….she is broad minded and very modern but she knows her limits and loves her family very much…..
Dabbu is same as in the show …sweet and innocent…
Sumo also have Nanu who is a advisor for her….she always share everything with him…..she loves her Nanu alot….her Nanu is very broad minded and a total mastikhor like sumo…
SUMO IS NO DOUBT VERY NAUGHTY BUT AT HEART SHE IS VERY SWEET…SHE ALWAYS KEEPS THE TENSIONS TO HER AND SPREADS HAPPINESS EVERYWHERE……SUMO’s CHARACTER HAVE SO MANY LAYERS….
So this is the introduction which I should have given before but nhi di….but anyways better late than never??
I know I have not progressed the story but this intro was also needed…..so share ur views about this ……and tell whether u like it or not…..
And yes all suggestions and criticism is fully welcomed❤❤
Precap: pushkar and Preeti meet and shravan and sumo’s faceoff
36 Comments
intro twi is just simplyy OutStanding <3 <3 <3 khushi di i mean u r sooooo amzing that u make every single line a market of entertainment 😀 😀 seriouslyyyyy i really really love it <3
Thank u so much Maria…..ita really sweet of u dear……well Maria…in which class u r??? And from where r u????
I hope u don’t mind me asking personal questions??
No no absolutely not 🙂 I just completed my 9th n now in matric and from pakistan well where r u from and in which class ?? n now I hope u don’t mind that I am asking these questions …… 😀
Why would I mind maria we r friends na??
Well u r younger than me…I m in class 11th……and from Punjab in India……m really glad that I got a new friend…… U r so sweet and ur comments always inspire me dear
nice ff it is very interesting u r a great writer khushi anyways i am khushi too
Thank u dear…..really u r also khushi???……that’s nice……well then from now on I will call u khushi only….I hope u don’t mind….
Well can we be friends????
nyc intro… sahi kaha ki—better late than never
Suman n shravan ka face off wld be wrth seen…..
eagerly waiting fr the epi…..
love u dear . ….
Thank u lovely di…..yes I know it’s better late than never…… But all thanks to @sona…..agar voh mujhe remind naa karati toh main toh bhool hi gyi thi…..yeh sab details phir shayad main deti hi nhi…..stupid me????
Now I learnt a new lesson and will be careful next time❤❤
ha yaar ye to h .. is sitepr sabhi bahut hlpful h……..
mai bhi likhne k liye inspire fatarajo, narendran se hui thi…….
every one is so inspiring n hlpful 🙂
Absolutely right lovely di…..sab bahut ache and helpful hain…..I was also inspired to write my ff after reading sumo di’s ff…..and now I must say I have become ur fan di….I have read 5 parts of ur ff anjck and reading the rest….. But seriously u r too amazing…. Love u di
thnx a lit khushi fr liking my ff
Wah lovely di…..u r awesome….. I read all the episodes in the morning only but I had to go somewhere so couldn’t comment….. Hope u don’t mind……just loved it…..I mean seriously di it was very heart touching especially the character of sumo…..and u told that it was based on u only……di did u have any crush in ur school life….????just asking casually plz don’t mind
khushi yaar yes i hd one……
my ff is bsd on that only……
btw do u hv any crsh? ??
Yes di I also have a crush……but mostly I have crush on celebrities only…..but I have one in my school also
Thanks..khushi..?☺?s really ..mean a lot..and ya..now..its much better to have best imagination of the story..???while reading it..?☺
Aap mujhe thanks mat bolo sona di….instead I should thank u …..agar aap mujhe remind naa karate toh main toh pagal si details btati hi nhi….thank u di…….and yes keep loving me and my ff …..
And guys..tell me..how to register my number..to comment..without moderation..I don’t know about it??☺
agar aap rgstered ho bh jate ho to dusre wrtr k ff pr mnt krne pr mderatn tym lgege hi
sirf apne ff pr ni lgege
ha registered hone pr aa dusre regstered member ko prvtmssg kr skte ho usme moderatn tym ni lgta
Sona di…..aap iss page ke top par jao vahan menu wali option hai uss par click karo then u will get the option of register….. Phir aap uss pe click karo then….u just fill all the details….. U will get registered…..
And di moderation toh hota hai but aap apni ff pe Jo comment karoge vahan nhi hoga…..baki saare pages pe hoga…
And if u get any problem then I m here only….aap mujh se puch lena
Amazing khushi!…really waiting for d part abt wat is in store for sumo 🙂
Thank u so much weirdsister….. U r a sweet heart…… But yr may I know that u r in which class….and from where??
I m in class 10th….nd currently in Mumbai!!
Ohh then u r younger than me….and u r from Mumbai….. Wow yr….never seen Mumbai….its far away from my place…..btw howzz it??
dis was needed sona is right… I loved the intro … u should leave ur school n start some writing business … lyk… hath me vine.. ar ek me pen.. or u can use laptop too.. wat say?? 😛 😛 😛 😛
woooooowwwwww wht n imaginatn dear…..
;P
Yes sumo di….indeed it was really needed to have a better imagination as sona said…
And thank u so so much di….haha….even i want to leave school but kya karun jaana toh hoga….but aap zarroor writer ban sakte ho voh bhi better than me….and yes whenever u will try a book which u will write soon plz do tell me….I will definitely read…..I love reading..
surely swthrt… n thanks for saying dat m ur inspiration … u stole the show anyway! tu bht sweet h yaar… I love u… ❤❤❤❤
Love u too sumo di???
Nice ff ….pls post next part soon
Thank u so much…..lily…I just hope I m writing as per ur expectations…. I will post the next part asap dear
OK..OK..I get it..thanks..lovley sumo and khushi..I will do it
U r welcome sona di….plz get registered soon di…..it will be fun…..really…
yes indeed!
Awesome episodes. Pls post in eng…pppplllllsssssss…da thing is I’m from South Africa n don’t understand hindi well …so pls do it in eng
Thank u devaksha…….well I just want to ask that have u also read the previous episodes…… Bcoz u r new here right???
And I will try my best to use as minimum Hindi as I can……but dear I have a good control in Hindi….so maybe I will use it a little…. As acc to me emotions can be best expressed in Hindi…..but I will definitely translate it in English for u……just keep reading and loving my ff
How can you write like this.
Very Good Yr
I have a suggestion that where you use three dots there use only one dot.
After that I think it looks more attractive.
And everyone has different choice.
But yr no word to describe your FF