Hi guys….how r u all???
Well I have posted before the second intro….I hope all of ur doubts got clear after reading that….if not u can ask me of course??
Now coming back to the story
Recap: sumo played pranks with Shravan.
Shravan was very tired after the bad day and now was sitting on his bed thinking about the day…
Shravan: yr mujhe samjh nhi aa rha….itna sab Kuch ek hi din mein kaise…meri kismat itni khrab bhi nhi ho Sakti…. Zarroor yeh kissi ne mere saath pranks kiye hai….but kisne….
He tthinks for a while…. Then
Shravan: of course shravu tu itna idiot kaise ho sakta hai…..aur kaun tere saath aise kar sakta hai yeh zarroor sumo hi hogi…… Vaise bhi tune uske saath kal prank kiya aaj usne badla lene ke liye tere saath…..wth…..tu Shravan malhotra hai …..aise kisi se haar nhi sakta…kal puchunga uss se….samjhti kya hai apne aap ko sumo wrestler kahi ki….
He makes an angry face….but then starts laughing…
Shravan: arre kya kaha Maine abhi ….sumo wrestler… Haha????
Vaise sahi hi kaha….saara din gussa karti rehti hai….pange leti rehti hai….ab se usse yahi keh ke tang karunga…??
Saying this he again start laughing…but then he stops and says
Shravan: lekin Kuch toh baat hai ussmein…pagal si hai….kisi ki nhi sunti…apni hi karti hai ….mujhse bhi nhi darti……
While saying all this hhe started smiling…
Shravan: yeh ho kya rha hai mujhe pehle toh kabhi nhi hua aisa….main uske baare mein itna kyu soch rha hun….yeh kya feeling hai?????
Just then he slaps himself slowly on his head
Shravan: pagal ho gya hun main….Kuch bhi soch rha hun….feeling and uske liye….no not at all……sumo wrestler ne toh mera dimaag khrab kar dena hai…
Saying this he remembers her ….and her antics and started smiling ear to ear again….
Shravan : (looks himself in the mirror and sees himself smiling…): yr main phir has rha hun….ughh I have gone mad…..pehle hi din voh mujh itna effect kar rhi hai….baad mein pta nhi kya hoga….
Saying this he goes to sleep confused…
Next day…was a lovely day and it was Sunday… That means no school…
Here in shravan’s room he was just going to get ready for school when pushkar enters his room
Pushkar: bhaiya yeh kya….aap school jaane ki tyaari kyu kar rhe ho??
Shravan: yr tang mat kar chote…. Main already late hun…
Pushkar: bhaiya….aaj Sunday hai
Shravan: toh main kya karun…dance karu kya??
But then he realises what pushkar said..
Shravan: kya aaj Sunday hai???
Main toh bhool hi gya tha
Pushkar: bhaiya aap theek toh ho… Pehle toh kabhi aapne aisa nhi kiya…
Shravan: han chote…..pta nhi kaise dimaag se hi nikal gya…chal tu jaa main phir se sone jaa rha hun..( he said this sadly)
Pushkar: kya hua bhaiya…aap itne sad kyu ho??
Shravan: ( to himself )coz aaj usse nhi dekh paunga..
He was lost in his thoughts when pushkar jerked him
Pushkar: bhaiya kahan kho gye….kaun hai voh??
Shravan: (fumbles) k..k…k..kaun…..tu kiski baat kar rha hai??
Pushkar: vohi kiske thoughts mein aap khoye hue ho???
Shravan: nhi main kissi ke thoughts mein nhi khoya…….bakwas mat kar…jaa yahan se…
Pushkar: acha jaa rha hun….bhaiya main market jaa rha hun….aapko Kuch chahiye….
Shravan: (still in thoughts )…han..
Pushkar: kya bhaiya.???
Shravan: sumo….(bechara abhi bhi apne thoughts mein hi hai???)
Pushkar: what?????
Shravan (realised what he said) : h…h..han voh sumo wrestlers ki pics and all chahiye….. Project hai…
Pushkar: toh aise bolna tha na….. Main samjha kissi ladki ka naam hai….???
Shravan: (in fake anger) : chote…..
Pushkar runs away and then shouts…
Pushkar: bye bhaiya…m going aap raho apni mehbooba ke khyalaon mein??
Shravan laughs seeing him then says
Shravan: pagal kahi ka…
But before he could think anything about his behaviour his mother called him….so he quickly changed his clothes and went to her…..
In the market…..while pushkar was buying things….he saw a girl was shouting at a man….
Girl: what the hell….akeli lladki milli nhi ki chedna…shuru…tum jaise logon ki vajah se aajkal ladkiyon ko ghar mein band kar ke rakha jaata hai….
The person: aye Humse aise baat mat kar….aur tum ladkiyan hoti hi issliye ho…humko aaram dene ke liye…humne thoda sa touch kya kar diya…tu toh garam hi ho gyi…
Girl: tum log kabhi nhi sudhar sakte…saale ek number ke kutte ho???
The person: ae zayada zubaan chalayi toh tere tudke tudke kar denge….
Girl: oye awaaz neeche kar ke baat kar….tujhe kya lagta hai….main Teri baaton se dar jaaungi…..bilkul nhi…main baki ladkiyon ke jaise nhi hun…tum log samjhte kya ho aapne aap ko….tum saalon ko toh aaj main batati hun….ek ek ki haddi Tod dungi….black belt hun main karate ki….???
While all this was happening… Pushkar saw something which made him worry….pushkar went to that girl and said…
Pushkar: oye prabha tujhe kitni baar kha hai ki akeli mat ghuma kar…
The person : han bola kar isse….isske liye safe nhi hai…
The girl was about to say something but pushkar stopped her by doing gestures..
Pushkar: nhi nhi bhai saheb…uske liye nhi bakiyon ke liye safe nhi hai..
The person: kya matlab ???
Pushkar: bhai saheb….yeh pagal hai…
The person: han voh toh hai….kab se shout kar rhi hai humpe…
Pushkar: nhi bhai saheb….sach wali pagal…isske dimaag mein Kuch problem hai…iska treatment chal rha hai….kaise problem hai dekho bhai saheb… ghar se bahar nikalna bhi allowed nhi hai isko???
The person: aisi kya beemari hai isko??
Pushkar: gussa……apna gussa nhi control kar Sakti…. Aur sabse badi baat agar gussa zayada ho jaaye toh animals ki tarah behave karti hai….bhool jaati hai ki saamne kaun hai……kabhi kabhi toh isse bandh ke rakhna padta hai…???
The person: aa voh hum voh….hum late ho rhe hai chalte hai…isse aap hi sambhalo….
While all this was happening the girl was standing there shocked and angry….she wanted to say something but pushkar had not allowed her to say anything…
All the people left from there… Only the girl …his small brother who was with her and was standing cutely and pushkar were left….then the girl brust out…
Girl: oye tum ho kaun…aur beech mein kyu aaye???.
Samjhte kya ho apne aap ko…aur keh kya rhe the…..main pagal hu….gussa control nhi hota mujhse….mujhe rope se tie karke rakhna padta hai….main bahut gussa karti hun….
The small boy: sahi toh kaha Didi…aap kitna gussa karti ho…abhi bhi kar rhi ho..
Girl: tu chup kar dabbo…
Yes the small boy was dabbu and ab toh aap sabne guess kar hi liya hoga…the girl is none other than Preeti.. Smart ppl u r?
Pushkar: arre usse kyu gussa kar rhi ho…aur dekho Maine jo kiya…tumhe aur tumhare bhai ko bachane ke liye kiya…
Preeti: acha….aise kaun bachata hai….aur tumko kissi ne kaha tha bachane ko….aur kis se bacha rhe the…unse toh main khud nipat leti…
Pushkar: shhhh..
Saying this he keeps his finger on her lips….she feels a current in her body from his touch….
Pushkar: kitna bolti ho tum yr….chup karogi tabhi toh main Kuch bolunga…..vahan Jo car dikh rhi hai na…uss mein ek aadmi baitha tha….uske pass gun thi…aur voh gun leke tumhare pass aane hi wala….agar main na aata toh voh ya toh tumko aur tumhare bhai ko maar deta ya phir… Gunpoint pe tumko kidnap mar leta… Issliye main beech mein aaya….par tum toh ulta gussa kar rhi ho???
Preeti: oh shit…m so sorry aapne meri help ki and main…..well leave it thank u so much for helping us….btw hi I m Preeti….and yeh mera chota bhai dabbu….
Pushkar: hello….I m pushkar… And hi dabbu…
Dabbu: hello….aaj se main aapko pushku bhaiya bulaungi….
Pushkar and Preeti smiles….
Pushkar: haha OK ???
Preeti: thank u so much yaar…I think I should try to be calm at times
Pushkar: yes even I think so…..u just blow up like a volcano??…but yr…never saw a girl like u before….black belt in karate not bad han??
Preeti: amm voh….voh toh Maine aise hi keh diya tha… M not any black belt and all
Pushkar: what!!!!…..kamaal hai yr tum ladkiyan jhooth bhi kitne confidence se bol leti ho….hats off yr??
Preeti: aise baat nhi hai….vaise I have done a course of self defence so beware han??….
Pushkar: han vaise bhi main koi ganda ladka nhi hun….aur Maine tumhari jaan bachayi hai…tum mujhe kyu marogi…
Preeti: han voh toh hai…..so friends??
Pushkar: of course… Friends
Saying this they both shake hands with each other….
Dabbu: Didi bhookh lagi hai….??
Preeti: han han chal rhe hai…..ek toh tujhe bhookh bahut lagti hai…..chal… Pushkar: han tum isse Kuch khila do…bbye phir milenge …..chalte chalte…
Preeti: bade filmy ho yr tum…
Pushkar: han big srk fan….???….chalo then bbye
Preeti: ( didn’t wanted him to leave but had to) sadly….bbye..hope to c u soon…
Pushkar: me too…
Saying this pushkar leaves and Preeti kept on staring him…..
Dabbu: Didi chalo na….kya dekh rhi ho…voh chale gye…
Preeti comes back to reality and says….
Preeti: han voh main usse nhi dekh rhi thi…tere liye Kuch khane ko dhondh rhi thi….chal ab….bahut bolne lag gya hai tu…
Here shravan was very sad….as he was not able to meet sumo……pta nhi kyu but dil mein Kuch Kuch ho rha tha..uske…chahe abhi unko mile do hi din hue the…..
Shravan: yr main usse miss kyu kAR rha hun….abhi toh bas 2 hi din hue hai humko mile and voh mujhe itna effect Karne lagi hai….nhi nhi.nhi Shravan tu pagal ho gya hai…..yaad kar tune uss se badla Lena hai….aisi vaisi baatein mat soch……
While he was thinking all this pushkar arrives and seeing him busy in his thoughts again he decided to tease him…..
Pushkar: bhai kiske khyalaon mein ho…
Shravan: love..
Pushkar: kya are u in love??????
Shravan realised what he said….
Shravan: arre nhi chote main toh keh rha tha ki I love u….main tujhse bahut pyaar karta hun chote…tu mera best bhai hai…
Pushkar: bhaiya main ladka hun…..Kuch aisa vaisa mere baare mein sochna bhi mat….
Shravan: chi yr….main bhi koi aisa vaisa nhi hun….tu bakwas mat kar…
Thinking about bakwas…his mind again went to sumo and he got engaged in his own thoughts…
Pushkar: bhai kiske thoughts mein kho gye phir SE….aaj aapko hua kya hai pehle toh kabhi nhi hua aisa….kahin pyaar vyaar toh nhi ho gya na??
Shravan: han yr…
Pushkar: kis se…..
Shravan: sumo….
Pushkar: hain???? ab yeh sumo kaun h
Shravan: again realises what he said….
Shravan: arre mera matlab…..sumo wrestlers ki pics and all laaya hai na…
Pushkar: a little confused… Han bhaiya laya hun…
The episode ends…
Precap. Shravan confronts sumo and more peekar moments…
@sumo di i am thinking of copying ur cockroache wala idea….but in my style…. May I??
I m asking ur permission di….don’t worry only the cockroache will be same rest I will change
Plz reply me…
Nd han again all tomatoes and slippers are most welcome…. Love u all guys..
48 Comments
ahhhhhhh it was too long yar but it was fun while reading thisssss
awwwww preekar were sooo adorable
hahahaha sharvan to gya he fell for sumo
nyc epi fab epi yar
Thank u so much pari…..I m so happy that u liked it. ….
Will u like to be friends with me ??
sure…..
But khushi i think we r already frnds 😉
angel di remem?????
Seriously none of u recognize me 😛
Omg??
U r angel di???
Aapne apna name change kar liya issliye I couldn’t recognise and yes main apni angel di ko kaise bhool Sakti hun….and di aapki ff…it’s amazing no words to describe…
And ab main aapko pari di bolungi..ok???
yeah i was in bit naughty mood 😛
so i change my name while posting my ff 🙂
and thankuuuuu so much that u like my ff
but for me all sharman ff writers are best
sure u can call me pari di angel di as u want 🙂
Thanks di…u r so sweet❤❤❤??
o khushi khusi khusi….!!! mai toh teri fan ho gai !! totally in love with ur ff yr …..! 😀 it was too awesome n ofcouse bechaara shravan confused boy pata nai hota is ko kya bolta jata hai hahhaha it was funny
i just want to say dat u made every line us entertainment ki dukaan 😀
waise ek ques hai if u dont mind in. which class do u. study
Haha thank u so much Maria…..I think phir toh hum equal equal ho gye….tu meri fan main Teri fan…..hua na equal equal…
And Maria m in class 11 wht bout u??
Han tu meri fan Lekin Mai teri boht Bari fan 😀
I am in class 10…
Haha main bhi Teri bahut bahut bahut badi fan hun Maria….. And u in 10th only…itni choti hokar itna acha likhti ho hats off to u??
Hahaha aise toh u r in 11 only or phir Bhi awesome fantastic MiNdBlOwINg etc etc kaise likhti hooo hats of tu u either ……! 🙂 🙂
It was superb….
Thank u so much lily….just keep loving it dear
U just don’t need to ask me khushi… Jo mera h WO tera h… ? are m exited to see dat cockroach part in ur style… Go ahead…
Haha thanks di….and I hope I will live up to ur expectations….. And ya I will give the cockroache a khushi twist??
Coming Coming to the episode… I so damn loved it…. It was so cute n lovable.. M ur big fan now …preeti puskar were amazing.. N Shravan lost in sumo’ s thought was super duper hit. . especially u write it comically n dats d best part… Shravan pushkar convo was so cute…. ????????
Thank u so so much sumo di….it means a lot…ya di I try to write a bit funny I think that’s my speciality…… At home also…I keep on cracking jokes it’s like automatic with me…
Awsm I love it ,waiting for next ,plz post it asap
Thank u sanjyoti…..and yes I will try to past can soon as I can….keep loving it dear
It was lovely.
Thanks dear…..u r so sweet
awsm wrtng…. i hd bcm your big big big fan….. mera bas chle to mai tumhe samne rkh kr sari stry sun lu….. cn u post two epi in a day…… i kn it is diffclt…. koi bat ni..
love u a lot……
Thank u lovely di……aap meri fan main aapki fan….??
I think I can write two parts but my dear dear stupid brother do not let me write even one part peacefully…. Keeps on disturbing me alot….saying Didi mera project bna do….scrapbook bna do…etc ..,..but di jab uska kaam khatam hoga toh I will definitely try to post 2 parts…..thanks for loving it so much di
awwww mera bhai bhi waisa hi….. adha kam wo mujhse karata h…… abhi vacatn chl rhi h to aone projects, assgnmnts etc…..
bt really chote bhai hote bahut pyare h
these all things i do with my elder brother hahaha
Exactly sometimes it’s very irritating and voh tang bhi tabhi karega jab usse pta hoga ki main apne phone mein busy hun….he never lets me complete my ff in just one go…..break le lekar complete karni padti hai…
@pari di…..wow yr…I always feel chote hone ke bahut fayde hai…..badon ko koi fayda nhi hota??
aryyyy bry hone k bht faide hn as u command ur lil sis or bro 😀
Ho sakta hai di….but mera bhai toh bilkul nhi manta meri baat….he never listens to me…..?
awwww but i also dont listen to my bhai hahahhhaha
Really..khushi..????how u knw that..we understood that was preekar..??☺but…really..we get it..as we all much involved in it..
Hope..u ..Don’t..mind..my bus Teri tang kichney k lite..aise puch rahi thi..?☺???
And..shravan..is Farah sey tho vo..sumo bhadla..le nahi payenga..I want their..tashan bhaaji..?☺make him strong..OK.?☺??
Haha sona….mujhe pta tha ki aap sab bahut intelligent ho…and iss mein mind Karne wali kya baat hai…hum toh friends hai na…so no need to say all this don’t mind and all aapki koi bhi baat mujhe buri nhi lag Sakti di…love u alot di
How can you write like this.
Very Good Yr
I have a suggestion that where you use three dots there use only one dot.
After that I think it looks more attractive.
And everyone has different choice.
But yr no word to describe your FF
Thank u so so much…shekhar….ya even I think I use these dots very much. I will try to minimise the use of dots thanks for the suggestion yr and keep liking my ff
I will always like your Fan Fiction.
Aww that’s so sweet yr….thank u so so much
a suggestion that where you use three dots there use only one dot.
After that I think it looks more attractive.
And everyone has different choice.
But yr no word to describe your FF
Hey guys….I want ur suggestions yr…
Actually I wanted to make Shravan realise his feelings before sumo….bcoz in the show it was sumo who got to know her feelings before…. So if I will make him realise his feelings then the tashan will be less ……so I want to ask u that what u all want…..tashan or pyaar ka ehsaas????
Plz do reply and help me out
ammmmmm i,ll suggest tashan for more 2/3 epi,s
then pyar ka ehsas 😀
see what u feel better
Ohk angel di…I got it??
agar pyar ka ehsas abhi ho jayega to shayad ff k epi km ho jaye… shayad….
bt its ok tashan bhi acha lgega……. lekin beech beech me romance chalu rakhna….
kyuki abhi serial me bahut tashan chalu h..
jo tymko acha lge wo kr skti ho…….
sry angel. ….. my sggestn was a bit diff.. frm yours…..
sorry??????? I think u hv so much stalk of sorries so u keep distrubt to all 😀
but no thanku and sorry btwn frnds so plzzzz aj ke bd dont say it again ever 🙂
ok????????
thnx fr loving me soo mch angel……
bt yar seriously i dont have story stalks…….
maine to aise hi sggest kiya tha….
plz dont say sch things…… love u soooooo mch
ary nh mn keh rahi thi tm hmesha choti choti baton p sorry kehti ho sorry bht hn tmhare pas 😀
not story yar it was sorry
oooppsss i was again wrtng sry……
sachi me mujhe eye chk karaye bahut din ho gya h ab appointmnt lna hi prega 😉
tashan…
Ohk as all of u want tashn . I will delay the pyaar ka ehsas. But m waiting for some more suggestions then I will go with the majority
Khushi I feel it should be a blend of pyar n takrar.. May be lyk Shravan feels it but is not accepting… Lyk dat… N sumo also is stubborn to agree dat she likes him..?just a suggestion… ??